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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
mariez:
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Oooh, the plot thickens ..... It's great the way all these threads are tying together. And man oh man, Wes may need some of that aspirin, too. Esteban is in a precarious state, and Taylor made exactly the wrong joke. :-\
“”K.I.S.S. and below it, 424 Pine Street, 7:15 a.m. Thursday. Share. “
Hmmmm..... very interesting! Thanks, Louise - and great news about Chapter 42!
louisev:
chapter 42 and ... it's a doozy!!!
bwah hahahaha.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/333233.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on January 10, 2010, 03:06:56 pm ---chapter 42 and ... it's a doozy!!!
bwah hahahaha.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/333233.html
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A doozy? Um, slight understatement there, Louise! Holy crap.
“Wayne is sorta like Ellery’s Katie,” Nick said.”
:laugh: :laugh: OMG, what a great line. Wayne would love it! Katie, not so much. Yeah, technically it's not Colson's place to take the car since it was Ellery's, but I don't know, I'm feeling a lot of sympathy for Colson right now. The girls are way out of control and he has enough on his plate without their antics.
I'm so glad Jeremy offered to intervene - he seems like the perfect one for the job ( I hope! - this will take all his skills and then some). Should be an interesting police report, that's for sure. :-\ Thanks!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 11, 2010, 03:50:30 pm ---SPOILERS
A doozy? Um, slight understatement there, Louise! Holy crap.
“Wayne is sorta like Ellery’s Katie,” Nick said.”
:laugh: :laugh: OMG, what a great line. Wayne would love it! Katie, not so much. Yeah, technically it's not Colson's place to take the car since it was Ellery's, but I don't know, I'm feeling a lot of sympathy for Colson right now. The girls are way out of control and he has enough on his plate without their antics.
I'm so glad Jeremy offered to intervene - he seems like the perfect one for the job ( I hope! - this will take all his skills and then some). Should be an interesting police report, that's for sure. :-\ Thanks!
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Well maybe it's an insight into the relationship an author has with his characters, but I couldn't stop chuckling at the phone-grabbing-and-grabbing-back scene and Katie sticking her head out the door when Jeremy banged on it.
louisev:
Okay it's Friday night, do you know where your chapter is?
Yeah, about 2 hours from being delivered. I just finished dinner.
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