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Title: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 23, 2006, 06:04:45 pm
So many lines in Brokeback Mountain are ambiguous or have multiple meanings. I guess the most obvious one is "I swear" -- there's a whole thread devoted to the many interpretations of that one. And there's another thread about the implications of Lureen's "Husbands don't never seem to want to dance with their wives," (something like, "Husbands don't never seem to want to have sex with their wives.")

Then today, a discussion came up on another thread about when John Twist says

"Tell you what, I know where Brokeback Mountain is ... pppfffftttttppp ... Thought he was too damn special to be buried in the family plot."

Obviously, he's saying he could find Brokeback go put the ashes there himself if he wanted to, which he doesn't. And he apparently resents Jack leaving the Twist ranch, refusing to spend his life in that bleak place, moving to Texas and so on.

But it also implies another meaning: "Tell you what, I know Jack was gay." Mr. Twist may not be saying so consciously, but because we know what Brokeback symbolizes, the line is a clue. And in the next sentence, he may be saying Jack figures that, because he's gay ("special"), he thought he could live outside society's rules rather than follow the "family plot."

So what other lines  have multiple meanings? They could be lines that we aren't even sure what they're supposed to mean, like "I swear." Or they could be lines that have a surface meaning and a subtext, like "Husbands don't dance with their wives."

Suggest some lines that resonate, and we can discuss. (If you know of any that absolutely have only one meaning, say those, too! And we'll argue if you're right or wrong!).

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 23, 2006, 06:40:53 pm
I'll start off with this one, before hurrying off to bed:

When Aguirre has ordered the boys and the sheep down from the mountain, and Ennis gripes, Jack says:

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I can spare you a loan, bud, if you're short on cash. Give it to you when we get to Signal.

Which at face value is an offer for a loan, but the subtext is Jack saying that he doesn't want to lose contact with Ennis, and he's looking for a way to achieve that in such a manner that Ennis can defend it to himself, too, even after they've left the mountain and that supposed one shot thing behind. Giving him a loan means the loan would have to be repaid - so they'd have to stay in touch for that.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 23, 2006, 06:43:27 pm
Heh. I was going to start with the first words spoken in the movie:

JACK (kicks truck): Shit.

Meaning #1: Ladies and gentlemen, this is an R-rated movie, in case you hadn't heard. Also, you know that line in the story where it says that Jack "was not himself the swearing kind"? Well, you can scratch out one potential meaning for that one.

Meaning #2: Contrast the first appearances of Jack and Ennis. Jack's car doesn't run well, so Jack kicks it and swears at it. Ennis doesn't even have a car; all he's got is a sack with a change of clothes. But Ennis just seems to accept it as if it's the natural way of things.

That first line sets up the conflict of the whole story, even before they look at each other.

Meaning #3: Ever notice that the first line in the movie is Jack swearing, and the last line is "Jack, I swear..."?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on May 23, 2006, 08:51:47 pm
That's great Mel! Actually, I came to this thread because I wanted to talk about "I know where Brokeback Mountain is" but you beat me to it! Everything in this movie has a double meaning as far as I'm concerned but that line is the epitome. Another one that is really good is "Texans don't drink coffee?" To me, this line really means, Texans (or Your Texan, to be exact) don't act the way that's expected of them?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on May 23, 2006, 08:55:22 pm
Okay, can't resist another one. This line is "You bet." It's written not spoken, on a post card Ennis sends to Jack in response to Jack's post card asking him to "tell me if your there." To me it means, "Let's throw caution to the wind" or "let's take a chance." Or...it could mean "if you take a chance by coming here, I will take your bet and see you one hell of a kiss." I could go farther, but I guess I should stop there.
 :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 23, 2006, 09:11:30 pm
-"I'm sending up a prayer of thanks... for you forgetting to bring that harmonica."  - can be translated into "I'm so thankful that you're back in my life."

-"For how long?"... "For as long as we can ride it."-  can be translated into "How long will our love last?"... "For as long as humanly possible." 

-"There ain't no reigns on this one" - can be translated into "I love you so much that I feel completely out of control when I'm around you."  Or it can be translated into "There's no way for us to control how society will view our relationship."  - Or when combined with the lines above... it can be translated into... "I'll love you for the rest of my life even though this situation makes me feel completely out of control." or "I can't help loving you forever even if we can't control our relationship the way we'd like due to societal pressures." etc.

-"all the traveling I've done is around a coffeepot looking for the handle."-  well, *ahem,* this can be translated into a fun sexual metaphor.  I will leave this up to the imagination.
 ;)
Or, it can be translated into... "I'm still trying to find myself and work my way out of my confusion about this relationship and/or my identity."
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 24, 2006, 12:09:04 am
I love those translations, Amanda. And Mel, it would have never even occurred to me to translate "shit," but you're right! Same for you, Mikaela and Lee. BTW Lee, how do you explain the completely nonsequitor coffee line that preceeds that one? (I think of it as a Larry McMurtry Texas in-joke, but maybe there's something more to it.)

"That fire and brimstone crowd? No thanks."
1) Most obvious: he doesn't want to hang out with judgmental churchy types
2) Pretty obvious: he doesn't want to hang out with churchy types who would judge him harshly if they knew he was gay.
3) Least obvious: he doesn't want to hang out with anybody, because the whole world would judge him harshly if people "suspected."

"Um, it's a pretty short story. I was only on that bronc for about three seconds, and next thing you know I was flyyyying through the air. Only I wasn't no angel like you girls."
1) Most obvious: an entertaining fatherly tale.
2) Least obvious: a metaphor for his relationship with Jack. It went by in what seemed like three seconds, and next thing you know he was flying off the mountain and crashing to the ground. And if he wasn't a sinner beforehand, he sure wasn't no angel afterward.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 24, 2006, 12:25:14 am
Very good Katherine. 

OK~
-"Jack F***ing Twist" can be translated perhaps 3 ways for the 3 times we hear Ennis utter this-
1) the reunion- "Jack F***ing Twist" = "little darlin"
2) the "maybe Texas" camping trip- "Jack F***ing Twist" = "little darlin, I'm so frustrated that you keep bringing up the issue of living together... but I'm mostly frustrated because I can't visualize a way of making that happen."
3) the argument scene- "Jack F***ing Twist"= "little darlin, the thought of you seeing other men makes me incredibly jealous because I love you and now I feel threatened and worried."
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 24, 2006, 12:34:22 am
They really express the relationship in rodeo metaphors, don't they? Both As long as we can ride it... there ain't no reins on this one. and Ennis's description of his saddle bronc career. (I'm very impressed with Ennis's ability to keep up the happy face for his girls during that story... it must just ache to talk about rodeos, given how Ennis associates rodeos with Jack.)

Along that line, how about This ain't no rodeo, cowboy in what became the angry tussle?

(1) Affectionate teasing, going back to that first time when Ennis opened up to Jack.

(2) This ain't a game; this is serious.

(3) But I wanted to ride you for more than eight seconds!

About the Texans and coffee: tell you what, I laughed at that line when I heard it in the theater, because it seemed like gratuitous Texan-bashing. ("You wouldn't want him in here; he's a Texan, and you just can't tell what they'll do." In my corner of the world, Texans have a reputation for driving rental jeeps off of trails until they're stuck somewhere on a cliff and need rescuing.) But maybe a more realistic interpretation is "You have no idea how incoherent I get when I'm post-coital." ;)

And yeah, Lee, "You bet" sure means a lot of different things. I particularly like this one:
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"if you take a chance by coming here, I will take your bet and see you one hell of a kiss."

(Just caught Amanda's while I was posting -- yes, totally agree about the "Jack F**** Twist!"s.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 24, 2006, 01:04:28 am
They really express the relationship in rodeo metaphors, don't they? Both As long as we can ride it... there ain't no reins on this one. and Ennis's description of his saddle bronc career. (I'm very impressed with Ennis's ability to keep up the happy face for his girls during that story... it must just ache to talk about rodeos, given how Ennis associates rodeos with Jack.)

I know!  I've always thought that this was such a painful moment of repression.  We know that Ennis is dying to mention Jack somewhere in this conversation.  I mean, come on, Jack is his rodeo cowboy... and Jack even wins once in a while.  Plus riding bulls seems more exciting than riding broncs.

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About the Texans and coffee: tell you what, I laughed at that line when I heard it in the theater, because it seemed like gratuitous Texan-bashing. ("You wouldn't want him in here; he's a Texan, and you just can't tell what they'll do." In my corner of the world, Texans have a reputation for driving rental jeeps off of trails until they're stuck somewhere on a cliff and need rescuing.) But maybe a more realistic interpretation is "You have no idea how incoherent I get when I'm post-coital." ;)

LOL!   :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: pinku on May 24, 2006, 03:37:48 am
Facinating to read such in-depth analysis! Almost like deciphering an encrypted message (even when there is none). I think even AP would have impressed with such posts. One shouldn't forget however that most statements uttered by people have no special meanings! For instance,when Jack's Dad says that he is too good to be buried in the family plot, it could well mean that because Jack was economically well-off and the old man gripes about it to hide his pain! I shouldn't say much cause the moderators think my posts are full of double meanings too! 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 24, 2006, 05:23:04 am
Wow - I already love this thread. So many good replies from everyone!  :)


Mel, you've been on a roll here with the impressingly in-depth "Shit" analysis and the:
 
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"You have no idea how incoherent I get when I'm post-coital."
:D
That's *so* how it seems to me - Ennis's brain has short-circuited from the "brilliant charge" of that motel night - and the expectation of more to come.  But for Alma his little line adds another layer of pain to her sadness, worry and confusion -  she suspects (or knows, deep down) what they've been up to. She sees Jack, reclining blissfully against the truck outside, and here is Ennis, rushing around like an overcharged energizer bunny, rattling off that incoherent reply, - I'm sure she's very aware that he never behaved remotely like that either just before or after sex with *her*.

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About the "Fire and brimstone crowd"; - thank you for bringing that up, Katherine (Hope I got your name right.) I've been wondering about the background for that, whether there was any particular reason for Ennis calling them so at that point in time. Most likely, it's as you say:

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2) Pretty obvious: he doesn't want to hang out with churchy types who would judge him harshly if they knew he was gay.

I've been wondering though if there might have been any recent preaching specifically against the sin of homosexuality in their church that has made him less willing to mix with them and more willing to call them names than he originally might have been. The Stonewall riots were in 1969, the less-than-blissful Del Mar domestic Saturday night scene takes place in 1973 - time enough for even small rural community churches to have picked up on the issue and to have started being more active in preaching against it. In Ennis's early youth I imagine there wouldn't be such preaching - it would just be a given to all that it was an abomination and so forth, without anyone going publicly on about it.

That's just speculation on my side, of course, I know next to nothing at all about how (if at all) Stonewall reverberated throughout the country in those years and what went on in American rural church communities back then.

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Now, here's another one I've been thinking about:

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"All I'm saying is, what's the point to making it? If the taxes don't get it, the inflation eats it all up. You should see Lureen, punching numbers into her adding machine, hunting for extra zeros, her eyes getting smalller and smaller, it's like watching a rabbit trying to squeeze into a snakehole with a coyote on its tail.

Which could mean:

1) - I've gotten used to being financially well off and I rather like it, so I've gotten into the common habit of all well-off people (ie.  griping about taxes and inflation). I admire Lureen for her dedication to our family finances and the business -  I look fondly at the way she just never gives up in that respect.

2) - All this work and stress to earn money is stupid - you're left with very little anyway, and money's not the most important part in life. It's ridiculous the way Lureen focuses so much on making money - I can't but laugh a little at her extreme single-mindedness.



Personally, I must admit I've always seen number 1) in what Jack says and in his expression while saying it, since I tend to think that Jack's and Lureen's marriage seems to be a well-functioning though platonic and even quite affectionate partnership for many years before it turns  more sour towards the end.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 24, 2006, 09:08:49 am
I've been wondering though if there might have been any recent preaching specifically against the sin of homosexuality in their church that has made him less willing to mix with them and more willing to call them names than he originally might have been. The Stonewall riots were in 1969, the less-than-blissful Del Mar domestic Saturday night scene takes place in 1973 - time enough for even small rural community churches to have picked up on the issue and to have started being more active in preaching against it. In Ennis's early youth I imagine there wouldn't be such preaching - it would just be a given to all that it was an abomination and so forth, without anyone going publicly on about it.

That's just speculation on my side, of course, I know next to nothing at all about how (if at all) Stonewall reverberated throughout the country in those years and what went on in American rural church communities back then.

*Counts on fingers* I think I was going to a Methodist church in 1973, though I was too young to know anything about it beyond Bible stories and potlucks. But from that time until the early 1980's (when I decided that I would actually rather be a heathen), my church, at least, didn't ever mention homosexuality. Granted, the Methodist church varies a great deal from place to place; my particular branch was more concerned on the surface with world peace and helping the poor, but this was rural New England, not the West. I learned homophobia through other kids, I think, who used "gay" and "lesbian" as threatening put-downs. (Within my particular rural church community, the most obvious bigotry was still actually anti-Catholic bigotry, even ten or twenty years after John F. Kennedy was president.)

One thing I remember, though, is that the church-goers really tended to be predominantly women. I don't know why. (I do know that the church community disapproved of drinking and smoking and swearing, although none of those things were ever discussed in sermons. And that the social conformity seemed to be stronger -- or I should say "even stronger" -- there wasn't much space for people who were "different" in any way, even outside the church's social circle.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on May 24, 2006, 11:22:22 am
Great thread!  :)

I have no time to think of something with two meanings, so I'll contribute something I think is pretty clear in itself:

"Sit down, you old son of a bitch!  This is my house!  This is my child!  And you're my guest!  So sit the hell down, or I'll knock your ignorant ass into next week...."

 ;D
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 24, 2006, 01:09:41 pm
Oh, I don't know, Meryl - I'm sure Mel could do analytical wonders with the possible meanings inherent in "ignorant ass".  ;D   And "son of a bitch", now - the way Jack uses that term in the movie is worth a study in itself, of course. From "I love you" till "I detest you", - and anything in between! But otherwise - yep. Pretty clear and to the point. Go Jack!  :-*

Mel, thanks for the reply to the "preaching comment". Seems pretty certain then that Ennis isn't much keen on the Fire and Brimstone crowd for various reasons as latjoreme suggests , but none of them being actual and active preaching against homosexuality. It's hard to imagine now what a non-topic that really still was, back in the 70's.


Hmmmmm. One more multiple-meaning line coming up:

Maybe he's not the marrying kind

1) I have no idea what he might want to do - emotionally he's a closed book, even to me.

2) Well, I sure hope not, because I'd be jealous if a new wife'd claim his attention - I see so little of him as it is

3) He's more the type to love them and leave them and break their hearts, so be warned (yeah, right  ::) )

4)  No, duh - not very likely, since I think he may be gay!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: ednbarby on May 24, 2006, 01:20:49 pm
Well, there's the ever-popular "No more beans!" followed shortly thereafter by Ennis replying to the Basque upon his saying "I thought you didn't eat soup" with "Well, I'm sick o' beans."

A no-brainer, I know, but beans = trying to pass as straight when you're not and soup = being open about your homosexuality, even if it's only with the one you love.  Quite possibly my favorite symbol in the whole dang thing.

Another one:  "Gonna snow tonight for sure."  Snow was the harbinger of the early end of their summer on Brokeback, and here it's the harbinger of the early end of their relationship and Jack's life.  Breaks my heart every time I hear him say it.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: belbbmfan on May 24, 2006, 01:42:29 pm
Yes ednbarby. I really liked the entire 'soup and beans' too. The fact that Ennis actually wanted to give Jack 'soup' but the Basque (society?) decided otherwise, is very meaningfull. Remember that later, when they're entangling 'them Chilean sheep outta ours' (love this line!) Ennis mentions working for Aguirre again. Could it be possible that at that point he was still contemplating some sort of life with Jack? 
Anyway, after the bear encouter, Ennis decides to 'stick with beans'. But what does he do? Yes, kills them a nice elk. Ahh, he's really looking after his man.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 24, 2006, 02:11:11 pm
Another one:  "Gonna snow tonight for sure."  Snow was the harbinger of the early end of their summer on Brokeback, and here it's the harbinger of the early end of their relationship and Jack's life.  Breaks my heart every time I hear him say it.

Me too, Barb. And then, by that same token, "Why is it always so damn cold?" = why is our rendezvous/relationship always on such tenuous ground? "We oughta go to Mexico." = We ought to to go where we can be together openly and permanently.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on May 24, 2006, 03:36:27 pm
What about the line, "As clumsy as I am, I'd probably electrocute myself." I always thought there was something more to that than that Ennis wanted part-time jobs, what with all the other lightning/electricity imagery. Maybe having a job at the power company, a utility, represented a utilitarian life that Ennis felt he could not handle because he had been jolted out of an ordinary existence by Jack and Brokeback Mountain.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 24, 2006, 05:17:03 pm
What about the line, "As clumsy as I am, I'd probably electrocute myself." I always thought there was something more to that than that Ennis wanted part-time jobs, what with all the other lightning/electricity imagery. Maybe having a job at the power company, a utility, represented a utilitarian life that Ennis felt he could not handle because he had been jolted out of an ordinary existence by Jack and Brokeback Mountain.

That's a possibility! I was going to try to analyze that one myself in a previous post, but then I didn't. My idea was that "power" could be alluding to another kind of power -- socioeconomic power, the kind he gave up in favor of being with Jack.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 24, 2006, 06:01:11 pm
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What about the line, "As clumsy as I am, I'd probably electrocute myself.

A further and third possibility might be that Ennis is hiding his motives (ie. wanting to stay off a job that he wouldn't be able to quit whenever the fishin' trips  beckon) behind the plain truth for once: He doesn't have a very high opinion of himself, he has low self-esteem and very little self confidence. If he'd ever actually considering taking on a responsible job at the power company; I bet he *would* constantly worry that he'd manage to bungle it completely.


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"Gonna snow tonight for sure."  Snow was the harbinger of the early end of their summer on Brokeback, and here it's the harbinger of the early end of their relationship and Jack's life.  Breaks my heart every time I hear him say it.

Oh yes.  :'(  All of that scene just breaks my heart. What especially gets to me is Jack's question at the tail end of the snow comment:

"All this time and you ain't found nobody else to marry?"

A straightforward question about what's happening in ennis's life  -  but also a sign that Jack has given up the last buried bit of hope for a life together with Ennis. He's really saying that even in his heart of hearts he knows now that Ennis will not ever stop pretending to be what he's not; will never come around to honestly considering a life together with Jack. There is an finality, an acceptance of that as a fact in Jack's question. He's puzzled - since Ennis truly is going to go through all of his life living the lie, afraid of people finding out, ashamed of who he really is - then why haven't he taken the obvious step and seen to putting up the front that a re-marriage would provide?

But maybe that's just me, and it's equally possible to read into the question a sign that Jack has still not completely given up, precisely because Ennis hasn't gone and re-married?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 25, 2006, 01:04:11 am
But maybe that's just me, and it's equally possible to read into the question a sign that Jack has still not completely given up, precisely because Ennis hasn't gone and re-married?

My initial reaction was that even after all this time they still had to keep up the pretense of being interested in women. Perhaps Jack does so only to avoid Ennis' startle point. At some point, I heard the theory that Jack was merely trying to bait Ennis, get him to discuss why he hadn't married and maybe admit his real preferences. I can see that, too. Either way, you'd think Jack would be pretty encouraged by Ennis' utterly lackluster response.To me,

"I've been putting the blocks to this good-looking little gal in Riverton. Waitress ... wants to be a nurse or sumthn ... I dunno ..."

pretty much telegraphs "Yeah, but who cares?"

Speaking of which, here's a comment about their previous camping scene. He says, "So you and Lureen. Is it ... normal and all?" And Jack just shrugs and nods. But I always wish he'd have just said, "Hell no, dumbass -- because I'M GAY." I know a lot of people might say that would freak Ennis out in the same way Jack's Mexico revelation supposedly (debatably) does. But I always think maybe that might have clued Ennis in. Maybe he really doesn't get how the whole sexual orientation thing works, doesn't know why it wasn't "normal" with him and Alma, why he isn't attracted to other women. Maybe he assumes Jack and Lureen DO have a perfectly average marriage, except for this thing Jack has going on the side. And that might make him feel even more self-conscious. ... I mean, it sounds absurd to us. But is it that farfetched that someone in his situation might be pretty ignorant about that stuff?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 25, 2006, 09:41:39 am
Speaking of which, here's a comment about their previous camping scene. He says, "So you and Lureen. Is it ... normal and all?" And Jack just shrugs and nods. But I always wish he'd have just said, "Hell no, dumbass -- because I'M GAY." I know a lot of people might say that would freak Ennis out in the same way Jack's Mexico revelation supposedly (debatably) does. But I always think maybe that might have clued Ennis in. Maybe he really doesn't get how the whole sexual preference thing works, doesn't know why it wasn't "normal" with him and Alma, why he isn't attracted to other women. Maybe he assumes Jack and Lureen DO have a perfectly average marriage, except for this thing Jack has going on the side. And that might make him feel even more self-conscious. ... I mean, it sounds absurd to us. But is it that farfetched that someone in his situation might be pretty ignorant about that stuff?


This contained such interesting points that I had to quote all of it!

I've always taken Ennis's question and Jack's reply to be something along the lines of "Do you manage to make it work enough that it *seems* normal, even to Lureen? ie. Do you manage to keep the real you undercover?" And then Jack's shrugged reply to be: "Yes, I manage to make pretend well enough for that so that noone suspects the truth."

I hadn't thought about Ennis actually figuring that "Jack and Lureen DO have a perfectly average marriage, except for this thing Jack has going on the side", as you say. But it seems not unlikey that it might be so.

However, would Jack, even Jack, understand it if that's how Ennis's mind worked on this matter? I'm not sure that he would. Jack's got a much more realistic view of his own sexuality and his marriage and what it does and does not mean - he seems to project his way of understanding those things onto Ennis.  For all their love there's a lot they don't manage put into coherent talk or thought about one another. I think several scenes indicate that Jack considers Ennis's clinging to marriage as a front deliberately maintained by Ennis to hide behind. In the post-divorce scene he thinks that the marriage being over means Ennis has made a decision to move on out of cover, to not live the lie.

So perhaps they speak at cross purposes without even knowing it in the two later scenes where marriage comes up.


One of the challenges, I find, in fully understanding the characters and their motivations is that I find it difficult moving back to the mindset of the 1970's and how homosexuality was considered back then. How it wasn't spoken of, how it wasn't on most people's radar at all, etc. It's such a visible everyday issue today, such a normal part of public life and discussion, it's difficult to go back to how it was in Ennis's time even though it's just a generation ago. It makes sense that someone in Ennis's situation would be quite ignorant about the matters that could have made him understand himself - and Jack - better. All he'd have to go by would be the locker-room type taunts and jibes and that horrible incident of his childhood.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 25, 2006, 07:49:29 pm
Speaking of which, here's a comment about their previous camping scene. He says, "So you and Lureen. Is it ... normal and all?" And Jack just shrugs and nods. But I always wish he'd have just said, "Hell no, dumbass -- because I'M GAY." I know a lot of people might say that would freak Ennis out in the same way Jack's Mexico revelation supposedly (debatably) does. But I always think maybe that might have clued Ennis in. Maybe he really doesn't get how the whole sexual orientation thing works, doesn't know why it wasn't "normal" with him and Alma, why he isn't attracted to other women. Maybe he assumes Jack and Lureen DO have a perfectly average marriage, except for this thing Jack has going on the side. And that might make him feel even more self-conscious. ... I mean, it sounds absurd to us. But is it that farfetched that someone in his situation might be pretty ignorant about that stuff?

I'm just jumping in here to agree with Mikaela...  This is one excellent post Katherine!  :D

OK, new line.
Ennis to Lureen- "We were good friends." - can be translated into "He was the love of my life and my best friend."

 :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 25, 2006, 10:40:04 pm
And another one...
"You sleep with the sheep, 100 percent"- can be translated into "I don't want no rose stemming out of you two boys."
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 25, 2006, 11:03:10 pm
And another one...
"You sleep with the sheep, 100 percent"- can be translated into "I don't want no rose stemming out of you two boys."

Or in other words: "Buggery is just fine, but keep your hands off each other, you hear?" ;)

Ummm, I hope that everyone reading this thread knows that, just because I think of something when I hear a line, that doesn't mean that I think that the character actually thinks it (or that Annie Proulx or Diana Ossana or Larry McMurtry or Ang Lee or Heath or Jake or etc etc actually meant me to hear it that way). ;D

As for
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As clumsy as I am, I'd probably electrocute myself.

In addition to all the other good ideas, I hear: "I would hate that job. I hated working for the road crew, listening to that guy with plumber's butt go on and on. I like castrating calves and helping the heifers calve."

Meryl... no, I'm not going to make some up about "ignorant asses" right now. ;D Though actually, I find it interesting that there's a lot of disagreement about what exactly pushed Jack to stand up to L.D. there. If it's Bobby's presence, then maybe Jack is also saying "I'm a man too, dammit!" If he's just getting to his breaking point in general because the separation from Ennis is eating away at him, then he might also mean "I just can't deal with you people! Argh!"
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on May 25, 2006, 11:31:16 pm
Meryl... no, I'm not going to make some up about "ignorant asses" right now.  Though actually, I find it interesting that there's a lot of disagreement about what exactly pushed Jack to stand up to L.D. there. If it's Bobby's presence, then maybe Jack is also saying "I'm a man too, dammit!" If he's just getting to his breaking point in general because the separation from Ennis is eating away at him, then he might also mean "I just can't deal with you people! Argh!"

Heh, I can always trust you to wax eloquent on any subject, Mel!  ;D


"You're nineteen, guess you can do whatever you want."

I haven't really been around enough to earn the right to tell you who to date.

Or

I couldn't do what I wanted at nineteen.  I'm glad you can.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 26, 2006, 02:18:53 am
Ennis to Lureen- "We were good friends." - can be translated into "He was the love of my life and my best friend."

Thanks, Mikaela and Amanda!  :D

Amanda, the very phrase "love of my life" and even "best friend" are enough to make me tear up these days.

OK, back briefly to the camping scene by the river. Does anybody think maybe Jack could have handled it a bit better? Amanda has mentioned the idea that during the "prayer of thanks" scene Jack jumped in a little too quickly with the cohabitation idea -- in a completely understandable, well-meaning way, but sort of ruining the sweet moment. I wonder if a similar thing is going on here.

Ennis really seems to be confiding in Jack about subjects he's not normally comfortable discussing, taking a risk to sincerely ask for Jack's thoughts. Are things "normal" with his wife? Does he worry that people "know"? Does Jack worry about that stuff? How does he handle it? This could be an opportunity for Jack to confide his own feelings, offer Ennis some reassurance that his fears are normal under the circumstances, take the moment to a greater level of intimacy -- provide the verbal equivalent of the wet handkerchief after the bear incident, or the cheek caress after Ennis' revelation about Earl.

Instead, for understandable and well-meaning reasons -- Jack always has to be wary of that low startle point -- he doesn't. He shrugs off the questions and suggests that Ennis move out of town. That actually does seem like a sensible solution. But not entirely reassuring for Ennis, as it disregards his worries. And when it comes to cohabitation, Ennis has an even lower startle point, and Jack hits it (and gets thrown).

So ends Ennis' moment of openness, and an opportunity is wasted.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Aussie Chris on May 26, 2006, 06:26:44 am
So ends Ennis' moment of openness, and an opportunity is wasted.

Awww, Katherine, you're just a little sentimental today aren't you?

Very cute! ;D
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: belbbmfan on May 26, 2006, 06:49:09 am

This could be an opportunity for Jack to confide his own feelings and experiences, offer Ennis some reassurance that his fears are normal under the circumstances, take the moment to a greater level of intimacy -- in other words, provide the verbal equivalent of the wet handkerchief after the bear incident, or the cheek caress after Ennis' revelation about Earl.

Instead, for perfectly understandable and well-meaning reasons -- Jack always has to be wary of that low startle point -- he doesn't do any of these things. He shrugs off the questions and suggests that Ennis move out of town.
So ends Ennis' moment of openness, and an opportunity is wasted.



Latjoreme,
I agree. Towards the end of their relationship, Jack seems to be less tender and caring. He was talking about money and profits, which was a bit showing off, considering Ennis' financial situation. Jack seemed to have gone a bit numb inside, because the older they got, the more it becomes painfully clear to Jack that he and Ennis will never live together. :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 26, 2006, 08:43:55 am
Awww, Katherine, you're just a little sentimental today aren't you?

I'm afraid that when it comes to Brokeback, I'm sentimental every day.  :-* :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: opinionista on May 26, 2006, 06:20:47 pm
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-"There ain't no reigns on this one" - can be translated into "I love you so much that I feel completely out of control when I'm around you."  Or it can be translated into "There's no way for us to control how society will view our relationship."  - Or when combined with the lines above... it can be translated into... "I'll love you for the rest of my life even though this situation makes me feel completely out of control." or "I can't help loving you forever even if we can't control our relationship the way we'd like due to societal pressures." etc.

I thought he means "We have no other choice, but to see each other in a far away place once in a while, for as long as we can ride it".

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All this time and you ain't found nobody else to marry?"

A straightforward question about what's happening in ennis's life  -  but also a sign that Jack has given up the last buried bit of hope for a life together with Ennis. He's really saying that even in his heart of hearts he knows now that Ennis will not ever stop pretending to be what he's not; will never come around to honestly considering a life together with Jack. There is an finality, an acceptance of that as a fact in Jack's question. He's puzzled - since Ennis truly is going to go through all of his life living the lie, afraid of people finding out, ashamed of who he really is - then why haven't he taken the obvious step and seen to putting up the front that a re-marriage would provide?

But maybe that's just me, and it's equally possible to read into the question a sign that Jack has still not completely given up, precisely because Ennis hasn't gone and re-married?

Interesting. This line was discussed extensively at TOB and I remember the general agreement was that Jack was baiting Ennis. He wanted to tell him about his affair with the rancher, but didn't know how to.  In the end, he couldn't and lies to him.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 26, 2006, 08:23:41 pm
He shrugs off the questions and suggests that Ennis move out of town. That actually does seem like a sensible solution. But not entirely reassuring for Ennis, as it disregards his worries. And when it comes to cohabitation, Ennis has an even lower startle point, and Jack hits it (and gets thrown).

So ends Ennis' moment of openness, and an opportunity is wasted.

I quite like the low startle point idea applied to Ennis.  That's excellent.  Yes, I think Jack often walked on eggshells when it came to discussing certain things with Ennis.  You're right that this is an important moment/ response by Jack.  His mannerism... the shrug seems dismissive in terms of body language.  There are at least 3 ways I can think of to interpret this.  I think he was trying to make it seem like "not so much of a big deal" so as not to make Ennis truly terrified.  So, on one hand it's an attempt to calm Ennis down.  But, I also don't think Jack genuinely feels the same kinds of fears as Ennis does about some of these subjects.  So, on another hand it's Jack's own personal reaction coming out... he really isn't as worried about these things as Ennis.

