Hi Mandy! You're getting better with every chapter! This is great! I love your style of writing and your dialogue is excellent! I feel so sorry for Jack, he seems so sad! I hope he will become more responsible towards his little boy, though! Maybe once Ennis makes up his mind?
Thanks! I'm glad you said that, because I was worried with this chapter...re: Jack becoming more responsible towards Bobby... I think after this chapter I decided that that's one of the things I'm going to try and take on with this fic, Jack learning how to be a good father. In my mind, though Bobby practically worships Jack, Jack has most likely been absent for much of the kid's life and now he's being forced to take an interest and he's finding it both amazing and incredibly frustrating and he's realzing how little he knows. And really, he's got his own problems to contend with before he can become a good father to Bobby... just a few thoughts. This last chapter didn't go in the direction I had planned and it gave me a lot to work with
I'm looking forward to reading about Jack and Bobby. I enjoyed it in this last update.About those pics Mandy, Helen posted a whole lot of pics from our trip to the US and Canada on her LJ, I think Ennis's little house is on it. I've only got a few on my LJ so far