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yb:
After reading the last 2 chapters entitled ‘Nick’ again, I think Nick is a deeply conflicted person, his state of mind is so unstable that I don’t think Dupree should be the one responsible to guide him to the right path. I think he should seek professional help, but that’s MVHO.
David:
I was thinking the same thing. Maybe he should be telling his Mom he wants to see that shrink afterall, but not for the reason she thinks.
louisev:
*yawn*
mornin. I'm back at the computer, it is a cold wet afternoon in Saarland, and I'm waiting for my coffee to brew... and will by typing up our next adventure any time now.
mariez:
Damn, Louise - I already knew you were an excellent writer and a brave writer by virture of the Laramie Saga - but - wow! You've got guts! LOL! I had long ago given up on trying to "predict" where you're going. But I must say, even though I knew things would be complicated and difficult (can't tell a good story without conflict, right?) - I had no idea of the deep, disturbing turns the story would take. A person who regards themselves as "poison" is a person in deep, deep pain.
It's such a pleasure to read the thoughtful, enlightened comments on this thread. What an articulate, intelligent group your readers are! I find myself nodding in agreement while I'm reading. I just can't be angry with Nick, either - it's just too sad, too disturbing, and, frankly, too depressing.
I am anxious to see how this will all play out. Only really, really good writing can affect readers so deeply, Louise.
Thanks - Marie
mariez:
--- Quote from: BBMaddict on December 10, 2006, 05:16:46 am ---And yes I am one of those "delurkers" that Louise was talking about earlier. Been reading Laramie Sagas since June just never had time to be an active participant. Lots of time at 3:14 in the morning though. Please somebody send the sandman and SOON! :'(
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Hi, BBMaddict - I recently delurked also. Nice to see you. I know what you mean about the time factor - but Louise has got me hooked so I'm doing a little less sleeping, also. :)
Marie
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