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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on April 21, 2009, 01:33:36 am ---Gosh, Edna's such a tower of strength isn't she? And she knows Colson so well, how to talk to him, reassure him. It must be nice having an Edna in your life. I'm glad Colson showed his appreciation by giving her a hug, that was very sweet.
But...because she's such a strong woman, I never thought of her (or her shoulders) as frail. :-\ It makes me wonder whether she maybe needs some reassuring too.
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Fabienne, I had the same thought about Edna's "frail" shoulders. Right now she's tamping down her own worries about Ellery in order to be strong for Wes, who is not only worried about Ellery but has his hands full trying to solve some pretty serious crimes - old and new! Maybe when this is all over, Wes can take her on a vacation of their own. I loved that Colson gave her such a heartfelt hug. :)
..despite what he thinks he remembers..
Yes, this is key, isn't it? The difference between what you think you remember - and the truth.
“I think Ellery’s tryin ta cover because he thinks he did somethin wrong. An I am not gonna believe that unless I see proof in black an white.
"Proof in black and white." A high standard - but a good one! Reasonable doubt is worth consideration. Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
and now for chapter 46 and the new suspect walk-on!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/299957.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 21, 2009, 10:49:43 pm ---and now for chapter 46 and the new suspect walk-on!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/299957.html
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SPOILERS
Well, Sanchez is right - Eddie Ripley is a pretty ironic name for a "witness." Looks like he's going to keep everyone on their toes, though!
It also looks like Paula is counting the minutes until quitting time, which now means Henry time!
Okay okay!” Jeremy backed away, went through the door and closed it behind him. “Power goin to his head.”
“What’d you say, Sergeant?” Joe shouted through the door.
“You got somethin on your head!” Jeremy called back, and went to find some petty cash.
:laugh: :laugh: Well, somebody has to be the smart-ass when Ellery's not around! And speaking of Ellery, I do believe he was asking for his husband ......
This is terrific. Thanks, Louise!
belbbmfan:
Jee, it's uncanny how much Joe is starting to sound like Wes. And Jeremy like Ellery.
Good to see that they're keeping a handle on things at the station.
And 'Eddy Ripley'? Hmm, he reminds me of Brad Sevigny, which is not a good thing.
You're keeping us on our toes Louise. Thanks!
louisev:
yes, Fabienne that is an interesting phenomenon. But if Joe is going to get out of his comfortable zone of being just the scheduling and HR guy and has to do the dirty work of management, who is he going to emulate?
And same for Dupree.
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