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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
louisev:
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... by the end of the night every man jack is going to have one of Nate's cards bristling from his shirt pocket.
mariez:
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Have to agree about this being so Ellery! ..
...and another scribbled note by Ellery on his notepad in large letters “GET THE FUCK DONE ASSHOLE” and stabbed the pad repeatedly, slowly and savagely.
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And so true-to-life! As a prosecutor I can't tell you how many times those words -or versions thereof ;D - have gone through my mind while I sat there with my courtroom poker face! Of course, I would never write it down - that is a pure Ellery twist! :laugh:
Louise, that was just brilliant - could any more shit possibly hit the fan? Well, actually, YES - I guess it could - because we don't yet know what Ennis will do!!! :laugh: I don't know how I'll sleep waiting for that!
And Nate's business card "bristling" from all the shirt pockets? :laugh: Perfect!
Thanks! Marie
P.S. I felt bad for Lauren - awww... he actually felt sick!
David:
Can't you just see the look on Jeremys face when Nick let slip the "Sweet thing" name! Plus the look on Nicks face when he realized he slipped and covered his mouth with his hand! LOL
mariez:
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--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on January 22, 2007, 07:14:49 pm ---Can't you just see the look on Jeremys face when Nick let slip the "Sweet thing" name! Plus the look on Nicks face when he realized he slipped and covered his mouth with his hand! LOL
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Yes - I can see the looks on both their faces perfectly! And it's so funny that at first Nick made a quick save . . . but then he fumbled with the "sweet thing!" Oh, well - he's crazy in love (and probably still on a make-up sex and new-hat high!) LOL!!
Marie
louisev:
oh come on now... does anyone believe Nick actually slipped?
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