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Kazza:
Louise, I have to say that I am really enjoying this story. I like how all the characters that we've grown to know and love pop up. Dupree is certainly the hot topic of conversation isn't he? Being under the spotlight like that must certainly be uncomfortable.
Poor old Jeeves - it was so sad when he described himself as a widower reduced to picking up young men in bars :(
It looks like Dupree has made his choice, but then, perhaps you have a few more twists up your sleeve? ;)
Karen
louisev:
There is definitely more to follow... and a leeetle more plot to develop!
David:
Now what’s this about Dupree gettin his clock cleaned – he tell the whole bar?”
“No, the whole bar saw that just-got-fucked-look.”
Ellery gave Lance a critical glance. “Oh, ya mean how you look when you come out a the Gents?”
ROFLOL! That made me burst out laughing Louise!
louisev:
Touche by Ellery, eh?
magicmountain:
"Jeremy was so easy to rile. Like so many of those straight boys he had met early on, cruising nervously at the out of the way gay bar in Mukilteo, pairing off after one quick dance. They were easily hooked, a few whispered suggestions and they fell like dead pines in a burning forest." *
Looks like Nick has been acting in the past as a bit of a sexual predator, not to put too fine a point on it. Lance seems to recognise his type describing him a shark on the lookout for virgins. Against that we have Nick's sensitive, go slow treatment of Dupree and his declaration of love. An interesting situation Louise!
* Fantastic metaphor!
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