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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
MaineWriter:
Another conversation from 74 that gets remembered later:
Lauren smiled. “Hey. That means I can get home early. Simon’ll be real happy.”
“That the name a yer man?”
He nodded happily, as if the name itself summoned his boyfriend.
“Been with em long?”
“Six months.”
“Lemme ask ya somethin. He ever... give ya a spank?”
Lauren blushed. “Ennis!”
“Ya don’t have ta tell me.”
“No! we don’t do that kinda stuff!”
“He don’t... tie you up or turn you over his knee or nothin?”
“No! Jesus Christ Ennis. Here I thought you was all uptight an everythin.”
“Just a question.”
“That is real far out stuff Ennis. Simon an me got a very normal relationship, just the usual stuff.”
“What, like suckin cock an fuckin, right?”
“Well, yeah.”
Ennis nodded, sipping on his beer. “Just learnin about all this stuff myself, don’t know too much about it is all.”
“Well you can’t learn it from me... I was a virgin before I met Simon, so I don’t know all about that weird stuff.”
“Okay okay. Maybe I ought ta ask Wayne.”
Lauren grinned. “Now Wayne... Wayne’s done it all.”
“I’ll just bet he has.”
L
MaineWriter:
I love Ellery when he strikes his little poses...from chapter 75:
Ellery put the bookmark in his book and set it down on the table, sitting up, and unfastening the velcro straps on his brace, standing up and setting it on the chair, turning and striking a pose.
“Well... see anythin ya like?”
Ennis nodded. “Yep. Now we doin this hard an fast or harder an faster?”
Ellery grinned. “Well I dunno. I guess it depends on how riled ya are, or how riled I can get ya.”
“You think this tyin up and spankin stuff is weird?”
“Well, it’s sort a soft bondage an discipline Ennis. It gets me off, an gets you off. Why, does it bother ya?”
“No. I was just wonderin.”
“If we both like it then it’s fine. But if you ever don’t want ta do it you just let me know. I thought ya handle that paddle like a ping pong champ though.”
“Yer ass is still red.”
“Yeah well, that’ll go away.”
“Then I’ll do it all again.” Ennis loosened the towel at his waist and let it drop, his cock already stiffening, and he climbed onto the bed on his knees. “Lie down here, face down, I wanna see.”
MaineWriter:
And more from 75:
“Oh sweetheart!” he exclaimed.
“Too much for ya?”
“God no... what’s got inta you?”
“Mr. Coyote wanted a nip,” Ennis said softly, his voice rasping with the edge of a growl as his finger worked its way inexorably back inside Ellery’s hole. “Ya want me inside ya now, ya need yer man?”
“Oh yeah... oh please...”
Ennis pulled out his finger and lubricated his cock rapidly, his breath now uneven. The reaction to the fingering and his bites had aroused him rapidly. He held his cock ready, and then leaned over, his face now right up against the side of Ellery’s face, and he pressed his mouth against his in a hard kiss. Ellery turned then, mouth seeking, and opened his mouth for Ennis’s probing tongue, their hot breaths mingling as their mutual lust peaked. Ennis slid his tongue out and moved back once more, his hands clenching over Ellery’s hips and lifting him up and back onto his knees, guiding his cock inside with one long, smooth thrust.
“Oh... Ennis...” Ellery moaned softly as Ennis thrust in. Ennis threw his head back, beads of sweat mingling with the water from his shower, cascading from the ends of his hair onto Ellery’s back as he thrust up, his hips slapping the tender flesh, two new dark pink crescents marking the lighter dusk of his right cheek, the sight arousing a harder, deeper thrust as Ennis’s lust took hold and drove him deep into that responsive ring of muscle that provoked the unstoppable desire for more....
“More, sweetheart, please...” Ennis gulped, pulling back and driving in, his insatiability was matched by the lust of the man writhing below him, begging him.... and he lost control by degrees this time, first deepening his thrusts, leaning down and arching his back, and then pounding faster, sweat now sliding down both sides of his neck, pooling briefly in his collarbone before the next thrust caused droplets to splash down on Ellery’s back, and then they were striving together violently, thinking of nothing but the feeling of one another, so familiar and yet new each time, no sensation entirely memorized with each reacquaintance of their bodies with one another... the gentle slap of Ellery’s balls as they swung back against his thigh, making Ellery suddenly buck with the intense sensation of the contact, and he came unexpectedly, arching up, eyes wide, and Ennis came moments later, caught in the fierce clench of his sphincter as it grasped at his shaft like a fist.
He was puffing out hard breaths as he slowed, pulled out, flopped down, and Ellery sank down into a small, warm pool of come, laughing softly.
“What’re you laughin at....” Ennis said, gasping still.
“Dang coyotes. Now we got ta change the bed again.”
opinionista:
I think it is time to post a picture of Ennis and Ellery here. Here's one of E&E sharing a pizza.
mariez:
Thanks for posting the great pic - that is awesome! I wonder what Ellery is sayiing! :laugh:
Recently Louise answered some questions for the minutiae-obsessed and she said that E&E watch the Sunday Night Mystery Movie - always a favorite. I have all the "Columbo" episodes! I wonder what Ennis thinks of Lt. Columbo?
From Chapter 74:
After a dinner of chili and biscuits, Ellery snuggled down next to Ennis on the sofa. “You ain’t gonna believe it, Ennis, but that interview weren’t a gnat’s sneeze.”
Ennis smoothed his hair back. “Glad it’s behind you. No intrusive questions about what I was doin at yer house or nothin durin the shootin?”
“Didn’t ask me nothin about the shootin, actually. Never mentioned yer name. Asked me about me an Worrell an when I met em an when I met his wife an so on an then five minutes later he took another a Joe’s muffins an that was that. I swear that guy learned his interrogation technique from Lieutenant Columbo.”
“Who?”
“Oh don’t tell me you never saw Columbo.”
“Never saw it, what is it some movie?”
“It was some mystery movie of the week thing, oh Ennis I can’t believe you never saw that.”
I like to picture E&E cuddling together and watching a good mystery!
Thanks for the quotes -
Marie
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