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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
louisev:
and here is Chesterfield Fortune Chapter 51!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/231131.html#cutid1
mariez:
Good grief, Louise, don't ever apologize. Way to go with your exam and I hope the rest of your training goes smoothly. (Is that apple cake you're baking? Yum)
The LJ cuts look great ... and I'm off to read Chapter 51!
SPOILERS
Ahh...Louise, this story is so damn good. At the beginning of story, we talked about all those conflicts and complications that have been bouncing around in Jeremy's mind and now we're seeing them coalesce. Jeremy's acceptance of his sexuality and the fact that he was able to use the "L" word with Nick were certainly pivotal, but I see the events of this story leading to a true watershed in Jeremy's life. And how telling it is that so many of the "masks" worn by these characters are being shed.
My heart is just breaking for Lance....that was hard to read. But I really liked this line:
“Jeeves ain’t got a mean bone in his body – just in his mouth.... So true. And he's also brave and honorable.
Thanks,
Marie
magicmountain:
Haven't been able to log on for a while. My Mr Fixit fixed it with a new browser. It's good to be onlne again.
louisev:
welcome back Jo! If I had a faster browser and more than 5 minutes' breaktime to let it load I'd over you some daisies or some azaleas or some begonias! I'll catch zou up later - after class!
mariez:
It's great to see you, Jo! Yay for Mr. Fixit. Did someone say daises, azaleas or begonias?
:)
Marie
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