And, on a third and more interesting hand (that somewhat contradicts the first option)... I think Jack is being sneaky here.  I think he's trying to pounce on an opportunity.  I feel like you can almost see the wheels spinning in Jack's head for a second or two as he looks at the river before he comments to Ennis about maybe "getting out of there."  If Ennis really is growing worried about his current living situation on his own, well then, it might be the moment to suggest moving at least closer if not move in together.  He just says Texas.  Living a lot closer  would probably have been a nice compromise if living together really could never happen in Ennis's rule book.  It really is a bit unfair that Jack always has to drive hundreds of miles.  He'd probably like a little break and/ or help on that issue.  I think Jack stokes Ennis's anxieties just enough... by saying "maybe you should get out of there" to make it seem like moving is now Ennis's idea or the idea of moving comes logically out of Ennis's own thought pattern and anxieties.  Jack looks so frustrated when he walks away from that river... having Ennis shoot his "airplane out a the sky" again must have stung.
 :-\ :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on May 26, 2006, 10:10:20 pm
And another one...
"You sleep with the sheep, 100 percent"- can be translated into "I don't want no rose stemming out of you two boys."

Yes, it could be translated into that; but, "You sleep with the sheep, 100 percent"- can be translated into "Jack Twist, I don't want you sleeping in the tent with Ennis Del Mar.

The quaint old time expression, "stemming the rose," had no connection with sexual activity in the first place; it referred to goofing off, as in pulling the stems off of roses,  when there was something more important to do. But, in the case of Jack and Ennis, the fact that they had sex so often and out in the open when the should have been doing their job assignments was their way of stemming the rose. All of their rough-housing horse play was stemming the rose, too.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: opinionista on May 27, 2006, 01:02:45 pm
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And, on a third and more interesting hand (that somewhat contradicts the first option)... I think Jack is being sneaky here.  I think he's trying to pounce on an opportunity.  I feel like you can almost see the wheels spinning in Jack's head for a second or two as he looks at the river before he comments to Ennis about maybe "getting out of there."  If Ennis really is growing worried about his current living situation on his own, well then, it might be the moment to suggest moving at least closer if not move in together.  He just says Texas.  Living a lot closer  would probably have been a nice compromise if living together really could never happen in Ennis's rule book.  It really is a bit unfair that Jack always has to drive hundreds of miles.  He'd probably like a little break and/ or help on that issue.  I think Jack stokes Ennis's anxieties just enough... by saying "maybe you should get out of there" to make it seem like moving is now Ennis's idea or the idea of moving comes logically out of Ennis's own thought pattern and anxieties.  Jack looks so frustrated when he walks away from that river... having Ennis shoot his "airplane out a the sky" again must have stung.

I agree, but I think Ennis gets mad at him not only because he was insisting on moving together, but because Jack paid no attention to what he was trying to tell him. Ennis, for the first time in their relationship, was verbally acknowledging, to a certain extent of course, his true nature. Jack doesn't really listen because he was too hurt, too angry and too lonely to understand and to approach the issue in a different manner. So he's sneaky and takes advantage of what Ennis is telling him to indirectly inisist on having a life together.

Furthermore, I think Ennis felt Jack didn't understand his situation. Not the fact that he is afraid of coming out and all, but his need to be close to his daughters. Being a father was very important for Ennis, and he makes it clear when he answers:

"Texas? Sure and maybe you can convince Alma to let you and Lureen adopt the girls. And then we could just live together, herding sheep. And it'll rain money form LD Newsome and whiskey'll flow in the streams, Jack, that's real smart." 

In other words, he tells Jack to stop dreaming, to stop insisting, to accept once and for all that their life together, as he envisioned it with the little cow and calf operation, isn't going to happen, that there is more in his life than just him.

Jack, obviously, knew the girls were just a shield Ennis was using against having a real relationship with him. First it was his marriage to Alma, and then it was the girls. I'm not saying that Jack tought Ennis's love for his girls wasn't real, just that he didn't consider other possibilities to stay in their lives, and still have a relationship with him, as Jack probably did regarding Bobby. I think this is what triggers Jack's decision to move on and find someone else (or at least try to).
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 27, 2006, 04:58:16 pm
Good analysis, opinionista! And yours, too, Amanda. I agree with both of you: Jack is pouncing on the opportunity to give the cohabitation (or near-habitation) idea one more shot. The shrug is meant to make the suggestion look more casual than it is. But Ennis is disappointed that Jack blew off his concerns and revelations. So they're at cross purposes, both meaning well but inadvertently stomping on each other.

And opinionista, you also make a good point about the kids. I think both men are good parents. But I think Jack would be willing to leave Bobby behind and move to a little cow-and-calf operation with Ennis. Whereas Ennis would not want to live far from his daughters.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on May 27, 2006, 05:03:32 pm
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"Buggery is just fine, but keep your hands off each other, you hear?"

Oh, lets go to a double entendre of a double entendre here. The vulgar word "buggery" comes from the verb, to "bugger" and it has its roots in Old French, "bougre," which was a euphemism for a (non-Roman Catholic Church) "heretic." Bougre's Latin origin is Bulgarus, Bulgarian (member of the Greek Orthodox Church).

A "bugger" can also be a person who "bugs" someone by pestering him. "Bugger off" or "bug off" means "Go away (don't bother me)!" So an annoying pest can be a "bugger" and that have nothing to do with sex at all.

Speaking of "bulgarians," I remember reading in a book about those who were called "Bohemians" in the USA which were the forerunners of the beatnicks. One person said to another in regard to those who lived a Bohemian lifestlye, "We can always call them 'Bulgarians'."

But, back to the word "bugger," the word was commonly used for anal intercourse in the Old West days. I read some old gay novels which used the word.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 27, 2006, 10:21:20 pm
About the "why don't you move someplace else?" comment -- there's something about Jack's tone of voice there that reminds me of "I can spare you a loan, bud, if you're short on cash..." from the last day on the mountain. I don't know what that means, though.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on May 27, 2006, 10:53:33 pm
About the "why don't you move someplace else?" comment -- there's something about Jack's tone of voice there that reminds me of "I can spare you a loan, bud, if you're short on cash..." from the last day on the mountain. I don't know what that means, though.

That's interesting, and you're right about the tone.  Someone once posted that they felt in the "spare you a loan" scene that Jack was purposely keeping his tone casual to spare Ennis from having to talk about the fact that they were going to be split up.  He could have been keeping his tone more offhand in the "why don't you move" scene in order to spare Ennis, too, since Ennis was clearly worried.  I think it backfired, though, because Ennis got even more alarmed when Jack didn't tell him his fears were groundless.  By suggesting he move he was, in a way, suggesting that maybe Ennis was right and people did "know."  Ennis probably blew up at him partly to cover that fear.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 27, 2006, 11:15:43 pm
I think it backfired, though...
It backfired both times.

I'm trying to figure this out, and this could be totally wrong. (Disagree with me! Please!) But it seems as though in each case, Ennis has... revealed something? And Jack either doesn't quite understand what Ennis is really saying, or he hopes he's hearing something and he's a bit hesitant about following up on it? And each time, Jack's response isn't the one Ennis wants (if Ennis has any idea what he wants in either case -- which, actually, I doubt; Ennis's feelings are so conflicted).
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 28, 2006, 01:31:35 am
It backfired both times.

I'm trying to figure this out, and this could be totally wrong. (Disagree with me! Please!) But it seems as though in each case, Ennis has... revealed something? And Jack either doesn't quite understand what Ennis is really saying, or he hopes he's hearing something and he's a bit hesitant about following up on it? And each time, Jack's response isn't the one Ennis wants (if Ennis has any idea what he wants in either case -- which, actually, I doubt; Ennis's feelings are so conflicted).

You're right.  I'm not quite sure what he wants from Jack in either situation.  And, like you said, he probably doesn't know either.  I especially don't know what he expects in the scene on Brokeback.  By offering the loan, Jack is not only offering money, but he's also laying the groundwork for keeping in touch after the sheep job is over.  A loan would imply Ennis paying it back sometime and thus a reason to stay in touch.  I think it's cute that Jack seems to be imagining running errands (like going to the bank) with Ennis as soon as they're down from the mountain.   Ennis is taking this parting sooo seriously because he really sees it with great finality, whereas Jack clearly doesn't understand that the end of the job means such a complete break until the conversation next to his black truck.  Well, he might have a sense of it with the punch.  When he offers the loan I'm sure he's thinking that the relationship will continue, so he's not as brooding as Ennis.  Katherine has noted in the past that Ennis is upset because Jack doesn't seem upset enough over the end of the job.  She's observed that Jack's perky tone is irritating and disheartening to Ennis who views the coming "good-bye" with such dread, which I think makes sense. 

Both of this scene and the later "find yourself someplace different" scene I think just demonstrate how different their personalities are (so that sometimes they're communicating at cross purposes).  Also, when Ennis is sad or scared he tends to lash out (though not always) so that aspect of the two scenes seems pretty consistent.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 28, 2006, 09:59:28 am
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From Meryl
I think it backfired, though, because Ennis got even more alarmed when Jack didn't tell him his fears were groundless.  By suggesting he move he was, in a way, suggesting that maybe Ennis was right and people did "know."  Ennis probably blew up at him partly to cover that fear.

This absolutely is my interpretation of that scene.
Not knowing that she saw them kissing, Ennis thinks he's made a slip-up that made Alma see through him. And if she could do it, perhaps everyone can, -  and he's been fooling himself that he's fooling them? So he's frightened enough to actually confide something personal to Jack, deep down hoping Jack will set him straigth (pardon the pun) and tell him that his fears are utterly groundless. "Pffft- nobody knows, noone suspects, Ennis, you're seeing spooks!"

But instead Jack's suggestion that Ennis move somewhere else in my opinion is understood by Ennis as "Well, if that is so, maybe you should move somewhere else far away where people don't know about it".

I think Ennis's facial expression immediately after Jack's line says it all - Jack's reply shocks and frightens him  - though he's reining it in as usual.

(Tell me again just WHY Heath Ledger didn't get that Oscar, BAFTA, and so forth?  ??? I still for the life of me can't understand it. )

Jack *did* miss an opportunity there, but - oh, as always in BBM - once more how realistically human his response is! He's been wanting and hoping, providing comfort, handling Ennis's skittish side, holding back....and more & more losing hope, and here's a chance that his wish to at least have Ennis nearer and to see him more often could in fact be presented to Ennis as common sense rather than a Jackish-flight-of- fancy. So he *pounces* on the opportuniy - and achieves only fuelling Ennis's fears.



Hm, lines with double meanings, here's another one which is pretty obvious, the way it's acted and all:

You forgettin' somethin'?

- You're forgetting your fishing gear
- You're forgetting kissing me goodbye
- You're completely forgetting and disregarding *me*
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on May 28, 2006, 11:05:07 am
Oh, I will say this: it seems obvious to me that even the screenplay writers took some of Annie Proulx's Wyoming rural expressions an they took them to mean something else different than what she originally wrote. They assumed that Jack had really been to Mexico when he responded to Ennis's question, "been a Mexico, Jack?" and he said, "Hell yes, I been. Where's the fuckin problem?"

I really don't think that Annie Proulx's Jack Twist could have afforded to make a bee-line trip to Mexico after Ennis had called and left a phone message that Alma had divorced him and Jack misunderstood the message and had high-tailed it up to Wyoming. I say that because it was quite a while after the divorce that Jack even worked for Lureen's family business, the farm equipment company. Jack did not work for the company until after her father was dead.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on May 28, 2006, 11:53:01 am
I think Ennis's facial expression immediately after Jack's line says it all - Jack's reply shocks and frightens him  - though he's reining it in as usual.

(Tell me again just WHY Heath Ledger didn't get that Oscar, BAFTA, and so forth?  ??? I still for the life of me can't understand it. )

Hm, lines with double meanings, here's another one which is pretty obvious, the way it's acted and all:

You forgettin' somethin'?

- You're forgetting your fishing gear
- You're forgetting kissing me goodbye
- You're completely forgetting and disregarding *me*

In a performance that is consistently remarkable for its real-ness, this scene in particular always strikes me with its absolute truth as Ennis opens up to Jack.   Heath simply disappears, and Ennis del Mar lives and breathes.   That's a rare thing in film, and no award show can add to or take away from it in the least.  But yeah, WHY?

The "forgettin' somethin'" line is a supreme example of double meanings!  I think you could safely add even a fourth meaning:  "If you're going to lie to me about fishing, the least you can do is keep up the pretense and take your gear."
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 28, 2006, 01:09:15 pm
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from Meryl
The "forgettin' somethin'" line is a supreme example of double meanings!  I think you could safely add even a fourth meaning:  "If you're going to lie to me about fishing, the least you can do is keep up the pretense and take your gear."

And with a little speculation thrown in for good measure, possibly even a fifth:

"Since I've gone to the trouble of writing that note and placing it in the box to find out if you're really lying about the fishing, I'm certainly going to make sure you actually bring that fishing gear along with you!"

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on May 28, 2006, 01:29:41 pm
And with a little speculation thrown in for good measure, possibly even a fifth:

"Since I've gone to the trouble of writing that note and placing it in the box to find out if you're really lying about the fishing, I'm certainly going to make sure you actually bring that fishing gear along with you!"


 ;D  ;D  ;D
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 28, 2006, 04:37:23 pm
;D back at'ya!


Moving on to another line:

"I think my dad was right."


It's not till it's seen alone and out of context like this that it strikes me how much, in the context of the total film and story, that one may have a meaning beyond the immediate and joking response to Jack's rodeo fuck-up performance.

We get to know about Ennis's father's opinion on exactly two kinds of people: Rodeo cowboys and "queers". Ennis jokes about agreeing with his father on the former, but it's anything but a joke that his father instilled fear and homophobia into his son to such an extent that Ennis also thinks his father was right about the latter.  :(
 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on May 28, 2006, 11:41:35 pm
Yes, sadly, I don't think Ennis ever stopped feeling contempt for "queers."  It was instilled in him early by his father and supported by society, too.    As much as he loved Jack, he still had contempt for what he was ("boys like you"), and of course he hated himself for it, too.  :(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 29, 2006, 05:30:10 pm
Another sad double meaning has occurred to me lately.  The words "tire iron" refer to both versions of how Jack could have died.  If Jack died in an accident while changing his tire... well he would have been using a tire iron as a normal tool.  And if he was attacked and murdered, Ennis believes that a tire iron would have been used as the weapon.  It's interesting, I've assumed that the idea of a tire iron immediately comes to Ennis's mind because that's what was used to kill Earl, but maybe the idea of fixing a car with a tire iron also caused that idea to come to Ennis's.

 :( :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 30, 2006, 04:07:17 am
Amanda, I think "Tire Iron" surely  has become one of the most ominous concepts in the English language, to me!  :(

I was trying to find something more light-hearted with a double meaning, but it's not easy.
Here's one:

"Jack ain't the restaurant type"

Of course Ennis has to stop Alma from entertaining any notions she'll be going along with the two of them, - but it has a unintended hint of the humorous to it because it seems like a gentle dig at Jack's constant complaining about the food situation on the mountain and all the fussing over the beans. 

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 30, 2006, 10:54:50 am
Here's one:

"Jack ain't the restaurant type"

Of course Ennis has to stop Alma from entertaining any notions she'll be going along with the two of them, - but it has a unintended hint of the humorous to it because it seems like a gentle dig at Jack's constant complaining about the food situation on the mountain and all the fussing over the beans. 

This is a really interesting line to point out.  I see your point.  I think there's another way of looking at it too.  I see Jack as being more of a restaurant type than Ennis.  I get this impression because he does fuss over the food a lot more (by the way, I love using the word fuss!).  Also, later when we see him at the charity dinner dance (well, it's not quite a restaurant, but close) we get the sense that Jack is more at ease in that kind of setting than Ennis would be (if for no other reason than it's a busy, crowded, social place... things that make Ennis nervous).

Also, I think we're supposed to remember this remark about Jack "not being a restaurant type" the next morning after the motel.  When Alma looks out the window at Ennis getting into Jack's truck she hears Jack ask if he wants to grab something to eat (presumably at a restaurant).  They'll probably drink coffee over breakfast too!  Texans, and definitely Jack, really do drink coffee (we know the prominence of the coffeepot on the mountain).  So, it's made crystal clear to Alma that Ennis is trying to keep Jack away from her and that they want to go hang out without her.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on May 30, 2006, 10:59:35 am
Alma was saying something about taking his friend to the Knife & Fork for supper instead of cooking it was so hot, if they could get a baby-sitter, but Ennis said more likely he'd just go out with Jack and get drunk. Jack was not a restaurant type, he said, thinking of the dirty spoons sticking out of the cans of cold beans balanced on the log.

Mikaela, you right; Ennis was attempting to make up excuses why he did not want Alma to be with him and Jack. And, while it does not seem that way so much in the movie, Alma was a person who was miserable and a whiner. He should have never married her in the first place.

I have a friend who is now separated from his wife; but, I certainly did not want to go anywhere with him when she was along, especially if we went to some kind of superstore. That's because she would strongly hint that I buy something for her or her daughters in the store. I say "her daughters" because I actually know that his mother and his sister both have said the could not be a biological father and his father did not believe that the girls were his biological grandaughters. I definitely agree with his father and, in a way, my friend seems to agree, too. But, both he and his father accept them as family. Oh, they accepted me, too.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 30, 2006, 12:48:14 pm
Good observations by everybody while I was gone over the weekend! I especially like the comparison of "Spare you a loan" with "Why don't you move" -- both times Jack is overlooking Ennis' angst, trying to be upbeat in a well-meaning way, but saying the opposite of what Ennis wants to hear.

OK, here's a line I'd love to analyze. Its meaning to the speaker is fairly clear. But what I want to know is what it means to the listener:

"Ennis, girls don't fall in love with fun."

I started wondering about this line only recently. It's the first time the word "love" is used in the movie, which gives it significance. We all know how significant the second use of the word is. I noticed that, immediately after Cassie says it and then flees from the bus station, Ennis' demeanor changes. He stops eating pie and looks up as if her words have triggered a thought. He barely notices Cassie leaving. The camera lingers on his face as he gazes into space as though pondering something.

What do you all think he's thinking?


Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 30, 2006, 01:05:06 pm
OK, here's a line I'd love to analyze. Its meaning to the speaker is fairly clear. But what I want to know is what it means to the listener:

"Ennis, girls don't fall in love with fun."

I started wondering about this line only recently. It's the first time the word "love" is used in the movie, which gives it significance. We all know how significant the second use of the word is. I noticed that, immediately after Cassie says it and then flees from the bus station, Ennis' demeanor changes. He stops eating pie and looks up as if her words have triggered a thought. He barely notices Cassie leaving. The camera lingers on his face as he gazes into space as though pondering something.

What do you all think he's thinking?

"Wait... maybe boys don't fall in love with fun either?"

I'm not sure that Ennis really understands just how much he means to Jack, despite all those times when Ennis should have gotten the hint.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 30, 2006, 01:10:50 pm
So which boy didn't fall in love with fun? It could be him realizing how much he means to Jack. Or it could be him realizing how much Jack means to him.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on May 30, 2006, 01:15:38 pm
"Ennis, girls don't fall in love with fun."

But, I have known and still know closeted homosexual men who married women because they were fun to be with while out in public and they loved them as friends. But, they were never in love with the women. I almost fell into that situation, too.

I had fun with every woman that I dated and everyone of them would have made great wives for heterosexual men. And some of the actually married men who were great as husbands. In fact, one of them had to introduce me to her husband when I saw her at a reunion of a certain college club. In his presence, she told him that I helped her adjust to college life and she thanked me for that, too.

Well, it does not make sense to me why they created that scene for the movie in the first place. I mean, Cassie was dating, Carl, the guy she entered the restaurant/bus station with and they were acting like a happy couple until she saw Ennis.

But, it appears she doesn't exactly love Carl  . . . "Carl? He's nice. He even talks." Looks more like she's dating Carl on the rebound; since Ennis has been ignoring her messages.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 30, 2006, 01:24:47 pm
So which boy didn't fall in love with fun? It could be him realizing how much he means to Jack. Or it could be him realizing how much Jack means to him.

I would say that Jack didn't fall in love with fun. I mean, I think Ennis does think that Jack is fun. (I keep picturing Jack's exaggerated clowning around when Ennis tells him that "my daddy thought rodeo cowboys were a bunch of f***-ups." Or Jack's bad harmonica playing. Or Jack's off-key singing. I think that Jack does think that Ennis is fun... certainly they had fun together, teasing each other on the mountain, skinny-dipping after the reunion. But I don't think Ennis realizes how much fun he really is.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 30, 2006, 01:41:05 pm
I would say that Jack didn't fall in love with fun. I mean, I think Ennis does think that Jack is fun. (I keep picturing Jack's exaggerated clowning around when Ennis tells him that "my daddy thought rodeo cowboys were a bunch of f***-ups." Or Jack's bad harmonica playing. Or Jack's off-key singing. I think that Jack does think that Ennis is fun... certainly they had fun together, teasing each other on the mountain, skinny-dipping after the reunion. But I don't think Ennis realizes how much fun he really is.)

Well, that's true! Jack is fun incarnate, espcially compared to what Ennis is used to. I guess I was thinking more in terms of their relationship, especially on the heels of Ennis' "I can't stand this no more, Jack." Living apart and keeping their feelings secret like that was not fun. So in other words, it doesn't have to be fun to be love. Plus, I imagine Ennis meaning "I wasn't much fun anyhow" as less a comment about himself in general, so much as that he wasn't fun for Cassie -- because he was pretty indifferent toward her and secretly longing for Jack the whole time.

I also thought that maybe just the very word "love" itself triggered an epiphany for Ennis. Something along the lines of, "Wow, Cassie was in love with me even after just a brief time of casual dating -- maybe what I've had with Jack for the past 20 years and the intense feelings we have for each other is love, too." (Duh!) And then by the time he says the word when talking to Alma Jr. he's decided that, you bet, it was love.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 30, 2006, 03:23:35 pm
What do you all think he's thinking?


I think he's taken aback, - surprised - that she'd actually fallen in love with him. I also think that faced with her obvious pain, he's ashamed.
I think he's spent so much of his energy on "standing it" in relation to Jack during all those months away from him, that he has never really bothered to make an effort to define or understand what, exactly, he might mean to Cassie. He's just shied away from the whole issue. Moreover, Ennis doesn't like himself much. Not only doesn't he think himself "fun", he doesn't think there's much in him that another person would find to love or enjoy...... so the thought that someone else might actually fall in with him is not one that comes easy to him, if at all. I'm certain this colours his perception of what he means to Jack, too - as has been mentioned above.

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Here's another thing I've been wondering about - a sort of double meaning in the short story. I was hoping the film would hint at the answer, but it didn't. In the short story, there's "an ancient magaizine photograph of some dark-haired movie star taped to the wall beside the bed"  in Jack's room in the farm at Lightning Flat.

Do you think the photo would be a female or male movie star?

At first reading I imagined it'd be Liz Taylor or some other actress, but then I changed my mind and decided it's a male star, perhaps from one of the western films back then. If it was some tough cowboy hero star, I doubt Jack's parents or anyone else would think anything of him having the photo on the wall.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on May 30, 2006, 03:48:47 pm
I agree with you, Mikaela, that it would more likely be a male star, such as Montgomery Clift, because the epitome of male beauty back then was "Tall, dark, and handsome" while the female bombshells were more likely to be blond (except for Natalie Wood, she was the Catharine Zeta-Jones of her time).
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on May 30, 2006, 04:39:02 pm
An ancient magazine photograph of some dark-haired movie star was taped to the wall beside the bed, the skin tone gone magenta.

More than likely it was one of the male cowboy movie stars from the latter 1940s or the early 1950s. So, it could have been Roy Rogers, Gene Autry, Bill Boyd aka Hopalong Cassiday, Lash Larue, Randolph Scott, Alan Ladd, or Guy Madison, among others.

It it had been a female star, it could have been Dale Evans or Jane Russell.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 30, 2006, 07:44:05 pm
About falling in love with fun...

I do think his sort of stunned reaction is a combination of being surprised at the depths of Cassie's feelings for him and at the shock of an ephiphany as another layer of his feelings about Jack comes more clearly into focus.  I do think he feels bad about hurting Cassie.  He truly seems saddened by the situation with her.  But, of course the primary issue is probably always the Jack subtext. 

I think it's a great observation that Ennis did fall in love with fun.  Maybe this is a clue that the moment when Jack is horsing around and poking fun at himself during the "rodeo cowboys are all f***-ups" scene is truly the moment when Ennis fell in love with Jack.  Also, it's cute to note that the "I haven't had the opportunity" scene (which comes *right* before the first tent scene) is also a "fun" moment... the singing and jovial tone to their drinking binge seem to be a lot of fun.  Proulx makes it clear that Ennis wants to paw the white out of the moon because he can't remember having had such a good time before.

Fun is probably a really important phenomenon to Ennis.  What a tough life our Ennis has had!  Being able to smile and goof around and let his cares go around Jack... and to have fun with Jack's sense of humor might be more deeply significant than Cassie realizes. 

And, more on his reaction to Cassie's observation... I think like Alma Jr.'s discussion about Kurt and marriage... the idea of truly being in love with Jack is probably really beginning to occur to Ennis.  As we've said elsewhere... he's almost made it around the coffeepot to find the handle.
If only Jack had lived!  I truly hope good things would have happened based on these little clues. (There goes my optimism about the situation again...).
 :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 30, 2006, 11:22:35 pm
Yes, I do think he feels bad about Cassie but I'd like to think his expression of epiphany has more to do with Jack.

While we're on the subject, why don't we just go ahead and analyze "This Kurt, he loves you?" and, for that matter, Alma Jr.'s reaction to it.

My feeling is that this line indicates he has had time to think about love and realizes that a) that's what he and Jack had together and b) that's the most important thing there is. He only asks one other question about Kurt ("How long have you known this guy?") where you'd think a father who'd first heard the name of his daughter's betrothed five minutes ago would want to know a lot more than that. (He's such a foreign entity that Ennis refers to him as "this Kurt" as opposed to just "Kurt.")

But Ennis has realized love is enough to outweigh all other reservations. Then his pained gaze out the window shows him wishing he'd figured that out a long time ago.

Alma's response seems a little slower and softer, more sympathetic, than she might be just by the surface meaning of the question. I take it as a sign she knows her dad has gone through a heartbreaking experience with love. She doesn't know the precise details, but she sure as hell knows it wasn't about Cassie.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 31, 2006, 04:55:22 am
About Cassie, - I do think her impassioned "fall in love with fun" statement is what makes Ennis see her as a real *person*; - with emotions that can and has been hurt. The way he previously talks to Jack about her indicates he doesn't even really listen to what she's saying, he doesn't think about her feelings and he sure can't be bothered to care.

I actually think it's a step forward in Ennis's life that he does realize the hurt and pain he's caused Cassie - that it sinks in - not only because he can relate it to Jack, but exactly because his empathy and understanding extends to another adult human being than Jack. He truly sees that his way of "standing it" hasn't only affected and worn out and broken him and Jack, but other good people as well. I don't think there's a ever a similar moment in his relationship with Alma, unless the tears in the divorce court can be interpreted that way, but that's not at all how I see them. Since 1963 till that confrontation with Jack when he "can't stand it anymore"  he's only lived in relation to Jack, while other grown-ups he's had dealings with were nothing but shadow figures on his emotional radar.  If that is changing, it's a sign he's finally been jolted out of the rut and has opened up emotionally and it's another sign he's ready for change when it comes to him and Jack as well. I do *so* want to believe he was reaching that point and that the November meet would have been a turning point to the positive for Ennis and Jack.

I sure don't insist on my interpretation though.  :)

Anyway, it does strike me how easily the "girls don't fall in love with fun" can be flipped to mirror the other side of the Ennis/Cassie relationship (not only Ennis/Jack). Ennis sure didn't and couldn't fall in love with fun either, even when it was smiling brightly at him and making him dance to jaunty tunes and requesting foot rubs: Cassie *was* a real fun girl when they first met. 



I'll be interested in reading more about others' opinions on the last scene between Ennis and Junior. I must admit I can't manage to see all the things in that scene what many others see, I envy those who see more in it!  I truly think Ennis was aware that he loved Jack a long time before Jack died - whether or not he used that word to himself about it. But he does think of Jack when asking the "he loves you"? question; no doubt about that; - and it's a bittersweet comfort to see he has such a loving connection to his daughter, that he isn't left completely in the dark. Since the last scene takes place in 1984 and Jack died in -82, the lonely darkness of Ennis's life in the long period between almost doesn't bear thinking on.  :'(
 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 31, 2006, 08:40:00 am
The way he previously talks to Jack about her indicates he doesn't even really listen to what she's saying, he doesn't think about her feelings and he sure can't be bothered to care.

That's a good way to put it, Mikaela, and I totally agree he has realized that. Only I think that's expressed in his "I'm sorry" and "I probably wasn't much fun." Those are such a change in tone from his earlier lines, and they sound very sincere. They seem to show that he realizes he has been cruel, and feels bad about it. But then his reaction to her "fun" line provokes what looks to me like a different emotion.

Another reason I'd like to think of his thoughtful reaction to the "fun" line as being about Jack is that it progresses the plot on a bit more -- he may be ready to make some changes in November. Also, because it is the first appearance of the word "love" and because the camera lingers on him for so long, it seems a moment of great significance, suggesting to me it's more Jack- than Cassie-related.

But I don't insist on my interpretation, either.  :)

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I truly think Ennis was aware that he loved Jack a long time before Jack died - whether or not he used that word to himself about it.

I agree, and have argued this point endlessly elsewhere. It just doesn't fit my understanding of human nature that he could behave so much like he loves somebody but not think of it that way (even if, as you say, he called it something else to himself). People who deny love pretend they don't care about the person -- they don't act like Ennis does in the alley or at the reunion, etc.

Still, I can also imagine that attaching the actual word "love" to his feelings for the first time, with all its cultural connotations, might push him to a new level of understanding of how important the relationship is and what it means in his life.

But I'll be interested, too, in what others say.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 31, 2006, 02:50:55 pm
But I'll be interested, too, in what others say.

Sorry, "others," but I waited around, you never replied, and I got impatient and had to post again myself! (My username should just be "threadhog." And has anyone else ever been egocentric enough to quote themselves?)

Kidding.  ;D I do still await your reactions to the Ennis/Jr. scene and other previous issues.

But I just happened to be glancing around Dave Cullen's forum for the first time ever, and I saw a brief discussion of another interesting line, and got curious to see what you guys would think. When Ennis says "I can't stand it no more, Jack" what exactly is it that he can't stand, and why?

