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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
pastorfred:
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There have been fascinating reversals in the love story of Ennis and Ellery. Sometimes Ennis assumes a role previously played by Jack in their time together or more recently by Ellery.
One of the most striking reversals happened in chapter 71 when Ennis came home to find Ellery drunk and in emotional turmoil on the patio. Ellery kept trying to push Ennis away, and Ennis would have none of that. It reminded me of the heart rending lake scene in BBM where Ennis told Jack to get the f--- off him, but Jack kept on until Ennis collapsed in his arms. It brought tears to my eyes.
I think I've come up with a useful shorthand term for this kind of reversal. It happens in our real life relationships. I call it a karmic mirror.
Lumière:
--- Quote from: pastorfred on July 09, 2006, 10:22:32 pm --- *** Spoiler Alert ***
One of the most striking reversals happened in chapter 71 when Ennis came home to find Ellery drunk and in emotional turmoil on the patio. Ellery kept trying to push Ennis away, and Ennis would have none of that. It reminded me of the heart rending lake scene in BBM where Ennis told Jack to get the f--- off him, but Jack kept on until Ennis collapsed in his arms. It brought tears to my eyes.
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That is the exact same observation I made on LiveJournal! :D
What an amazing chapter!
louisev:
I just pored through all of the wonderful comments and posts in LJ and here folks... and I want to thank you all too. It isn't as much because you liked what I wrote, it's more because you relate to it, you understand it, you can decode it... you know why it is there and why these things are, and can appreciate them. The concept of the "karmic mirror" or what another mystic friend of mine has called a karmic reversal, plays an important role here.
My vision of Ennis as he moves, changes and transforms for and with his new lover I am realizing, is a radical and provocative one, because it is not a passive piece of entertainment for a reader. Perhaps like Annie Proulx's original story, it makes a daring challenge to a reader to accept the facts as they are presented, the pain of not only being in the closet but also the pains of growth, the regrets involved in daring to love and be loved, the dynamics of caring. It is, as Jack would say, "no little thing." What this means is that those of you who have signed on to the trip are those who are daring as well, daring to be confronted with the dynamics of love, who have felt these losses or are facing them, and deciding that you have it in you to face them. And for that I am also grateful... that I'm not alone in needing to write about this journey for Ennis.
Now if anyone can explain to me why I had a silly dream where my washing machine broke down and I spent the entire dream telling my little sister to shut up...
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on July 09, 2006, 09:24:13 pm ---Hot Damn! I just came home and there's like 4 or 5 new chapters to read!
Thanks Louisev!!!!
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Don't you just love coming home these days :)
and
--- Quote from: pastorfred on July 09, 2006, 10:22:32 pm ---*** Spoiler Alert ***
There have been fascinating reversals in the love story of Ennis and Ellery. Sometimes Ennis assumes a role previously played by Jack in their time together or more recently by Ellery.
One of the most striking reversals happened in chapter 71 when Ennis came home to find Ellery drunk and in emotional turmoil on the patio. Ellery kept trying to push Ennis away, and Ennis would have none of that. It reminded me of the heart rending lake scene in BBM where Ennis told Jack to get the f--- off him, but Jack kept on until Ennis collapsed in his arms. It brought tears to my eyes.
I think I've come up with a useful shorthand term for this kind of reversal. It happens in our real life relationships. I call it a karmic mirror.
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Isn't it amazing how Louise brought Ennis and the rest of us to this point? I started rereading Taking Chances and again I'm struck by the journey Ennis has made so far. For letting him be loved and love again. thanks Louise, for the life you've given him :-*
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louisev:
seems like rereading the saga is getting to be the thing to do. I had to go back Saturday to the early chapters of "A Second Chance" to map the future course of that book and found out... a whole lot happens with these boys, don't it?!!!
thanks for the feedback, bel!
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