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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: magicmountain on December 02, 2006, 05:56:05 pm ---Thanks folks. Glad you all liked the poem!
I don't think we settled on a final definition of delmarriage. Richard does this fit your specification?
Delmarriage – having staggered out of bed in a state of unsatisfied arousal, the groom hurriedly dons a tuxedo, greets the local sheriff and his wife, utters “I belong ta you” and collapses back into bed in the same state of unsatisfied arousal. The other groom, having jerked off, does likewise.
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PMSL! I like this!! :D
richardg49:
--- Quote from: magicmountain on December 02, 2006, 05:56:05 pm ---Thanks folks. Glad you all liked the poem!
I don't think we settled on a final definition of delmarriage. Richard does this fit your specification?
Delmarriage – having staggered out of bed in a state of unsatisfied arousal, the groom hurriedly dons a tuxedo, greets the local sheriff and his wife, utters “I belong ta you” and collapses back into bed in the same state of unsatisfied arousal. The other groom, having jerked off, does likewise.
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Hi Jo. Excellent definition. That seems to capture the spirit of the event exactly. Great poem, too, BTW. Everyone seems to be in celebratory mood today!!
Lumière:
--- Quote from: Bigheart on December 02, 2006, 06:13:08 pm ---And may I use one of the banners then?? *keeps fingers crossed and looks at Milli hopefully*
;D
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But of course June! ;)
Right, people, I'm off!
I figured today is a good a day as any to start doing some Christmas shopping ..
so far all the gifts I have purchased have been for me..me..me..lol, so time to start getting stuff for others ..
Y'all be good now, behave yerselves .. ;D
Can't wait to check out the epilogue tonight!
Cheerio!
louisev:
good luck in the big shopping world, Milli. I have given up shopping for good, except of it is at a German Christmas market.
Lhuthiel:
Hi everyone,
I have been lurking here for quite some time and now that I saw you might have a re-read of the LS, I finally gathered up the courage to join, so I could have something to pass the time with, until I will be able to read Dupree's Choice. :)
I hope you won't mind my mistakes in English too much, it's not my mother tongue after all.
Louise,
thank you so much for your story, I always enjoyed reading it so much since I discovered it (you were at "Taking Chances" chapter 62 then) and it really helped me overcome my BBM-depression after seeing the movie in the theatres in March.
I know this might sound a bit weird, because you don't know me at all, but I also wanted to say I hope you had a nice birthday today (I'm still in time for birthday wishes, if just barely ;)). I mean, I've been loving your story for such a long time now, that I kinda feel I can say Happy Birthday nonetheless. :)
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