I guess the simplest answer is that he can't stand the "it" that "you can't fix," that is, the social rules that he previously said "you gotta stand." I'd also like to believe he's saying he can't stand them being apart, that he misses Jack too much, especially because it goes along with him clutching Jack's jacket. But he also might mean, "I can't stand the contradiction I'm living -- in love with a man, but unable to deal with being gay." Most pessimistically of all, he could mean, "I can't stand going on like this, this relationship with you is tearing me up and I wish you would quit me." (That one I don't really believe, but maybe some people do.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on May 31, 2006, 03:41:00 pm
That line *is* open to a lot of interpretations, isn't it? Once you manage to not just bawl your heart out over it, of course..... Not that it's alone in that respect.

I *think* it probabe that thematically it is intended as an obvious bookend to the reunion scene when Ennis tells Jack when they hook up again that you've got to stand what you can't fix. It's the caption line and motto for their entire hidden relationship. Now, 15 years down the lane, Ennis is saying he *can't* stand it anymore - that leaves open the possibility that he finally might be wanting to have a go at actually *fixing* it? At least, it does indicate a breaking point, the end of the continuous story arc, an impending change.

All that is film technique, though - I don't think it was what Ennis himself meant. I think his words came from a painful and only half-understood realization that the tension on him from the two lives he was living was becoming absolutely unbearable - that those two lives had pulled so far apart that he couldn't manage to maintain the compartmentalization any more - the stress had created cracks and now everything was crumbling under the tension.

The side of him that loves Jack and wants to be with him is under immense stress because the relationship is suddenly openly tenuous and under threath. A break-up can't be ruled out..... not after Jack's Mexico admission and all the bitter and disappointed rest of what Jack says leading up to the "I wish I knew how to quit you". Not after Ennis's own words in response, spoken in fear more than anger. But Jack is Ennis's whole life, his love - in direct contrast to what Ennis says out loud, Ennis would be nothing *without* Jack.  The prospect of losing Jack is beyond frightening to Ennis.

At the same time, the homophobic and "pretending to be straight" side of Ennis has been driving Ennis's actions towards that loss. That side has been demanding more and more of his mental resourcesl - putting more pressure on him every day. The increasing fear that people *knows* weighs on his mind and makes him go against his own deepest wishes and desires, makes him deliberately see Jack more seldom than before. I can't find any other explanation for him sitting silently when Jack says his "sometimes I miss you so much...." line, for him keeping to his decision to cancel the August meet even after that. It would have moved a rock to cancel every other appointment and obligation! And the Ennis of the first few years relationship would have quit his job and gone to meet Jack in August. Ennis uses the child support as an excuse, but to me that's what it is - an excuse. I think in a way the homophobic part of him has subconsciously been forcing him  towards a breaking point. Which finally arrives when Ennis says he can't stand this any more: He can't live both lives. He'll have to chose......  Though when he says that, I don't think he knows or sees all of that or the having to choose at all clearly yet - he's just completely emotionally worn out from it all and can't take any more and says os as he breaks down. But his realization will be gradual over the next months - I think he's well on his way to it, and to even making his choice, when he meets Cassie at the Bus Station cafe.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on May 31, 2006, 04:02:08 pm
This is not in the original story; because after Jack says, "I wish I knew how to quit you,"  Ennis stood as if heart-shot, face grey and deep-lined, grimacing, eyes screwed shut, fists clenched, legs caving, hit the ground on his knees. Ennis is not quoted as saying anything else after Jack got out of his own truck and he tried to guess if it was heart attack or the overflow of an incendiary rage, Ennis was back on his feet and somehow, as a coat hanger is straightened to open a locked car and then bent again to its original shape, they torqued things almost to where they had been, for what they'd said was no news. Nothing ended, nothing begun, nothing resolved.

Annie Proulx did not write a thing about them touching when they were in the trailhead parking lot. Other than the one time when Ennis kissed Jack that one time at the 1967 reunion where he thought no one was watching, Ennis did not touch Jack in a public place again where he thought people might see. [Oh, the scene with dialog where Jack shows up unannounced after Alma's divorce from Ennis is not a story original.]

So, in the way that I read the original story, they just drove off without saying anything further after Jack's last "Ennis?" and then Ennis just assumed that Jack would agree to meet him again in November.

While people refer to this scene in the movie as the "lake scene," their trucks are parked in a trailhead parking lot by a lake.

Exact quote of Ennis's line in the movie, "I just can't stand this anymore, Jack."

I just have to guess what the screenplay writers and the movie script people meant here.

I say that maybe Ennis cannot stand the fact that his soul and body wants to be with Jack because he is actually in love with Jack. But, he has got it fixed in his stubborn mind that because of the hand which other people dealt him and he cannot trade cards so to speak, he can't fix it, he just has to stand it although it is making him miserable.

I find that movie scene where Ennis did show emotion and cried odd in the fact that Larry McMurtry told Time Magazine interviewer that men don't understand emotion.

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http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,1151802,00.html (http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,1151802,00.html)
 One of the main things you added to the story was women.
In a lot of your work, women turn out to have far richer interior lives than men.


I have always argued that if you want to learn something about emotion, you have to ask women. That's why I've had three women characters who've won Oscars--[for] Patricia Neal, Cloris Leachman and Shirley MacLaine. I've always thought that for my interests, emotionally, I have to seek women to talk about. Men don't talk about emotion. They don't understand it.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 31, 2006, 04:37:22 pm
Exact quote of Ennis's line in the movie, "I just can't stand this anymore, Jack."

I just have to guess what the screenplay writers and the movie script people meant here.

I say that maybe Ennis cannot stand the fact that his soul and body wants to be with Jack because he is actually in love with Jack. But, he has got it fixed in his stubborn mind that because of the hand which other people dealt him and he cannot trade cards so to speak, he can't fix it, he just has to stand it although it is making him miserable.

I find that movie scene where Ennis did show emotion and cried odd in the fact that Larry McMurtry told Time Magazine interviewer that men don't understand emotion.


Oh, you're right, Tiawahcowboy, it is "can't stand this." I don't know if I've heard the "just" but I'll listen for it next time. Nice to see you discussing the movie (as opposed to the story) now and then!

And your theory makes sense about why he says it.

As for Larry McMurtry's quote about men not understanding emotion -- a lot of people would argue that just because Ennis expresses emotion doesn't mean he fully understands it. In other words, I don't think McMurtry was necessarily saying that men are unemotional.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on May 31, 2006, 05:13:00 pm
Oh, you're right, Tiawahcowboy, it is "can't stand this." I don't know if I've heard the "just" but I'll listen for it next time. Nice to see you discussing the movie (as opposed to the story) now and then!

And your theory makes sense about why he says it.

I discussed both of them in the same post, right? I actually prefer to discuss the movie opposed by the story as far as the movie itself is concerned. In certain Yahoo Groups, one of which was especially for those who had read the original story but had not yet seen the movie, we did not have to "argue" about the movie at all.

When it comes to why certain no-name characters in the original story had to be given names and lots of movie scenes, I can only theorize about that, too. Annie Proulx had no such person named "Cassie" who worked at a bar in Riverton. She had no one working at a Riverton bar in her story.

As for Larry McMurtry's quote about men not understanding emotion -- a lot of people would argue that just because Ennis expresses emotion doesn't mean he fully understands it. In other words, I don't think McMurtry was necessarily saying that men are unemotional.

Well, it's like this McMurtry does seem to be from the "Old School," which actually began after the start of the Industrial Revolution in the late 1890s, when boys began to be taught that it was unmanly to even show emotion in another guy's presence. Real men kept their emotions to themselves and just tuffed it out. Anthony Rotundo in his book, American Manhood, mentioned how in America the attitude men had toward themselves and other men changed. If you were to read some of the correspondence between men who were definitely just best friends before the Industrial Revolution, you would think that they were love letters because they used lots of terms of endearment in them.

And, if you read what I copied from Annie Proulx's story, you will see that Ennis himself quickly put himself back in check as far as his emotions were concerned. Jack could not figure out whether Ennis was having a heart attack or throwing a raging fit. And by the time Jack got out of his truck, Ennis acted like he had not even been upset at all.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 31, 2006, 09:50:00 pm
Anyway, it does strike me how easily the "girls don't fall in love with fun" can be flipped to mirror the other side of the Ennis/Cassie relationship (not only Ennis/Jack). Ennis sure didn't and couldn't fall in love with fun either, even when it was smiling brightly at him and making him dance to jaunty tunes and requesting foot rubs: Cassie *was* a real fun girl when they first met.  

Hey there Mikaela and Katherine! This is a great conversation.  Mikaela I agree with almost all of the points you've been making.  And, I also tend to try to see the relationship between Jack and Ennis in a postive optimistic way.  I think this moment with Cassie and the bluntness of the discussion and the tension during the argument with Jack really may have led Ennis to be ready to make a change finally.   A huge part of the tragedy of the movie is the timing of this...  if only Jack had lived who knows what might have happened for the two of them.  The revelations for Ennis come too late.  People have questioned whether Jack is already dead by the time the pie and Cassie scene comes and I'm increasingly believing that he is.


But, as to the specific quote about "fun"...  like I said in my post above, I do think Ennis fell in love with fun.  Not with Cassie obviously, but with Jack.  I think Jack's sense of fun and light-heartedness was a big part of the attraction for Ennis.  And the importance of their ability to goof around and genuinely have fun together probably shouldn't be under-estimated.  They had such difficult lives that being able to lighten-up and have fun must have been really significant.  I think their ability to have "fun" together also is deeply linked to how much they understand one another.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on May 31, 2006, 10:23:13 pm
But, as to the specific quote about "fun"...  like I said in my post above, I do think Ennis fell in love with fun.  Not with Cassie obviously, but with Jack.  I think Jack's sense of fun and light-heartedness was a big part of the attraction for Ennis.  And the importance of their ability to goof around and genuinely have fun together probably shouldn't be under-estimated.  They had such difficult lives that being able to lighten-up and have fun must have been really significant.  I think their ability to have "fun" together also is deeply linked to how much they understand one another.

I think you're right about fun being a big part of how Ennis fell in love with Jack, Amanda.  Just looking at them playing on the day after the second tent scene was a revelation.  You just knew that this was something new for Ennis and felt his exhilaration.  Then BOOM, we saw Aguirre observing the whole thing and were reminded of the crushing weight of society's judgment.  :(

So what do you think it was that Cassie did fall in love with?   ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 31, 2006, 10:38:14 pm
So what do you think it was that Cassie did fall in love with?   ;)

Meryl, I think the answer to this question is readily obvious from a quick flip through the "Heath Heath Heath" thread. (Or, for that matter, from your avatar! Or mine!)  ;)

Back to the fun issue, I agree, that IS a big part of why Ennis fell in love with Jack.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 31, 2006, 10:48:57 pm
I want to answer the question about "does he love you?", but I think I have to re-watch the scene to do justice to it. But, see, it's at the end of the movie, and I can't just put the DVD in without seeing Jack alive, can I? Or without watching them be happy on the mountain? Or seeing the reunion? Or...? Well, anyway, you can see my dilemma. ;D

Aside from anything to do with Jack, the line reflects a big change in attitudes about marriage -- not just for Ennis, but for society in general. I read an interesting article in Newsweek/MS-NBC the other day (http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/13006808/site/newsweek/ (http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/13006808/site/newsweek/)) that followed up on a 1986 Newsweek story about how unmarried women over 30 were doomed to be single for life. Ok, the article isn't really relevant, but something I read elsewhere by the same historian might be: that marriage is changing because it is transforming from a societal expectation (at the extreme end, arranged marriages to cement alliances and so forth) to a pact of love between two adults. (The whole "Defense of Marriage" nonsense, according to the other article by the same author, is trying to go back to an intermediate form of marriage, something halfway between arranged marriages and marriage for love.)

Anyway, the point for Ennis and Alma Jr. is that Ennis married because he was doing what he was expected to do. (Well, we don't know for sure, either in the book or in the movie, but I at least assume that Ennis was engaged to Alma because somebody - family or church or mutual acquaintance - set them up, and not because Ennis thought he was in love with Alma.) But he hopes that his daughter is marrying for other reasons. (And, as a friend pointed out to me a while back, he also might be making sure that his daughter's fiance falls in love with women and not men... ;) )

I think the echoes of the relationship with Jack ("You're nineteen years old..." "Does he love you?") are significant too, though.

I think Mikaela and tiawahcowboy did a great job of summing up what was probably going through Ennis's head during "I just can't stand this no more..."

(Now. Alma Jr. + shirts, or happy times on the mountain...? *flips coin* )
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on May 31, 2006, 11:10:51 pm
(Hey, at least I'm not quoting myself, even if I'm posting after myself... ;D )

Ok. *wipes away tears* Tell you what, that scene is even harder to take in isolation than it is at the end of the movie, I think.

Ennis is awkward and - I don't know, lonely looking maybe? - when Jr. spills out all the wedding plans. He looks more bereft than protective. And then after he asks "Does he love you?", Ennis looks to his right and there's a silence filled only by the sound of - yeah, you guessed it - wind. And then Ennis looks so lonely as he makes his usual sad excuses. Waaah.  :'(  :'(  :'(  He really is cut off and alone, isn't he?

I don't know if it's a sign that Ennis has concluded that love is what is important. But it sure looks to me like he's missing Jack so much he can hardly stand it.  :'(  :'(  :'(

And in that same scene... "If you don't got nothin', then you don't need nothin'." (Screenplay line; don't make me go back and check the scene on the DVD. I've got to go off to my Happy Place and watch the "cowboys are all f***-ups" scene or something.) Anyway, wanna pick apart that one?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 31, 2006, 11:35:16 pm
That's a great description of the scene, nakymaton!  Your description is making me want to cry.
 :'(

I think that Ennis's long pause with his head turned to the side after the 'does he love you' question is a great parallel to Jack's long pause in the "sometimes I miss you so much I can hardly stand it" scene.  For a long time I was convinced that one of the most straightforward ways that  "Jack, I swear..." could be filled-in is with "Jack, I swear sometimes I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."  And, I still think this is a really convincing interpretation.  But there are obviously a billion other ways to see this scene.  It seems crucial that the sentence remain open ended.

I think there are so many complicated aspects to Ennis's reaction to Alma's announcement that the situation is daunting to tackle. 

Another factor in Ennis's reaction to Alma's wedding announcement (some of these ideas are from old threads on TOB, that always seemed important) is Ennis recognizing the similarities and differences between himself at 19 and Alma at 19. At 19 they were/ are both in love. But, Alma can announce her love for Kurt openly and immediately with none of the concerns that have burdened Ennis his whole life.  The love between Alma and Kurt will also be celebrated openly with weddings, parties and the support of friends and family.  Obviously, all contrasting the way Ennis and Jack conducted their love affair.  Katherine has noted several times that the issue of "honoring" their love in terms of recognizing it and building a commitment to one another is a really interesting struggle between Jack and Ennis.  So maybe this is part of the "I swear" moment too... Ennis finally "honoring" his love for Jack in a kind of private ritual.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on May 31, 2006, 11:44:49 pm
Yes, I would love to talk about "If you don't got nothin' you don't need nothin'" (one of my favorite lines), just not tonite. Can we sleep on it and tackle it in the a.m.?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 31, 2006, 11:48:37 pm
Yes, I would love to talk about "If you don't got nothin' you don't need nothin'" (one of my favorite lines), just not tonite. Can we sleep on it and tackle it in the a.m.?

Sure enough.  I'm hoping to grab 40 winks myself soon.
 ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on May 31, 2006, 11:58:20 pm
Bedroll's big enough, if u get to hammerin'.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 01, 2006, 06:55:48 am
But, as to the specific quote about "fun"...  like I said in my post above, I do think Ennis fell in love with fun.  Not with Cassie obviously, but with Jack. 

I couldn't agree more, of course. The flip side extends only as far as the fact that not only don't girls fall in love with fun, but Ennis doesn't fall in love with fun *girls*.  ;) 

It seems Jack is the most and first fun to come his way in a long time, probably in his entire life, - and Jack is working on the fun it very deliberately and diligently too, to get Ennis out of his shell. Like everyone here I love love love those few happy scenes on the mountain like crazy. When Ennis finally *smiles*..... Oh God, there's no emoticon here sufficient for that!


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then after he asks "Does he love you?", Ennis looks to his right and there's a silence filled only by the sound of - yeah, you guessed it - wind. And then Ennis looks so lonely ...
This to me is the most poignant and sad part of the entire Ennis/Alma Jr. conversation, because of Ennis's expression there, as his head is turned away and as he turns back towards his daughter. He's got "missing Jack" written all over his features so eloquently it still makes me catch my breath after my umpteenth viewing.  :'(


I like the point you make about changes in attitudes in society in general. That's exactly where my previous post about not necessarily managing to read the same as some other Brokaholics -  ie. one overriding influence only - into the Ennis/Alma Jr. exchange comes in.

In my view, Ennis is conforming to society's requirements in asking if Kurt loves her. It's not an otherwise unheard-of thing for a father to ask, not something that only his love for Jack would make him think of. Ennis had a lonely life, but he didn't live outside of cultural influences - I bet he went with Cassie to see a sappy movie now and then (The early script has them watching one of the Star Wars films, has it not?) And he has got a TV set....

I think culture in general demanded that one of the things he as a father *should* be interested in making sure of, was the "does he love you part" - in addition to finding out if the guy has a job and can provide for a family with his financial situation. But Ennis has already inadvertedly touched on that latter part since he's been told Kurt works, has a decent car, and is a roughneck.

That doesn't diminish the importance of his question, neither the fact that the taciturn and emotionally restrained Ennis actually asks it at all (with the pain it gives, the thoughts of Jack), nor its obvious importance to Alma Jr., who is extremely touched, and seems to perhaps have expected objections rather than him asking her something personal about love.

But I think that in asking his daughter whether her fiancee loves her, and likewise also in agreeing to actually attend her wedding, Ennis is helped along in his actions by the fact that in both matters he's conforming to society's expectations, - not going against them like his living with Jack would have been. Although doing both those things still takes a lot for Ennis to do - asking his daughter such a personal question, even thinking to ask it; - and attending the wedding; being in the spotlight of the guests there, meeting Alma.....  there's a combination of personal and public influences make him behave the way he does. It's not *only* the impact of loving and losing Jack, though that obviously plays a significant part.

I've previously read a lot of discussions where society's expectations of Ennis in that scene haven't been taken into account at all. In my view they do play a part -  his perception of society's expectations has shaped his entire adult life to crippling effect, after all - to some extent they always will. Only this time, society's expectations actually help him along in re-connecting emotionally with a person he loves. It's a bittersweet contrast to his the entire clandestine relationship with Jack. Also a small and oblique reminder about what *could* have been, if their society had only had other norms for "two guys living together".....


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"If you don't got nothin', then you don't need nothin'."

Oh yes! I was thinking about proposing that one, but there's so much to say.......where to even begin? I'll be looking forward to the posts on this.  :)  Reading the loss of Jack into it makes it absolutely heartbreaking - but what does it mean to the listener, to Alma Jr? What does she think he's saying?

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on June 01, 2006, 09:22:08 am
Bedroll's big enough, if u get to hammerin'.

That line might be in the "Story to Screenplay" book (I cannot afford to buy that just yet) or one of the McMurtry-Ossana screenplay versions; but, it is not in the movie nor in Annie Proulx's original short story. I know it's not in the movie; because I have the DVD and I wanted to see if what you posted was correct.

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(From the short shory) "Too late to go out to them damn sheep," said Ennis, dizzy drunk on all fours one cold hour when the moon had notched past two. The meadow stones glowed white-green and a flinty wind worked over the meadow, scraped the fire low, then ruffled it into yellow silk sashes. "Got you a extra blanket I'll roll up out here and grab forty winks, ride out at first light."
   "Freeze your ass off when that fire dies down. Better off sleepin in the tent."
   "Doubt I'll feel nothin." But he staggered under canvas, pulled his boots off, snored on the ground cloth for a while, woke Jack with the clacking of his jaw.
   "Jesus Christ, quit hammerin and get over here. Bedroll's big enough," said Jack in an irritable sleep-clogged voice. It was big enough, warm enough, and in a little while they deepened their intimacy considerably. Ennis ran full-throttle on all roads whether fence mending or money spending, and he wanted none of it when Jack seized his left hand and brought it to his erect cock. Ennis jerked his hand away as though he'd touched fire, got to his knees, unbuckled his belt, shoved his pants down, hauled Jack onto all fours and, with the help of the clear slick and a little spit, entered him, nothing he'd done before but no instruction manual needed. They went at it in silence except for a few sharp intakes of breath and Jack's choked "gun's goin off," then out, down, and asleep.
   Ennis woke in red dawn with his pants around his knees, a top-grade headache, and Jack butted against
him; without saying anything about it both knew how it would go for the rest of the summer, sheep be damned.


I prefer the short story version of the First Night In The Tent, aka FNIT over the movie version of the scene.

In the movie version, there is no intimacy at all before Jack reaches for Ennis's hand and puts it on his erection. Since Ennis was not a person who would allow a person to touch him without his permission, especially in the way that Jack did in the movie, more than likely the Story Ennis would have given Jack Twist an attitude adjustment and slugged him with his fists instead of having sex with him.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 01, 2006, 12:32:00 pm
So what do you think it was that Cassie did fall in love with?   ;)

Hey Meryl, didn't we discuss this a long time ago, on LJ? I could swear you were one of the people who answered the question for me! ;D

There's the "Ennis is a very attractive man" thing, like Katherine mentioned. He's especially attractive for someone into the Marlboro Man type.

And I don't remember who brought it up in LJ, but somebody made a really good point -- that there's just something about Ennis, maybe a sense that there's something beneath that reticent surface, that there's a man truly worth knowing locked away in there. I don't know if Cassie is the sort of perceptive person who would see that; she clearly doesn't seem to understand that not only is she the wrong key to unlock Ennis, she's the wrong type of key altogether. (Jack, on the other hand...)

And there's something else that I've thought of since that discussion. You know, Cassie works as a waitress in a bar; along with drinking and smoking, she probably deals with an awful lot of harrassment from men who might just like to rile up a pretty girl, and who probably frequently hint that they would like to have sex with her. And Ennis doesn't do that. She might read that as being a nice guy (along with being very reserved), rather than as simply not being interested in sex with pretty girls. (So by being uninterested, Ennis becomes desirable... at least in contrast to the many jerks in the world.)

(That last observation was brought to you courtesy of some memories I have, of being one of the few women in a cowboy/roughneck/geologist bar in the 80's. I didn't hang out there more than once; I was trying to be "one of the boys," and it sure didn't work. I can't imagine what it would have been like to work as a waitress there.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on June 01, 2006, 12:52:12 pm
The actor who played Ennis in the movie was closer to the Marlboro Man type in the cigarette print ads and TV commercials; but, Annie Proulx's Ennis was not good looking at all. [BTW.

Would the Movie Riverton bar gal, aka Cassie, have been interested in AP's Ennis for his looks? Don't think so; but she could have been interested in him for his personality and how she felt in his presence.

The Movie Riverton bar gal, aka Cassie, really did not have any personal problems, IMO, from the way that she was portrayed on the screen. But, the Story Signal bar gal with no name, according to Ennis, "had some problems he didn't want." In regard to the latter, she was probably desperate for a husband.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 01, 2006, 01:08:07 pm
But, the Story Signal bar gal with no name, according to Ennis, "had some problems he didn't want." In regard to the latter, she was probably desperate for a husband.

I agree. You know, at that time and place, working as a waitress in a small-town bar or restaurant, it isn't surprising that the woman at the bar was desperate for a husband. (That 1986 article in Newsweek that I mentioned up-thread really did capture the fears of many women in the early 80's - fears of being 30 and alone for the rest of their lives.) I'm glad times are changing in that respect, at least for many people; that sort of desperation is not good for either men or women.

And if the woman was desperate for a husband, a man who appeared uninterested in picking up waitresses might seem like a good catch. Again, not a good thing. Not for the unnamed woman, not for Ennis. But also not really surprising to me.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 01, 2006, 01:20:58 pm
I like the point you make about changes in attitudes in society in general. That's exactly where my previous post about not necessarily managing to read the same as some other Brokaholics -  ie. one overriding influence only - into the Ennis/Alma exchange comes in.

Wow, lot to respond to, Mikaela! I agree that few lines in the movie should be read as meaning only one thing. And, you're right, Ennis' question is an ordinary, socially expected, fatherly thing to ask.

What makes me think it holds that additional Jack-related meaning are other elements: his long, anguished look out the window, as if the discussion reminds him of Jack; the fact that it's only the second time the word "love" is used (and the first time by Ennis -- a word that has previously been conspicuously absent); his asking whether Kurt loves Alma  rather than the more typical reverse, which draws attention to the line; his neglecting to ask many other questions; the sense that Ennis has gone through a transformation or redemption involving his understanding of his relationship with Jack. I'd like to think one of the effects of that transformation is that society has a bit less influence on him now than it had for the previous 20 years.

And to me Alma Jr's response seems just a tiny bit more touched than it might if she thought he were only asking about her and Kurt. Then she might just quickly say, "Sure he does, Daddy" or whatever. But there's this little extra pause where she peers really closely at him and then gets this kind of softened, sympathetic look, as if she realizes the question holds more than its apparent meaning. This is how I read it, anyway, though I realize her expression could also be interpreted as her just being glad he cares enough to ask.

As with Ennis' reaction to Cassie's "fun" remark, I just tend to search every significant moment or line for implications about Ennis and Jack, because even though their other relationships are also important, that's the one at the heart of the movie. And because there are so many times when references to their relationship do lie under the surface of scenes (as when they're dancing with women or spreading tar or whatever).

But again, I don't insist on my interpretation, either.  :)

As for "If you don't got nothin you don't need nothin" I interpret this line partly as (surprise!!!!) a reference to Jack!  :D Something to the effect of, he doesn't have Jack, so nothing else really matters. In this case, though, I'm not convinced that Alma takes it as anything more than the more obvious meaning: that living an austere, spare life simplifies things. For that matter, I'm not sure Ennis himself means it any other way than that.

I think of there being up to three levels of meaning for a significant line: 1) what it means on the surface, 2) what the character is really thinking and 3) what the filmmakers are trying to suggest. So to me "does he love you" means 1) the obvious, plus 2) I now realize Jack and I were in love. And "don't need nothin" has 1 and 3. "Husbands never want to dance with their wives" has 1, plus either 2 or 3 or both, depending on how much Lureen is deliberately implying. Of course, there can be multiple meaning at any level, as with "I swear."

And Mel, I was being kind of flippant (though certainly not insincere!), but I agree with this, too:

there's just something about Ennis, maybe a sense that there's something beneath that reticent surface, that there's a man truly worth knowing locked away in there.

Also with your point about Ennis not being the harassing type. He's very polite and agreeable (with the exception of his breakup style)!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on June 01, 2006, 01:21:29 pm
In the movie, Ennis was on his way to the men's room when Cassie dragged him in the opposite direction to the dance floor. It would have been typical for a polite cowboy not tell a woman whom he did not personally know that he had to go to the restroom.

If he REALLY had to go to the restroom to get rid of the beer overflow and he didn't, he would have ended up with Levi's with a rather big dampt spot that had no connection with "the clear slick."

Oh, back in the 1960s, I knew a gal who went to state college to get herself a MRS. degree. But, she was as plain or plainer than Alma was portrayed in the movie; and she was just an average student grade point wise. I forget the name of the guy whom she married; but, his nickname was "Grasshopper" and he was from her home town and was never a college student. He looked more like the AP Ennis.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 01, 2006, 01:53:55 pm
I'd like to think one of the effects of that transformation is that society has a bit less influence on him now than it had for the previous 20 years.

I'm a bit hesitant to talk about the references to religion in the movie. But, well... I think that the whole business about going to the Methodist church (Jenny singing, Monroe catering, etc etc) touches on society's influence on Ennis.

Let's see if I can trace this out. I think that the references to the Methodist church (none of which are in the story, I know ;) ) both serve to paint a realistic picture of the relationship between community and religion in a small town, and serve as a metaphor for Ennis's guilt about his sexuality.

The references that I can remember...

"You might be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity," which came right after Ennis's first reference to his parents being Methodists. Yes, there are plenty of other things that might be regarded as sins, but given that the first tent scene happens later that night, I read the line as reflecting Ennis's views of his own sexual desires.

The Lord's Prayer in the wedding scene, when the camera focuses on Ennis during "...and lead us not into temptation..." The message, to me, is that Ennis is desperately hoping to avoid slipping back into what he considers "sinning."

Before the 2nd fishing trip shown, when Ennis's daughters ask if he'll be back in time for the church picnic. Ennis doesn't want to sing. He's teasing the girls, and given the reputation of Methodists for singing, the line rings true to me. (My parents, they was Methodists... ;) ) But Ennis is also pulling away from the social life of the church. It's as if he doesn't entirely buy into the whole "sex with Jack is sinning" business... though he hasn't come to terms with his feelings about it, either.

Then there's the line about "that fire-and-brimstone crowd" that Mikaela brought up earlier in this thread. By that point, Ennis has pulled away from the social life entirely. It's as if he knows that society doesn't approve, but he doesn't feel that it's wrong, not in the same way that he used to. But he still cares what society thinks, enough to withdraw from society entirely.

Ennis plans to pick up Alma Jr. after church between the last two fishing scenes. I don't have an interpretation for this, except maybe that Ennis is fully withdrawn from the social life at this point.

And then, at the end of the movie, Ennis doesn't want to go to the wedding... but he eventually decides to brave it. As if, like you said, Katherine, Ennis no longer cares what society thinks about him. Not in the same way.

Maybe.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on June 01, 2006, 02:17:02 pm
It is interesting how the screenplay writers and the movie's final cut took the following comment even related to religion from the short story and really made a big deal of it.

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Jack tried a Carl Perkins song, bawling "what I say-ay-ay," but he favored a sad hymn, "Water-Walking Jesus," learned from his mother who believed in the Pentecost, that he sang at dirge slowness, setting off distant coyote yips.

While an overwhelming majority of Pentecostals do believe that "hell" and/or the eternal place of punishment, aka "the lake of fire," exist, believing that is not even required for a person to be a Pentecostal or just merely believe in the Pentecost.

Every Believer who is called "Christian" by others or self-identifies with that name believes in the Pentecost.

As far as United Methodist Church people being a "fire and brimstone crowd" is concerned, I seriously doubt that. It is Pentecostals and Southern Baptists, more so the latter, who preach about fire and brimstone.

Back in the fall of 1965, I went to a Sunday evening service at the local UMC where I was teaching. The worship leader said they were going to learn a new song and it was "How Great Thou Art." I found that funny since Baptist and Pentecostals had been singing the song for more than 15 years.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 01, 2006, 04:02:51 pm
I'm a bit hesitant to talk about the references to religion in the movie. But, well... I think that the whole business about going to the Methodist church (Jenny singing, Monroe catering, etc etc) touches on society's influence on Ennis.

