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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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MaineWriter:
This is for you, Marie....

Ellery's little black dress!



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mariez:
Ha Ha!  Complete with leopard skin detailing on the pocket - love it.  Hmmm.... a leopard and a coyote tanglin' - no wonder there are fireworks!   ;D


And Colson has twin daughters!  Another very interesting tidbit - I wonder if they are identical.  I'm having such a great time reading these chapters and finding these little puzzle pieces.   :D

Thanks,
Marie

MaineWriter:
Good morning, friends....

Chapter 34. In Uniform

http://louisev.livejournal.com/11226.html

Leslie

mariez:

--- Quote from: MaineWriter on May 11, 2007, 08:24:44 am ---Good morning, friends....

Chapter 34. In Uniform

http://louisev.livejournal.com/11226.html

Leslie

--- End quote ---

Ah ha!  Another piece of the puzzle falls into place - I had a feeling Colson had had some kind of interaction with the police back home - and now it all makes perfect sense.  I can't even imagine what had to have been going through Colson's mind when the police found him at the motel.  Holy Crap!  I like how Colson took charge and set Ellery straight - so to speak - about the whispering and suggestive comments and how Colson realizes that he's learning things about himself. 

Thanks,
Marie

louisev:
yup

and there will be more backstory as well, though I had not planned to change the chapter structure at this point....
 
very perceptive of you, Marie!

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