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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
magicmountain:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on April 30, 2007, 01:53:42 pm ---I have just come into possession of Ellery's "little dress" (his silk robe).
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I came across this pic and immediately thought of Ellery in his little dress.
Lumière:
Who the heck is that, Jo? lol..
opinionista:
--- Quote from: Lucise on May 02, 2007, 11:26:33 am ---Who the heck is that, Jo? lol..
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That's Freddie Mercury!
mariez:
I just have a sec - but here's a favorite moment I found when I was looking over the re-read posts (and I know it's one of Leslie's favorites, too) - it is beautiful and sweet and tender and oh-so-sexy all at once:
“You spoil me, Colson, I swear.”
“Thank you,” Colson leaned over, brushing his thumb across Ellery’s damp cheek, pushing loose strands of hair back from Ellery’s forehead and tucking them behind his ear. “It’s cause I love you.” Then Colson leaned down and brushed his lips softly across Ellery’s lips, kissing him as gently as he had penetrated him earlier... giving him a subtle message.
Ahhhh . . . .
Marie
ranchgal:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on May 01, 2007, 05:28:12 am ---There are other things Ellery wears that show all the way to France though.
Something to keep in mind.
By the way I have not got a lot of feedback on the most recent chapters and how people feel about the subtle but nonetheless important additions to Colson's inner dialogue.
Any ... thoughts?
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I don't know about the inner dialog, but I found it very interesting that Colson is becoming a more complete person and actually went through the work to get a GED---very interesting, I haven't figured out quite where it came from but it puts him on a more equal footing with people who may possibly judge him for only his grammar and occupation. It means his circumstances were overcome by his decisions to do the best he could for himself. Interesting development and somewhat changes the inner idea of who he is, and maybe what he is capable of.
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