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louisev:
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David:
Wow!
I need to go take a cold shower! LOL
Better yet, A hot one! ;D
mariez:
SPOILER
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Thank you, Louise :)
I needed a bit of recuperation time after that OH. MY. GOD. first part. ;D Loved this morning after, too. Hey, we got a "baby" and a "babe" - Nicky's expanding his "bedroom names" as Jeremy would call them - and I don't think he minded a bit - but, of course, they were in the bedroom. :)
Jeremy is too adorable - “So yer really interested in me, huh?”
I like sensible and matter-of-fact Nick understanding and respecting Ellery's rules. ("Siesta Motel" sent a pang through me.) I also like his straightforward approach here to moving the relationship along - “But we better talk anyhow, we’ve reached a juncture.”
Terrific, Louise - as always.
Marie
P.S. Don't you dare fix that blind, Jeremy. I need to keep my illusion that the sunlight and moonlight are meant to be shining in on you and Nicky. :)
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 10, 2007, 02:20:58 pm ---SPOILER
Thank you, Louise :)
I needed a bit of recuperation time after that OH. MY. GOD. first part. ;D Loved this morning after, too. Hey, we got a "baby" and a "babe" - Nicky's expanding his "bedroom names" as Jeremy would call them - and I don't think he minded a bit - but, of course, they were in the bedroom. :)
Jeremy is too adorable - “So yer really interested in me, huh?”
I like sensible and matter-of-fact Nick understanding and respecting Ellery's rules. ("Siesta Motel" sent a pang through me.) I also like his straightforward approach here to moving the relationship along - “But we better talk anyhow, we’ve reached a juncture.”
Terrific, Louise - as always.
Marie
P.S. Don't you dare fix that blind, Jeremy. I need to keep my illusion that the sunlight and moonlight are meant to be shining in on you and Nicky. :)
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Can I just say, Marie, that you are my favorite reviewer? thanks for that!
Yes, the Siesta Motel, a pang indeed. Does Ennis know about a 'Siesta Motel' in Laramie?
louisev:
and
here it is, complete.
Sorry it took so long, I had a million things to do.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/214472.html "The L Word" (complete)
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