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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
MaineWriter:
In Chapter 45, we get the first hint of Dupree (but not by name):
“Yeah but what else can I do?”
“You can have a man on it with ya.”
“Wes you know I can’t...”
“Jest an idea. You know I hired you in direct from the University Criminal Justice program, an they keep pressurin me ta bring some more seniors in who are takin degrees in Private Investigation, an what better type a situation than have someone nice an young an strong ... an good lookin... work on the undercover with ya? It’ll be safer than you workin it alone, they’s already licensed ta carry, an you can have em work under your license for a week two weeks or so.”
“Shit Wes I dunno.”
“You do know Ennis’d hit the roof if he found out you was tryin ta use yerself for bait for someone who just mighta killed his man.”
“He already hit the roof Wes. An he already told me he won’t have it.”
“Then you haven’t got a whole hell of a lot a choice.”
“Well I was plannin ta just lie.”
“Well no you wasn’t because I wouldn’t let ya either. Unless you got someone watchin yer back. One a those smart as hell too good for everybody A student snot nose types jes like you were fifteen years ago. Remember that Ellery?”
“You ain’t backin down from this are you?”
“No I ain’t. So reschedule yer Albuquerque thing for Tuesday or whatever an you’ll have four boys ta choose from an you can interview em first thing Monday. The three ya don’t pick will be learnin how ta do background checks and canvassin with Joe on his obscenity case. Sam Keller is gonna be mighty pleased with me after naggin me about this for the past six months.”
“Tell Sam Keller he can kiss my ass.”
“I thought he spent four years doin that already, Ellery. You have a good weekend now.”
MaineWriter:
And again. from chapter 45...
He watched, stock still, as Ellery masturbated himself, at first slowly, languidly, until he muttered “Faster,” and he increased the pace, his hips rising and rolling as he worked himself with his hand, pale eyes fastened on Ennis’s face. Ennis was still rock hard, his cock throbbing, but he was not touching himself. He picked up the Vaseline, nodding from time to time as he watched Ellery stroking his cock, and began to dab his cock with it, stroking his cock enough to make sure it was completely lubricated, then he moved closer, then spoke once more, his cock now held firmly in his hand, yet still not stroking it nor getting close enough to penetrate. “Now make yerself come....” he said, voice soft, a rasping sound. Ellery clamped his hand harder, pumping rapidly, now knowing where he was going, and as his moan of release began to build, his first pulse of ejaculation squirting over his hand, Ennis moved, and quickly, forcing the head of his cock into his ass in one abrupt motion, making Ellery buck hard as he erupted. Ennis’s hands came down hard on the back of Ellery’s thighs and he leaned in, his thrusting hard as he sunk his cock into the spasming sphincter, gasping as he tried to gain his breath. He pulled back and shoved forward once more, feeling a splash of warmth as Ellery let go his cock, still streaming come, and bore down, all control lost once more as he reamed the tight warmth of his orgasming sphincter with his aching, needy shaft.
He lasted hardly more than a minute before exploding with a harsh cry, his hands letting go of the back of Ellery’s thighs, and pulled out, shuddering, his cock wet and still half erect.
Ellery looked up at him with a drunken smile. “Where do you get these ideas, sweetheart?”
“While I’m muckin out mares,” Ennis replied. “It gets real borin sometimes.”
“Lucky for me,” Ellery replied.
L
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on January 02, 2007, 10:10:37 pm ---Another famous exchange, this one from Chapter 43...I love it when I rediscover these gems! LOL
They ate quietly, Ennis looking unhappy at the prospect of seeing Wayne again, and before their last cup of coffee he finally said “I really think ya can talk ta Wayne without me bein there.”
“I don’t think so Ennis, now come on. You intimidate him. That’s a good thing. He is a whole lot more intimidated by you than he is by me.”
“Yeah well sometimes when I intimidate him I think he’s gettin a woody in his drawers.”
“Oh that’s what’s goin on! Well he’ll do that anyway. Wayne is queer for everybody. No offense intended but it ain’t personal. Even knowin I don’t like fem boys he tried ta get into it with me a couple years back an I had ta almost slap him before he took no for an answer.”
“He does that in front a me he won’t know what hit em.”
“You do brighten up to a nice shade a green, Ennis,” Ellery said. “If Wayne an me were on a desert island an there was nothin there but a coconut between us, I think I’d fuck the coconut before I’d fuck Wayne.”
Ennis spewed coffee down his chin. “Maybe you oughta tell em that.”
“I did. That’s why he doesn’t flirt with me no more.”
L
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I love(d) this!! ;D LOVE the Ennis/Wayne stuff! And God, I loved Ennis spanking Wayne like that! Hilarious ;D
Bigheart:
I'm not a diehard re-reader Leslie but I do often come in here and read your quotes :) And I must say, you pick out the GOOD ones :)
This is hard work, Leslie and I really admire you for doing this! :) It's great! :)
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: Bigheart on January 03, 2007, 07:32:42 am ---I'm not a diehard re-reader Leslie but I do often come in here and read your quotes :) And I must say, you pick out the GOOD ones :)
This is hard work, Leslie and I really admire you for doing this! :) It's great! :)
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Thank you, June! It is work, but fun. And you get to have Laramie Saga-lite!
L
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