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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 28, 2009, 06:32:01 pm ---SPOILERS
Well, a lot of verrrrrrry interesting stuff here! It's like hallucinogenic amnesia with a good bit of deja vu thrown in there - or something like that! I wonder if Ellery can discover things during this coma that will help him remember stuff he forgot during the first coma? Does that sentence even make sense? :laugh: But I have to agree with Colson, even if it was 14 years ago, I think the doctors should be aware that Ellery has been through this before.
And when Wes mentioned how there was "nobody to make the decisions otherwise" 14 years ago, I was relieved all over again that Colson has those papers in his wallet! Top-notch stuff, Louise! Thanks.
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ah hah, no flies on you, Marie! Very good deduction. I am not sure whether I'll crank out another chapter today but we'll see!
belbbmfan:
I just caught up with the last two chapters.
This amnesia thing,....it's complicated! ;D Maybe I should start taking notes too. ::)
Fascinating story Louise. :)
louisev:
and here is chapter 28, where Ellery remembers an important detail!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/295332.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 29, 2009, 02:57:25 pm ---and here is chapter 28, where Ellery remembers an important detail!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/295332.html
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SPOILERS
Well, Ellery started to make some progress in both worlds. I'm anxious to learn more about left-handed Emilio and how he fits into things. I'm relieved that the doctors will be looking into his past records, and it's sweet that Ellery wants Wes to get "that cowboy, Colson Grey" back to the hospital! :) Thanks, Louise.
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 29, 2009, 03:42:33 pm ---SPOILERS
Well, Ellery started to make some progress in both worlds. I'm anxious to learn more about left-handed Emilio and how he fits into things. I'm relieved that the doctors will be looking into his past records, and it's sweet that Ellery wants Wes to get "that cowboy, Colson Grey" back to the hospital! :) Thanks, Louise.
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well I'm sure glad that, while somewhat nonsensical still, there's an element of coherence occurring!
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