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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
JennyC:
Spoiler…
Another great chapter Louise! Ellery’s pain broke my heart. :'( He was really messed up by his first love. The little bit symphony I held for Beagle because of the way their conversation ended is gone. That was nasty for him to call. On the other hand, couldn’t be any more proud of how Ennis calmed Ellery down and cared for him. I was concerned that Ennis was going to explode over Ellery’s reaction too.
notBastet:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 10, 2006, 05:02:43 pm ---Update to "A Second Chance"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/70341.html "Chapter 76: A Call in the Night"
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Very minimal spoiling -
Warning everyone: humdinger of a chapter, may need back up emotional support. (I did.)
louisev:
--- Quote from: JennyC on July 10, 2006, 06:02:11 pm ---Spoiler…
Another great chapter Louise! Ellery’s pain broke my heart. :'( He was really messed up by his first love. The little bit symphony I held for Beagle because of the way their conversation ended is gone. That was nasty for him to call. On the other hand, couldn’t be any more proud of how Ennis calmed Ellery down and cared for him. I was concerned that Ennis was going to explode over Ellery’s reaction too.
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they must have a rule... only one of them can explode at a time!
JennyC:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 10, 2006, 06:07:35 pm ---they must have a rule... only one of them can explode at a time!
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That's a good rule. Only if people can stick with the rule, because it's hard. :) Good for Ennis to have his emotion under control. They can deal with the aftermath tomorrow.
notBastet:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 10, 2006, 06:07:35 pm ---they must have a rule... only one of them can explode at a time!
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but sometimes they explode simultaneously... :o (or near to it, at least)
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