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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on June 16, 2009, 10:38:05 pm ---and now, back to Memorial ! Chapter 97
http://louisev.livejournal.com/312876.html
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SPOILERS
Henry is a keeper, Paula! I liked everything about his visit - he was genuine and funny and honest and direct. I thought it was great that he "came clean" in front of Mel and said he had nothing to hide. And he finds Paula adorable! :) Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on June 17, 2009, 04:03:43 pm ---SPOILERS
Henry is a keeper, Paula! I liked everything about his visit - he was genuine and funny and honest and direct. I thought it was great that he "came clean" in front of Mel and said he had nothing to hide. And he finds Paula adorable! :) Thanks, Louise!
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I wasn't sure whether Paula giggling like a schoolgirl at his "adorable" comment might have been over the top, but she DOES have the excuse that she's on intravenous pain meds and just had a traumatic shock!
louisev:
...and chapter 98!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/313091.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on June 17, 2009, 08:21:51 pm ---I wasn't sure whether Paula giggling like a schoolgirl at his "adorable" comment might have been over the top, but she DOES have the excuse that she's on intravenous pain meds and just had a traumatic shock!
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Yes, there's that - but I kind of liked seeing the spontaneous side of Paula, not over the top, at all!
SPOILERS - Chapter 98 (98?!? We are zeroing in on the big 100!)
Okay, now we're getting somewhere! Not surprisingly, Wes is a masterful interrogator. Easy to understand why Manuel and his mother are so frightened.
“Oh yeah. Who hit my Chief Deputy over the head with a toilet snake?”
Louise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on June 18, 2009, 01:36:04 pm ---Yes, there's that - but I kind of liked seeing the spontaneous side of Paula, not over the top, at all!
SPOILERS - Chapter 98 (98?!? We are zeroing in on the big 100!)
Okay, now we're getting somewhere! Not surprisingly, Wes is a masterful interrogator. Easy to understand why Manuel and his mother are so frightened.
“Oh yeah. Who hit my Chief Deputy over the head with a toilet snake?”
Louise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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you're not the only one squealing about how that chapter ended!!!
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