Hmmm! Really interesting analysis, Mel. I've always wondered about all those church references, too. And I think you've found a good way to interpret them.

You catalogued the church references in Ennis' family well, (though I would also include the one where he tells his daughters "I wasn't no angel like you and Jenny here, didn't have no wings"). But also, what about the scene at the Twist ranch? That one seems heavy with religious implications, too.

When I mentioned Ennis' redemption at the end I wasn't thinking of it in the specifically religious sense, but maybe there's some religious symbolism going on in it, too. Others have noted that Mrs. Twist is the only character identified as strongly Christian. Yet Mrs. Twist is also the only one who knows about Jack and Ennis and accepts them. So maybe her acceptance, her hand on Ennis' shoulder, the cross on the wall behind her back when she talks to him, the sort of hallowed ambience in the house -- maybe all those signs of both her religious authority and her sympathy are also, in part, a signal of Ennis' redemption. Does that make sense? (My parents wasn't Methodists or any kind of Christian, so I'm kind of winging it here.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 01, 2006, 05:14:57 pm
You catalogued the church references in Ennis' family well, (though I would also include the one where he tells his daughters "I wasn't no angel like you and Jenny here, didn't have no wings"). But also, what about the scene at the Twist ranch? That one seems heavy with religious implications, too.

I think the "ain't no angel like you and Jenny here" fits in with the examples I gave. I, at least, would leave out the Twist ranch scene (or maybe discuss it in a different sort of discussion of religion). I'm thinking of church, and the church Ennis grew up in, as a sort of metaphor for community or society. (Well, not entirely metaphorical, I guess -- I mean, in a small town, the churches are a huge part of the culture, of the social glue. It's both a strength and a weakness -- church communities help people in times of need, and give people a way to connect to one another. But they also reinforce the sort of, hmmm, cultural sameness, maybe, that is a weakness of rural communities. Rural communities in particular have both a reputation for taking care of their own, and for isolating anyone who seems different.) So I see Ennis's willingness (or unwillingness) to participate in church activities as a measure of how he's relating to his society as a whole. First he's a part of it, and feels as his attraction to Jack is a sin. Then he withdraws from it, partly hinting that there's something wrong with him ("I ain't no angel"), but also partly hinting that there's something wrong with society ("that fire-and-brimstone crowd"). And then with his daughter's wedding, he's simply going to participate -- there aren't any references to sin or guilt. But he's going to be part of the community, in some sort of way.

I can't speak to Christian symbolism at the Twist ranch at all -- it doesn't resonate with me personally. Not saying that it isn't there, but that I'm not the right person to make sense of it.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on June 01, 2006, 05:49:04 pm
In the AP and the Movie, Mrs. Twist practiced Christian hospitality when Ennis came to her home. She was not merely being nice or pretending so, when she offered Ennis something to eat and drink while he was in her home. She knew that he had been travelling for a while and was probably hungry.

Since she was not in very good health, she offered what she had on hand. The biblical Greek word translated as "practice hospitality" means "the action of showing love to strangers."

I was watching PBS-TV last night and Bono mentioned what Jesus said in Matthew 25:31-40. Jesus said that if one invited a stranger in and gave him something to eat and drink, it was as though the person showed hospitality to himself in his name.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 01, 2006, 06:12:30 pm
Popping in very quickly to say - Mel, I absolutely love this analysis of the church activities as the social glue and social norm setter of the community Ennis and his family lived in. Just the thing I was trying to piece together but couldn't quite manage to formulate in my previous question concerning the Del Mar family's church activities!

Also Katherine, very well put observations about Mrs. Twist and her acceptance of (Jack and) Ennis!

I've been wondering why his mother didn't introduce Jack to her pentecostal faith. It seems obvious that she must have been the positive, accepting and enabling influence on Jack that made him into the person he became as an adult. And yet, she didn't touch upon and include him in something as personal and as important to her as her religious beliefs. But perhaps John Twist denied her that, wanting the boy to at least grow up in the "proper church?"

Another thing I have been wondering, is why Junior feels the need to specifically say that the wedding will be at the Methodist church. I've imagined Ennis 8and his immediate family) would have continued as a Methodist since that's what his folks were. (I've even imagined that's where Ennis and Alma met. Ennis didn't go to school, he worked on lonesome ranches - chances are they did in fact meet at some church social, I suppose.) Then perhaps Monroe belonged to another church so that Alma and her daughters switched when Alma married Monroe........ 

If so, could Junior marrying in the Methodist Church be another nod from her to her daddy? Does she thereby want to show him that when she makes this life-long commitment she wants to do so in the church of her childhood, the church that he is familiar with? She probably has much better memories from that church picnic and other similar events than Ennis himself has.

Well, I'd really like to think that *could* be the reason for her mentioning the Methodist church specifically. But perhaps her doing so simply means that Kurt is not a methodist so they've been discussing which church to get married in.


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I'd like to think one of the effects of that transformation is that society has a bit less influence on him now than it had for the previous 20 years.

I'd really like to think so, too. But the last image that the film leaves us with - the shirts still kept hidden in the closet - makes me less optimistic on that account. It's as if Ang Lee wants to stress that society's impact for men like Ennis hasn't changed much - it remains just as overwhelmingly limiting and crushing a force still at the end of those 20 years, - for Ennis, and for others like him.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 01, 2006, 06:56:03 pm
I think the "ain't no angel like you and Jenny here" fits in with the examples I gave. I, at least, would leave out the Twist ranch scene (or maybe discuss it in a different sort of discussion of religion). ... First he's a part of it, and feels as his attraction to Jack is a sin. Then he withdraws from it, partly hinting that there's something wrong with him ("I ain't no angel"), but also partly hinting that there's something wrong with society ("that fire-and-brimstone crowd"). And then with his daughter's wedding, he's simply going to participate -- there aren't any references to sin or guilt. But he's going to be part of the community, in some sort of way.

I can't speak to Christian symbolism at the Twist ranch at all -- it doesn't resonate with me personally. Not saying that it isn't there, but that I'm not the right person to make sense of it.

Whew, Mel, this is getting so complicated! Because now I see what you're saying as far as "church" symbolically representing "society." In other words, in this context church is devoid of specifically religious meaning except to establish the metaphor -- "fire and brimstone" simply means "disapproving of homosexuality," and so on. That makes perfect sense to me.

I slightly disagree with one small point: I have always interpreted "the fire-and-brimstone crowd" not as a criticism by Ennis of church/society -- i.e., Ennis moving toward accepting himself and realizing the fault lies with others -- but more of a statement that as a "sinner" he doesn't feel comfortable in that millieu because they'll judge/disapprove of/suspect him. That is, as far as he's concerned the fault could still be his.

I think I understand your idea, though, and I really like it.

But what I was talking about, and there may be something to this also, is a way of interpreting Ennis' experience more in terms of religion specifically. I'm not the perfect analyst of this, either, in that I didn't grow up in a church and am not a Christian, so my knowledge of Christianity comes only from what I've heard or read or studied along the way. But I don't think it's an accident that Mrs. Twist is so explicitly identified as a Christian, that there's a cross behind her as she's comforting Ennis and so on. Or that his experience at the ranch coincides with a sort of redemption, after which he's ready to change his ways (go to Alma's wedding). That model would also fit with the other references to church.

But the last image that the film leaves us with - the shirts still kept hidden in the closet - makes me less optimistic on that account. It's as if Ang Lee wants to stress that society's impact for men like Ennis hasn't changed much - it remains just as overwhelmingly limiting and crushing a force still at the end of those 20 years, - for Ennis, and for others like him.

True, the closet is a powerful symbol. And I agree there's not much indication at the end of the movie that society has changed (unless you want to get back into the discussion of the tattooed woman!  ;D)

But I do think there are lots of indications that Ennis has changed -- that is, become more accepting of his sexuality. So when I said society has less influence on him than before, I meant that he is now more willing to ignore society's rules (represented here by the roundup) and instead act on behalf of love (attend the wedding). Unfortunately, the closet stands as a reminder that, in the case of Jack if not Alma, his transformation comes too late.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 01, 2006, 07:09:34 pm
But I do think there are lots of indications that Ennis has changed -- that is, become more accepting of his sexuality. So when I said society has less influence on him than before, I meant that he is now more willing to ignore society's rules (represented here by the roundup) and instead act on behalf of love (attend the wedding). Unfortunately, the closet stands as a reminder that, in the case of Jack if not Alma, his transformation comes too late.

Hmmm. I see what you mean - I agree on him accepting himself, having reached some point of peace with his nature. But he still keeps who he is hidden from everyone else than himself, away in that closet, and as such, I think society does have a strong influence on him - just as before, it makes him hide and conform and stay silent. Also, I would argue that him attending the wedding implies him conforming to society's rules, and not the oppsosite,  as I mentioned in my previous post. Unless US rural society is very different from the place where I live and grew up....... Over here at least,  "society" would really frown at a father who didn't move heaven and earth to attend his own daughter's wedding and walk her up the aisle if she wanted him to.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: tiawahcowboy on June 01, 2006, 07:16:06 pm
I woud say the reason that Alma Jr. say the wedding would be at "the Methodist Church" might be the fact that it might be a different denominational church in Riverton than the one she attended with her mother, sister and possibly her dad when she was younger.

In the way the movie script has Alma and the kids talking about going to church in Ennis's presence and how he responds to that, without really putting going to church down, Ennis might have been going to church some, too.

While one does not see it in the movie, after Ennis and family moves to Riverton, He works 7 days a week, weekdays on the highway crew and weekends at the ranch where his has his horses boarded. I think his "fire and brimstone crowd" excuse for not going to the Saturday night church social was due to the fact that he was too tired to go anywhere.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 01, 2006, 07:31:28 pm
Hmmm. I see what you mean - I agree on him accepting himself, having reached some point of peace with his nature. But he still keeps who he is hidden from everyone else than himself, away in that closet, and as such, I think society does have a strong influence on him - just as before, it makes him hide and conform and stay silent. Also, I would argue that him attending the wedding implies him conforming to society's rules, and not the oppsosite,  as I mentioned in my previous post. Unless US rural society is very different from the place where I live and grew up....... Over here at least,  "society" would really frown at a father who didn't move heaven and earth to attend his own daughter's wedding and walk her up the aisle if she wanted him to.

I agree. That is usually how it goes here, too. In this case, though, I think the metaphor has been turned around because it makes the point better. Before, Ennis rejected Alma's request to live with him because he had to work. And he told Jack they couldn't meet in August because he had to work. And he couldn't live with Jack in the first place because of he had a family and needed to "make a living."  So maybe instead of "society" we should call it "obligations." It's that trait in him that makes him feel he has to eat beans instead of sheep.

But at the end of the movie, he is finally able to do the latter. The reason he decides to go to the wedding isn't that he fears "society" would disapprove if he skipped it. (And the fact that he could lose his job would provide a socially acceptable excuse not to go.) Instead, he decides to go because he loves Alma and saw the disappointment in her face when he mentioned the roundup and realized that if he skipped her wedding she would be sad and doesn't want to repeat the mistake he made with Jack.

As for why he lives alone at the end, I see it less as a matter of hiding and conforming and staying silent because of his sexuality than because of his unsociable personality and his grief. Not that I see him leading a gay pride parade anytime soon, but to me it seems that shame about his sexuality is less a factor by this point.

Title: Spiritual meanings of the different closets and story difference
Post by: tiawahcowboy on June 01, 2006, 07:33:04 pm
The Movie closet at the Twist home had a door on it and so did Ennis's trailer closet.

But, the Story closet in Jack's boyhood bedroom did not have a door because it just a shallow cavity in the wall with a cretonne fabric curtain hung from a string, closing it off from the bedroom. [Cretonne fabric is a type of upholstery material.]

And, in the Story, Ennis did not hang the shirts in the closet; he hung them on the trailer wall.

In the Bible story of Jesus dying on the cross, at the very moment he gave up his Spirit and died, the fabric curtain, aka the Veil  in front of the Holy of Holies, in the Jewish temple in Jerusalem split from the top down to the bottom. And, everything that had been hidden behind the curtain which only the high priest had seen only once a year was open to the other worshippers to see.

Story Jack had hidden the shirts on a nail (probably without a hanger), in a jog in the wall, in his Lightning Flat closet and I think that was his own "holy" place for the shirts. While many people believe his mother knew they were there, I personally don't think so. [Oh, the Bible word translated as "holy" does not alway refer to something consecrated by a religious leader; at times, it just means something designated as having a special purpose.

Since Ennis had opened the holy place in Jack's curtained closet, I say that his own holy place was the trailer wall in which he lived on the Stoutamire ranch.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Ellemeno on June 01, 2006, 07:35:21 pm
Meaning #3: Ever notice that the first line in the movie is Jack swearing, and the last line is "Jack, I swear..."?

Oh, this is going to be a great thread to catch up on, I can tell already.  Thank you, Katherine, for starting it, and thank you, nakymaton, for your pearls.  

Update: Okay, now I'm like 10 posts into this thread, and I feel sycophantic adoration for all of you - Amanda, Katherine, Lee, Mel, and others. 

Gosh I love this movie and this place.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 01, 2006, 07:51:56 pm
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The reason he decides to go to the wedding isn't that he fears "society" would disapprove if he skipped it.

No - I don't think he fears society - I'm just thinking that this once, society's rules and what he truly wishes to do based on love for another person are perfectly aligned - and that simplifies his decision, -strongly nudges him in that specific direction.


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.....but to me it seems that shame about his sexuality is less a factor by this point.

Your view is a tad more optimistic than mine here! I think I really envy you.  :)

Though he's come to terms with what he had with Jack and what it truly meant to him, I still cannot help seeing...... well, if not shame - then at least a fear of other peoples' and society's disapprobation, or their meddling, or their lack of acceptance..... -  in him hiding the shirts in the closet. Then again, probably that last image is intended more as an emotional, poignant and visually stunning closing statement for the whole movie, its story and message - rather than a minute indication of Ennis's relation to society's norms at that specific point in time. I'd like to think you're right in this.

At any rate, I think at the end of the film Ennis has finally managed to fight down the cruel and crippling influence of his own father's abusive actions and prejudices, and if there are a few things to be happy about there at the end, surely the fact that he's welcoming in his daughter's love and showing his father's hatred and bigotry the door must be one of them....
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 01, 2006, 07:59:42 pm
At any rate, I think at the end of the film Ennis has finally managed to fight down the cruel and crippling influence of his own father's abusive actions and prejudices, and if there are a few things to be happy about there at the end, surely the fact that he's welcoming in his daughter's love and showing his father's hatred and bigotry the door must be one of them....

We can certainly agree on this!  :D

This movie is very ambiguous throughout, and the ending particularly so. I don't just mean the "I swear," but everything about the ending. How much, if any, did Ennis come to accept his sexuality? What did he finally realize about his relationship with Jack? We could argue endlessly, I suppose. But one thing for sure, I guess, is that he makes progress of some sort.  :) :'( :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 01, 2006, 08:47:35 pm
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This movie is very ambiguous throughout, and the ending particularly so.

Yes! And oh, how much that makes it continue to engage our hearts and minds....  :)


In keeping with the "double meanings" theme, Ennis's keeping the shirts in the closet has several overlapping possible uses and meanings as well..... ranging from the entirely mundane to the heartwrenchingly symbolic.

- Protection and preservation from everyday stains or mishaps
- A "shrine" or "memorial" as a private focal point for Ennis to remember Jack and their love for each other.
- A hiding place, so that noone (aka society) will be meddling, questioning, or disapproving
- And the strongly symbolic implication to contemporary viewers. (I don't even know if the "in the closet" term had been coined in the early 80's)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 01, 2006, 08:53:07 pm
I'm popping in here to say congrats to this thread and to Katherine for starting it since it's now surpassed 100 posts!  Wow,  I go grab my 40 winks, go to work and come back here to find a zillion long and extremely thoughtful new posts.  OK.  I need to do some serious post-reading before I really join in here again.   It never ceases to amaze me how much there is to discuss in this movie... even after all of our hours of discussion already, things just get more interesting and complex.
 :D
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 01, 2006, 10:10:36 pm
 + 100 posts !! Woot!  :) :)


I'm disrupting the discussion to move on to another "double meaning" for a moment, but this one just occured to  me (probably months after everyone else, but there you are.......):

When Ennis promises his daughters he'll be back in time for the church picnic, he says "All right...long as I don't have to sing!" And they laugh, as if it's a good and lighthearted joke. So the first thought that comes to mind is that his daughters think it's funny because they know that Ennis can't sing, or never sings, or sings so badly that it's a shared and internal family "thing".

But he *can* sing - he sings when he's riding under the blue sky, on his way back to Jack with food, and he sings to Jack during the dozy embrace. So maybe an unvoiced and subconscious sentiment behind "as long as I don't have to sing" is : "Because that's something special between Jack and me, something belonging to Brokeback - and I'll not sing anywhere else."   :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 01, 2006, 10:51:55 pm
+ 100 posts !! Woot!  :) :)


I'm disrupting the discussion to move on to another "double meaning" for a moment, but this one just occured to  me (probably months after everyone else, but there you are.......):

When Ennis promises his daughters he'll be back in time for the church picnic, he says "All right...long as I don't have to sing!" And they laugh, as if it's a good and lighthearted joke. So the first thought that comes to mind is that his daughters think it's funny because they know that Ennis can't sing, or never sings, or sings so badly that it's a shared and internal family "thing".

But he *can* sing - he sings when he's riding under the blue sky, on his way back to Jack with food, and he sings to Jack during the dozy embrace. So maybe an unvoiced and subconscious sentiment behind "as long as I don't have to sing" is : "Because that's something special between Jack and me, something belonging to Brokeback - and I'll not sing anywhere else."   :'(

Ooooo.  Good one Mikaela!  Yes, I think this is a good example of Ennis wanting to keep Brokeback special and private... and completely separate from his daily life.  It's interesting though... you'd think he might be willing to sing to his daughters if he'd be willing to sing to anyone other than Jack (since he clearly loves his kids so much).  But, it makes perfect sense to me that he wouldn't want to sing with the "fire and brimstone" church people.  I think it's the sweetest thing in the world that he sings to Jack... and also a really significant song.  I love that he says it's something he got from his Mother (well the "sleeping on your feet like a horse" comment came from his Mom, so I assume the song did too... but I could be wrong).  Oh, it just breaks my heart that Ennis the orphan is sharing something like that with Jack (especially because this is a clue too that Ennis's Mother seems to have been a positive force in Ennis's life, unlike his Dad).  I love that we can't quite hear what Ennis is humming to Jack (at least I can't make out what the actual tune is).  To me that helps keep that moment "private and precious" and something that only our boys know.

Does anyone remember that fantastic old thread on the old board about the "Cowboy's Lament"?  It was started by CaseyCornelius (I'm almost certain) and was all about the song the Streets of Laredo that Ennis seems to be humming before the bear incident.  It was really smart.  I seem to recall that it was all about the significance of the lyrics to that old song in relation to BBM.  Is that thread in the Archives?  I'll have to check when I log off here tonight.

This is all reminding me of one of the favorite old observations from the *original* "I love everything Ennis" thread on the old board.  People used to say "I love Ennis because he laughs, jokes, sings and humms when he's around Jack."
Awwww.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: richardg49 on June 02, 2006, 07:22:49 am
I think there is a clever double-meaning in Cassie's line to Alma, Jnr when she says, 'You don't say much, but you get your point across.'  This comment could equally well apply to Ennis as to his daughter. An inherited family trait, perhaps?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: opinionista on June 02, 2006, 07:59:16 am
Hey guys,

I brought the line below to another thread, can't remember which one, and I briefly discussed its meaning with other posters but we couldn't reach to a conclusion. I'm bringing it here again to see if someone can shed some light over it. It's from the short story:

Ennis and Jack are having a conversation in the Motel Siesta:

...I never had no thoughts a doin it with another guy except I sure wrang it out a hundred times thinkin about you. You do it with other guys, Jack? "Shit no," said Jack, who has been riding more than bulls, not rolling his own.

While I understand that by "was riding more than bulls", Proulx meant Jack was having sex with other men or at least trying to, I'm not sure about the next line: "not rolling his own". Well, I was reading the short story again last night before going to sleep and it ocurred to me that perhaps Proulx means that Jack wasn't exactly having sex with Lureen. Or is it that he wasn't "wranging it out" as much as Ennis was because he didn't need to? What do you think?

I'd like to add that its too bad the screenwriters decided to leave out this conversation from the movie because it does have some effects in their overall relationship, I think. Ennis does tell Jack that he loves him and misses him, especially when he tells him:

"When we split up after we got paid out I had gut cramps so bad I pulled over and tried to puke, thought I ate somethin bad at that place in Dubois. Took me about a year to figure out it was that I shouldn't a let you out a my sights. Too late then by a long long while"

I think this is what prompted Jack to come up with the little calf-and-cow operation idea.  Althought now that I think of it in the movie they change that line with the one where Ennis says he's thanking heaven because Jack forgot his harmonica. I don't know.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 02, 2006, 04:15:56 pm
I think there is a clever double-meaning in Cassie's line to Alma, Jnr when she says, 'You don't say much, but you get your point across.'  This comment could equally well apply to Ennis as to his daughter. An inherited family trait, perhaps?

Yeah, Ennis and Alma Jr really seem like they're cut from the same cloth, don't they. (And hi, and welcome. :) )

Going back to stuff in the last scene in the movie, following up on conversations on the last couple pages... what follows here is a really depressing interpretation. I don't like it, but I want to throw it out there.

What if going to Alma Jr's wedding was actually symbolic of giving in to society's demands? If putting the shirts in the closet symbolized Ennis in the present -- if Ennis was willing to deal with the unpleasant crowds because he's putting that part of himself away, putting it fully into the closet again, and if without Jack around, he's less worried that people will figure out about him?

I don't like this... so here's another closet interpretation. I think that the closet probably is symbolic, that it isn't just a closet. (Even though I think it's more dramatic to see the door opened and suddenly see the shirts hanging there, rather than have them prominently displayed in the background for the entire scene.) But I think the symbol represents the entire relationship, two shirts tucked inside one another as if they're one, but hidden away in the closet the entire time, with the picture of Brokeback Mountain reminding them of their happiest time.

Opinionista -- I interpreted "not rolling his own" to mean that Jack was taking care of his sexual needs by having sex with other men rather than by masturbating. But I think there are a lot of ways to read the line.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: opinionista on June 02, 2006, 06:32:39 pm
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Opinionista -- I interpreted "not rolling his own" to mean that Jack was taking care of his sexual needs by having sex with other men rather than by masturbating. But I think there are a lot of ways to read the line

Well, it makes sense. Thanks Nakymaton
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on June 02, 2006, 09:45:57 pm
Whew, I just caught up on this thread.  Great analyses, folks!  8)

MUCH earlier, I asked the question:

So what do you think it was that Cassie did fall in love with?  and Mel replied:   

Hey Meryl, didn't we discuss this a long time ago, on LJ? I could swear you were one of the people who answered the question for me!

There's the "Ennis is a very attractive man" thing, like Katherine mentioned. He's especially attractive for someone into the Marlboro Man type.

And I don't remember who brought it up in LJ, but somebody made a really good point -- that there's just something about Ennis, maybe a sense that there's something beneath that reticent surface, that there's a man truly worth knowing locked away in there. I don't know if Cassie is the sort of perceptive person who would see that; she clearly doesn't seem to understand that not only is she the wrong key to unlock Ennis, she's the wrong type of key altogether. (Jack, on the other hand...)

And there's something else that I've thought of since that discussion. You know, Cassie works as a waitress in a bar; along with drinking and smoking, she probably deals with an awful lot of harrassment from men who might just like to rile up a pretty girl, and who probably frequently hint that they would like to have sex with her. And Ennis doesn't do that. She might read that as being a nice guy (along with being very reserved), rather than as simply not being interested in sex with pretty girls. (So by being uninterested, Ennis becomes desirable... at least in contrast to the many jerks in the world.)


Thanks for the lengthy reply, Mel!  I don't remember being in on that topic on LJ, but the points made are certainly well observed.  Ennis's good looks are a plus, but good looks can't save a guy who is a jerk.  ;)

I think Cassie picked up on Ennis's loneliness, myself.  He didn't even sit around with other guys while he drank his beer.  She took a chance coming on to a loner, but some women, as you mentioned, prefer that.  What does Carmen sing....L'un parle bien, l'autre se tait; et c'est l'autre que je prefere, il n'a rien dit, mais il me plait (One man speaks, another is quiet, and it's that one I prefer.  He says not a word, but I like that.)  Maybe, like Jack, she sensed the intense part of Ennis that lived just under the surface and was drawn to it.  Poor girl!  If Ennis had been self aware enough not to let her get involved with him, he would have spared her a lot of pain.  But he wasnt.

(That last observation was brought to you courtesy of some memories I have, of being one of the few women in a cowboy/roughneck/geologist bar in the 80's. I didn't hang out there more than once; I was trying to be "one of the boys," and it sure didn't work. I can't imagine what it would have been like to work as a waitress there.)
I love picturing you in a rough and ready geologist bar.  I'll bet they's mean sumbitches, geologists.  ;D

What if going to Alma Jr's wedding was actually symbolic of giving in to society's demands? If putting the shirts in the closet symbolized Ennis in the present -- if Ennis was willing to deal with the unpleasant crowds because he's putting that part of himself away, putting it fully into the closet again, and if without Jack around, he's less worried that people will figure out about him?

I lean more toward this tragic interpretation, too, just as I am one of the Tire Ironists as opposed to the Accidentalists when it comes to Jack's death.  It's why we come out of the theater shaking our heads and wiping away tears.  The Ennis of Proulx's prologue is living in that trailer almost as in a tomb.  Jack will remain his secret.   Movie Ennis symbolizes this neatly not only by keeping the shirts hidden in the closet, but by concealing Jack's shirt beneath his own.  The glimpse of redemption Ang Lee provides us with is some comfort, but a happier ending would have diluted and falsified what I feel is the real message:  This is what happens to people when society insists they fit a certain mold and punishes them if they can't.   :(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 03, 2006, 08:08:19 am
Wonderful post, Meryl!   :) and  :'(


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What if going to Alma Jr's wedding was actually symbolic of giving in to society's demands?

I don't think I see it as giving in to society, at least not to how society wants him to behave in "public"  - since IMO he's been doing that over and over his whole life, in the one question touching most deeply on his heart. This therefore seems a bit too obscure to be the symbolic "final surrender" in a long struggle with society's demands. The film Ennis portrayal IMO doesn't show someone who's ever actively and consciously struggling against society's rules (and finally giving in there at the end);  Ennis takes society's rules far too much for granted. His struggle is more with his own personal internalized homophobia and childhood demons, and that struggle has thankfully been put to rest there in the final scene. However by not making him rail against society’s homophobia at all, the message of the film becomes all the more heartbreaking...;
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From Meryl

This is what happens to people when society insists they fit a certain mold and punishes them if they can't.

BUT Ennis going to the wedding at the point in time where he has finally come to terms with the discrepancy between who he is and who he himself and "society" wanted him to be, showcases such a bittersweet tragic irony: Once “society’s” pressures have kept him away from the love of his life till the last chance is gone, now “society” sort of rewards him through not so much pressuring him as nudging him towards attending his daughter’s wedding and thus towards opening himself to a socially accepted type of love; the father/daughter love. Thereby contributing its part to him not becoming a complete loner.

From then on I just see him going with the flow of society's general demands, or rather living below the range of itt radar altogether. With Jack gone, just as Ennis reached the point of self-acceptance where he might have decided to actively disregard society's perceived castigation of "two guys living together", IMO he sees no reason anymore why he should possibly want to actively flaunt society.  Also there’s the strange and sad thing that “society’” might possibly (or certainly, in his opinion) have made him an outcast for loving another human being deeply, but will only frown and shrug and move on should he neglect keeping in contact with his family, engage in barroom brawls, drink himself slowly to death…….

I think there was a press conference where Heath Ledger was asked what he thinks happens to Ennis afterwards, and he just answered "not much". I probably think HL was as spot-on in that as in the rest of his Ennis portrayal. I can't see Ennis "coming out". I can't see him getting on the tiniest of soap boxes to proclaim who he really is, not even to his daughters. I can't see him finding another man to love. Apart from the connection with his daughter(s) and eventual grandchildren, I think he'll have a very lonely and quietly miserable life, going in circles around those two shirts and steeped in memories and regret. It's a very bleak prospect.

But from "society's" perspective, he'll be living an ordinary life within the general rules and expectations. Going to weddings and all.  **sigh**

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The LJ discussion about what Cassie and others saw in Ennis was back in February. I dug out one comment I made myself at the time, and lazy person that I am, here it is:

As to what everyone (Jack, Cassie, Alma) sees in Ennis; - I think they see or sense his *strength*. Not only the visible physical one, but his immense mental strength - coupled with strong *passion*. The guy is a veritable volcano of passion and emotions waiting to erupt, as he demonstrates in that one scene where it initially is Jack who holds back, not knowing how far he'll be allowed to go...... The ones who love Ennis are the ones who actually sense all of this, and probably think they can find the means to unlock his strength enough for it to also encompass them, to support them, to make them strong by extension. And they hope to find the means to unlock his emotional side aw well, something that only Jack actually manages to do, having the "right key to turn the lock tumblers". That's such an unbelievably apt image. All that passion Ennis keeps under lock and key.........

Unfortunately for everyone, Ennis uses nearly all his immense strength not on opening up and giving, but on keeping himself tightly in check, tying himself into knots, keeping his nature and passions repressed and out of sight away from everyone including himself, under such pressure that the eruptions are few but very spectacular.

Ennis *has* to be strong to be able to "stand" all that he perceives he "can't fix", over all those weary years, withstanding all those emotional blows. In the last scene however grief-stricken, I think there's no question he'll keep going, manage some sort of a life and even form a connection with his daughter(s). Given the weight of the emotional baggage and self-recriminations he is lugging along that far out in the story...... The strength that keeps him going must be almost preternatural.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 03, 2006, 10:54:41 am

As to what everyone (Jack, Cassie, Alma) sees in Ennis; - I think they see or sense his *strength*. Not only the visible physical one, but his immense mental strength - coupled with strong *passion*. The guy is a veritable volcano of passion and emotions waiting to erupt, as he demonstrates in that one scene where it initially is Jack who holds back, not knowing how far he'll be allowed to go...... The ones who love Ennis are the ones who actually sense all of this, and probably think they can find the means to unlock his strength enough for it to also encompass them, to support them, to make them strong by extension. And they hope to find the means to unlock his emotional side aw well, something that only Jack actually manages to do, having the "right key to turn the lock tumblers". That's such an unbelievably apt image. All that passion Ennis keeps under lock and key.........

