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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 21, 2009, 04:24:10 pm ---
Spoilerish!
whew, well I sure hope it was clear by the doctor's satisfaction with the answers that Ellery is adequately oriented in space and time!
And now for chapter 18!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/292814.html
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SPOILERS
Yes, it was clear that Ellery knows it's a Thursday in June, 1985, but as for some other things .... :-\
Nice conversation between Paula and Henry - I like how direct and honest they were with each other, and I thought it was interesting that once they got the Ellery issue out of the way they fell into a easy rapport. It looks like they may be a good source of support and information for each other, both being relative newcomers in a tight-knit group. Thanks for the quick updates, Louise!
louisev:
... and I always LURV the feedback, Marie! and Fabienne, and all of you other lurkers!
louisev:
And here is Chapter 19!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/292954.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 22, 2009, 05:41:47 pm ---And here is Chapter 19!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/292954.html
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SPOILERS
Louise, I do love how your characters don't "act like characters" but rather simply behave as real people do. Wes's conversation with "Mrs. Hill" and the exchanges between Wes, Edna and Colson are perfect examples.
And leave it to Ellery to have such colorfully detailed fantasies! :laugh:
“And you have some visitors.”
Ack .... now what? Don't tell me he's going to ask for the naked Indian brave when Colson gets in the room!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 22, 2009, 06:32:51 pm ---SPOILERS
Louise, I do love how your characters don't "act like characters" but rather simply behave as real people do. Wes's conversation with "Mrs. Hill" and the exchanges between Wes, Edna and Colson are perfect examples.
And leave it to Ellery to have such colorfully detailed fantasies! :laugh:
“And you have some visitors.”
Ack .... now what? Don't tell me he's going to ask for the naked Indian brave when Colson gets in the room!
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High compliments coming from you, Marie! And if you want to know what is going to happen next, the truth is, I haven't any idea!
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