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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
BBMaddict:
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Nothing much I can add to what the others have said about the last few chapters. You captured Dupree’s internal struggles, his hesitation and his guilt so brilliantly and convincingly. Inasmuch as I love to read about Ennis and Ellery, these chapters about Dupree’s first sex experience with man just could not spare me a minute to think of them at all. It’s not just about how hot and erotic the sex was, it’s more about how he began to face his feelings and the interactions between him and Nick that gripped my heart totally. And I want to say I’m happy for Jeeves, I just hope Lance will prove to be worthy of Jeeves who I have grown to like a lot.
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Here, here! I totally agree! I don't know how much more perfectly the picture of this whole encounter between Nick and Dupree (the better part of seven chapters too, whew!) could have been created in my mind. The constant mix of the physical, as well as mental details of the "experience" were perfectly described.
And as far as Jeeves is concerned, I too hope that he can be a more contented and happy person after the evenings events. I was concerned for him at first, and very happy to see him allowed the necessary "pleasures" in life. Lance better be good to him. >:(
(Post modified to fix the quoty thing - LVH)
louisev:
getting going a bit late here... typity typing chapter 108.
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: louisev on November 25, 2006, 10:29:01 am ---getting going a bit late here... typity typing chapter 108.
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Actually, Louise, I hope you are typing chapter 109...
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louisev:
sigh... big numbers you know...
notBastet:
--- Quote from: Lucise on November 23, 2006, 03:32:09 pm ---A Brief Interlude to salute:
Beefy!Ennis and his pregnant mare .. 8)
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Thanks Mill - that's one of my faves!
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