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louisev:
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David had an excellent point there, though, I did leave out Jeremy's hello!

I hope you guys are going to survive, I think that is all I had in me for the day!

yb:
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I do think Jeremy is right to try to hold out having physical contact with Nick for as long as he could, he needs to have a clear mind to think whether his feeling towards Nick is lust or love.  The problem is how long can he last?

David:
I went back and fixed that typo Lucise!    LOL

Since Louise didn't give us a kiss, I'll provide us with one.  

Pucker up Nick!

louisev:
oh my goodness, David....

that is certainly, er, uh

INSPIRATIONAL!

louisev:
I just thought we needed a reminder as to where we were only a day ago with our young lover:

Naughty Nick!

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