Unfortunately for everyone, Ennis uses nearly all his immense strength not on opening up and giving, but on keeping himself tightly in check, tying himself into knots, keeping his nature and passions repressed and out of sight away from everyone including himself, under such pressure that the eruptions are few but very spectacular.

Extremely well put, Mikaela. You've really captured his appeal. There was a similar discussion here a while back about why Jack and others would see in Ennis. To me it's obvious (and I'm not just talking about his appearance, though there is that, too). In fact, I was kind of amazed that anybody would question it. Yes, he's repressed and difficult, but his underlying passion is so evident that his difficult traits only add to his mystique.

Your use of the phrase "tying himself into knots" made me think of a double meaning to Jack's line, "Let's get, unless you want to sit around tying knots all day." That sort of summarizes their future relationship too, doesn't it?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on June 03, 2006, 12:48:41 pm
Your use of the phrase "tying himself into knots" made me think of a double meaning to Jack's line, "Let's get, unless you want to sit around tying knots all day." That sort of summarizes their future relationship too, doesn't it?
Wow, that's a great observation, Katherine!  8)

The ones who love Ennis are the ones who actually sense all of this, and probably think they can find the means to unlock his strength enough for it to also encompass them, to support them, to make them strong by extension.

As usual, you hit the nail on the head, Mikaela.  There's monumental strength in Ennis, and who wouldn't want to be encompassed by it?  But as so often happens in a really great character, the opposite quality is also present--fragility--and I think that makes those who love Ennis want to reach out to him, much as they would to a hurt child, and be a comfort and help to him.  What a powerful combination!  Heath achieves this so superbly, too:  you can just see him clapping a lid on Ennis's fear and anger, clenching his jaw and putting on a hard or stoicly indifferent face; but suddenly there is the most beautiful soft, benevolent, cherishing look that comes into his eyes, coupled with a blindingly beautiful smile.   He makes this seemingly nondescript man infinitely desirable, to those with eyes to see.

His struggle is more with his own personal internalized homophobia and childhood demons, and that struggle has thankfully been put to rest there in the final scene. However by not making him rail against society’s homophobia at all, the message of the film becomes all the more heartbreaking...
That's so true!  And it makes me think of another line with a double meaning:  "I think my Dad was right."  :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 03, 2006, 08:34:58 pm
But as so often happens in a really great character, the opposite quality is also present--fragility--and I think that makes those who love Ennis want to reach out to him, much as they would to a hurt child, and be a comfort and help to him.  What a powerful combination!

Meryl, this description is wonderful, too! That tough/fragile combination is really irresistable. That's why I find the scenes of emotional or vulnerable Ennis (the second tent scene, the alley, the Twist ranch, etc.) particularly compelling. Yet his emotions are usually at least partly hidden from everyone but us, the viewers.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: belbbmfan on June 04, 2006, 03:38:03 am
Heath achieves this so superbly, too:  you can just see him clapping a lid on Ennis's fear and anger, clenching his jaw and putting on a hard or stoicly indifferent face; but suddenly there is the most beautiful soft, benevolent, cherishing look that comes into his eyes, coupled with a blindingly beautiful smile.   He makes this seemingly nondescript man infinitely desirable, to those with eyes to see.

Meryl, I couldn't agree more. I think the transformation from 'stoic' to 'desirable' in the scenes between the first and second tent scene shows what a great actor Heath Ledger is. Despite the storm of negative emotions he must have gone through (confusion, guilt, shame) after leaving Jack in the morning and going back to the sheep, iint the end, the only thing Ennis can do is give himself over to what he really wants: to be comforted and loved by Jack. And all of this accompanied by the beautiful music by Santaolalla. Truly wonderful.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 04, 2006, 08:30:21 am
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Your use of the phrase "tying himself into knots" made me think of a double meaning to Jack's line, "Let's get, unless you want to sit around tying knots all day." That sort of summarizes their future relationship too, doesn't it?

Yes it does - it's a double meaning line if there ever was one. Wonderful observation.  :)

I think my using the "tying himself in knots" line bears testament to how all these double meaning lines actuallly work their subtle ways on the viewers. That is not an expression I use very often - and it just seemed so appropriate there. No doubt Jack's line and its deeper significance helped me along though I'm not sure I was consciously aware of that at the time!


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 But as so often happens in a really great character, the opposite quality is also present--fragility--and I think that makes those who love Ennis want to reach out to him, much as they would to a hurt child, and be a comfort and help to him.    [   ] ....suddenly there is the most beautiful soft, benevolent, cherishing look that comes into his eyes, coupled with a blindingly beautiful smile.   

**Takes time out for a mini Ennis swoon**

Meryl, what a lovely, perceptive post.   :)

Oh, the fragility - the fear of not measuring up, the loneliness, the self-doubt, - not to use stronger words....

I do wonder though whether Cassie and Alma realizes there's that fragile side of Ennis. He doesn't consciously *let* them see it, but female intuition and all....they should sense it. Somehow I don't think they ever see the depth of it, though.

But Jack certainly sees it, has seen it all the while since their first meeting. And just as importantly, as time goes by, Ennis *allows* Jack to see it. That stricken look of Ennis's after he's related the story of Rich and Earl - those little puffs of breath as he exhales after having kept himself tightly in check during that dreadful tale..... Jack reaching out gently to stroke his cheek...... still leaving Ennis space, but understanding, and showing he understands. Meep.

After all this time and so much discussion, this is still immensely powerful.

There's another scene and line where that fragility is apparent, where the double meaning stands out epecially because of the different reactions from the movie audience and the listener in the film: When Ennis says "Hell, that's the most I've spoke in a year", the cinema audiences have never failed to laugh heartily whenever I've seen the film. Heartily, but not long. It's a funny comeback, and there haven't been too many of those! Ordinarily, you'd expect the listener in the movie to laugh as well, because it's a joke, right? Ennis made a joke - wooo-wee! Or...did he? Jack's reaction, contrary to the audience's, is pensive, serious, compassionate, fond..... he knows that there's too much truth to what Ennis says, and that's not something to laugh about. He senses the overwhelming loneliness in the line. Because of that difference in reactions, the truth about the "joke" hits the audience quickly, and the laughter dies.......


Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on June 04, 2006, 03:27:20 pm
I think the transformation from 'stoic' to 'desirable' in the scenes between the first and second tent scene shows what a great actor Heath Ledger is. Despite the storm of negative emotions he must have gone through (confusion, guilt, shame) after leaving Jack in the morning and going back to the sheep, iint the end, the only thing Ennis can do is give himself over to what he really wants: to be comforted and loved by Jack. And all of this accompanied by the beautiful music by Santaolalla. Truly wonderful.

You're right, belbbmfan, it does show Heath's greatness as an actor.  But even more, I think this is an example of the greatness of Ang Lee's and the screenwriters' genius in taking something that doesn't exist in the source material and creating a sequence that, when all is said and done, lays the groundwork for everything that follows. 

How do you convey to a film audience the exact point where friendship turns into romantic involvement?  It's right here that we are shown Ennis's conflict and Jack's anxiety and get a true sense of how much they care about each other, their touching vulnerability.  When Ennis sits down next to Jack on the mountain, the suspense is incredible, and it's only completely relieved when he kneels outside the tent that night.  Throughout the whole sequence, the music supports the emotional undercurrents superbly.  This for me is where Movie Ennis and Jack soar way beyond Story Ennis and Jack and enter another plane entirely.

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In the end, the only thing Ennis can do is give himself over to what he really wants: to be comforted and loved by Jack

This is what I love about Movie Ennis and Jack.  They don't just treat the sex as recreational, as in the story.  There's a silent acknowledgement of its seriousness, as the eye contact and tender kissing in the second tent scene shows.  Without this, I know I wouldn't have cared as much about them, cried over them, been haunted by them (and over-analyzed them).  I'm just really, really glad Ang Lee knew how important this was and insisted on including it, not to mention the fact that in Heath and Jake we were given actors who could make it all work so beautifully.

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There's another scene and line where that fragility is apparent, where the double meaning stands out epecially because of the different reactions from the movie audience and the listener in the film: When Ennis says "Hell, that's the most I've spoke in a year", the cinema audiences have never failed to laugh heartily whenever I've seen the film.....Jack's reaction, contrary to the audience's, is pensive, serious, compassionate, fond..... he knows that there's too much truth to what Ennis says, and that's not something to laugh about. He senses the overwhelming loneliness in the line.

Great example, Mikaela.  I love the way they tread lightly around each other's personality quirks or flaws.  No finger pointing or laughing, snide comments, etc.  Ennis is reasonably tactful about Jack's bad shooting/getting thrown by the mare/playing bad harmonica, too.  ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 04, 2006, 06:27:38 pm
There's another scene and line where that fragility is apparent, where the double meaning stands out epecially because of the different reactions from the movie audience and the listener in the film: When Ennis says "Hell, that's the most I've spoke in a year", the cinema audiences have never failed to laugh heartily whenever I've seen the film. Heartily, but not long. It's a funny comeback, and there haven't been too many of those! Ordinarily, you'd expect the listener in the movie to laugh as well, because it's a joke, right? Ennis made a joke - wooo-wee! Or...did he? Jack's reaction, contrary to the audience's, is pensive, serious, compassionate, fond..... he knows that there's too much truth to what Ennis says, and that's not something to laugh about. He senses the overwhelming loneliness in the line. Because of that difference in reactions, the truth about the "joke" hits the audience quickly, and the laughter dies.......

Great example, Mikaela! I don't know if I've heard audiences laugh (the audiences I've seen it with are apparently a pretty somber bunch), but you are exactly right that it goes from being a light, funny line to one with more depth and seriousness and meaning. It's there in Jack's pensive reaction, but also in Ennis' face: that quick half smile, then the long direct "Yeah, I'm serious" look that follows.

I would say that tough/fragile contrast in Ennis is apparent in lots of scenes. Outside Aguirre's trailer, he's simultaneously both the cool iconic Marlboro Man cowboy and a pathologically shy introvert. In the bar with Jack, he starts out pretty taciturn, but you see him gradually warming up, hardly believing that anyone would be interested enough in him to ask about his life and offer sympathy.

This is what I love about Movie Ennis and Jack.  They don't just treat the sex as recreational, as in the story.  There's a silent acknowledgement of its seriousness, as the eye contact and tender kissing in the second tent scene shows.  Without this, I know I wouldn't have cared as much about them, cried over them, been haunted by them (and over-analyzed them).  I'm just really, really glad Ang Lee knew how important this was and insisted on including it, not to mention the fact that in Heath and Jake we were given actors who could make it all work so beautifully.

Wow, Meryl! You have really nailed it. I am also one of those who loves Movie Ennis and Jack much more than their story counterparts (shhh, don't tell TJ). I've always chalked it up to the movie characters having more depth and complexity and wrestling with more profound issues (particularly, Movie Ennis' internalized homophobia, which changes it from a story about how intolerance obstructs human lives, to a story about how intolerance warps human souls.)

But you are so right -- a big difference is in their attitude toward sex, which in the story seems a basically recreational activity but in the movie becomes a more serious expression of love. (The story may well intend to suggest that, too, but that idea does not come across as powerfully for me.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 04, 2006, 08:43:27 pm
This is what I love about Movie Ennis and Jack.  They don't just treat the sex as recreational, as in the story.  There's a silent acknowledgement of its seriousness, as the eye contact and tender kissing in the second tent scene shows.  Without this, I know I wouldn't have cared as much about them, cried over them, been haunted by them (and over-analyzed them).  I'm just really, really glad Ang Lee knew how important this was and insisted on including it, not to mention the fact that in Heath and Jake we were given actors who could make it all work so beautifully.

Heya,
I'm back from a weekend away... and again I feel like there's sooo much to catch up on here! 

I'll second what Katherine said about this observation, Meryl.   I agree, that Lee goes a long way towards making their relationship (physical and otherwise) seem profoundly serious (even in the lighthearted moments... which are often hardly lighthearted once you stop and think about them).  I've/ we've noted before that the flashback scene seems much improved in the movie by Ennis straining to try to look at Jack in the face (in profile) during the hug, whereas in the book Ennis avoids looking at Jack's face.  In fact, all the deep eye contact especially in the 2nd tent scene cements the seriousness of what they're doing I think.  Eye contact is a huge factor in their initial bonding too.  I think it's very smart to point out Jack's sympathetic look towards Ennis as Ennis half-jokes about "that's the most I've spoke in a year."  Ennis notices the eye contact and responds to it.  Seeing that sweet look on Jack's face I'm sure went a long way towards Ennis feeling even more comfortable opening up further to Jack.

This issue of "lighthearted" moments that really aren't so lighthearted afterall is interesting in relation to the topic of this thread I think.  Even Jack goofing around and mimicking what it's like to ride a bull contains a nugget of saddness in it.  First of all, he's responding to some serious teasing from Ennis.  Ennis glances in a sly way over his cup at Jack after he says the thing about his Dad thinking rodeo cowboys were f*** ups.  Ennis here is insulting something that's deeply important to Jack... yet instead of really getting angry (as he could have done), Jack sort of swallows the insult and takes the opportunity to draw Ennis out more (to make him laugh).  But, we all know also that Jack isn't really the most skilled rodeo cowboy... and so his joke about the hitting the dashboard is a bit of sad self-awareness maybe.  And the fact that he falls down even in pretending to ride a bull, I think signals Jack's general struggles as an "underdog" figure plagued by disappointment.  As Jake has said, Jack seems to be trying all the time to make things work (in bull riding, in his relationship with Ennis's etc.) and in most cases his efforts aren't rewarded in quite the ways that he hopes.  I mean, as far as Ennis goes, his efforts are certainly rewarded in some ways (he knows Ennis loves him and they manage to have their strained relationship as we've seen), but he doesn't really get the commitment he wanted (well, until after he died).  And with the rodeo, well, we see him win one rodeo so sometimes it works out.  But, like a lot of other things in his life, you get the sense that the rodeo just turns into yet another disappointment.

"The rodeo ain't what it was in my Daddy's day."

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 05, 2006, 08:02:43 pm
OK... new double meaning line (forgive me if this has been hashed out already, but it's been on my mind lately).

"This is a one shot thing we got goin' on here."

Does Ennis mean (at this precise moment when he says it) that he doesn't intend to have sex with Jack again.  As in- "that was the only time that will happen"- i.e. "It was a mistake and I was drunk."  Or, does he mean "you're the only man I'll have sex with (this is an anomaly in my life)."  Or, does he mean "we'll only do this up here on Brokeback and once the summer is over, we're over." ??
 ???

Most importantly... how does Jack hear this line?  It's unclear to me.  He changes the topic a bit with the "nobody's business but ours" line.  Our boys are often changing the topic in coversations with one another (in the motel, etc.).  Does this conversation lead to some of the confusion at the end of the Brokeback summer?

And perhaps most confusingly... the screenwriters give the "one shot" line to Ennis, but in Proulx's story Jack says it.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 05, 2006, 10:39:09 pm
Does Ennis mean (at this precise moment when he says it) that he doesn't intend to have sex with Jack again.  As in- "that was the only time that will happen"- i.e. "It was a mistake and I was drunk."  Or, does he mean "you're the only man I'll have sex with (this is an anomaly in my life)."  Or, does he mean "we'll only do this up here on Brokeback and once the summer is over, we're over." ??

I pick C, it's just for the summer. He does intend to continue the thing for now, though. He knows how he feels about Jack and realizes that this is a big chance for him (Ennis) to be 19 and do what he wants. But he's also cognizant of his upcoming marriage, and believes that once they descend back into society that's all over, "this thing" can't work.

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Most importantly... how does Jack hear this line?  It's unclear to me.  He changes the topic a bit with the "nobody's business but ours" line.

Hmm. A little less clearcut, but I am guessing Jack is being very careful to tread lightly here and not hit that startle point. Hence the "Me neither." So while maybe he doesn't want to acquiesce too readily to a summer-only agreement, possibly holding out hope for beyond that, he certainly can't risk saying so. Best to change the subject.

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And perhaps most confusingly... the screenwriters give the "one shot" line to Ennis, but in Proulx's story Jack says it.

IMO, some of those changes came from a decision that I suspect the filmmakers made to make Jack's and Ennis' characters more distinct. In the story, they seem more distinguished by their actions than their personalities (Jack wants to live together, Ennis doesn't). But in the film, they're immediately recognizable as very different people. I think outlining those differences led to rearranging some of the lines.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 05, 2006, 11:10:27 pm
I think the "one shot thing" line takes on a very different meaning when Ennis says it in the film. In the story, Jack's responding to Ennis's "I'm not no queer," and the whole string of responses seems like Jack's protesting a bit too much... giving a bunch of different excuses, trying to find whatever works to relieve Ennis's fears. I don't give any weight to any of them in the story. But coming from Ennis's mouth, it's something else... Ennis doesn't say much, and when he speaks, it's worth listening.

Personally, I don't think that Ennis intended to have sex with Jack again after the first time, and that Jack is trying to give a reason why they can continue. I don't think Ennis intended for the second tent scene to happen... he seems to be fighting with himself until he finally heads for the tent. And he doesn't seem sure that's what he wants until he finally begins to respond to Jack's kiss.

(I wish Mikaela were here for this conversation... I think she had an insight based on the subtitles on the version of the movie that played in her country. We had a conversation like this before, but, ummmm, I can't remember what she said. It was really good, though!)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 06, 2006, 01:01:38 am
II don't think Ennis intended for the second tent scene to happen... he seems to be fighting with himself until he finally heads for the tent. And he doesn't seem sure that's what he wants until he finally begins to respond to Jack's kiss.

Man, this movie is so incredibly ambiguous. I see the exact same scene and read it as, Ennis sitting by the campfire already knows that he wants to go into the tent but he's really nervous about it -- not just because he's homophobic but because this is something he's never done before (maybe with a woman, either) and he's both excited and fearful. When he finally does go in, he is perfectly willing but it's such a foreign experience for him that he's not exactly sure how to proceed and it takes him a while to relax into it. But, with help from Jack's "s'alrights," he does!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 06, 2006, 02:47:38 am
Double meaning on the lighter side: “Your folks just stop at ‘Ennis’?” Well, actually, they did. He’s the youngest Del Mar.

Cute one, Barbara! And we definitely could use some lighter side.

Unfortunately, I'm now going to take a turn for the much heavier/darker side.

"For all I know, he done the job."

I've been thinking about how chilling that is, the way Ennis phrases it. Not "for all I know, he done that horrible crime," or even simply "for all I know, he done it." I realize this can partly be chalked up to Ennis' manner of speaking. But to call it "the job" is, at some level, to equate it with an expected or necessary task.

Now, I'm not saying Ennis thinks of it that way.  I don't believe he does. But it's like he's been conditioned not to question it as much as he should. Why wasn't he more horrified by his father's attitude? Clearly he was seriously disturbed and even traumatized by the experience of viewing the body, realizes his father's potential involvement would have been wrong, but the extent to which he outright condemns him for it is ambiguous. In other contexts, he speaks of his dad as a fairly good guy ("now my dad, he was a fine roper ... I think my dad was right.").

So that's not so much a double meaning as an ominous implication about how abusive upbringing can warp minds.



Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 06, 2006, 07:21:58 am
In other contexts, he speaks of his dad as a fairly good guy ("now my dad, he was a fine roper ... I think my dad was right.").

So that's not so much a double meaning as an ominous implication about how abusive upbringing can warp minds.


I've been thinking about this quite a lot these last few days – the relationship between Ennis and his father. How the film leads up to that absolutely crucial scene of Ennis's father dragging his sons along to see the body and teach them the lesson about what happens to “queers”. Other related topics....


While Jack starts bitching about *his* father from the get go, Ennis actually makes us like his father at first.

The first thing we learn, is that Ennis's father and mother are dead. Even though we know nothing else, that leaves us feeling sympathy towards them by extension just as we feel sympathy for Ennis. It also puts us off guard, thinkin that if Ennis is taciturn, painfully shy and insecure it may have to do with losing his parents at that crucial age –  and not with anything his parents did to him *before* they died.

Then Ennis goes on to tell us something positive about his father, a good memory – “My father was a fine roper” - and when he says that his father thought rodeo cowboys were all fuck-ups, he does it with that certain glint in his eye that somehow makes you think his father must have had the same glint in his. And “My father was right”, however much spoken in jest, also casts Ennis’s father in a positive light, through the very fact that Ennis actually says it, so in contrast to Jack’s comments about *his* father.

And then - bam! - we're hit with that incredibly ugly scene. Things are very far from being what they have seemed at the surface, and it hits the movie audience with all the more effect exactly for going so contrary to the expectations of the older Del Mar that Ennis’s words have created up till then.. We learn that not only was Ennis's father abusive and cruel to his sons, not only does Ennis think him capable of torturing another man to death and seeing it as nothing more than a job needed doing, but his attitudes (and actions, if he actually *was* one of the men who "did the job") both as specifically attributed to him as a single person and as symptomatic of the general attitudes in their time and place, were central to warping or destroying something of the most personal and precious there is in his son. It is revealed as the reason for the tragedy of Jack and Ennis as it unfolds, and forms the focal point of the entire story – the hub that many lives and the whole story revolves around.

The scene with the father and his two sons is all the more forceful because we don't ever get to see father's face - he's just this big, dark, nondescript shape forcing the two boys along, making them watch that horrible sight. The father being faceless speaks of the scene being illustrative of "general opinion" more than of one specific person's violent prejudices. And the fact that there are two boys, not just Ennis, seems a reminder that his father (and their society) wasn't particularly targeting Ennis - every boy according to the thoughts of people like Ennis's father should be taught this lesson.


It makes a sad and distorted kind of sense that Ennis *would* speak well of his father – he does after all “think his father was right” not only about Rodeo Cowboys but about “queers”, however much that means his daddy would have killed him too for being what he is. Ennis himself keeps beating himself up over “this thing” inside him…... The internalized homophobia in Ennis does indeed seem to make him somewhat ambivalent about his father's action - it seems difficult for him to forcefully condemn the means when he's so much in tune with the end.  :'(  And the personal trauma of that day in the dry landscape filled with glaring light must have been hidden so deep down that only Jack can make Ennis bring it forth. I suppose it’s a safe bet that Ennis never tells that tale to anyone else ever, nor lets anyone see how deeply it affects him - and that he never talked with his brother about it either.


That big heavy hand at the boy's neck must have made Ennis feel all the more helpless and powerless to do and be anything else than his father wanted. I can imagine him still feeling the weight of that hand more than once in his dealings with Jack.


The death of Ennis's father takes on a new meaning for the audience after the flashback scene - his death surely served to cement his opinions in Ennis's mind. It made it impossible for Ennis to ever rebel against him, meet him on equal footing, have it out with him, oppose him and move on. Perhaps he would never have managed to do so, perhaps he’d never have wanted to, but his father dying forever removed the choice, that possibility. Now his father’s memory is immutably fixed in time with his opinion of queers, and nothing Ennis can say or do will be able to change that. And anyway………. you’re not supposed to “speak ill of the dead”.


I wonder if perhaps it was a blessing in disguise that Ennis only had daughters and no son. I’m not alt all sure that he’d have managed raising a son with the affection and sensitivity and open love he showed towards his daughters – his inherited ideas of what a boy should be and how a boy should be raised might have made for a difficult relationship for both father and son.


Ennis has something in common with his father in relation to all this: They both go to great lengths to ensure that some specific event doesn’t happen – only to have it happen anyway, and with a cruel vengeance. Ennis’s father possibly goes as far as killing a person to ensure that his sons grow up "right" and straight and with the proper opinion of queers – but his younger son turns out to be queer nevertheless, and with a terrible crushing load of mental baggage to go with it. And Ennis in his turn tries to avoid the fate of gay bashing for himself and for Jack through keeping the two of them apart all those years, but the gay bashing (in Ennis’s mind) happens anyway, the only difference being all the happiness he denied them in the period inbetween.

Fathers and sons, “dysfunctional” families, meeting a prophesied fate through trying to avoid that very fate, psychological themes related to sexuality; – I bet Oedipus and any number of other Greek tragedy characters would have welcomed Ennis with open arms.

Ennis even manages to add a further layer to the tragic dimension with the ambiguity in the story – what if Jack *wasn’t* the victim of a gay bashing, what if his death was only a freak accident? Ennis kept them apart for all those years ostensibly to keep them alive….. and then death strikes blindly anyway, unrelated to anything else in the story. If that isn’t the greatest irony, and tragedy, of all…… I’m sure Ennis’s dad would have thought it absolutely hilarious.

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(I’m really sorry this turned out so long. I was thinking of perhaps creating a separate thread on this, but I suppose the topic of parents and children, esp. fathers and sons in BBM must have been debated to exhaustion and beyond a long time ago, before I ever came to this board.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 06, 2006, 07:49:56 am
I think she had an insight based on the subtitles on the version of the movie that played in her country. We had a conversation like this before, but, ummmm, I can't remember what she said.

The subtitles said "What happened was a one-time event" - with the unambiguous implication that Ennis did not intend continuing the relationship beyond the one night. But in this, the translator had no more and no less knowledge than any of us, I suppose. The line is open to interpretation whether there's a script available or not. And the way the same line's placed in the short story, and in the corresponding published translation, gives no lead, as Jack doesn't say it there until they've been having sex for some time.

I must admit that having gone back and forth on it, I finally arrived at Latjoreme's view as mine some while back:
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He does intend to continue the thing for now, though. He knows how he feels about Jack and realizes that this is a big chance for him (Ennis) to be 19 and do what he wants. But he's also cognizant of his upcoming marriage, and believes that once they descend back into society that's all over, "this thing" can't work.

That seems to go with the time Ennis gives himself all that day thinking through what has happened and what it means, the gravity of his portrayal in those scenes before and as he sits down next to Jack, and the fact that he speaks in present tense. I would have expected some sort of violent outburst and physical expression of frustration directed at Jack if Ennis had meant for it to be over there.

Still doesn't mean it's easy for him to actually go through with, though. His handwringing at the fire - the very picture of conflicting emotions. Everything he desires and craves only a few steps away, but still at war with everything he knows "to be right".   
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 06, 2006, 08:13:09 am
Ennis nearly follows in his father’s footsteps by threatening to “do the job” to Jack: During the final lake scene, “What I don’t know...”

Yes.  And his "boys like you" line very well might have made his father proud, too.  :'(

Arguably, Ennis may even have beeninstrumental in bringing about Jack's death through trying to avoid that very fate. Ennis keeping the two of them so firmly apart made Jack seek out other men, - and if Jack did die in a gay-bashing then it was him being with other men that made the bashers target him, - with no Ennis there to help fight them back.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 06, 2006, 09:19:55 am
(I’m really sorry this turned out so long. I was thinking of perhaps creating a separate thread on this, but I suppose the topic of parents and children, esp. fathers and sons in BBM must have been debated to exhaustion and beyond a long time ago, before I ever came to this board.)

Ha, when I first saw your post I thought, Wow! Now I don't feel so bad about my own long posts!   ;)

But Mikaela, this is worth every word! What a thoughtful, sensitive and well-written analysis (and no, personally I have never seen this subject analyzed in this kind of detail -- if you have still more to say on the topic of parents and children, by all means do start a new thread!).

I don't think there's anything you say that I disagree with, and a lot of your observations really deepened my understanding of the issue. Some wonderful points: The idea that we're set up to think well of Ennis' dad, sharpening the contrast and shock when he finally tells the story. The idea that, once his dad was dead, it becomes even harder for Ennis to rebel against his prejudices. The way the flashback is filmed to suggest that its message is conveyed by all of the society to its boys in general, rather just from a lesson from one father to his son(s). The faceless dad, the heavy hand on the neck (and that boy's neck is so thin and fragile looking -- whenever I see that scene it makes my own neck hurt!). The many Greek tragedy-like layers of irony that ripple out as consequences of this murder. All really, really awesome insights. Thanks for writing this!

So here's a question, especially for you story fans (Mel?). How much of this emotional/psychological stuff is there in the story, and how much is fully developed only in the film? Of course, the basic plot is certainly all there in the story. But I'll have to say that when I read it, I do not get as vivid a sense of how much Ennis' father's actions and attitudes emotionally damaged his son. I read it more simply: having witnessed Earl's awful fate, Ennis quite understandably considered it too dangerous to live with Jack. But I admit I don't fully appreciate the story as much as I should or could, so maybe I just didn't grasp this aspect in enough depth.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Sheriff Roland on June 06, 2006, 11:16:18 am
Catherine brought me here to read your post Mikaela, and I'm Sooo glad she did. Thanks Catherine,  And thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, Mikaela for that wonderfully insightful interpretation of that relationship and it's consequences. It should go straight to the archives. In the very least, you should start a new thread with that post, before it gets buried by well deserved accolades.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Penthesilea on June 06, 2006, 01:11:20 pm
Roland is right: more accolades from my side. Your long post is very worth reading and you should make another topic on this.
But kudos to the others who have contributed on this thread for the last days, too. So many interesting thoughts in elaborated posts.  :-* to all of you.


Nakymaton asked a specific question:
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Personally, I don't think that Ennis intended to have sex with Jack again after the first time, and that Jack is trying to give a reason why they can continue. I don't think Ennis intended for the second tent scene to happen... he seems to be fighting with himself until he finally heads for the tent. And he doesn't seem sure that's what he wants until he finally begins to respond to Jack's kiss.

(I wish Mikaela were here for this conversation... I think she had an insight based on the subtitles on the version of the movie that played in her country.

I'm not Mikaela, but I saw the movie dubbed in another language. In my language the sentence in question was: "This was a one-shot-thing."
Nothing with "going on here" and clearly in past tense. This backs up your interpretation, that Ennis didn't intend for a second tent scene. But it has only a limited weight, because there are many clear mistakes in the dubbed version. For example, they mix up "elk" with "moose". And, at their last evening together, they let Jack say "Everytime I go to see the ranchneighbour's wife, somebody shoots at me."

My thought on this is that Ennis meant "only this summer", and therefore the present tense. The scene with Ennis at the campfire, fighting with his emotions, still makes sense with this interpreation.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: cricket99999 on June 06, 2006, 02:27:13 pm
And, at their last evening together, they let Jack say "Everytime I go to see the ranchneighbour's wife, somebody shoots at me."
No way!  :D

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 06, 2006, 02:39:54 pm
First, to goadra for "Your folks just stop at Ennis?":  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Second, about the one shot deal: I just had a sudden realization of why I interpret it as Ennis saying "this happened once, and won't happen again." Let's just say that I'm projecting, and although I know that at some level I'm always projecting my own stuff onto the characters, in this case I now know exactly what I'm projecting and why. (Though, just to play devil's advocate for a bit, what if Jack interpreted the statement followed by the 2nd tent scene to mean that Ennis had changed his mind about the "one shot deal," or that he didn't really mean it? Then Jack's actions that last day might make more sense. Maybe?? ;D Oh, hell, maybe I'd better just accept that I'll make any excuse necessary for that pair of pretty blue eyes and give it up. ;D )

Penthesilea - the elk/moose confusion makes sense. I think "elk" describes different animals in American and British English, though I can never remember which animal also lives in Europe. The British colonists mis-identified half the large hoofed mammals in America, I think... though there aren't elk (wapiti) out East now, and I don't think there were back then. Moose, white-tailed deer, caribou/reindeer, but I don't think there were elk. But I can never keep the history and the biology straight. Anyway, digression there...

