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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
MaineWriter:
And a little bit of hotness from chapter 54:
They had finished off the batch of doughboys between them and Ellery was gathering up their plates when Ennis said “C’mere.” He set the plates in the sink and came back to him, edging up to his bare knees. Ennis slipped his arms around Ellery’s narrow waist and began to tug on his t-shirt, tugging it up, baring his stomach, and pressed his face against it, hands already busy unfastening his belt and pushing his denims off his hips, fingers digging into the flesh of his ass, kissing him, nuzzling his navel with his nose and mouth, tickling with his tongue, then moving a hand around and grasping his cock and balls in his right hand as Ellery’s denims slid down past his knees. “Oh sweetheart yer gettin serious.”
“Damn serious,” he murmured, licking up his belly as far as he could reach, his left hand kneading Ellery’s ass as he toyed with his cock now, stroking it almost playfully. Ellery’s hands came down on his shoulders, his belt making a soft thunk onto the kitchen floor, and then Ennis looked up.
“You like that when I made ya come while I was puttin it in?” Ellery nodded, face flushing as he felt his cock surge from the memory he had just provoked, moaning softly as his hips rolled into Ennis’s stroking hand, back against the kneading of his ass, Ennis’s fingers wandering suggestively toward his sphincter as he squeezed.
Ennis stood up suddenly, his slight disadvantage in height more than compensated for the thicker mass of his shoulders and arms as he pulled Ellery against him, the towel falling, his cock throbbing against Ellery’s already rigid erection, and pulled him into a kiss whose searing intensity reminded Ellery of that night on the sofa, and he wondered if they were going to make it to the bedroom this time either.
But Ennis broke the kiss after several long minutes, disengaging his tongue from Ellery’s mouth, both of them panting. “Bed,” he croaked, and unclamped his arms from the bearhug he had been holding him in, and followed Ellery to the bedroom, eyes fixed to the movement of his ass and hips as he walked.
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MaineWriter:
Chapter 55:
Wes nodded. “I am just as keen ta see Ennis get this situation resolved as you are. But you ain’t the right man for the job. This is an Austin police matter an you fuckin well know it. But you can help out an from now on this is in an auxiliary capacity.”
“Shit, Wes.”
“Do you care more about your ego as a detective or more about Ennis?”
Ellery rose to his feet. “That is what I keep askin myself. Sometimes I know the answer. But you are bein fuckin goddamn heavy handed Wes an I want you ta know that.”
“That’s why I am the sheriff an you work fer me. Because keepin you my chief deputy is part a my job.”
“Yeah fuck you very much Wes.”
“Yer welcome, Ellery. Close the door when ya go out.”
Ellery walked out of Wes’s office and called Dupree into his office, slunk down behind his desk and sipped on his coffee. “Looks like you an I have not escaped the nightmare a paperwork. The undercover spooky spy portion of this assignment just got smaller an the dreary background check coordination part just got bigger. Cause Wes wants ta do things different.”
“Okay,” Dupree said neutrally. “I hope this isn’t because he doesn’t think I can handle it.”
“No it’s because he believed my theory that Worrell really is a killer an he doesn’t want me within five hundred miles a him due to his protective Sheriff-like nature which just happens ta not want ta see me end up dead.”
L
MaineWriter:
And more from Chapter 55:
“Shit, Cantrell, you got further than I did the week a the incident.”
“Well it don’t satisfy me. What would satisfy me is a full set a prints on a murder weapon an a confession, but I’m picky that way.”
Weiss laughed. “Well I’ll try ta get em both, how’s that sound? You take care now.”
“My love to yer wife, I’m sure she’ll appreciate sleepin with you nights again.”
“Yers too.”
“I’ll be sure ta tell em.”
The slight hesitation on the line put a smile on Ellery’s face. Maybe with a little support on the paperwork side, Weiss could close the case. He hoped so, because if he didn’t, he might be tempted to start lying again.
L
MaineWriter:
Okay, so I read ahead, but I couldn't resist, because chapter 56 is one of my all time favorites.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/42688.html
We have this:
and this:
and meat pies!
L
MaineWriter:
Chapter 56:
Ellery was making a fresh pot of coffee when the door opened, and he stuck his head out. “Hey stranger. I came home early fer a change.”
Ennis lighted up with a smile, first at seeing him, then at the smell of the baking biscuits. “Yer makin doughboys.”
“Would it put too fine a point on it if I burned em or can we skip that part?”
“I’d rather eat em.”
“I got some fresh meat pies ta go with em too, you know, from that deli where they have the lean hamburger an all.”
Ennis came into the kitchen, rubbing up against him, leaning in a little for a kiss. “So what’s all this about?”
“It’s me apologizin to ya.”
“I thought we did all that last night?”
“Well no it was you givin me the ride a my life I thought. An I didn’t apologize properly.”
Ennis shrugged. “Okay.” He went over to the table and sat down, noticing that there were roses in a vase on the table. “Somebody deliver flowers or somethin?”
“Read the card,” Ellery said, pretending to check the pies and biscuits.
Ennis plucked the card from among the long stems and deep red blooms, and opened it.
“To my one and only true love, my deepest apologies, Ellery”
Ennis looked at the card for a long moment, his hand holding the card dropping into his lap.
“You know nobody never got me flowers before...”
“Aww well it’s about time then I guess huh?”
L
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