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Lumière:

--- Quote from: louisev on December 11, 2006, 08:49:32 pm ---rushing off to the mail:

And you've got... a late breaking Update!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/179093.html  "35. Lauren"

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I've only just seen this, and it is 1.20 am here!  Looks like a little reading before bed tonight!  ;)

mariez:

--- Quote from: magicmountain on December 12, 2006, 03:52:00 am ---What an attractive young man is that Lauren. I am surprised he doesn't have more guys chasing after him.



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Yes, I was thinking the same thing!   :)   

And, yes, "sweet and wonderful" are the best words to describe that chapter!  (Totally unexpected would apply, also!)   :laugh:

Louise, you've given us these great windows into the different dynamics of the different relationships!  Fascinating! 

Hmm . . . and wondering about other guys chasing after Lauren.  I remember Lauren telling Ennis that he was a virgin when he met Simon.  Are you still taking suggestions for short stories?  What a great one that would make - Simon and Pookie's first meeting - and subsequent 'courtship!'  Just think, there could be a chapter titled "Pookie's First Time!"   :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Great work, as always!

Thanks - Marie

Kazza:
SPOILER


Wow - how understanding is Simon. He knows the reality of attraction, that just because someone ignites a brief spark within you, it doesn't mean that you're going to do anything about it, especially if that means ruining a relationship with someone you love.

It's really nice to see them together.

Karen

David:

--- Quote from: mariez on December 12, 2006, 08:28:32 am ---
  Just think, there could be a chapter titled "Pookie's First Time!"   :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
 - Marie

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Alternate Titles:  "A Poke for Pookie",   or "Simon Says"     ;D

mariez:

--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on December 12, 2006, 08:55:56 am ---Alternate Titles:  "A Poke for Pookie",   or "Simon Says"     ;D

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LOL!!!!    Oh, I like those better -  I can't decide which  - maybe it will have to be a two-part chapter!!!!! ;D ;D

See how helpful we are, Louise?   :laugh:

Thanks - Marie

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