So here's a question, especially for you story fans (Mel?). How much of this emotional/psychological stuff is there in the story, and how much is fully developed only in the film? Of course, the basic plot is certainly all there in the story. But I'll have to say that when I read it, I do not get as vivid a sense of how much Ennis' father's actions and attitudes emotionally damaged his son. I read it more simply: having witnessed Earl's awful fate, Ennis quite understandably considered it too dangerous to live with Jack. But I admit I don't fully appreciate the story as much as I should or could, so maybe I just didn't grasp this aspect in enough depth.

Well, part of Mikaela's brilliant post ( 8) ) deals with the contrast between the way Ennis appears to like his father, and the horrid experience his father subjected him to. The horrid experience is there in the story, but the contrast isn't, because none of the characters are as likeable as in the movie. (Not even Ennis and Jack, I think.) Annie Proulx just doesn't write likeable characters very much; she seems to have a really unsentimental (to say the least) view of human nature. (In fact, I think she's said that Ennis and Jack were the first of her characters that she fell in love with... and even then, only after she saw the movie. ! BTW, Katherine, I get the impression that AP is quite a Heathen herself after seeing the movie.  8) ) So perhaps it doesn't carry as much emotional weight because I didn't necessarily expect for a parent/child relationship to be anything better than mildly dysfunctional in one of AP's stories?

On the other hand, the story has another description of an incident that left Ennis emotionally damaged: the description of learning to punch K.E. comes right before the description of Earl and Rich's fate.

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Dad says, you got a take him unawares, don't say nothin to him, make him feel some pain, get out fast and keep doin it until he takes the message. Nothin like hurtin somebody to make him hear good.

That's not the same sort of abuse as taking a child to see a murdered man, but, geez. "Nothin like hurtin somebody to make him hear good?" And that's the explanation for Ennis's "dirty punch" -- the punch on the last day on the mountain. Between those two lessons, yeah, I think Ennis was pretty emotionally damaged. That's where I've gotten the idea that Ennis was trying to beat his own sexuality (and his love for Jack) into submission when he hit Jack... and every other time Ennis got into a fight, too.

It's not the same thing as the tension between loving a father and being emotionally abused by him, though.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 06, 2006, 06:03:36 pm
BTW, Katherine, I get the impression that AP is quite a Heathen herself after seeing the movie.

 :laugh: I've gotten that impression, too -- especially from her quote about how he came to understand the character better than she did.   :-*  Well, she is a woman over 35, so according to highly scientific research here at BetterMost, it's not statistically unlikely ...  :laugh:
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 06, 2006, 06:18:16 pm
Thanks for kind words on my previous post. :)

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From Penthesilea       

And, at their last evening together, they let Jack say "Everytime I go to see the ranchneighbour's wife, somebody shoots at me."

LOL! Somehow, that scene is the saddest one in the whole film to me - there's a deep melancholy and resignation there that is utterly painful. But hearing Jack say *that* every time would change that mood a bit for sure. Especially with Ennis laughing at it, too!  :o


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From Nakymaton quoting Annie Proulx   
Dad says, you got a take him unawares, don't say nothin to him, make him feel some pain, get out fast and keep doin it until he takes the message. Nothin like hurtin somebody to make him hear good.

In addition to what you say about this scene, Mel - which I completely agree with - there's another point to it that pertains to Ennis's relationship with his father. Ennis in the short story tells Jack how his father taught him to use his fists to solve the problem with his older brother beating on him all the time (emphasis mine):
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When I was about six he set me down and says, Ennis you've got a problem and you got a fix it or it's going to be with you until you're ninety.....
Another instance of high tragic irony there, that Ennis's father once showed him that if you can't stand it, you've got to fix it - *and* even when it may seem impossible, there's actually a possibility of fixing it!


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From Nakymaton     

the description of learning to punch K.E. comes right before the description of Earl and Rich's fate.
And the short story has one sentence that I find the most chilling of all in that sorry tale of murder and child abuse. Ennis is telling Jack about that incident when his father took his sons to see the murdered man, and among other things he says:
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Dad laughed about it.
Yeah, that Mr. Del Mar sure knew how to raise his sons right!  >:( >:(


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From Nakymaton

That's where I've gotten the idea that Ennis was trying to beat his own sexuality (and his love for Jack) into submission when he hit Jack... and every other time Ennis got into a fight, too.
Oh, what an observation that is - the most horrible win-win situation ever: If Ennis gets into a fight over some remark pertaining to his sexuality and wins, he's reaffirmed his manhood. But if he loses, he'ss thereby been helped with beating that unwanted part of his mind and psyche into submission. **shudders**


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From nakymaton

Annie Proulx just doesn't write likeable characters very much; she seems to have a really unsentimental (to say the least) view of human nature.

That's almost an understatement....... Reading the rest of "Close Range" depressed me so much, I could hardly stand it, it got me so disillusioned with human nature because of that unsentimental, frank and chilling description of the characters and their relationships. Her writing is fabulous, but her characters and story lines are far from the fairy tales, that's for sure......

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OK, perhaps a return to "Double Meanings" for me after all of that?

There are a number of lines that carry double meanings because they help bridging scenes, and so can be taken at face value or as a comment to the upcoming or previous scene. I think one of my favourites in that regard is Ennis rushing down the stairs and calling back to Alma concerning the cigarettes:

"They're in the bedroom."

And sure enough, in the next scene we get they *are* in the bedroom. At the Siesta.  ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 06, 2006, 07:20:29 pm
And sure enough, in the next scene we get they *are* in the bedroom. At the Siesta.  ;)

And smoking!  :-*
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 06, 2006, 07:26:48 pm
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And smoking!

 ;D    ;D


Sure enough!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 07, 2006, 12:13:54 am
Man, this movie is so incredibly ambiguous. I see the exact same scene and read it as, Ennis sitting by the campfire already knows that he wants to go into the tent but he's really nervous about it -- not just because he's homophobic but because this is something he's never done before (maybe with a woman, either) and he's both excited and fearful. When he finally does go in, he is perfectly willing but it's such a foreign experience for him that he's not exactly sure how to proceed and it takes him a while to relax into it. But, with help from Jack's "s'alrights," he does!

Before I respond to all the other conversation that's taken place since this comment... I just want to jump in and say that this is exactly how I read Ennis's behavior on the night of the 2nd tent scene too. To me his awkwardness is all about being nervous.  His little glance towards the tent to see what Jack's doing just speaks volumes to me about Ennis's "desire" here.  Also, we've talked before about how in this scene Ennis is warm (the fire is still high) and Jack does not call to him or overtly suggest that he come into the tent.  Ennis makes the move all on his own and without anything like "being cold" as an excuse.  This leads back into the contrasts between tent scene #1 and #2 (which is a whole topic of its own).  But, to pick up on nakymaton's point... at the exact moment that Ennis says "one shot deal" on the hillside... I still don't know what he's thinking.  Maybe he's so confused he doesn't know what he means himself. 

It's cute that they feel they need to have a conversation about it though... any conversation.  I also love that Jack went up the mountain to the sheep to sort of demonstrate his eagerness to guage Ennis's state of mind and that Ennis felt compelled to go and acknowledge the need to talk.

I'll have to come back to this thread tomorrow to jump into the rest of the conversation.  Gotta go grab 40 winks.
 :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 07, 2006, 06:12:50 am
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Ennis and Jack both use that phrase, and both talk about getting killed for it (Jack jokingly).

Very interesting. I hadn't made that connection.

I don't think they use the phrase the same way  - I think Jack is all too aware that the strength of his and Ennis's passion is as a blazing camp fire compared to the flickering match of what he's got going with Randall. So on the surface the expression is an euphemism in both cases for a connection with another, that they can't (Ennis) or won't(Jack) be more specific about when speaking out loud.

I do think that there may be a deliberate foreshadowing and foreboding in its use, though. Perhaps a symbolic warning to Ennis of what is to come, though if he ever realized that it wasn't till after Jack was dead.  :'(  The link in Ennis's mind between his particular use of the "this thing" expression and the immediate risk of gay bashing/death occurring is direct and strong. When Jack later uses the expression, it's about a relationship that doesn't carry the same depth of emotion or passion (IMO), - but it nevertheless carries exactly the same *risk* of gay bashing and death.

In fact, it's likely that it was Jack's "thing" with Randall that did get Jack killed.  (From information about deleted scenes/ shooting script I've seen,  it seems the film originally intended to be much less ambiguous about Jack's fate and the fact that he was gay bashed due to someone seeing him with Randall).
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 07, 2006, 08:34:05 am
I wasn’t sure where to ask this, but I’ve been wondering about “this thing.” Ennis and Jack both use that phrase, and both talk about getting killed for it (Jack jokingly). When Ennis uses it, he’s clearly talking about something serious. Jack’s surface meaning is that his “thing” is just a fling (Ennis takes it that way), but is there a double meaning, too? I really don’t like the idea of his using the phrase the same way as Ennis (no offense to Randall).

This thing: Good ideas, goadra and Mikaela. I agree they're not using the phrase the same way. But now that you point out the reference in both cases to gay bashing -- Jack unwittingly, of course -- I don't think it's accidental. In both cases it actually refers to gay relationship, and maybe Jack's use is a symbolic tipoff that his fling with the ranch foreman's wife is actually with the ranch foreman. Not that anyone would get it, neither Ennis nor 99.9 percent of the audience, but when did that ever stop them?

And goadra, I like your other translations, too! Cassie's "you're safe" could actually be read both ways -- with her, he's safe from other people's suspicions.

And "this ain't no rodeo" -- that's a nice reading of it. I'd like to hear nakymaton's other suggestions, as well. The whole lassooing thing -- Ennis casually tossing the first loop off, but then getting caught in the second, but fighting back -- seems kind of laden with subtext, doesn't it?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 08, 2006, 12:32:12 am
I can’t possibly address all the comments that have arrived today, so I’ll just post a few “double meaning” ideas (and then maybe get some sleep).

  • “I don’t need your money.” >> “It’s you I need.”
  • “This ain’t no rodeo, cowboy.” >> “What happened this summer means a lot more than ridin’ some piece of stock for 8 seconds.” (nakymaton suggested a couple others a while back)
  • “You’re wasting your time here.” >> “Working for me is a waste of your time.”
  • “Take your friend to the Knife & Fork.” >> If Alma said this after meeting Jack, she’d probably mean a real knife and fork.
  • “Oh, you got a kid?” >> “You’re more tied down than I thought.”
  • “You’re safe.” (Cassie) >> “Don’t worry, you’re not going to fall in love with me.”

I wasn’t sure where to ask this, but I’ve been wondering about “this thing.” Ennis and Jack both use that phrase, and both talk about getting killed for it (Jack jokingly). When Ennis uses it, he’s clearly talking about something serious. Jack’s surface meaning is that his “thing” is just a fling (Ennis takes it that way), but is there a double meaning, too? I really don’t like the idea of his using the phrase the same way as Ennis (no offense to Randall).

These are all great suggestions!  I like the "ain't no rodeo" idea and the "don't need your money" idea. 

I translate the words "thing" and "this" as "attraction," "affair", or even "love" depending on the circumstance.  In the motel Jack says "swear to God, I didn't know we were going to get into this again..." I see this word as parallel to Ennis's "thing."  It's interesting that Jack never says the word "love" to Ennis in the movie either (but we all tend to focus on this problem with Ennis's language towards Jack).  It seems that Jack's expression of affection is much less ambiguous than Ennis's (and the "sometimes I miss you so much..." line comes pretty close to "I love you"... I wonder if he was weighing whether or not he could safely say "I love you" to Ennis during that conversation).  But, Jack's still a little conflicted in his language too (often I do think this is because he's being very careful in always guaging how he thinks Ennis will react to certain things).  Here in the motel when Jack says "this" it's intriguingly coupled with "swear".  I keep coming back to this line, which seems fun and lighthearted of course, as also very significant. 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 08, 2006, 12:39:54 am
Here in the motel when Jack says "this" it's intriguingly coupled with "swear".  I keep coming back to this line, which seems fun and lighthearted of course, as also very significant. 

What I like is, it's the one time Jack seems more coy than Ennis. He may have redlined it, but Ennis was the one who got into this again, with no hesitation!

Mmm. I just love the reunion scene.  :-*
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 08, 2006, 12:43:42 am
And "this ain't no rodeo" -- that's a nice reading of it. I'd like to hear nakymaton's other suggestions, as well. The whole lassooing thing -- Ennis casually tossing the first loop off, but then getting caught in the second, but fighting back -- seems kind of laden with subtext, doesn't it?

First page of this thread. ;) After I stopped overanalyzing "Shit." goadra's is better than mine, though, I think. :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 08, 2006, 12:46:47 am
Sorry, Mel. I'm sure I have repeated my own posts on any number of occasions. In fact, I have caught myself doing it a few times.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on June 08, 2006, 01:50:01 pm
I just realized what you meant a few posts back, Katherine, about the lassoing: that the first and second toss of the lasso correspond to the first and second tent scenes. Is that what you meant? Maybe we can discuss this at Ted's (maybe I should mention that Ted refers to Ted Turner!!)  ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 08, 2006, 02:52:27 pm
I just realized what you meant a few posts back, Katherine, about the lassoing: that the first and second toss of the lasso correspond to the first and second tent scenes. Is that what you meant? Maybe we can discuss this at Ted's (maybe I should mention that Ted refers to Ted Turner!!)  ;)

No, that's not what I mean, though I wish it had been. Let's definitely discuss this at Ted's. And I'm even more excited to go there now that I know it's Ted Turner!
 :laugh:
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 08, 2006, 09:47:00 pm
Whoa and wow.  There's just so much going on in this thread it's hard to keep up!  So, I finally caught up with all the long posts about Ennis and the idea that his dad might have "done the job."  Sorry to return to a dark subject... but I wanted to add a few things.  Mikaela, and everyone, the discussion about that issue is just so interesting.  I have to say that I don't hear Ennis's use of the word "job" as meaning that he thinks of the murder:
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as nothing more than a job needed doing

I think important factors here are Ennis's tone of voice combined with some of the other things he says about Earl and Rich.  I feel like his tone of voice conveys deep resentment and disdain towards his father, and almost resignation towards how awful he was.  His matter-of-fact word and his tone make me think that he often thinks of his dad in extremely negative terms in his own head.  It's as if his pronouncement of his dad's horrendous behavior is the matter-of-fact situation here because he's come to think of his dad routinely in such a negative light.  Mikaela, I really like the contrast you've pointed out between Ennis's statements about his father that skew towards a positive impression for the audience in stark contrast to this Earl flashback.  But, I'm guessing that he privately thinks of his dad with huge amounts of disdain.  His choice of the word "job" sounds like he's trying to avoid using the word "murder" or "kill" in relation to his father... because even though he seems to understand this situation it's probably way too much psychologically to actually say explicitly that his father is a murder (although here he almost does this).  So, in a sense he choses the word "job" is a psychological defense mechanism.  And regarding his own attitude towards Earl and Rich, he pays them a compliment in calling them "tough old birds."  To me, this sets up a contrast between how his dad clearly saw the men and the (significanly more positive) opinion that Ennis had already formed or could form on his own.  I think he's saying he admired their courage for stoically putting up with lots of mocking and a difficult situation in the town where they lived.  The taunting they faced combined with the murder surely put a deep fear in Ennis about the consequences that could come from living with another man.  My guess is that if he was 9 years old when he saw Earl, he may already have already begun to feel a little different from other boys around him... or he was just on the verge of discovering this, so it was a particularly awful time for this trauma to happen.

It is chilling to think of the Earl story in relation to Ennis's empty threat to Jack about "all those things that I don't know" during the argument scene.  Given Ennis's background, it's a particularly awful thing to say.  But Jack here doesn't flinch or blink and eye.  He knows this is an empty statement (despite Ennis trying to seem so emphatic and serious about his stern warning).  Essentially, I don't think he means "job" in a literal way and I certainly don't think he really meant what he said to Jack during the lake scene.  These two instances are particularly good and complex examples of Ennis's very difficult relationship to language and verbal expression, I think.

 :-\
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: twistedude on June 08, 2006, 09:59:09 pm
"I got a kid. Eight months old. Smilea a lot."

"He's from Texas."

Both mean: excuse me, but I'm not in my right mind.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 08, 2006, 10:06:09 pm
"I got a kid. Eight months old. Smilea a lot."

"He's from Texas."

Both mean: excuse me, but I'm not in my right mind.

LOL.  :laugh: cute Julie.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 09, 2006, 01:08:12 am
Hey there Friends,

I decided to bump an old thread called "The Earl Flashback" http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php?action=post;topic=981.0;num_replies=18 (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php?action=post;topic=981.0;num_replies=18) here in the BBM Open Forum.  In case anyone's interested, some of the discussions there overlap with conversations here about the "done the job" issue.

 :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: jpwagoneer1964 on June 10, 2006, 10:40:35 am
Man, this movie is so incredibly ambiguous. I see the exact same scene and read it as, Ennis sitting by the campfire already knows that he wants to go into the tent but he's really nervous about it -- not just because he's homophobic but because this is something he's never done before (maybe with a woman, either) and he's both excited and fearful. When he finally does go in, he is perfectly willing but it's such a foreign experience for him that he's not exactly sure how to proceed and it takes him a while to relax into it. But, with help from Jack's "s'alrights," he does!
Did you notice on the mountian how the scene was held with them sitting so close. They likely remained there for quite some time. Also Jack made a special trip to where Ennis was to see him. Bet they hardly spoke or needed to during supper, just enjoying the closeness.
Also Ennis is waring the shirt Jack had washed that morning a well as the jeans.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 11, 2006, 05:46:17 am
Another of those bridging scenes double meanings: LaShawn says "....boy, were we behind the times". And the film cuts directly to someone else who's behind the times - Alma Jr., waiting for her daddy and apparently behind the times when it comes to recent developments (ie. Ennis having hooked up with Cassie).


Amanda, you've made many interesting points about Earl and Rich. I absolutely agree that Ennis had and still has a grudging respect for them. (I wonder how old they were when Ennis was 8. At that age, doesn't take a lot of years to appear "old".)  But on top of the respect the boy had for them before the gay bashing, I think his father's action instilled deepset fear and disgust of homosexuality into Ennis, whether it be in Earl and Rich or in himself, a disgust that he couldn't reconcile with the other parts of eithers' life . Ennis seems to tie himself in endless conflicted knots over that, and probably over how to think of his father and his actions as well. I think he's got quite a lot of grudging and mixed-up respect for his dad too, in addition to a lot of hurt anger and fear and  - probably - contempt. At any rate he's unable to speak out against his dad - or for Earl and Rich - without ambiguity and mixed-up emotions creeping in among his words.

I know Ennis uses the tire iron and risk of being killed as his reason for keeping Jack at a distance, but that's not the only or even main reason, IMO. He'd not be that afraid of physical violence and standing up to the threat of physical violence if he'd known himself to be in the right. But he doesn't  - some significant part of him thinks they'd be right for coming after him with tire irons, if he should decide to have a go at the "sweet life" that Jack wants. "Two guys living together - no way" doesn't only apply to what society at large would think about it, but to what Ennis himself truly believes as well, and the shame he can't manage to shake or alter even when the love of his life is at stake - till it's too late.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 11, 2006, 09:51:36 am
Another of those bridging scenes double meanings: LaShawn says "....boy, were we behind the times". And the film cuts directly to someone else who's behind the times - Alma Jr., waiting for her daddy and apparently behind the times when it comes to recent developments (ie. Ennis having hooked up with Cassie).

Really? You think Alma Jr. didn't know Ennis was seeing Cassie? I thought that Jr's expression said "oh, god, not HER again." Whether it's normal teenaged child-of-divorce jealousy, or whether Jr had a particular insight into her father, I don't know. (She seems like a really perceptive kid, doesn't she? I wonder how she would have interacted with Jack, if Ennis had ever given them more than two seconds to interact. I mean, she seems very perceptive, very caring, and very very fond of her father. And yet she's very much a product of her world... marrying a roughneck at age nineteen (!). (I'm a year or two younger than Jr, and grew up in a rural area, and marrying young versus going to college was a huge dividing line between my peers and me.) And, well... the kids I grew up with would not have been accepting of Ennis and Jack. :( I'm not proud of that; I'm ashamed to have grown up surrounded by that. But there it is.)

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"Two guys living together - no way" doesn't only apply to what society at large would think about it, but to what Ennis himself truly believes as well, and the shame he can't manage to shake or alter even when the love of his life is at stake - till it's too late.

That's how I read Ennis, as well. "Tied up in knots" is a really great way to describe him -- to acknowledge the contradictions between loving Jack (which he certainly does) and all the complicated shame and self-loathing that's there in Ennis as well.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on June 11, 2006, 01:08:01 pm
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From Mikaela
I know Ennis uses the tire iron and risk of being killed as his reason for keeping Jack at a distance, but that's not the only or even main reason, IMO. He'd not be that afraid of physical violence and standing up to the threat of physical violence if he'd known himself to be in the right. But he doesn't  - some significant part of him thinks they'd be right for coming after him with tire irons, if he should decide to have a go at the "sweet life" that Jack wants. "Two guys living together - no way" doesn't only apply to what society at large would think about it, but to what Ennis himself truly believes as well, and the shame he can't manage to shake or alter even when the love of his life is at stake - till it's too late.

Too true.  I think Ennis suffered from low self-esteem from childhood on (his habit of keeping to himself was a product of it).  His marriage helped heal that, gave him an accepted place in society and a wife and children who looked up to him.  When he made the decision to continue his homosexual relationship with Jack, he put that in danger. 

To preserve his tenuous hold on self-esteem, he had to look down on Jack as one of "those boys" and think of his passion for Jack only as "this thing."  If he were to set up housekeeping with Jack, then of course his family and friends would know he was one of "those boys," too.   Being the object of their contempt (and by association, his father's) was an insurmountable horror to him, a betrayal of his deepest wish to be accepted and respected in his life. 

The fact that he continued to take the risk of meeting Jack over the years was a testimony to how much Jack meant to him.  But I do think he blinded himself for a long time to the fact that what he felt for Jack was more than physical passion and friendship.  He was forced to acknowledge this by two things:  Alma's "outing" him at Thanksgiving, and when Jack finally hinted that he was ready to "quit" Ennis.  After this, he had to admit to himself that he was never going to fit in like he wanted to.  He belonged on Jack's side of the fence, and there was no more denying it.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 11, 2006, 10:31:09 pm
That's how I read Ennis, as well. "Tied up in knots" is a really great way to describe him -- to acknowledge the contradictions between loving Jack (which he certainly does) and all the complicated shame and self-loathing that's there in Ennis as well.

Hey there Nakymaton, Meryl and Mikaela,

Wow, you've all made great points.  This topic leads in some pretty depressing directions.  :'(  The one common denominator I think is just how tormented Ennis is.  The knots metaphor seems just right. 

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Alma's "outing" him at Thanksgiving, and when Jack finally hinted that he was ready to "quit" Ennis.  After this, he had to admit to himself that he was never going to fit in like he wanted to.  He belonged on Jack's side of the fence, and there was no more denying it.

Meryl, I think this is also very good.  I wonder if there was a moment earlier in the film though when Ennis first got a taste of worrying about possibly losing Jack.  I've always wondered about the way Ennis says "Jack" so emphatically in the post-divorce fiasco scene.  When Jack turns to go Ennis says 'Jack' and has a really concerned look on his face.  I mean he's been concerned during this whole encounter, but it seems pretty clear to me that he shifts his worry (appropriately) away from the passing truck to worrying about what he's doing to Jack. 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 12, 2006, 04:35:41 am
Amanda, Mel, Meryl: Great and insightful posts.   :)

Really? You think Alma Jr. didn't know Ennis was seeing Cassie? I thought that Jr's expression said "oh, god, not HER again." Whether it's normal teenaged child-of-divorce jealousy, or whether Jr had a particular insight into her father, I don't know. (She seems like a really perceptive kid, doesn't she? I wonder how she would have interacted with Jack, if Ennis had ever given them more than two seconds to interact. I mean, she seems very perceptive, very caring, and very very fond of her father. And yet she's very much a product of her world... marrying a roughneck at age nineteen (!).

Yes, the bright Alma Jr. marrying at age ninteen is one of the events that really remind me that the world of rural Wyoming in the 1980's does not equal my own experiences and recollection of that time - I'm of an age with Junior and I don't personally know a single person of my age group that got married at that age, whether they contiued their education post high school or not. Marrying in your teens? Nope. Very rarely seen. Someone like Alma Jr. would certainly not have done so. It's one of many little reminders to me that I can't completely relate to and understand this world and this place and the character's background and reactions  - however much I'd like to think so, and however much I feel I know all the characters personally. All the more do I appreciate the perspectives of all of you here on this board!  :-* And then, the underlying themes are universal at any rate.

That aside, I got the feeling that Junior was happily anticipating a day alone with her dad, and that her heart fell when this woman was sitting in the car. However, Cassie picks up Ennis in 1978 and the Junior/Cassie/Ennis scene is in 1979, so you're right that Junior must have heard of Cassie before then. Perhaps she'd never actuallly *met* her though - until that point in time.

It's intrigueing to try and decipher Junior's words and actions in relation to Cassie, - how much is girlish jealousy and how much is a deeper (perhaps subconscious) understanding that Cassie is not right for Ennis, that he needs someone and something entirely else. Both the " not the marrying kind" line and her asking to be allowed to move in with Ennis could be seen as related to either such interpretation.

I think Jack would have charmed the socks off Junior, if given half the chance, and if she'd been able to look past the "queer" issue for a moment. And I think she would have been able to do that, and her sister too. When beloved family is involved, it's much more difficult to ride the principled high horse. (Doesn't even the Vice President of the USA prove that?) I think his daughters would have loved Ennis even if they'd learned the truth. I like them; - I can't bring myself to believe anything else. Rural Wyoming or no.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 12, 2006, 10:40:23 pm
I think Jack would have charmed the socks off Junior, if given half the chance, and if she'd been able to look past the "queer" issue for a moment. And I think she would have been able to do that, and her sister too. When beloved family is involved, it's much more difficult to ride the principled high horse. (Doesn't even the Vice President of the USA prove that?) I think his daughters would have loved Ennis even if they'd learned the truth. I like them; - I can't bring myself to believe anything else. Rural Wyoming or no.

Heya,

I like to think that Jack is the type who's really good with kids in general (even though Proulx tells us he never really wanted kids of his own).  His concern over Bobby's troubles in school, I'm sure, is meant to show us that Jack's trying to be a responsible parent... and the scene where he lets Bobby drive the tractor for a second certainly shows us that he was fun around kids too.  I wonder if Ennis was curious about Jack's family.  Jack at least had the insight of getting to meet not only Alma but also the girls... if only briefly.

Ennis's statement to Jack about kids during the second-to-last camping trip has always struck me as odd.  So, I'll bring it up here... not quite a double meaning... but a meaning that I wonder about.  He comes out with that sort of convoluted, sarcastic remark that goes something like... "Sure, and you could try to convince Alma to let you and Lureen adopt the girls. And money would rain down from L.D. Newsome and we could just live together herding sheep and whiskey would flow in the stream..."

When you think about it... this is a really wierd thing for Ennis to even think of... why would Jack and Lureen adopt Ennis's kids under any circumstances?  It's sad that Ennis can't wrap his head around any scenario that would allow Jack and Ennis to raise their kids together (this I know would be way too progressive for Ennis to consider or even imagine as a possibility), but still... why is this idea of Jack and Lureen adopting the girls a solution he even imagines (even in his sarcastic state of mind).  I truly don't know how to interpret it.

The other sad thing I think, is that even in his sarcasm he realizes that living together with Jack herding sheep was the best time of his life (and that he probably really would like to do that in an ideal world).

 :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Jeff Wrangler on June 12, 2006, 10:58:37 pm
Too true.  I think Ennis suffered from low self-esteem from childhood on (his habit of keeping to himself was a product of it).  His marriage helped heal that, gave him an accepted place in society and a wife and children who looked up to him.  When he made the decision to continue his homosexual relationship with Jack, he put that in danger. 

To preserve his tenuous hold on self-esteem, he had to look down on Jack as one of "those boys" and think of his passion for Jack only as "this thing."  If he were to set up housekeeping with Jack, then of course his family and friends would know he was one of "those boys," too.   Being the object of their contempt (and by association, his father's) was an insurmountable horror to him, a betrayal of his deepest wish to be accepted and respected in his life. 

The fact that he continued to take the risk of meeting Jack over the years was a testimony to how much Jack meant to him.  But I do think he blinded himself for a long time to the fact that what he felt for Jack was more than physical passion and friendship.  He was forced to acknowledge this by two things:  Alma's "outing" him at Thanksgiving, and when Jack finally hinted that he was ready to "quit" Ennis.  After this, he had to admit to himself that he was never going to fit in like he wanted to.  He belonged on Jack's side of the fence, and there was no more denying it.

Very well and succinctly put, Meryl. Thank you!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on June 13, 2006, 12:08:22 am
Thank you, Jeff, I appreciate your commenting on it!  :-*
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 13, 2006, 12:40:28 am
"Sure, and you could try to convince Alma to let you and Lureen adopt the girls. And money would rain down from L.D. Newsome and we could just live together herding sheep and whiskey would flow in the stream..."

When you think about it... this is a really wierd thing for Ennis to even think of... why would Jack and Lureen adopt Ennis's kids under any circumstances?  It's sad that Ennis can't wrap his head around any scenario that would allow Jack and Ennis to raise their kids together (this I know would be way too progressive for Ennis to consider or even imagine as a possibility), but still... why is this idea of Jack and Lureen adopting the girls a solution he even imagines (even in his sarcastic state of mind).  I truly don't know how to interpret it.

The other sad thing I think, is that even in his sarcasm he realizes that living together with Jack herding sheep was the best time of his life (and that he probably really would like to do that in an ideal world).

 :'(

Hi everybody!

Amanda, I definitely agree that the line suggests that Ennis thinks of that time as his ideal world -- so ideal as to be, at that point, an unrealistic fantasy. That's so touchingly underlined later when Lureen, quoting Jack, echoes the whiskey phrase (a moment made all the more hearbreaking  :'( when Ennis is slightly smiles, amid his grief, at the memory and knowledge that Jack had felt the same way and repeated the phrase).

