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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
Well so far nobody has cried "Uncle" and asked for me to give away the plot, so... onward.
Chapter 13:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/288382.html
louisev:
And here is chapter 14!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/291787.html
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 17, 2009, 07:28:40 pm ---Well so far nobody has cried "Uncle" and asked for me to give away the plot, so... onward.
Chapter 13:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/288382.html
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???
I ended up with chapter 1 on my screen, with dr. Henry and Esteban doing the card thing.
I don't know how to go from one chapter to another.
louisev:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on March 18, 2009, 03:12:25 am --- ???
I ended up with chapter 1 on my screen, with dr. Henry and Esteban doing the card thing.
I don't know how to go from one chapter to another.
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whooops!!!! wrong link!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/291787.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 18, 2009, 11:49:03 am ---whooops!!!! wrong link!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/291787.html
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I think that's Chapter 14, Louise. Here's Chapter 13:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/291556.html?#cutid1
SPOILERS
Wow - two chapters at once to read!
And speaking of Chapter 13 .... well almost every workplace has a Reynolds! Looks like he's just been waiting for the opportunity to whip out that notebook. His take on events is interesting - I'd love to hear his take on some of those test cards! This "part-time" job is really turning into something for Dr. Henry.
Chapter 14 ... I feel so sorry for Colson, Wes and Edna, too. This type of waiting is pure hell. No, not a good time to tell Colson about Pam's new boyfriend.
Ellery opened his eyes and fixed them quizzically on Wes’s face. “When did yer hair turn gray?”
Oh, boy. Wes recovered pretty quickly, but I'm sure his blood pressure just went through the roof. Now what? And who's going to tell Colson? And since Ellery isn't surprised about the bite on his neck - who does he think put it there? And ..... well, I'll stop. One step at a time. :-\
What a terrific story, Louise!
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