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David:

--- Quote from: magicmountain on March 13, 2007, 09:34:06 pm ---My Licky Nicky is a gorgeous Italian singer by the name of Patrizio Buanne (who happens to be touring Australia at the moment).

I think David's Nick may be someone slightly more downmarket!

--- End quote ---

Oh and we know Louise's Nicky like to get downmarket.    Down to business that is!  LOL.

louisev:


Okay here it is, I did it AGAIN!

2750 words!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/214600.html  "Blood Oaths" complete

mariez:
SPOILER





--- Quote from: louisev on March 14, 2007, 11:58:30 am ---
Okay here it is, I did it AGAIN!

2750 words!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/214600.html  "Blood Oaths" complete

--- End quote ---

You sure did do it again.  Wow.  That was so unbelievably poignant, Louise.  I loved that Sue took one look at Jeremy and knew something had changed.  I mentioned that he had to have been in constant turmoil - but I had no idea the depth of it.  The image of a young brother and sister making that blood oath is just heartbreaking.  I'm glad they at least had each other growing up and have each other now.   I cannot wait to hear the rest of that phone call Jeremy made to his mother on Christmas day. 

Seeing Jeremy shiver in that inadequate coat -  it touches my heart to know that Nick must have suggested a nice warm one for his parents' Christmas gift to his Sweet Thing.  Sniff.

Thanks, Louise
Marie

mariez:


Okay - so his name is right on the dang picture!   :laugh:  Duh.  Not being up on my gorgeous (understatement) Italian singers - I thought he was just a model in a tuxedo ad! 

And, yes, David, Naughty Nicky knows exactly how to get down to business.  Has he been taking any pics of Jeremy lately with his camera?   ;D

Marie

louisev:
For all of you Laramie Saga fans, Laramie Tales readers, E & E eddicated folkses, as well as

All a you 'Love Born from Steel' fans and "Through the Veil of Time" fanatics...

I bring you,

An American Brokie in London, in today's DC Daily Sheet.

http://www.davecullen.com/forum/index.php?topic=21061.msg787617#msg787617

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