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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
David:
--- Quote from: louisev on November 29, 2006, 09:27:14 am ---I just had a horrible thought:
What if I got to the final chapter and someone started crying? And then I'd have to write another chapter. And then... someone else started crying?
This could get unwieldy!
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Hmmmm.. ::)
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on November 29, 2006, 09:32:06 am --- Hmmmm.. ::)
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You cry first, David, then I'll cry on the next one...
L
David:
I'd imagine that Wes & Edna would show Ellery the guest list first. Just to make sure nobody is invited that would rock the boat.
I can't see Ellery approving Jeeves attending. He still has suspicions about him and his motives. I don't think Ennis is fond of him either. And his presence would certainly make Jeremy, er, I mean Dupree uncomfortable. We wouldn't want him to come face to face with Nick at such an occasion would we?
David:
Can't you just see Jeeves walking up to Nick at the reception?
Jeeves: "So this is who I lost out to?"
Nick: "Where is your date Jeeves? Oh! is it a School day?"
Jeeves: "Is it going to be like that? Would you like to settle this with fisticuffs?"
<Jeeves undoes a cuff link and starts to roll up a sleeve>
Meanwhile, Ennis and Dupree are at the bar getting some beers to bring back to the table and see the confrontation.
Ennis: "Son of a Bitch! Dupree you had better grab your man. I'll grab the limey before they make a scene and Ellery comes out shooting!"
souxi:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on November 29, 2006, 09:32:48 am ---You cry first, David, then I'll cry on the next one...
L
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Then I,ll start, and I,ll poke June in the eye to make her cry, then she can kick Millie to make her cry.In the end we,ll all be crying so much, Louise wont be able to stop!! Good plan that Leslie. I like it. ;) ;) ;) ;D
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