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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
louisev:
update!
I hope when you see this next chapter you will understand why I needed to take time to produce this. It wasn't like I was off gallivanting for no reason at all.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/199359.html "14. Resolve"
mariez:
SPOILER
I'm running out of superlatives, Louise. That was . . . . well, I'm kind of speechless at the moment. My eyes are watering up - not from sadness or sympathy - but from the beauty and depth of your writing.
I had faith in Ennis's wisdom and insight - and I am so very relieved that he has admitted to himself that he was doing to Ellery with his destructive guilt what he did to Jack with his fear. He has taken a huge step in knowing that he may not be able to control his feelings - but that he can control how he reacts to those feelings.
That was perfection, Louise.
Thank you - Marie
P.S. And way to go with coinciding with my lunch again! :)
ifyoucantfixit:
cute marie........... 8) ;) 8) his world so bright he has to wear sunglasses
he will then become SLICKITY NICK
janice
mariez:
--- Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on January 11, 2007, 01:31:10 pm ---
cute marie........... 8) ;) 8) his world so bright he has to wear sunglasses
he will then become SLICKITY NICK
janice
--- End quote ---
Ha Ha! Love it - we could keep going with this, couldn't we, Janice!!!
Oh, yeah - been meaning to say - love your banner! But, because I am obsessed with bits of minutia - just what is the symbol on Jeeves's shirt?
Thanks - Marie
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 11, 2007, 01:28:36 pm ---SPOILER
I'm running out of superlatives, Louise. That was . . . . well, I'm kind of speechless at the moment. My eyes are watering up - not from sadness or sympathy - but from the beauty and depth of your writing.
I had faith in Ennis's wisdom and insight - and I am so very relieved that he has admitted to himself that he was doing to Ellery with his destructive guilt what he did to Jack with his fear. He has taken a huge step in knowing that he may not be able to control his feelings - but that he can control how he reacts to those feelings.
That was perfection, Louise.
Thank you - Marie
P.S. And way to go with coinciding with my lunch again! :)
--- End quote ---
What Marie said..............
he can't control his feelings, but he can control how he reacts to those feelings
thank you for those very wise words :-*
and thank you louise, this is just getting better and better. Your writing is sensitive and heartwarming!
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