As for the adopting the girls thing, my impression was that he was being sarcastic -- he meant that, among all the other pie-in-the-sky aspects of the suggestions, he couldn't see leaving the girls behind, which made moving to Texas even more of an impossibility.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 13, 2006, 06:16:15 am
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he couldn't see leaving the girls behind, which made moving to Texas even more of an impossibility.

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I wonder if Ennis was curious about Jack's family.

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the scene where he lets Bobby drive the tractor for a second certainly shows us that he was fun around kids too.

One thing I'm so very, very grateful for, is the way the film depicts the two men as fathers. It omits a couple of unflattering scenes from the short story (Jack saying he didn't want any kids, Ennis giving up on seeing his daughters after the Thanksgiving fiasco) and instead inserts scenes that show the two of them caring for and loving their kids (such as Jack and Bobby's tractor ride, Jack being the one of Bobby's parents who has been nagging the school).

The depiction of both of them as fathers is a direct contrast to how we learn that their own fathers treated *them*. That is all the more remarkable because abused or mistreated children very often end up being violent or abusive towards their own children in their turn. I'm so very happy for this characterization choice - I expect much of it is directly attributable to Ang Lee.

In the film, with the way Ennis focuses on his girls, and the way he several times asks Jack about Lureen, it's strange that after the Reunion they never are seen specifically discussing Bobby, or Jack's relationship with his son. Neither do either of them or the film address how Jack, who appears to love his son, still seems so ready to just leave everything behind, including Bobby..... Perhaps Jack too feels, like his father-in-law does, for the longest time that his son is mostly a Newsome? I get the feeling that it's Jack holding off talking about Bobby - that Ennis would not have minded doing so.

Jack and Ennis never get far enough into considering a life together to talk about what their staying together would mean for their children, in terms of possible ostracism, for instance. (That's actually and sadly still a hot topic *today* in political discussions in the country where I live, in debating whether married gay couples should have full adoption rights, which they do not have today.) Ennis's quip about Jack and Lureen adopting the girls, - which I agree means he can't put his head around leaving his girls behind, figuratively and literally speaking; - may possibly be the closest the film comes to addressing the issue of impact on their children. That, plus the fact that IMO one of the several reasons why Alma keeps silent, even under and after the divorce, is the thought of how it would affect their daughters, should the true nature of Ennis's fishing trips ever become known in the family or - even worse - public knowledge.

I should try and twist this someehow back on topic, I suppose. Jack's and Bobby's tractor ride. I adore that little scene. I can just imagine how wonderful the little boy thinks it is, being trusted to drive that huge tractor. And it gives more depth to something Jack says earlier, because it's such a complete and intentional and beautiful contrast to it: "Never taught me a thing. Never once come to see me ride".
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 13, 2006, 11:23:13 am
Mikaela, I have been thinking of starting a thread about relationships between parents and children in the movie and story. I'm inspired in part by your comment earlier that you'd thought a lot about this topic, and by insightful comments you and others have made. I will go ahead and do it; hope you will contribute more of your thoughts!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: ottoblom on June 13, 2006, 02:13:38 pm
New here from davecullen, and I love this thread, and just wanted to throw in my favorite double meaning line:

Aguirre's "Some of these never went up there with you."
Jack and Ennis came off the mountain changed forever.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on June 13, 2006, 02:32:45 pm
Welcome Ottoblom!! That is a great line!! The first time I read that part, I thought Aguirre was saying, how the hell did you make the sheep multiply up there? It was a faintly Biblical reference, like the loaves and the fishes. Notice he goes on to say, Count ain't what I hoped, neither. He avoids saying whether the count was more or less than it should have been. His comments are in line with the previous ones: Aguirre thought I could control the weather, and Not unless you can cure pneumonia.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on June 13, 2006, 02:42:49 pm
There are several such lines in the last lake scene:

"What in hell happened to August?" What happened to our lives?
"I'll be runnin the baler all August" I'll be caught up in my own loop (of wire, no less)
"Lighten up, Jack" Don't let your fire for me go out.
"Kill a nice elk." Regain Brokeback Mountain.
"I did once." Topic of another thread, but essentially means, I give up. Jack, the thinker no more.
"What we got now is Brokeback Mountain." We had paradise and we squandered it.
"I wish I knew how to quit you." I'll stand with you though I'm a fixer at heart.
"I can't stand it no more." Please fix me, I've stood as long as I can.
"Damn you Ennis." I love you Ennis. You're breaking my heart.


Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 14, 2006, 05:03:30 am
Hi, and welcome Ottoblom!


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From Front-Ranger:

"Damn you Ennis."
= I love you Ennis. You're breaking my heart.


Yes, the way the guys keep using derogatory comments as endearments gives us double meanings for sure. Funny thing is, one such double meaning actuallly shows up in the translations I've seen of BBM into my language; -

The "son of a bitch" during the reunion hug.

In the published translation of "Close Range" this is translated as "good old buddy" ie. an endearment, describing and directed at the person.

While in the translated captions for the film, the same was translated as the equivalent of "Wow!" or "Oh My God!" ie. describing the speaker's emotion over the whole situation.

Of course, it's really intended to convey both.  :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 14, 2006, 09:37:25 am
"Kill us a nice elk."

I was thinking this morning about how much that line stands out. Others (Amanda?) have pointed out how elk symbolizes their relationship and the compromises they make for each other, as an elk solved the sheep/beans conflict on Brokeback. So implicitly he's talking about making a compromise and restoring peace.

But it's funny in this context, because it's hard to imagine them taking the time to hunt and dress a huge animal. After all, they never even bother to fish!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on June 15, 2006, 12:36:21 am
"Kill us a nice elk."

I was thinking this morning about how much that line stands out. Others (Amanda?) have pointed out how elk symbolizes their relationship and the compromises they make for each other, as an elk solved the sheep/beans conflict on Brokeback. So implicitly he's talking about making a compromise and restoring peace.

But it's funny in this context, because it's hard to imagine them taking the time to hunt and dress a huge animal. After all, they never even bother to fish!


Well, yes, I think elk is really important in their relationship.  My spin on elk though is that I think it functions as an aphrodisiac.  They have one of their very first moment of physical contact during the elk hunt on Brokeback and they clearly bond a lot over eating the elk, etc.  And then there's the wonderful Elks building that Ennis drives by in the lead up to the reunion scene (he's on his way back to the apartment right before Alma tells him about the arrival of Jack's first postcard).  So, I see this elk building as a sign that their romance is about to be rekindled... it's also sets up a great contrast between the mountain and town (on the mtn. elk is a wild animal while in town elk is a sad, unappealing building).  Then in the argument scene I think Ennis is definitely trying to make a compromise... he's trying all sorts of things to try to calm Jack down.  And, mentioning elk, I think really is meant to evoke some romantic nostalgia in Jack.  But, Jack is too angry/ hurt here to focus on it. 

And I think you're right, Katherine, at this particular moment neither of them probably cares very much about the actual act of hunting... It sort of functions as a code for dealing with their relationship.  Ennis mentions elk because he wants Jack to "lighten up" and Jack ignores it because he's mad at Ennis.  But, maybe it's a bad sign that Jack is somehow able to ignore it.  Ennis's use of the word "kill" in reference to the elk seems ominous too.  I guess most of this scene has an ominous feel to it...

 :-\
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 15, 2006, 12:55:11 am
Ennis's use of the word "kill" in reference to the elk seems ominous too.  I guess most of this scene has an ominous feel to it...
 :-\

That's for sure!

And that's a good way to express the elk metaphor. The elk hunt on Brokeback is the first time we see them touch each other, in that cute flirtatious way. And good point about the mountain/town contrast. The ways in which lovely mountain images are echoed in bleak town images could probably make a whole thread, I'll bet. The only one I can think of offhand is the water from the river vs. Alma's dishwater and laundry water. But maybe there are others ...

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: jpwagoneer1964 on June 15, 2006, 01:17:41 am
"Kill us a nice elk."

I was thinking this morning about how much that line stands out. Others (Amanda?) have pointed out how elk symbolizes their relationship and the compromises they make for each other, as an elk solved the sheep/beans conflict on Brokeback. So implicitly he's talking about making a compromise and restoring peace.

But it's funny in this context, because it's hard to imagine them taking the time to hunt and dress a huge animal. After all, they never even bother to fish!

I think the did some fishing. In the middle camping trip Ennis is shown getting out of his truck with all his gear. The river was always near and they had to eat.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 15, 2006, 01:30:33 am
I think the did some fishing. In the middle camping trip Ennis is shown getting out of his truck with all his gear. The river was always near and they had to eat.

You would think so. But I was thinking about how the price tag was still on the tackle after five years, and how Alma's note had never seen water in its life, and how they never brought any fish home.

In a long-ago comic thread, there was a line advising that cowboys on fishing trips should: "Always bring some fish home. Make sure it is thawed by the time you get there."
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 15, 2006, 08:17:48 am
I think Ennis and Jack don't fish on their trips because Ennis deliberately avoids fishing.

The "fishing buddies" tale popped out of nowhere when Alma asked how Ennis knew Jack, - and just there and then Ennis had a narrative safety buffer he seemed to need in compartmentalizing his married life from his love for Jack.

He has to tell his family *something*, however little, after those trips - and he evidently comes home spinning tales specifically about the fishing (based on what he told Alma after that trip when we *know* he didn't fish). In talking about fishing that never occurred, I think Ennis manages to limit the risk that anything of the real events and his real emotions, ever creep into what he tells Alma. He doesn't have to sift through his trips to tell censored half-truths, and everything real and true about his relationship with Jack remains all the more hidden safely away in his mind and heart and memory.

Otherwise I can't really see why Jack and Ennis wouldn't fish, being so close to running streams and having the fishing gear available. From the glimpses we get of their outings, there's focus on food and drink, and it's not like they spend all their time cuddling in the tent (more's the pity... ) ,and they did apparaently actually go hunting at one time. So realistically they would do some fishing unless they specifically decided not to.
 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on June 15, 2006, 09:52:48 am
Maybe they don't really like fish (whether in tacos or not ;D ). Hey, I can understand that!

I like Mikaela's explanation. And I don't know if this fits in at all, but there's this tradition of guys who fish telling made-up storied about the big one that got away... so maybe it feels more natural to lie about fishing?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 16, 2006, 01:34:07 pm
.......there's this tradition of guys who fish telling made-up storied about the big one that got away... so maybe it feels more natural to lie about fishing?

Hmmmmm......Based on that it's tempting to start looking for tall tale innuendo providing the double meaning in Ennis's tale that he "caught a bunch of browns and ate them up". But nope, I won't do that. 
Instead I'll point to the double meaning in  "That line hadn't touched water in its life!". It not only describes Alma's discovery, but is symbolic of the intended emotional and deeply personal connection that's never present between the two of them in all of Ennis's and Alma's marriage.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 16, 2006, 02:43:39 pm
Instead I'll point to the double meaning in  "That line hadn't touched water in its life!". It not only describes Alma's discovery, but is symbolic of the intended emotional and deeply personal connection that's never present between the two of them in all of Ennis's and Alma's marriage.

Oooh! Good one, Mikaela! If water is a metaphor for true love and passion and all that stuff ... then here it is again! Alma stands there washing dishes in her dull "society" water (i.e., tap water), furious and hurt that the symbol of her love for Ennis (the note) never in its life touched the kind of water that courses through Jack and Ennis' relationship.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: belbbmfan on June 16, 2006, 03:42:45 pm
Instead I'll point to the double meaning in  "That line hadn't touched water in its life!". It not only describes Alma's discovery, but is symbolic of the intended emotional and deeply personal connection that's never present between the two of them in all of Ennis's and Alma's marriage.

Oooh! Good one, Mikaela! If water is a metaphor for true love and passion and all that stuff ... then here it is again! Alma stands there washing dishes in her dull "society" water (i.e., tap water), furious and hurt that the symbol of her love for Ennis (the note) never in its life touched the kind of water that courses through Jack and Ennis' relationship.
These points are fantastic, I never thought there was a deeper meaning in Alma's words.
I was thinking about 'when you don't got nothing, then you don't need nothing'.
I guess Ennis was trying to put a brave face on the sad state of his life for Junior. And if Ennis was only talking about the furniture, I might just have believed him. But moments later, we and Ennis see the shirts and the immens tragedy of Ennis never being able to tell Jack what he really needed and therefore never getting that sweet life becomes so painfully clear. :'(

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on June 23, 2006, 09:13:26 pm
I am reading through this thread and thinking .... Whoa!! You guys are very deep. I am a lot more simplistic. Here's one ...

When Alma says to Ennis,
"... And then you come back lookin' all perky and said you caught a bunch of browns and you ate them up."

The obvious interpretation is she knows what he has been up to with Jack.

Another interpretation is that "perky" could represent a phallic symbol and the "caught a bunch of browns"  could represent Jack. I will go no further with this interpretation.

(I hope all of you know that I tend to have a very saracastic sense of humor. :laugh:)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 24, 2006, 05:37:24 am
Good to see this thread having a revival. :) Hi, dly64 nice to meet you.

I was thinking of returning to one of the much-discussed lines in the film: I just can't stand this anymore, Jack - with Ennis crumbling to his knees.  Thinking of how that statement and Ennis's inability to keep on his feet illustrates the double meaning of the verb "to stand".

It suddenly made me link to the famous "A house divided against itself cannot stand". That's a perfect description of Ennis, IMO - he's been divided against himself since he met Jack, one part of him battling the other, and the foundations have crumbled day by day. Now at their last meeting he can't stand, and he can't stand it, any more.

**Sniff**
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on June 24, 2006, 11:02:39 am
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By dly64
Another interpretation is that "perky" could represent a phallic symbol and the "caught a bunch of browns"  could represent Jack. I will go no further with this interpretation.

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It suddenly made me link to the famous "A house divided against itself cannot stand". That's a perfect description of Ennis, IMO - he's been divided against himself since he met Jack, one part of him battling the other, and the foundations have crumbled day by day. Now at their last meeting he can't stand, and he can't stand it, any more.

They never had to say those three-little-words. They demonstrated the sentiment far better through their actions. And Ennis showed it through his suffering--collapsing, dry heaves, tears all point up the complexity and depth of what he felt for Jack. If he’d never met Jack, maybe he could have suppressed/denied certain parts of his psyche, but “once burned” by love....Imagine that the “cause” of your pain is also the only person you can turn to for comfort, the only person who understands. Ennis so desperately clutches Jack’s coat. Jack holds Ennis so tenderly.

“It’s a short story, honey, it was only about 3 seconds I was on that bronc.” >> “It was only about 3 months I was on that mountain. Next thing I knew...”

Triple play!  Thanks, Friends.  That's the way to revive a thread, and a great way to start my Saturday.  8)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on June 24, 2006, 07:13:38 pm
I was thinking of returning to one of the much-discussed lines in the film: I just can't stand this anymore, Jack - with Ennis crumbling to his knees.  Thinking of how that statement and Ennis's inability to keep on his feet illustrates the double meaning of the verb "to stand".

It suddenly made me link to the famous "A house divided against itself cannot stand". That's a perfect description of Ennis, IMO - he's been divided against himself since he met Jack, one part of him battling the other, and the foundations have crumbled day by day. Now at their last meeting he can't stand, and he can't stand it, any more.

The whole .... "I can't stand it" ... begins after Jack and Ennis' reunion:

Ennis: "If you can't fix it Jack ... you gotta stand it."
Jack:"For how long?"
Ennis:"As long as we can ride it .... Ain't no reigns on this one."

The last time Jack and Ennis are together, Jack says to Ennis (in one of my favorite lines):
"I tell ya what ..... the truth is .... sometimes I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

And then there is Ennis' line to Jack after they have their row:
"I can't stand this anymore, Jack," and collapses in Jack's arms.

I don't think it is a coincidence. It is almost as if the story has bookends ... from the beginning of their affair (after their four year hiatus) to the last time they are together. Additionally, Ennis' collapsing into Jack's arms mirrors his collapse after he and Jack separate. The last time, however, Jack is there to catch Ennis. I think all of this symbolizes the end of their relationship in life (albeit unbeknownst to both of them).  Ennis' collapse ... feeling like he did when Jack left him at BBM .... could be a foreshadowing of the pain when he finds that Jack has left him again.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 24, 2006, 08:18:02 pm
It is almost as if the story has bookends ... from the beginning of their affair (after their four year hiatus) to the last time they are together. Additionally, Ennis' collapsing into Jack's arms mirrors his collapse after he and Jack separate. The last time, however, Jack is there to catch Ennis. I think all of this symbolizes the end of their relationship in life (albeit unbeknownst to both of them).  Ennis' collapse ... feeling like he did when Jack left him at BBM .... could be a foreshadowing of the pain when he finds that Jack has left him again.

This is why the point at which I always burst into tears is the dozy embrace. Well, for several reasons, actually. But a big one is the way, at the end, Ennis says "Gotta go, see you in the morning." Ennis always has to leave, and he always assumes they'll see each other in the morning. Once, they almost don't. The second time, they really don't.

Have I posted this already on this very thread? If so, sorry.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on June 24, 2006, 09:06:27 pm
This is why the point at which I always burst into tears is the dozy embrace. Well, for several reasons, actually. But a big one is the way, at the end, Ennis says "Gotta go, see you in the morning." Ennis always has to leave, and he always assumes they'll see each other in the morning. Once, they almost don't. The second time, they really don't.

I agree with you re: the symbolism of Ennis always leaving. I also see this scene as Jack remembering the depth of his love for Ennis. The book says:

What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither explain nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close, the silent embrace  satisfying some shared and sexless hunger ...... Later, that dozy embrace solidified in his memory as the single moment of artless, charmed happiness in their separate and difficult lives."

OMG!! This is one scene (of many) that just kills me!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 25, 2006, 01:17:19 pm
Wow! My 200th post already! Brokeback did get me good. Not that I've been in any doubt about that since December-05.

I'm going to spend the bi-centenary post on the double meanings on a very obscure line of dialogue. (I've just had confirmation in another thread that I'm not the only onw who's hearing this - and one variant of it has been left included in the final published script which also indicates it's actually still there in the film.) As Jack and Ennis is riding through woodland and over moss, Jack in his blue parka (right before the switch to the scene with Jack and Bobby in the tractor), Jack says:

"I wish I could rope a coyote."

Which is a joke, of course - but which also reminds us (and probably Ennis) of Jack's roping Ennis that last day up on Brokeback, - all the strong elements of love and pain mixed in with that memory.

It's also a reminder of Jack's "dumb-ass missin'" and inability to *shoot* coyotes. It's an indication of Jack's personality - he isn't about to just give up,- if he can't make it one way he'll look for another means to the desired end.....

And what are the Brokeback Coyotes symbolic of? They're predators, the threat to the flock and the killer of that particular sheep that serves as a warning and omen to Ennis after the FNIT/TS1.... So can the sentence symbolically be understood as Jack wanting to rope and tie and render inactive the forces threatening his and Ennis's love? Or is Jack's wish rather illustrating the certain unrealistic and dangerous element in his dreams: What would he ever do with a coyote, how would he manage to handle it, or that which it symbolizes; - should he manage to rope it?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 25, 2006, 01:29:00 pm
And what are the Brokeback Coyotes symbolic of? They're predators, the treath to the flock and the killer of that particular sheep that serves as a warning and omen to Ennis after the FNIT/TS1.... So can the sentence symbolically be understood as Jack wanting to rope and tie and render inactive the forces threatening his and Ennis's love? Or is Jack's wish rather illustrating the certain unrealistic and dangerous element in his dreams: What would he ever do with a coyote, how would he manage to handle it, or that which it symbolizes; - should he manage to rope it?

I pick A. But both are quite plausible. What a funny movie! One in which you can find deeper meaning in a line that only 2 percent of viewers will be able to hear, and of those, only 2 percent will be able to detect a second layer of meaning! So what is 2 percent of 2 percent ... those of you people with math skills? Is that .0004 percent of viewers?

Oh, and Mikaela -- I note your use of FNIT/TS1. Am I correct in suspecting you noticed a discussion on that subject in another thread? Tell you what, how bout I start a poll about this and we can determine once and for all our official terminology!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on June 25, 2006, 01:41:57 pm
Yes, you are correct in your suspicion. I'd just like to make sure the scene(s) in question are identified and the abbreviation understood by the readers. So I'll abide by any consensus that this board might reach in that regard.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on June 25, 2006, 01:48:18 pm
Not only is Ennis always leaving Jack, but Ennis is not there when Jack needs him. Jack always has to face the hostile world by himself, tho Ennis would make the perfect champion for him. Two times when Aguirre comes bringing bad news Ennis is away, and later when Jack goes back and has to endure humiliation by Aguirre. Then, Jack dies because there is no one there to turn him over and keep him from drowning. Ennis is left alone because he left Jack alone when he really needed him.  :'(
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 25, 2006, 01:49:25 pm
OK, done. Here's the poll. Let the voting begin!

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php?topic=2853.0 (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php?topic=2853.0)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: OldeSoul on June 25, 2006, 06:11:35 pm
Wow- just spent a good while reading through this entire thread and tell you what, you guys are freakin amazing.

Jack:
When Jack pulls up to Ennis’s house after the divorce, you can hear on Jack’s radio: “...went nuts for it!” >> “Jack went nuts for Ennis” (or vice versa]
Also, after Jack drives off, while he's crying, the line of the Emmylou Harris song that is playing during that scene is "...your laughter's like wind in my sails..." which I always took to be a nod towards the Jack/Wind relationship. And now Jack is obviously not laughing (it's actually the only time in the movie that we see him cry, isn't it?)

And if you don't mind me interjecting a line:

When Aguirre comes up the Mountain to tell Jack that his Uncle Harold is in the hospital,
Jack: Bad news, but there's nothing I can do about it up here.
Aguirre: Not much you can do about it down there neither, unless you can cure pneumonia. (as he is looking at Ennis, displeased, through his binoculars)


I've always taken this to be somewhat of a rebuttal to the "one shot thing" line. In other words, this "thing" is not going to go away just because you come down off the mountain. And also, that Jack (and Ennis, I suppose) are powerless to change the way they feel.

And on top of that, I see the binoculars (or Aguirre's use of the binoculars- he wouldn't have seen Jack and Ennis together without them, unless he came up the mountain himself and happened upon them) as a representation of how society and government is stepping over their bounds in regulating the behavior of homosexuals: sodomy laws, not allowing homosexuals to marry, etc. Why should it even bother anyone? And yet they go at great lengths (i.e. use their big binoculars) to spy on and regulate even the most private and remote parts of human experience.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on June 25, 2006, 08:50:17 pm
And on top of that, I see the binoculars (or Aguirre's use of the binoculars- he wouldn't have seen Jack and Ennis together without them, unless he came up the mountain himself and happened upon them) as a representation of how society and government is stepping over their bounds in regulating the behavior of homosexuals: sodomy laws, not allowing homosexuals to marry, etc. Why should it even bother anyone? And yet they go at great lengths (i.e. use their big binoculars) to spy on and regulate even the most private and remote parts of human experience.

I think it is interesting that you use this analogy.There may be some truth in what you say. However, I want to avoid the expectation that BBM is a vehicle to express a larger social message. IMO, this film is a tragic story specifically about these two men who love each other, who live in a time and place where they don't know what to do with their love, and eventually hurt everyone around them, including each other. Although this is a simplistic way of describing BBM, I think it is the backbone of the whole story. (i.e. it is the personal love story between  Jack and Ennis).
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: OldeSoul on June 25, 2006, 09:34:12 pm
I think it is interesting that you use this analogy.There may be some truth in what you say. However, I want to avoid the expectation that BBM is a vehicle to express a larger social message. IMO, this film is a tragic story specifically about these two men who love each other, who live in a time and place where they don't know what to do with their love, and eventually hurt everyone around them, including each other. Although this is a simplistic way of describing BBM, I think it is the backbone of the whole story. (i.e. it is the personal love story between  Jack and Ennis).
Oh I definitely understand and hesitated to even include this, because I agree that BBM doesn't necessarily strive to make any commentary on society as a whole (outside of the story itself and its effect on the two men), just as some people are hesitant to read any deeper religious symbolism into it, either. But when I see those binoculars and how he used them- it has a great meaning for me personally.  :)

Am I interpreting the Aguirre conversation correctly, though, do you all think? I always knew there was something deeper there.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on June 25, 2006, 09:55:41 pm
Aguirre: Not much you can do about it down there neither, unless you can cure pneumonia. (as he is looking at Ennis, displeased, through his binoculars)[/b]

I've always taken this to be somewhat of a rebuttal to the "one shot thing" line. In other words, this "thing" is not going to go away just because you come down off the mountain. And also, that Jack (and Ennis, I suppose) are powerless to change the way they feel.

I have a more simplistic view ... I just think it is Aguirre's way of showing that he knows what is going on and that he's not too pleased.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on June 26, 2006, 03:56:32 am
IMO, this film is a tragic story specifically about these two men who love each other, who live in a time and place where they don't know what to do with their love, and eventually hurt everyone around them, including each other. Although this is a simplistic way of describing BBM, I think it is the backbone of the whole story. (i.e. it is the personal love story between  Jack and Ennis).

IMO, one of the most amazing things about BBM is that it is completely both at the same time. It is a personal love story with no overt message at all. If a Martian watched it, he/she/it would be oblivious to any larger political implications.

Meanwhile, the story subtly plays upon what viewers know about real life, and tells us something about what society imposes on gay people in general, in 1960s Wyoming as well as in many other eras and cultures. For example, the very fact that the final images involve closets -- the word we happen to use to describe hidden homosexuality -- is not the least bit accidental. The beauty is that it's never at all preachy or hit-you-over-the-head obvious.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on June 26, 2006, 09:00:34 am
IMO, one of the most amazing things about BBM is that it is completely both at the same time. It is a personal love story with no overt message at all. If a Martian watched it, he/she/it would be oblivious to any larger political implications.

Meanwhile, the story subtly plays upon what viewers know about real life, and tells us something about what society imposes on gay people in general, in 1960s Wyoming as well as in many other eras and cultures. For example, the very fact that the final images involve closets -- the word we happen to use to describe hidden homosexuality -- is not the least bit accidental. The beauty is that it's never at all preachy or hit-you-over-the-head obvious.

I do agree with you, latjoreme. I should have stated that there is not a social/ politcal agenda in this film. It is not stating that homosexuality is right or wrong or that there should be a law allowing gays to marry, etc. It is a story of these two men living in a time and a place where societal constraints paid a toll on their relationship and everyone else around them.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: ottoblom on June 30, 2006, 06:17:47 pm
I've always felt that ol' man Twist's "Tell you what, I know where Brokeback Mountain is," was a pretty loaded line.  But how much he actually does know about Jack I'm not sure.   

 And some people think he's taunting Ennis with the talk about Jack coming to Lightning Flat with the "other fella."

 My feeling is that he doesn't know much, but is a know-it-all and has an almost instinctive "gift" for upsetting other people.  Jack must've had some childhood.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on July 01, 2006, 04:36:07 pm
Yes, pneumonia is a disease of the lungs, but it is a very contagious disease, spread by bacteria which travel through the air.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: fernly on July 07, 2006, 10:27:00 am
(I apologize if this has been said before...)

Ennis Del Mar means island (isolated) in the sea (of homophobia, pain, loneliness) but mar also means damage (noun and verb), and Ennis certainly was damaged and never escaped it, and caused more himself, though never intentionally.

and the word is used in Annie's description of the dozy embrace: Nothing marred it - the damage both men carried didn't diminish the memory
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on July 07, 2006, 10:53:08 am
(I apologize if this has been said before...)

Del Mar means island (isolated) in the sea (of homophobia, pain, loneliness) but mar also means damage (noun and verb), and Ennis certainly was damaged and never escaped it, and caused more himself, though never intentionally.

and the word is used in Annie's description of the dozy embrace: Nothing marred it - the damage both men carried didn't diminish the memory

I love that, thanks!  Beautiful observation.  :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Amber on July 07, 2006, 01:09:15 pm
Del Mar means island (isolated) in the sea (of homophobia, pain, loneliness) but mar also means damage (noun and verb), and Ennis certainly was damaged and never escaped it, and caused more himself, though never intentionally.

Oooh ... that is something I did not know.  Very interesting.  Thanks for sharing that.

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Another one:  "Gonna snow tonight for sure."  Snow was the harbinger of the early end of their summer on Brokeback, and here it's the harbinger of the early end of their relationship and Jack's life.  Breaks my heart every time I hear him say it.


As for ednbarby's quote above:  For whatever reason I never put that together.  That's quite the foreshadowing statement!  I didn't think that scene could possibily be any sadder - guess I was wrong!!

That's the thing I really like about this movie.  Everytime I watch it, I learn something new!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on July 07, 2006, 06:19:40 pm
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Del Mar means island (isolated) in the sea (of homophobia, pain, loneliness) but mar also means damage (noun and verb), and Ennis certainly was damaged and never escaped it, and caused more himself, though never intentionally.

Great observation concerning the double meaning of Del Mar! :)


Of course, it made me think of the double meanings of "Twist".  Except there aren't only double meanings, but rather ten times double meanings. Now as far as I know, the name was used by AP because it is related to a rodeo rider's movement while on the bull. But in addition, any brief look at a dictionary would give the following other meanings that could also be relevant for Jack (in addition to a heap of others, that I couldn't immediately connect to him....)

* To wind together so as to produce a single strand

* To coil about something

* To interlock or interlace

* To turn so as to face another direction

* To turn or open by turning

* To wrench or sprain (........can you twist a heart??)

* To alter the normal aspect of

* To alter the intended meaning of

* A personal inclination or eccentricity; a penchant

* A dance characterized by vigorous gyrations of the hips and arms  ;)

* An unexpected change in a process or a departure from a pattern: a twist of fate; a story with a quirky twist.


In addition, I recall that when I first joined the BBM fandom, there was some slight grumbling because some people took the "Twist" name to be hinting at something twisted, ie. unnatural - or as the dictionary would define it: "To alter or distort the mental, moral, or emotional character of." How weird that anyone could see the film or read the story and chose to interpret the name that particular way.....  ::)

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Meryl on July 07, 2006, 07:09:29 pm
Wow, I never thought about all those meanings, Mikaela.   Thanks for pointing them out!  8)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 07, 2006, 07:40:53 pm
 
Of course, it made me think of the double meanings of "Twist".  Except there aren't only double meanings, but rather ten times double meanings. Now as far as I know, the name was used by AP because it is related to a rodeo rider's movement while on the bull. But in addition, any brief look at a dictionary would give the following other meanings that could also be relevant for Jack (in addition to a heap of others, that I couldn't immediately connect to him....)

* To wind together so as to produce a single strand

* To coil about something

* To interlock or interlace

* To turn so as to face another direction

* To turn or open by turning

* To wrench or sprain (........can you twist a heart??)

