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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: notBastet on July 07, 2006, 02:30:18 pm ---Leslie, dear, the rating needs to go at the start of the post.
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Jeez! Everyone's a critic! Post has been edited accordingly!
pastorfred:
I have so many favorite parts of the Laramie Saga, I couldn't name one as best.
But the meeting of Ellery and Ennis and those first few hours of getting acquainted has to be near the top.
I would love to hear that story told from Ellery's point of view.
Anybody else feel that way?
MaineWriter:
Note: This post is rated R
Somewhere in the story (sorry, can't remember exact chapter number) is a scene where Ennis pounds Ellery's ass into the mattress.
PG:
*MUAH*
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: pastorfred on July 07, 2006, 02:35:20 pm ---I have so many favorite parts of the Laramie Saga, I couldn't name one as best.
But the meeting of Ellery and Ennis and those first few hours of getting acquainted has to be near the top.
I would love to hear that story told from Ellery's point of view.
Anybody else feel that way?
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I do. We get it, just a tiny little bit where they are having the dom/sub conversation and Ellery describes the way Ennis looked, and the growl in his voice, but more would be interesting, I agree, Fred.
notBastet:
That's a great idea Fred! don't y'all wanna come chat?
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