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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
yb:
Louise, even though I’m eagerly awaiting your update, your job arrangement and the hurricane situation definitely take precedence. Take your time and we’ll be here waiting patiently.
David:
You rest up Louise. I'll just keep picturing Jeremy meeting Nicky at the door naked. That'll keep me warm until your next chapter is ready.
;) ~D~
louisev:
and.... yes, an update.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/203433.html "25. Free Floating Jealousy"
I spent some time thinking and considering, and it would see thinking and considering is a good thing in terms of taking original approaches, and so, a theme chapter to get us back to the point of it all.
Kazza:
--- Quote from: louisev on January 19, 2007, 07:54:57 am ---and.... yes, an update.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/203433.html "25. Free Floating Jealousy"
I spent some time thinking and considering, and it would see thinking and considering is a good thing in terms of taking original approaches, and so, a theme chapter to get us back to the point of it all.
--- End quote ---
SPOILER
I did like the way that this was structured - touching base with our main characters. Everyone seems to be back on track (for now).
Do feel sorry for Jeeves though. I know that he's been a bit of an arse, but surely he deserves some companionship too. I'd love to see him and Ennis have the "my love died" conversation.
Karen
opinionista:
SPOILER
Now that I am caught up with the reading I have to say that even though I feel bad for Jeeves (solitude is hard), I agree that he should not be invited to the reception. It doesn't matter if he has been buying the house over at the bar. He isn't a friend of Ennis and Ellery. I think the reception is something intimate not a public affair in which every queer in Laramie should be invited just because they happen to be customers of the bar. Besides, he and Jeremy are on bad terms. I don't think he belongs in the reception. Those are my two cents anyway.
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