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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
louisev:
no no no.. no cheesy outside-the-bar coincidence run-ins! I hate coincidence run-ins when I can help it!
When I can't help it, what can I say?
David:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on December 08, 2006, 07:47:51 am ---I was just thinking about the last chapter.
Ellery is in the bar, getting ready to leave. He stopped by after work so it might be 5 pm or so?
Jeremy was supposed to meet Nick outside the bar at 5 pm.
Is Ellery going to walk in on their assignation? Hmmm?
L
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oooo! excellent idea! Ellery walks outside into the blinding snow and sees Nick and Jeremy in a hot steamy embrace!
Ellery: "Good evening Gentlemen. It seems to be hotter out here than inside I see. Dupree let me guess, you're just giving this Sailor mouth to mouth resusitation right?"
louisev:
from this I conclude:
You guys really really miss Ellery. So my next story after "Dupree's Choice" I will make the "Ellery meets Ennis" chapter, how's that? Then the reception.
Oh, and there will be two chapters here soon in rapid succession.
RonitR:
--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on December 08, 2006, 08:26:49 am --- :-*
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I don't think I've seen this picture of Dupree before.
I mean, Nick looks good, but Dupree looks just...just...good god it's HOT in here!!
yb:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 08, 2006, 09:03:47 am ---from this I conclude:
You guys really really miss Ellery. So my next story after "Dupree's Choice" I will make the "Ellery meets Ennis" chapter, how's that? Then the reception.
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Is this "Ellery meets Ennis" about the beginning of their relationship from Ellery's POV?
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