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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
louisev:
Let's be fair here - a kiss AND a grope!
mariez:
LOL! I believe that may have been two kisses and a grope - not that I'm keeping track or anything....
SPOILERS
I've been waiting for about 40 chapters for Colson to bring up that coffee tray - he just had to have the opening! LOL!
Great job with the conversation between Lauren and Colson. Human nature is a funny thing - out of all the difficult things in the world we are faced with - admitting that we just may have been wrong about someone or something gives us the most trouble.
And what a joy it's been watching Ellery throughout this story. He's been the fountain of wisdom, the level head, the great detective, the fair but tough ass-kicker, the charming smooth talker, and the insightful and understanding husband ...all from his sick bed. But I don't doubt we'll get to see all the other sides to him once he gets back to the station and starts driving Wes nuts again ...LOL!
Thanks, Louise
Marie
louisev:
ready for another? I am making up for the "Lost Weekend"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/231464.html The Chesterfield Fortune: 53.
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on July 31, 2007, 12:47:01 pm ---LOL! I believe that may have been two kisses and a grope - not that I'm keeping track or anything....
SPOILERS
I've been waiting for about 40 chapters for Colson to bring up that coffee tray - he just had to have the opening! LOL!
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s,
hahahah oh you were waiting for that! hahaha, yes, Colson's been stewing about it ever since Esteban produced it from "somewhere" in the kitchen. And this will come up again, you bet!
mariez:
SPOILERS
A peek inside Esteban's mind - an excellent surprise (well, what's inside his mind isn't excellent -just the fact that we got to look). Soooo..... it appears that Esteban is indeed harboring some resentment towards Ellery even if he won't admit it to himself or anyone else. And I'm left wondering if some of that unspoken resentment rubbed off on Larry, and if Esteban was forthcoming about this in rehab. Verrry interesting turn of events, Louise.
And didn't we all know that the name Merrill Snopes was bound to pop up again. Of course Wes shouldn't have taken him off list - but, unfortunately, that is exactly the kind of stuff that sometimes happens in the real world of law enforcement. But they have another name, too - Aaron Fennelly? Hmmm......
Thanks,
Marie
P.S. Yeah, even with a couple of kisses and a grope, or even a little light fancy action, I figure Colson's issues aren't going to go away quickly - that coffee tray and what it represents is bound to pop up again too!
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