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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
David:
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Well, Jeremy, er, Dupree should have apologized when he knocked over poor Wayne. Then perhaps Wayne wouldn't have said something snotty and gotten slapped. Then again, Wayne does have a way with puting his foot in his mouth. He is always puting something in his mouth right? ::)
What disappoints me is Laurens behavoir. He didn't strike me as the the bar gossip type. I would have thought he'd grab Dupree aside and whisper his questions about Nick to Dupree. Not that Dupree would have answered mind you!
christie wood:
--- Quote from: RonitR on November 30, 2006, 07:22:41 am ---SPOILER
I still LOVE Jeeves, and would still be very happy to see him and Jeremy hook up :). He is a GREAT character.
IMHO, he really wasn't on his best behaviour in this chapter, but, hey, we all slip up from time to time....
Um... also, it seems no one feels very sympathetic towards Wayne, even though he did get slapped for no good reason ;D
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Oh no!!!! No way should Jeremy and Jeeves get together!!! No, absolutely not. Jeeves may be an interesting character, but he's not one of my favourites..he annoys the bejesus out of me to be honest, with his jolly hockey sticks attitude.
Maybe in time, and when he's apologised good and proper to Jeremy, that they can be friends, but I certainly dont want anything else to go on between them.
christie wood:
--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on November 30, 2006, 07:32:15 am ---SPOILER
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Well, Jeremy, er, Dupree should have apologized when he knocked over poor Wayne. Then perhaps Wayne wouldn't have said something snotty and gotten slapped. Then again, Wayne does have a way with puting his foot in his mouth. He is always puting something in his mouth right? ::)
What disappoints me is Laurens behavoir. He didn't strike me as the the bar gossip type. I would have thought he'd grab Dupree aside and whisper his questions about Nick to Dupree. Not that Dupree would have answered mind you!
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I agree that Jeremy should have apologised to Wayne for hitting him, that was totally out of order but also totally out of character...but then Jeremy had just been verbally harrassed by Jeeves and he was being given the third degree from Lauren too....talking of Lauren, I agree, he really surprised me, I thought he would have realised by Jeremy's reaction that he didnt want to talk about it. But then Lauren ran out after Jeremy so maybe he'd realised he had gone too far...but still, very disappointed in him. Why cant they all just leave it, couldnt they sense that Jeremy didnt want to talk about it?
David:
It is a fairly small town and the Stallion is the only real social hot spot for the boys. I suppose that Duprees "Date" was the hot topic of conversation by all !
Lauren may be a sweet guy, but you can bet he ran home after work that night to tell Simon about Dupree being picked up by Nick Sampson.
I sure hope that Jeremy doesn't go running to go call Paula.
He should be running to Nicks arms!
souxi:
--- Quote from: christie wood on November 30, 2006, 07:36:46 am ---I agree that Jeremy should have apologised to Wayne for hitting him, that was totally out of order but also totally out of character...but then Jeremy had just been verbally harrassed by Jeeves and he was being given the third degree from Lauren too....talking of Lauren, I agree, he really surprised me, I thought he would have realised by Jeremy's reaction that he didnt want to talk about it. But then Lauren ran out after Jeremy so maybe he'd realised he had gone too far...but still, very disappointed in him. Why cant they all just leave it, couldnt they sense that Jeremy didnt want to talk about it?
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Chrisite hun ther,e men...enough said really eh? ::) ::) ::)
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