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MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: souxi on December 14, 2006, 01:28:20 pm ---And the honeymoon. We want that too please Louise, and our boys need some serious *smooch* time..somewhere nice and warm, so they can get busy with the suntan lotion. No tan lines. Remember that Leslie? ;) ;) ;D
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No tan lines is right! Remember...
Alma finally seemed to find her voice. “Ennis,” she said, “you look diff’’rent.”
He laughed. “Well, I hope that’s a good thing,” he said. “I hope yer sayin’ that the Texas air agrees with me.”
Alma continued to stare at him. “You have a tan,” she said, amazed at herself as the words came out of her mouth.
If only you knew, he thought to himself, trying hard to suppress a wicked grin. Out loud, he said, “Bright sun down there in Texas. And you know I work outdoors.”
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moia:
I would enjoy reading about Ennis and Ellery doing pretty much anything, sure, why not travelling and taking it easy. But where would they go for a honeymoon? Ennis likes riding, the only thing I can think of is what they've already done - camping or driving to a cabin in the mountains with the occasional riding trip... Do you really see them on a beach sipping on cocktails? I don't really...
souxi:
--- Quote from: moia on December 14, 2006, 02:08:56 pm ---I would enjoy reading about Ennis and Ellery doing pretty much anything, sure, why not travelling and taking it easy. But where would they go for a honeymoon? Ennis likes riding, the only thing I can think of is what they've already done - camping or driving to a cabin in the mountains with the occasional riding trip... Do you really see them on a beach sipping on cocktails? I don't really...
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Why not? It sure makes a change from trail riding. All newlyweds go on honeymoon, why shouldnt, Ennis and Ellery? They dont have to sip cocktails on the beach, but lying around in the sun with a cold beer or 3 sounds nice. Ellery is rich, maybe he could hire somewhere exclusive and private, just for the two of them. I quite like the idea of the two of them strolling along the beach hand in hand watching the sunset on the horizon. Sounds lovely to me.
moia:
It's not that I wouldn't want to see it happen - I just don't know if Ennis would go for that. He wouldn't be able to pay for it so he would have to accept it as a gift. Did he ever see sea in his life? I just see him as a mountain loving person not sea going one. And not all newlyweds go to a honeymoon. Did Ennis and Alma go? I doubt they had the money... And some people don't go to the beach for a honeymoon - that's why I was wondering where they would go. It would be lovely and romantic and all if they went somewhere very private and lovely, of course :) I just don't have any idea of what's there in that area that's nice... Or would they go somewhere far far away?
souxi:
--- Quote from: moia on December 14, 2006, 03:25:41 pm ---It's not that I wouldn't want to see it happen - I just don't know if Ennis would go for that. He wouldn't be able to pay for it so he would have to accept it as a gift. Did he ever see sea in his life? I just see him as a mountain loving person not sea going one. And not all newlyweds go to a honeymoon. Did Ennis and Alma go? I doubt they had the money... And some people don't go to the beach for a honeymoon - that's why I was wondering where they would go. It would be lovely and romantic and all if they went somewhere very private and lovely, of course :) I just don't have any idea of what's there in that area that's nice... Or would they go somewhere far far away?
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No Ennis and Alma didnt go for a honeymoon because they were too poor. Ellery would obviously pay for it. It wouldnt be a gift would it? It would be their honeymoon. It,s not like he,d be giving him a present. Ennis has probably never had the chance to see the sea in his life. I think he,d love it. He,ll never get a better chance whilst he,s with Ellery. I think they should go for it. Try something different instead of mountains for a change. I think walking hand in hand with the one you love, watching the sun set over the sea has got to be very romantic. Perfect for our boys. Sea air does you a world of good too. All that walking and fresh sea air would be great for Ellerys health.
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