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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louisev on May 03, 2009, 10:15:18 pm ---Bonus chapter 58!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/303115.html
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SPOILERS
Well, at this rate, Ellery's headaches aren't going to subside any time soon. :-\ Jeremy's right, Ellery should be smelling flowers and watching tv instead of trying to solve crimes, past and present from his hospital bed.
I know, I know, I sound like Edna, but what can I say? I want our boys home soon making kissy faces! :)
It's amazing how fast the updates are popping up, Louise. Great job! :)
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on May 03, 2009, 10:15:18 pm ---Bonus chapter 58!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/303115.html
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SPOILERS
“So just outta curiosity, how come Joe is goin through the archives lookin at cold cases from 1971 an havin long secret talks with Wes on the phone?” Jeremy asked. “Speakin a secrets...”
Ellery blanched. “He’s doin what?”
Uh oh. I think Ellery's headache is about to get much worse, and I think Wes is about to get one himself. Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on May 04, 2009, 01:02:11 pm ---SPOILERS
“So just outta curiosity, how come Joe is goin through the archives lookin at cold cases from 1971 an havin long secret talks with Wes on the phone?” Jeremy asked. “Speakin a secrets...”
Ellery blanched. “He’s doin what?”
Uh oh. I think Ellery's headache is about to get much worse, and I think Wes is about to get one himself. Thanks, Louise!
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yes, definitely!
louisev:
and a little showdown!
Chapter 60!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/303427.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on May 04, 2009, 09:50:00 pm ---and a little showdown!
Chapter 60!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/303427.html
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SPOILERS
Yes, a little showdown, but quite touching. It's hard for anyone to think clearly when they care so damn much. And, no, Ellery is a lot of things, but never a crybaby. But he really does need to go home and be loved by Colson and give his poor abused brain a chance to heal instead of being constantly picked at.
An Colson half convinced I got some deep dark secret a hetrosexuality or somethin I’m keepin from em,” ..
Well, thank God we know it's not that bad!!! :laugh: :laugh: Yes, even with a cracked brain he's still Ellery! Thanks, Louise.
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