Our BetterMost Community > Creative Writer's Corner
Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
notBastet:
Today, after reading the last chapter, I was reminded of something out of Jerry MacGuire (sp? tom cruise movie)... at the very end, Renee Z's character says to Tom's character, "You had me at hello." I think that applies to E and E - from the moment Ellery walked into the bar so long ago... I think it's also how I feel about Ellery... have been taken with him and rooting for him from the get go. Sorry to be so cheesy.
::)
MaineWriter:
nB,
It's not cheesy. I actually think it's incredibly romantic. Ellery saw Ennis. Ellery is gay and out and knows it. He is trained detective and figures out Ennis pretty easily. He turns on the laser charm and sweeps Ennis off his feet. Okay fine...but then, guess what? It turns into something more. They both realize they each have a huge void, there is a place of loneliness and longing. They find the equilibrium in their relationship and begin to understand (this part has not totally been figured out) what they each bring to the relationship...and they can change roles. Ellery nutures when necessary, Ennis does when needed. I can read sex all day long but I am such a sucker for a love story and this has become such a wonderful love story, I can't get enough of it. Way back when in "Taking Chances" when Ellery said, "I have a theory...we're falling in love" to where we have come to today....
I cannot get enough of this story, it is driving me nuts!
L
Lumière:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 09, 2006, 03:25:04 pm ---did you catch up yet Lucise?
You should stop by the chat and meet some of the chatters!
--- End quote ---
Whooops, just came online. :) And yap, I did catch up ...
The last few chapters have been so amazing Louise!
I am actually going back a few chapters to read over again!
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on July 09, 2006, 08:31:34 pm ---I cannot get enough of this story, it is driving me nuts!
--- End quote ---
I'd bet a hunderd bucks you ain't alone there L.! ;)
David:
Hot Damn! I just came home and there's like 4 or 5 new chapters to read!
Thanks Louisev!!!!
Lumière:
Time for another Photo Sequence ...
May contain SPOILERS..(so try not to look.. :P)
*
*
*
*
*
*
*
*
A Visit to Laramie ...
Ennis' oldest daughter
made a trip to
from
to visit her Daddy. She felt bad that she hadn't seen him in a while.
Truth be told, she was curious about
and was not exactly enjoying marital bliss with her husband Curt
Fact is, they were running very dangerously low on
and Curt's Momma was being a difficult cow and a royal pain in the
Alma forgot her woes for a while, when she visited Wes and Edna; where she met Nellie
The night before she returned to Riverton, she got home in time to witness
her father in a very passionate embrace with his lover.
The best way to sum up her reaction:
She was embarrassed, but pleased to see her Daddy so in
..Her entire weekend in Laramie proved to be a crash-course on man-on-man love ...
Can't wait to hear what she tells
about her Daddy's new life and lover!
;)
Navigation
[0] Message Index
[#] Next page
[*] Previous page
Go to full version