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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
mariez:
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Oh, good grief! Skull, foot, ankle, knee - if this keeps up someone will break an arm or have an appendicitis attack next. We haven't gotten to those body parts yet! Poor Esteban - that sounded so painful! Henry sure has his work cut out for him. I think the department passed its breaking point a while back! Great stuff - thanks, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on September 20, 2009, 09:04:08 pm ---SPOILERS
Oh, good grief! Skull, foot, ankle, knee - if this keeps up someone will break an arm or have an appendicitis attack next. We haven't gotten to those body parts yet! Poor Esteban - that sounded so painful! Henry sure has his work cut out for him. I think the department passed its breaking point a while back! Great stuff - thanks, Louise!
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There will come a point when sanity has to return, I am sure!
louisev:
Another chapter - which may not actually be 'done-done' - it's a bit short. But I've run out of night to write in!
Agents of the Law: Chapter 29 http://louisev.livejournal.com/328817.html
mariez:
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No, it wasn't too short, Louise - but I can't say I'm not eager for the next chapter! :laugh: The Red Stallion? She's going to the Red Stallion? Oh, Colson will love that! I half wish he had come around in time to see Katie Ann with her ear up to Nick and Jeremy's door! Good Lord. This girl just doesn't learn. What has Sam McElhaney gotten himself into?
...wanton dessert recipes!” :laugh: :laugh:
I have to say, though, that the twins are entertaining for sure! Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
Thanks for your patience... real life is kicking me right in the knee! and I am also very busy with work (I am going to be working some overtime next week but I get this weekend to myself!) and I just wrote a long tome about my medical situation, but I'm falling asleep from my latest codeine pill and need to take a nap before I write again, so I'll be working on "Agents" again BY tomorrow!
ETA: it's tomorrow, and I'm hard at work on Chapter 30!!
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