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opinionista:
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“Hey don’t mind me, ya wanna kiss or somethin, I got typin ta do,” Murdoch said, pushing his glasses up and turning back to his typewriter.
LOL!
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on June 04, 2007, 03:42:10 pm ---
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Right, that's it! I'm applying for a job at the Tourmaline sheriff's office! :)
Jeremy is one lucky guy. Thanks Louise.
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:laugh: Fabienne, we are always on the same wavelength - I'll meet you there! A few chapters ago I told Louise that I wanted to run away to Arizona and work with these guys - I'm being purely unselfish, of course - I think Paula needs my help! ;D
And, yes, Nicky is so effin' adorable in this chapter I can hardly stand it.
--- Quote from: opinionista on June 04, 2007, 03:53:36 pm ---Spoiler
“Hey don’t mind me, ya wanna kiss or somethin, I got typin ta do,” Murdoch said, pushing his glasses up and turning back to his typewriter.
LOL!
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LOL is right - I know I should have been feeling sorry for Jeremy, but that was just too funny!
Mystery paycheck! The lumberyard??? The plot thickens . . .
Congrats on the job, Louise! I'll pop upstairs to get the details!
Thanks,
Marie
louisev:
.... and another update, sorry these have been slow. All of this getting ready for my next leg of my tour has me slowed down:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/222163.html "The Chesterfield >Fortune, Chapter 20"
mariez:
Hey, Louise - don't apologize for God's sake - I can imagine how busy you must be.
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So many great lines in this chapter -
Esteban picked up a slice of now-cool pepperoni pizza, eyeing it as if it might talk to him if he pled enough.
“She had important dinner with District Attorney and his lovely bunny wife,” Esteban said. LOL! Now I'm picturing Bunny twitching her pink nose and shakin' her cottontail!
“Is there any more a that pepperoni pizza I ain’t eatin?”
Where the hell is Ellery when I need em? I am totally incompetent when it comes to kickin asses an inspirin fear an action,”
“We’re supposed to be the police.”
But Sanchez gets the prize -
“Dupree’s wife cooks just as good as Ellery’s does.” And the funniest part about that is, from the looks of Jeremy's dinner, that's absolutely true! :laugh:
And, yay, we're preparing warrants and getting down to some nitty gritty, but how will this blackout affect things . . . and should I remember the name Aaron Fennelly?
Terrific, Louise - thanks!
Marie
louisev:
whew! and here I thought I was out of practice!
Fennelly has not appeared in the series as yet - he is completely new.
Anyone feel like casting our nondescript 40-something machinist and stalker of young college nursing students?
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