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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 26, 2009, 05:34:08 pm ---
and chapter 51
http://louisev.livejournal.com/301187.html
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SPOILERS
Reynolds and his trusty notebooks! Poor Jeremy is so disappointed at not seeing Ellery, but it's probably for the best - there are as many complications and mysteries at the hospital as there are at the sheriff's office!
I have to mention again that Joe is such a gem; he really knows how to keep the boys in line and make quick decisions. He deserves that pizza! And LOL at giving Ripley the burrito he bit into!!! Terrific, Louise. Thanks!
louisev:
well you KNOW Joe doesn't like to waste food. I'm holding out for the explanation as to why he's got such a prejudice against Taco Bell myself!
As far as I know Joe has NEVER turned down food!
And now, Chapter 52! Yes, I really did write four chapters this weekend! And made a pizza and a cornbread, and washed my sheets! I must be on a roll!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/301553.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 26, 2009, 10:13:33 pm ---well you KNOW Joe doesn't like to waste food. I'm holding out for the explanation as to why he's got such a prejudice against Taco Bell myself!
As far as I know Joe has NEVER turned down food!
And now, Chapter 52! Yes, I really did write four chapters this weekend! And made a pizza and a cornbread, and washed my sheets! I must be on a roll!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/301553.html
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You sure are on a roll! Pizza and cornbread - yum!
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“Sure...” he backed away, every step of distance between him and the now-sleeping figure on the bed increased his anxiety about him. Why couldn’t they just let him go an let me take care of em? I know how ta do it.
Aw, that was so touching. And I really like how you described his thoughts and the feeling of being unmoored. I think standing vigil in a hospital will do that to most everyone, and Colson's situation is even more complex than most!
It looks like the Rose Hotel is a popular destination tonight! I'm guessing Henry and Paula should be showing up soon, and that should be .... well, I'm not sure what that's going to be like. Which makes me all the more curious!
Enjoy your pizza and cornbread, Louise! Thanks.
louisev:
and here is chapter 53!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/301730.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 27, 2009, 10:28:23 pm ---and here is chapter 53!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/301730.html
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SPOILERS
Aw, poor Ellery. That dream demonstrated all his fears and warring emotions, not to mention his very understandable confusion. And I can't imagine any of this is helping his blood pressure any. But it looks like the dots are starting to be connected. He hasn't been in the hospital that long, but it must feel like forever. :-\ Thanks, Louise!
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