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louisev:
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and the update!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/220417.html

louisev:
I( dont know why that happened, but this is the Tuesday update:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/220754.html

MaineWriter:
Fun chapter, Louise. Lots of great dialog in this one, like:

“He is no transient, Jerry, he’s a laborer – it is different. He is friends with these ... people, Lauren and his jeweler friend, and I went down to talk to him and Simon was positively rude to me. Whatever Lance said to him I can’t imagine, but he was positively horrible to me. I felt like an absolute pariah.”

“A laborer then. You deserve better. Don’t worry about that boy, Chas, come on, let’s have some fun. That’s what they got the police for, to worry about laborers and such.”

Thanks for a laugh first thing in the morning!

L

belbbmfan:
Well, as Jerry said to Chas: 'You deserve better.'

I agree and I don't think Jerry is it. He could be a bit more considerate towards Chas who's obviously concerned about Lance's disappearance.


thanks for the chapter Louise!

louisev:
well I do think it is time for Jeeves to show his human side, a few folks have been waiting quite a while for "will the real Jeeves please stand up?"

heheh.

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