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mariez:
Thanks, Louise.  Jeremy made a comment a couple of chapters ago that Nick had "work" to do for the next day and I got the impression that he was talking about homework, and Dr. Sampson's Christmas check would allow him to lessen his hours so that makes sense.  Glad to see Nicky has his priorities straight- studying and taking care of his man taking precedence over the bar!   :) 

I wonder how Jeeves is doing on his first day as a freelance detective . . . . who knows, this may start a whole new career for him - "Chas Chesterfield, Private Eye."  The only detective in Greenlea County who has to use a taxi while he runs around town!  LOL!

Marie

louisev:
and now, 22.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/222573.html

opinionista:
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--- Quote from: louise van hine on June 11, 2007, 09:40:24 pm ---and now, 22.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/222573.html

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Louella and Molesterfield round 2! LOL shit Louise, now everyone's going to be banned from the Stallion. Thanks for the good laugh!

mariez:
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Just another night at the Red Stallion!  LOL!  Yikes - I wouldn't want to be in the bar when Colson gets there!

That was just hilarious - but, of course, I always love Wayne's lines:

“It was dark, what’s the problem?” Wayne said, his voice cutting across the other voices.   :laugh:

And Sergio hasn't heard from Lance . . uh oh . . . and very interesting about his rather fluid English . . . mysteries on top of mysteries . . .

Thanks, Louise
Marie

P.S.  '"I can’t do this on my own, darling,” Chas said, his words more of an invocation than a prayer.'   Awww, that was touching. 

louisev:


and yes, I wrote an extra long chapter with actual groping in it!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/222810.html

more Colson goodness and of course a few little Wayne bits as well.

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