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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
Lumière:
--- Quote from: louisev on January 21, 2007, 01:46:23 pm ---ha, thought I forgot about ya!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/203785.html "27. Delegating"
--- End quote ---
Excellent chap Louise!
Okay .. Wayne is hilarious ..
I can't believe Pookie almost told him what Simon did to him! LOL..
And another thing .. Every time Wayne is confronted for doing something wrong or banned from one thing or other .. he always resorts to the: "I'm a sick man, I am dying.." line .. ;D .. and it works most of the time too! Wayne certainly keeps things entertaining! 8)
louisev:
Okay guys I think I have my reality sorted out.
I can do some editing/proofing early in the morning, then by the time i wake up and can think about the boys again I can write my chapter, which should be up about midday or so my time (wakeup time in America) and then go on to another chunk of my editing later. I may be able to master the art of doing more than one chapter if I get used to it but right now it is taking a lot longer to sort out the character interactions in this story and to make sure that they mesh properly as we approach the climactic wedding reception with all ends tied up. Or all the ends that are fit to tie.
In chapter 28 there will be new faces at the bar.
magicmountain:
Sex Machine
Ennis has had many names
like Mr Please and Thank You
To Ellery’s tease
he’s Mr Freeze
and then he’s Mr Spank You
Though boys may flirt and carry on
acting all lascivious
He doesn’t notice anything
(especially now he wears a ring!)
just boring Mr Oblivious
But come the nights
Mr Coyote bites
No more Mr Clean!
When Ennis Del Mar turns down the lights
he turns into the Sex Machine!
louisev:
oh Jo, those little quip-poems always make me chuckle. LOUDLY.
Lumière:
heehee ..Sex Machine for real! ;D
Cheers Jo!
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