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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
David:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 08, 2006, 07:42:57 am ---SPOILER
I have to tell you... there is some heartbreak ahead though... hopefully you won't come after me with pitchforks for it.
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It will be worse than pitchforks! I'll pitch my computer out the window!
<David goes into a fetal position in the corner and rocks back and forth while crying>
David:
:-*
louisev:
oh no, what have I done?
*David, David, it's okay David.*
I said some heartbreak ahead, I didn't say a heartbreak ENDING did I?
*oh no...*
David:
<David lifts head up, wipes tears from eyes and crawls back over to the computer>
.....tippity type tipptyy type....
PHEW! I was worried there for a few minutes. I think if Nick skipped town on Jeremy right now the poor boy would never date again! Male or female!
Kazza:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on December 08, 2006, 07:47:51 am ---I was just thinking about the last chapter.
Ellery is in the bar, getting ready to leave. He stopped by after work so it might be 5 pm or so?
Jeremy was supposed to meet Nick outside the bar at 5 pm.
Is Ellery going to walk in on their assignation? Hmmm?
L
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Ooooo.... Leslie, interesting thought. That hadn't occurrred to me (not suprisingly as not much ever does).
Ellery catching Nick and Jeremy making out in the car outside the bar :laugh:
Can I add flaming torches to those pitchforks? ;) :laugh:
Karen
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