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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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louisev:
awwww thank you.  I am being influenced, you see.

louisev:
Update to "A Second Chance"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/68458.html  "Chapter 69:  Wyoming vs. Steele"

LoveEmBoys:

--- Quote from: louisev on July 09, 2006, 12:09:16 pm ---Update to "A Second Chance"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/68458.html  "Chapter 69:  Wyoming vs. Steele"

--- End quote ---

OMG, Louise. I really didn't know Ellery would be so tied up over seeing Beagle!  Wow - can't wait to see them try and start a conversation!

Monica

MaineWriter:
SPOILER.....









I am having an anxiety attack here. WHY did they go to the Rose Hotel? WHY couldn't Ellery have made sure that Eagleton, Sr., came along (he offered)? Maybe even Ennis...if Beagle is supposed to see that Ellery is successful and happy, why not see his lover? This chapter is killing me, Louise!

L

pastorfred:
Aaargh! Our poor, dear Ellery in Beagle induced agony!!

And how wonderful that Ennis can be his solid rock as he faces the long dormant pain and grief!

Thanks, Louise, for another masterpiece of a chapter.

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