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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
Kazza:
Well, I know that I am starting to repeat myself here, but I just can't get a handle on Nick.
On one hand he cute and sexy, and has the ability to be loving, but on the other he's manipulative and needy. I really wonder if he's worth the grief as far as Jeremy is concerned - right now anyway. Jeremy has a lot of emotional stuff to work through and I think that he either needs to be alone, or with someone a bit more stable (not that I have another character in mind).
Ellery has taken him on trust at Jeremy's request and I really hope that Nick doesn't do anything to put a strain on Ellery and Jeremy's relationship.
Hee hee, what Nick needs is some of Ennis' straight talking ;D
Really looking forward to see how this story resolves all these issues.
Karen
yb:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 11, 2006, 10:45:34 am ---I am going to write the reception first I think.
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Good, I can't wait.
louisev:
I said I THINK!!!!
David:
I kinda disagree with the "Hands off" diagnosis. If Nick is truly acting out because he is on leave and wants to run amuck with the first guy he meets, then why not let him?
After all, that first guy was Dupree. I think Jeremy needs a good long passionate romp to get this into his system. And if Nick is going to want to have non-stop sex while he is out on leave, shouldn't it be with Jeremy?
Nick is like a mongoose. He wants to run wild. Telling him to sit quietly while he has Jeremy to lust after is going to be impossible.
yb:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 11, 2006, 11:03:07 am ---I said I THINK!!!!
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I know, I saw it the first time. I was just asking; of course, I would read whichever story you will write regardless of the sequence.
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