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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
I just figured that you ladies who study the ins and outs of the Sheriff's department so carefully would appreciate that the discussion between Joe and Wes is a critical one for the denouement of the story.
belbbmfan:
Yeah, the ins and outs of this department...
I sure would like to be a fly on one of those walls at times. Thanks for letting us have a peek Louise.
And I had a feeling that conversation between Wes and Joe was important. The questions and conclusions that Joe was coming up with were just to big and Wes' dismissal of them too quick.
mariez:
You know us so well, Louise! It's great to see Joe play such a major role in this story. :)
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on April 20, 2009, 04:22:51 pm ---You know us so well, Louise! It's great to see Joe play such a major role in this story. :)
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Joe just sort of grows on ya... as long as he has donuts and muffins!
and now for chapter 45!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/299652.html
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 20, 2009, 10:20:59 pm ---Joe just sort of grows on ya... as long as he has donuts and muffins!
and now for chapter 45!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/299652.html
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Gosh, Edna's such a tower of strength isn't she? And she knows Colson so well, how to talk to him, reassure him. It must be nice having an Edna in your life. I'm glad Colson showed his appreciation by giving her a hug, that was very sweet.
But...because she's such a strong woman, I never thought of her (or her shoulders) as frail. :-\ It makes me wonder whether she maybe needs some reassuring too.
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