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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
MaineWriter:
Hey re-readers!
Chapters 31-35 today.
from 31:
“He... he had a guy, back in college, an it broke up real badly. Now suddenly the guy’s daddy is down in Laramie on a court case with em an they might meet up again through his daddy. I don’t know that it’ll happen but it might as well cause it’s got em in a mood.”
“Yes I see. I definitely would try ta draw em out an talk about it. Remember it was long long ago, an if that boy was important to em he wouldn’t have let 20 years pass without seein em. Ellery’s got access to the whole state police database an he coulda kept track of anybody in Wyomin by goin into the computer or makin a phone call. If he hadn’t a done that, then he has moved on so you don’t need ta worry about your ... relationship to em. Just keep that in mind. He loves you Ennis.”
“Yeah,” Ennis smiled as she spoke. “He sure does. Tells me all the time.”
“He is a very lovin boy an he just shines with you around, so you keep that in mind even when it seems like he isn’t lookin right at you, you know where his heart is.”
L
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on January 18, 2007, 02:01:49 pm ---Hey re-readers!
Chapters 31-35 today.
“He is a very lovin boy an he just shines with you around, so you keep that in mind even when it seems like he isn’t lookin right at you, you know where his heart is.”
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L
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That was such a nice thing to say. I love Edna :)
And Ennis sure was pleased to see Ellery get home early...
Ennis got up. “Why don’t you put on those cutoffs a yours an no shirt, an I’ll get the grille goin?”
“Oh I see, you got the whole evenin planned do ya?”
“Yeah.”
“All right, but only if Mr. Coyote is gonna make a cameo appearance later.”
“That can be arranged,” Ennis said, a mischievous look on his face, and then snapped his teeth loudly before he ducked into the kitchen through the open door.
*sigh* I want that movie, now please!
mariez:
Hi Gang - no time for lunch, massive computer problems, overall crappy day - I need my E&E!
Yes, I love Edna, too! And I love Ennis in Chapter 32:
“Did you watch Dupree an me doin anythin special the other night while you was here the whole damn time? We was watchin the big guys an make sure they don’t push the little guys around, goin in the Gents ta make sure nobody was buyin blowjobs, an kickin the drunks out if they caused trouble. That’s the job, Jim.”
“It’s a little rough,” he said, pouting.
“Then you’ll just have ta grow a bit of a spine.”
Jim shook his head. “Are you always like this? So... intense?”
“I’m always me, who else would I be?”
“Don’t you ever kick back, lighten up, you know... relax?”
“Not while I’m workin as a bouncer in the Red Stallion, Jim. Maybe you make a good server, but bein a bouncer means tellin people shit they don’t want ta hear. Maybe you don’t like that part a the job, but ya can’t be Mary Sunshine all the goddamn time.”
Yes. Ennis is always Ennis. So ironic and so sad that a person so lacking in pretense was forced to live a lie for so long. :'( But I do love when he tells Jim to grow a spine!
Gotta dash!
Marie
belbbmfan:
from chapter 33. Ellery is having nightmares
“Cut it out Beag, I said –“ and he was thrown to the bed, air knocked out of him, and he huffed, trying to inhale as the heavier body landed on him, cock thrusting wildly against the cheeks of his ass as Beagle fumbled for his tube of KY somewhere near the pillow, finally seizing on it with a low “ah ha.”
“Hold still or yer gettin it.”
“You ain’t gettin it!” Ellery heaved up and twisted, managing to get his hip wedged against Beagle’s torso while he was busy squirting lube on his fingers.
He dropped the tube, lubricant forgotten. “Dammit I said hold still, now yer gettin it,” and with a force Ellery had not known existed, brought down his larger hand down on his exposed ass in a stinging slap that made his eyes spring tears and a yelp coming to his throat, then his hips were pressed against the bed once more and what little lube remained on Beagle’s fingers was going to suffice, and he stabbed his cock in mostly dry, the friction almost as searing as the pain of the slap, and Ellery bucked hard up against him, fighting like a wildcat against being penetrated, and Beagle let go of his right hip just long enough to deal him another vicious slap which ended with pressing his cheeks apart and thrusting savagely.
“I told you...” he growled, his voice shaking with violence... “you were gonna get it...” as he began to thrust hard and deep into Ellery’s unprepared ass.
“Stop, stop... Beagle stop...” he cried, at first with a fierce shout and then dissolving into whispers and sobs, whatever pleasure he might have derived from the forced coupling, washed away by the grief of being assaulted by the one he loved. Behind them, a sudden fall gust of air lifted the pages of Ellery’s trigonometry homework and scattered them on the sticky floor.
belbbmfan:
from chapter 34 Getting Advise
A conversations between Ennis and Ellery
“You think I can hold off sneakin into the Red Stallion tonight? I don’t feel like I want ta prance around for the entertainment a your new boys tonight, an I been muckin out mares all day an feel like a wet dishrag.”
“Yeah, sure. I appreciate the time you put in, Ennis, I truly do.”
“Good. I’m gonna pick up some more steaks ta grill tonight, that okay with you?”
“Get some more a those little cherry tomatoes, those were good.”
“Sure enough. Hey, Ellery.”
“Hmmm?”
“I love you, darlin. That guy call ya?”
“Nope. I don’t think he will.”
“Maybe not. But if it’s botherin ya... you can talk about it. Ya know, like I get ta talk about Jack whenever my stomach is all in knots.”
“That is kind a you ta say, Ennis. Maybe after a bunch a those cherry tomatoes an a nice grilled steak, okay?”
“Yeah. I’m there for you ta lean on no matter what. “
“Thanks. That does mean a lot ta me Ennis. See ya later.”
Ellery set the phone down, staring at it for a long moment. “I’m there for you ta lean on? Is he watchin daytime self improvement shows or what?”
That last line made me laugh at first. But then, how sad is it that a 38 year old man is surprised to hear that from the one he loves? About time he had someone he can lean on.
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