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belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on December 08, 2006, 11:44:37 am ---SPOILER: RE; Chapter 14
OMG! Thanks Louise! Now I have to go into work all riled up! And if you have read my earlier post at the 1000+ thread, you'll know I have a Nick of my own waiting there! I'll probably turn beet red the instant I see him!
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:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
as Ellery said 'think of the indian girl' ....
David:
Nick is having inner conflicts here.
He is used to his Navy ways of getting what he wants. For guys like him, it is the thrill of the hunt and conquer. Sex has always been about Lust.
Here he does Lust after Jeremy, but he knows there is something more. He doesn't want to hurt him, both physically nor emotionally.
This inner voice we hear is his old ways of bedding down Tricks. His raw desire is urging him to pillage and plunder. But he is trying so hard to pace himself, even using some of his old relaxing techniques on Dupree that he used to use on virgins before.
louisev:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on December 08, 2006, 11:54:44 am ---
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
as Ellery said 'think of the indian girl' ....
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On the butter.
louisev:
--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on December 08, 2006, 12:00:07 pm ---Nick is having inner conflicts here.
He is used to his Navy ways of getting what he wants. For guys like him, it is the thrill of the hunt and conquer. Sex has always been about Lust.
Here he does Lust after Jeremy, but he knows there is something more. He doesn't want to hurt him, both physically nor emotionally.
This inner voice we hear is his old ways of bedding down Tricks. His raw desire is urging him to pillage and plunder. But he is trying so hard to pace himself, even using some of his old relaxing techniques on Dupree that he used to use on virgins before.
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you have got this boy pegged, David!
David:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 08, 2006, 12:04:30 pm ---you have got this boy pegged, David!
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Well I wouldn't mind doing some pegging with him either! He he he!
Aw shucks, Time to head out for work soon. :-\
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