* To alter the normal aspect of

* To alter the intended meaning of

* A personal inclination or eccentricity; a penchant

* A dance characterized by vigorous gyrations of the hips and arms  ;)

* An unexpected change in a process or a departure from a pattern: a twist of fate; a story with a quirky twist.


In addition, I recall that when I first joined the BBM fandom, there was some slight grumbling because some people took the "Twist" name to be hinting at something twisted, ie. unnatural - or as the dictionary would define it: "To alter or distort the mental, moral, or emotional character of." How weird that anyone could see the film or read the story and chose to interpret the name that particular way.....  ::)

I found this interview with Jake Gyllenhaal which backs up what you are saying …

Jake Gyllenhaal’s Positive Feedback from Writer Annie Proulx:
“Annie Proulx wrote me a note very recently that has made - no matter what happens and how people respond to the film - has made the entire movie, making it totally worth it. She wrote me a note with a limited edition copy of ‘Close Range,’ which is the book that ‘Brokeback Mountain,’ the short story, is in. And in it she said that Jack Twist refers to, ‘twist’ refers to the strength of thighs and butt muscles that a bull rider has to have in order to stay on the bull. I had never really thought of it that way. It’s so funny. It’s so clearly in your face the whole time and you never really know what that is. I thought, ‘Yeah, there’s a real endurance.’


I find it amusing that you have pretty much said the same thing! ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Kajunite on July 12, 2006, 05:10:09 pm
Okay I'm a slow reader! ;D   I hope to get some of these sharp wits to comment on this line.  Bartender,  "Ever try calf ropin'?"  Puleezzee!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on July 12, 2006, 05:32:12 pm
Well, I'm taking it in the somewhat literal way, meaning, calf roping you stay in the saddle, don't get thrown on the ground, therefore no need for a clown to distract the bull from stomping on you. But the other way to take it is "go after calves and fillies, not bulls," meaning go straight. Of course there's also the interpretation that Jack might have more success with younger people of either orientation.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Kajunite on July 12, 2006, 06:10:38 pm
Interesting food for thought!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on July 12, 2006, 08:20:48 pm
Wow Mikaela !  I LOVE all the meanings you found for Twist.  Really, really interesting... and some of those definitions become downright poetic when we apply them to Jack and the relationship.

I also like the alternative interpretations of Mar.  There's certainly a lot of creative naming (unusual naming) in this story in general.  What do we think about Ennis and Alma's decision to name their first daughter Alma Junior?  I know it's not entirely uncommon/ unheard-of to name a girl Junior after her Mother, but I wonder if this is thrown into the story to add a little (more) complexity/ fluidity to the idea of gender.  I assume we're to understand that Jack is really John Junior.  I also wonder if there's meaning behind "Newsome"? 

Okay I'm a slow reader! ;D   I hope to get some of these sharp wits to comment on this line.  Bartender,  "Ever try calf ropin'?"  Puleezzee!

Heya Kajunite! Welcome to BetterMost... Want a cup of coffee don't you?  And a piece of cherry cake?  I agree with the two ideas suggested by Front-Ranger.  And, I think (as Jack sort of indicates by his response... and his irritation at the bartender) that this might not only be a sexually charged thing to say... but also an insult about class/ money.  Long ago, way back on the old board, there was a really complicated discussion about what this reference meant in terms of the economics/ hierarchy of rodeo culture.  It was really interesting, but lost on me a bit since I don't know anything about rodeo-ing other than what Jack taught me...  And that it sure ain't what it was back in John Twist Sr.'s day...

 ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Kajunite on July 12, 2006, 08:53:57 pm
Thanks for the welcome.  We love Coffee in Louisiana; stronger the better. 

I kept thinking the bartender's remark was in some way tied to the rejection of the clown, Jimbo.  There is no need to be rescued in calf roping.  But you are in the ring with a mad bull with horns the size of Texas, and you need to be saved by the big boys or clowns.  Rodeo clowns are also used for comedy routines when things slow down like between bulls or events.  So they are not just for rescue purposes.  My neighbor has one of the largest rodeo companies in this state and travels all over with his rodeo.  In all fairness I have never been to a gay rodeo but I have been to several others. 

Affording a certain horse would have been a problem then especially since Jack was not a big time winner.  So his response was understandable in social and financial terms.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on July 12, 2006, 08:59:44 pm
Hi again,

Thanks for that insight.  So, in rodeo culture, I'd assume that bull-riding would be considered more prestigious than calf roping?  I'd think the drama/ risk of bull-riding would make it one of the star events.  Is the bartender essentially "talking down" to Jack or suggesting he think about demoting himself to calf-roping?  Yes, I'm sure the main point of the bartender's comment has to do with the rejection he just saw between Jimbo and Jack.  But, it's be fun to try to tease out some other more subtle/ multiple meanings that might be hiding there.
 :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Kajunite on July 12, 2006, 09:27:10 pm
Yes in my opinion the bull riding is more prestigeous because of the difficulty.  Some of those bulls have horrendous reputations and the riders try to get good enough to ride the most notorious bull.  I think the prizes are also greater.  Calf roping is mostly speed and you have to have a good horse.  You rope the calf and then get off your horse to run to the calf to tie his feet in a certain time frame.  The horse must know to stand still after you have dismounted as he is holding the rope tight to keep the calf from getting up and running.  Not all horses can do this.  I can see by this that Jack was outdone because he could not afford that kind of talented horse.  The calf roping event is just you and the horse and the poor calf.  Bull riding takes several as you can see from the movie.  Two guys (at least) help you to mount the big bully and then usually two clowns have to distract the bull while the rider gets to safety. 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on July 22, 2006, 04:44:13 pm
Well, two different moments in the movie have been on my mind a bit... and the topic fits in this thread well enough.  It's about a handful of lines that seem simple but seem to reveal quite a lot, although "double meanings" might not play into this so much.  So, I'll post it here in any case.

Someone somewhere once noted that when Jack is talking to Lureen about Bobby's teacher he says "I complain too much."  And the person who originally pointed this out said that this seems to be a quick moment where Jack is verbalizing one of his key character traits.  He does complain and bitch quite a lot, as we all know.

So, it recently occured to me that a similar thing might happen with Ennis.  A moment where he verbalizes something that is a major part of his character.  During the painful post-divorce conversation with Jack,  Ennis says "I don't know what to say...", which seems to be one of his defining characteristics (his silence, his difficulty expressing himself verbally, etc.).  And then, when he tells Jack sorry, he says "you know I am" and then seems to try to give Jack a meaningful look in the eye.  I think this might be some evidence of how much Ennis (throughout their relationship) relies on Jack to be able to read his very subtle signals, to understand him without Ennis having to verbalize things.  He expects Jack to know him so well that he'll understand what Ennis means intuitively.  Sometimes it seems like they can both sort of read each other's signals, thoughts and emotions.  But, it seems like there are just as many times with their signals get crossed or confused.  It's interesting how many questions and remarks that Jack puts to Ennis - and vice versa- how many statements Ennis makes to Jack - where they don't directly answer one another... or seemingly switch subjects... or just don't answer (verbally at least).

It's funny now that I think about it.  It seems like the "I don't know what to say..." line is the flip side of what Ennis tells Alma as he's rushing out of the apartment with Jack during the reunion scene.  He tells Alma that they might be gone all night because they might "get to drinkin and talkin"... Here's a moment where Ennis is hoping that Alma might believe that he's a talkative enough fellow to actually be able to stay out all night shooting the breeze.  I've always found that funny and cute.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on July 22, 2006, 06:53:23 pm
I think you're on to something there, Amanda, I will have to think of some of those lines that seem to be throwaway lines at first but then seem to be eponymous once you think about them a different way. Like the line that Jack said in the story, when he looked into the deep blue of the sky, that he might "drown looking up." And we know that he did. Also, the line that Ennis said, "I'm so clumsy, I might get myself electrocuted." Well, we know that he did get himself electrocuted in a way, thinking of all the references to love as an electrical shock that passed between Ennis and Jack.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 22, 2006, 07:43:54 pm
Someone somewhere once noted that when Jack is talking to Lureen about Bobby's teacher he says "I complain too much."  And the person who originally pointed this out said that this seems to be a quick moment where Jack is verbalizing one of his key character traits.  He does complain and bitch quite a lot, as we all know.

I wanted to make an extra note about this … just something to consider. Yes, Jack does complain a lot. That is certainly a character trait … especially with Ennis. Isn’t it interesting, however, that Jack is very passive when it comes to both Lureen and Lureen’s father. The only time Jack stands up to the old “stud duck” is when he can’t take it any more and blows. Is it because he does not want to expend any energy towards those who he cares very little about? Even though Jack didn’t want a child, he does love Bobby and, therefore, fights to make life better for him (Bobby). I am not saying that Jack has no feelings for Lureen. What I am saying is that he does not care enough to waste his time arguing. His truth is only exposed to those who he really loves.

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So, it recently occured to me that a similar thing might happen with Ennis.  A moment where he verbalizes something that is a major part of his character.  During the painful post-divorce conversation with Jack,  Ennis says "I don't know what to say...", which seems to be one of his defining characteristics (his silence, his difficulty expressing himself verbally, etc.).  And then, when he tells Jack sorry, he says "you know I am" and then seems to try to give Jack a meaningful look in the eye.  I think this might be some evidence of how much Ennis (throughout their relationship) relies on Jack to be able to read his very subtle signals, to understand him without Ennis having to verbalize things.  He expects Jack to know him so well that he'll understand what Ennis means intuitively.  Sometimes it seems like they can both sort of read each other's signals, thoughts and emotions.  But, it seems like there are just as many times with their signals get crossed or confused.  It's interesting how many questions and remarks that Jack puts to Ennis - and vice versa- how many statements Ennis makes to Jack - where they don't directly answer one another... or seemingly switch subjects... or just don't answer (verbally at least).

I like what you have to say here. I have never thought of it before, but I think it makes a lot of sense. It is true that they understand each other better than anyone else. But it is that strength that is also their weakness. They say a lot to each other non-verbally and expect the other to understand. When they have their row, everything is spilled out. Even though they are saying it …. what they are saying is nothing new. They both know the truth. But to actually hear it is devastating, especially for Ennis.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: stevenedel on July 23, 2006, 05:58:18 am
(jeezzz... just put on the BBM soundtrack, and now I can't think straight. But a try nevertheless:)

I haven't read all 14 pages of this interesting thread, so maybe this came up already (if so, just ignore me), but I have been wondering about Lureen's and Lashawn's dialogue about their sororities. This whole fraternity and sorority business is unknown over here (we do have them, but they are traditional, local affairs, while in the US they appear to be part of a much more organized national system). I recall reading somewhere that Kappa Phi, the sorority Lureen was in, is more classy than Lashawns Tri Delt. Is that true? If so, it turns that scene into kind of a catfight: Lashawn insults Lureen by calling Lureen's home town a ' pokey little place', and Lureen gets back at her by pointing out her own academic superiority.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on July 23, 2006, 02:30:41 pm
I just posted this in the new thread about Ennis's reaction to Jack's death... but I thought I'd post it here too.

It occurs to me that during the phone call with Ennis, Lureen's statement that she thought Brokeback Mountain was "some pretend place"  is very poignant because in actuality it's true.  In the real world Brokeback Mountain is a fictional place.  To me, this just adds to the sense that Brokeback was an ideal paradise that truly can't be accessed again.
 :(

 
About the sorority conversation...  I don't know enough about the politics of sororities to know much about the context of their conversation.  But, the tone of voice is enough to imply that there's a bit of competitiveness.  I certainly wouldn't call it a "catfight."  I think they're just trying to figure one another out.  I would think that the person who'd feel the most threatened by this conversation would be Jack.  Clearly, the women and Randall are all college educated, so I'd think Jack would feel like the "black sheep" here once again.  I actually think LaShawn is trying to reach out to Lureen a little bit by saying "we ain't quite sorority sisters...", implying that they are close to being so.  I think primarily LaShawn is trying to be friendly and social.  One of my favorite "double" meanings in LaShawn's conversation is when she says "we may just have to dance with ourselves..."  It's one of the only allusions to something even vaguely lesbian in the movie.  In the bar when Jack first meets Lureen there's a pair of women who seem to be walking around together and I've always wondered if we're meant to see them as a possible couple too.  I think so much of this movie is about questioning typical and conventional interpretations of people and comments.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: coffeecat33 on July 23, 2006, 07:29:12 pm
Wow! I just read this thread and my head is buzzing! My words are tripping over themselves. I LOVE to analyze things and I'm so happy that I found Bettermost and to know there are "people like me out there." (Is that a pun??) Anyway... referring back to earlier posts. It's funny but today for the first time (before I read this forum) I thought, Mar means water but also damage. Then I read it here, too.

About some Double Meanings:
The over-obvious loquacious plumber butt shoveling asphalt w/Ennis: “…I’m getting’ too old to be breakin’ my back shoveling asphalt.”

The scene of Alma discovering yet another postcard “Fish should be jumpin” – Jack  (one of Annie Proulx' books is Postcards isn't it?) which she puts out of sight in the newspaper featuring a special on honey to Jack saying to Lurene, "Honey have you seen my blue parka?" And Lureen answers "The last time I seen it you was in it...that day we had that big ice storm." Of course the movie, "Ice Storm" was directed by Ang Lee. (And for those who haven't seen it, ice coats and freezes everything. A tragic movie where everyone is alienated and in isolation - kinda like Ennis in the snow.)

The scene at the dance with Jack, Lureen, Lashawn and Randall there is much rancor going on beneath the surface (or under the sheet of ice).  Lureen would have always been the biggest, prettiest, richest fish in the little pond of Childress, wouldn't she? So she's used to "being on top" (as in the scene w/her and Jack where they do it in her daddy's caddy.)  Obviously Lashawn is kinda trashy (so is Lureen but she won't admit it!) and telling Lashawn her sorority is better (richer?) than Lashawn's is a way of putting Lashawn down. I posted this is another forum, but the first time Jack & Lureen meet they dance (it breaks my heart to see the look on Jack's face when he hears the word, "lonely" in the song) and then they have sex. At the dance, some years later, they don't dance ("husbands don't never seem to dance with their wives." and I think we can assume they don't have sex anymore.  To further provoke Lureen, Jack asks Lashawn to dance, because he won't dance with his wife. For a a charity affair, "Benefit for the Childress County Children's Home" - none of the characters are being especially charitable. (Childress = childless? chill dress? chilled ...?)

And one more comment on an earlier post. It took a couple of viewings but Jack's father-in-law, L.D. says about the football game, "You want your son to grow up to be a man, (man=hetero) don't you, daughter?" (although he looks at Jack) then "Boys should watch football." Watch Jack's face when the Ignorant Ass/Dumbass Mule says that.

>>whew!!<< didn't mean to ramble on so much! It's just that once you see one connection it just continues to build like a huge beautiful spider web.

For a later discussion on double meaning, I love this line and would like to hear other's opinions, “Doubt there’s a filly that can throw me.” And later, “eh,...she got lucky.” - Jack

 :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on July 23, 2006, 08:18:54 pm
Wow! I just read this thread and my head is buzzing! My words are tripping over themselves. I LOVE to analyze things and I'm so happy that I found Bettermost and to know there are "people like me out there." (Is that a pun??) Anyway... referring back to earlier posts. It's funny but today for the first time (before I read this forum) I thought, Mar means water but also damage. Then I read it here, too.

coffeecat33, you've definitely come to the right place!  This forum is filled with tons of threads devoted to tons of analysis there are also quite a few serious film analysis threads over in Chez Tremblay if you poke around a bit.   Yes, there are lots of "people like you" out here on BetterMost.

I also love Jack's face, as you point out, in his dance with Lureen... with the "lonely" in the lyric.  It echos the moment when Ennis is sitting on the edge of the bed with Alma and she talks about being "lonely."  It's been pointed out by some of our lovely BetterMostians that Ennis's face changes upon hearing the word "lonely" too.  It's much more subtle in Ennis's case.  But, I think this is meant to be a parallel between the boys long distance.  The song that Jack and Lureen dance to is really quite ominous and sort of threatening when you really listen to the lyrics.  Very possessive lyics when it comes to the idea of being in love.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: coffeecat33 on July 23, 2006, 08:25:41 pm
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It echos the moment when Ennis is sitting on the edge of the bed with Alma and she talks about being "lonely."  It's been pointed out by some of our lovely BetterMostians that Ennis's face changes upon hearing the word "lonely" too.  It's much more subtle in Ennis's case.  But, I think this is meant to be a parallel between the boys long distance.
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Yes, I had noted that parallel or bookend, of scenes with Ennis and Jack when they hear the word,"lonely." Both scenes end with the men having sex with women - Lureen on top of Jack in a "dominant" position and Ennis takes Alma the way he took Jack.

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Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: stevenedel on July 24, 2006, 09:45:44 am
I just posted this in the new thread about Ennis's reaction to Jack's death... but I thought I'd post it here too.About the sorority conversation...  I don't know enough about the politics of sororities to know much about the context of their conversation.  But, the tone of voice is enough to imply that there's a bit of competitiveness.  I certainly wouldn't call it a "catfight."  I think they're just trying to figure one another out.  I would think that the person who'd feel the most threatened by this conversation would be Jack.  Clearly, the women and Randall are all college educated, so I'd think Jack would feel like the "black sheep" here once again.  I actually think LaShawn is trying to reach out to Lureen a little bit by saying "we ain't quite sorority sisters...", implying that they are close to being so.  I think primarily LaShawn is trying to be friendly and social.  One of my favorite "double" meanings in LaShawn's conversation is when she says "we may just have to dance with ourselves..."  It's one of the only allusions to something even vaguely lesbian in the movie.  In the bar when Jack first meets Lureen there's a pair of women who seem to be walking around together and I've always wondered if we're meant to see them as a possible couple too.  I think so much of this movie is about questioning typical and conventional interpretations of people and comments.

Maybe 'catfight' is a bit strong ;D Still, I don't find the scene at all friendly. No doubt Lashawn's intentions are OK, she simply talks so fast that she hasn't got the time to think what she is saying. But Lureen, says the screenplay, is bored stiff, and I do believe she feels insulted by Lashawns remark and feels the need to stress her own superiority. Jack, though detached, appears completely at ease to me - he doesn't seem the type to be impressed by academic titles.

The lesbian angle is an interesting one, hadn't considered that (but that's probably caused by the fact that to a gay man, lesbians may well be the most incomprehensible creatures on the face of the earth  ;) )
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 24, 2006, 10:15:38 am
Maybe 'catfight' is a bit strong ;D Still, I don't find the scene at all friendly. No doubt Lashawn's intentions are OK, she simply talks so fast that she hasn't got the time to think what she is saying. But Lureen, says the screenplay, is bored stiff, and I do believe she feels insulted by Lashawns remark and feels the need to stress her own superiority. Jack, though detached, appears completely at ease to me - he doesn't seem the type to be impressed by academic titles.

The lesbian angle is an interesting one, hadn't considered that (but that's probably caused by the fact that to a gay man, lesbians may well be the most incomprehensible creatures on the face of the earth  ;) )

I agree with you. I don't think Jack cares one iota about the others’ academic titles. The only thing I see is that Jack is noticing Randall checking him out. IMO, the only reason why he asks LaShawn to dance is to spite Lureen. The whole time he’s dancing, he looks back at the table. (Of course, one can question if Jack is looking at the table to see Lureen’s reaction or Randall’s. Hmmmm ….)

The lesbian thing … I highly doubt it. Lureen is completely bitter because Jack is not attracted to her. As for LaShawn … she talks too much. I doubt that she is thinking about what she I saying. CLUELESS!!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on July 24, 2006, 10:25:21 am
The lesbian thing … I highly doubt it. Lureen is completely bitter because Jack is not attracted to her. As for LaShawn … she talks too much. I doubt that she is thinking about what she I saying. CLUELESS!!

I know that LaShawn didn't mean it that way and that Lureen probably didn't hear it that way... but still I think the double meaning is there. 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on July 26, 2006, 03:15:36 pm
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IMO, the only reason why he asks LaShawn to dance is to spite Lureen.

I've seen others say that as well - but I honestly don't see why Jack would want to spite Lureen? I just don't see him as that kind of person, never actively spiteful.....even in those later disapponted years. He knows, none better, what the marriage has become and why. IMO he'd echo Ennis if he had to: Shut up about Lureen. This ain't her fault.

In my view, Jack asks Lashawn to dance in order to get out of an increasingly embarrassing and awkward situation, in order to have time to collect his thoughts a bit and regroup. Randall visibly checking him out, LaShawn contributing her cluelessly and increasingly ironic remarks, Lureen watching and adding her little barbed comments on the side;  getting onto the dance floor with a woman who will  manage to entertain herself completely seems like a good retreat option for Jack just there and then.

The most unintentionally ironic line LaShawn delivers, and hence another line with double meaning, is the complaint that the two husbands "Don't have a smidging of rhythm between them". In all likelihood, soon there's going to be quite a lot of rhythm between those two guys....     And Jack actually seems to possibly make that connection, too  - at least IMO he does a little double-take at Lashawn's comment.


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I know that LaShawn didn't mean it that way and that Lureen probably didn't hear it that way... but still I think the double meaning is there. 

I agree with that. LaShawn didn't mean it that way but in the context of this film the hinted double meaning is absolutely there.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on July 26, 2006, 03:40:32 pm
The most ironic line LaShawn delivers, and hence another line with double meaning, is the complaint that the two husbands "Don't have a smidging of rhythm between them". In all likelihood, soon there's going to be quite a lot of rhythm between those two guys. And Jack actually seems to make that connection, too  - at least IMO he does a little double-take at Lashawn's comment.

That's interesting, Mikaela. I never read the comment that way before. I always took "they have no rhythm" as an unwitting euphemism for "they have no interest in heterosexual sex" or something like that -- in other words, an echo of Lureen's "husbands never wanna dance with their wives."

But your way works just as well!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on July 26, 2006, 03:49:10 pm
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unwitting euphemism for "they have no interest in heterosexual sex" [  ] But your way works just as well!

In other words, a line with (at least) triple meanings!  ;D

I think it was the "between them" sent my thoughts in that particular direction. Lashawn could have complained about the lack of dancing skills/hinted lack of interest in heterosexual sex in lots of different ways without wording it that particular way....... So here I am to pick up her cluelessly dropped remark.  ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 26, 2006, 05:13:47 pm
The most unintentionally ironic line LaShawn delivers, and hence another line with double meaning, is the complaint that the two husbands "Don't have a smidging of rhythm between them". In all likelihood, soon there's going to be quite a lot of rhythm between those two guys....     And Jack actually seems to possibly make that connection, too  - at least IMO he does a little double-take at Lashawn's comment.

I never thought of that, either, but it makes sense. OMG! I am going to have to watch that scene more closely.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: stevenedel on July 27, 2006, 04:06:15 am
I've seen others say that as well - but I honestly don't see why Jack would want to spite Lureen? I just don't see him as that kind of person, never actively spiteful.....even in those later disapponted years. He knows, none better, what the marriage has become and why. IMO he'd echo Ennis if he had to: Shut up about Lureen. This ain't her fault.

In my view, Jack asks Lashawn to dance in order to get out of an increasingly embarrassing and awkward situation, in order to have time to collect his thoughts a bit and regroup. Randall visibly checking him out, LaShawn contributing her cluelessly and increasingly ironic remarks, Lureen watching and adding her little barbed comments on the side;  getting onto the dance floor with a woman who will  manage to entertain herself completely seems like a good retreat option for Jack just there and then.

That's interesting, Mikaela. Much as I like Jack, I have the feeling he's very well capable of being Jack Nasty. His remark, to Ennis, about Lureen 'punching numbers' is hardly a very nice one. During the dance scene, in my opinion they are having a covert fight, and I always wonder if it is about Jack's homosexuality. Lureen puts a direct challenge to him: "Why do you think that is, Jack?".

And then he dances with Lashawn as a proxy for Randall. I doubt he'd have much opportunity to order his thoughts, with Lashawn chattering away the way she does.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 27, 2006, 08:51:47 am
That's interesting, Mikaela. Much as I like Jack, I have the feeling he's very well capable of being Jack Nasty. His remark, to Ennis, about Lureen 'punching numbers' is hardly a very nice one. During the dance scene, in my opinion they are having a covert fight, and I always wonder if it is about Jack's homosexuality. Lureen puts a direct challenge to him: "Why do you think that is, Jack?".

And then he dances with Lashawn as a proxy for Randall. I doubt he'd have much opportunity to order his thoughts, with Lashawn chattering away the way she does.

It's funny you should say that. Earlier, Ennis asks if, between Jack and Lureen, "it's normal and all?" Jack shakes his head yes. I'd like to hear Lureen's POV. As she continues to "punch" those numbers in her adding machine, her hair gets blonder and blonder, her make-up thicker and thicker, and she becomes more and more bitter. Her personality has been described as “cold as ice”. I believe she would describe her sex life the same way. The only time we see them passionate is in the car. It is obvious by the time her hair starts to stiffen up, so has their relationship.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on July 27, 2006, 09:26:26 am
During the dance scene, in my opinion they are having a covert fight, and I always wonder if it is about Jack's homosexuality. Lureen puts a direct challenge to him: "Why do you think that is, Jack?".

If not an out-and-out spat, at the very least Lureen is taunting him. And I think it's absolutely about Jack's homosexuality -- or at least their unsatisfactory sex life -- though I'm not sure whether Lureen is conscious of that or not.

It's funny you should say that. Earlier, Ennis asks if, between Jack and Lureen, "it's normal and all?" Jack shakes his head yes. ... As she continues to "punch" those numbers in her adding machine, her hair gets blonder and blonder, her make-up thicker and thicker, and she becomes more and more bitter.

Yeah, I think Lureen's increasingly blond hair and brittle demeanor signals her growing dissatisfaction. I wish that, when Ennis asked if things were normal, Jack had just admitted outright that they aren't. I suppose he was trying not to trigger Ennis' startle point, but in this case it seems like Ennis would have felt reassured if Jack had been truthful.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 27, 2006, 10:16:52 am
Yeah, I think Lureen's increasingly blond hair and brittle demeanor signals her growing dissatisfaction. I wish that, when Ennis asked if things were normal, Jack had just admitted outright that they aren't. I suppose he was trying not to trigger Ennis' startle point, but in this case it seems like Ennis would have felt reassured if Jack had been truthful.

Or could have Jack actually believed his sex life with Lureen was normal? I would hope not .... but you never know!  :-\
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on July 27, 2006, 11:58:02 am
Or could have Jack actually believed his sex life with Lureen was normal? I would hope not .... but you never know!  :-\

That's one of the reasons why I think Jack compartmentalizes his life, actually. Like Jack's somehow able to put his whole life with Lureen into a little box that's separate from his love for Ennis, and manage as if it's normal. (That comment from Jack also suggests to me that Jack loses his control fairly gradually after Ennis's divorce... that Jack gradually has a harder and harder time faking his everyday life.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 27, 2006, 01:32:51 pm
That's one of the reasons why I think Jack compartmentalizes his life, actually. Like Jack's somehow able to put his whole life with Lureen into a little box that's separate from his love for Ennis, and manage as if it's normal. (That comment from Jack also suggests to me that Jack loses his control fairly gradually after Ennis's divorce... that Jack gradually has a harder and harder time faking his everyday life.)

Hmmmm .... that's an interesting thought. I do think, at that moment, Jack knows he'll never have that "sweet life" with Ennis. Maybe he starts getting "sloppy" after that. Are his actions setting him up to be "dead"? Or did Jack die the day Ennis sent him away post divorce?  Honestly, I think it's some of both.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on July 27, 2006, 03:21:49 pm
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I wish that, when Ennis asked if things were normal, Jack had just admitted outright that they aren't. I suppose he was trying not to trigger Ennis' startle point, but in this case it seems like Ennis would have felt reassured if Jack had been truthful.

Yes! To all of that.  Well put. Jack's statement that it's "normal and all" between him and Lureen adds to Ennis's paranoia over whatever he, Ennis, must have done wrong to make Alma suspect the truth - and by extension, everyone in town who he fears are looking at him funny. Jack manages to keep it "normal" (whatever they mean by that - I've actually seen it as a term for successfully keeping up the charade, and that both of them would accept the term as such, but you never know, indeed.....) while he, Ennis, must have slipped up - and fears to slip up more. Cue his even greater anxiety when Jack goes on to stoke the paranoia by suggesting he should move. Poor Ennis. I just want to ..... hug him something fierce at that panicked face of his when Jack says his "maybe you should move outta there".

But I think that Jack realizes in retrospect that his quite affectionate (IMO) talk about Lureen and about it being normal and all etc. was not a wise thing to tell Ennis. I think he realizes it contributed a bit to Ennis's reaction and their "you're a real thinker" quarrel. I think so because at the next meeting we get to see, their last meeting, when Ennis asks "what about you and Lureen?" , Jack shoots him a *look*. A quick, scrutinizing, careful, "Oh no we're not going *there* again!" look. (Could also be he's checking whether Ennis suspects or wants to get into the truth - not about the marriage but about the affairs.....) Whereupon he goes on to ensure Ennis that the marriage now could have been conducted over the phone.

I suppose at that stage Jack is telling the truth as far as the marriage goes, but earlier on in the marriage he had a lot of affection for Lureen IMO. Which leads me to the next quote:

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His remark, to Ennis, about Lureen 'punching numbers' is hardly a very nice one.

From the very first time I saw that I honestly thought Jack was being affectionate there - that he actually thinks Lureen is putting up a good show in not giving up her fight for their financial well-being. Jack likes having money, and he respects Lureens abilities as a businesswoman. Then of course he realizes who he's talking to, or rather iw overwhelmed by the fact that however much he has affection for Lureen, and however much it's nice to have money, nothing of that compares to what he'd have enjoyed with Ennis if Ennis would only let him. Hence the disconcerted "for what it's worth" at the end.

I was actually surprised when I realized I was pretty alone in that interpretation and that most people thinks he's outright mocking Lureens single-minded focus on the number-crunching.


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During the dance scene, in my opinion they are having a covert fight, and I always wonder if it is about Jack's homosexuality. Lureen puts a direct challenge to him: "Why do you think that is, Jack?".

Yes, a covert fight, sure enough..... I don't think Lureen is (yet) aware of the homosexuality - I think that comes later, probably just before or just as she learns of Jack's death. I've got nothing really to point to as evidence for that - only that I feel certain Lureen would have divorced Jack if she'd known - and I feel equally certain that she *knows* by the time Ennis calls her.  She knows by then about Jack being gay, but who he *loved* doesn't fall into place until the conversation with Ennis.

I like Lureen very much, I'll not try to hide that. I think she's a "lively little girl" too and it's sad to see her become embittered and brittle and cold over the lack of love and closeness; - which she doesn't understand for so long. I believe hers is the last of "the four strong hearts breaking" that Time Magazine wrote about in their BBM article.  :(

I also think Alma was better off than Lureen. Alma did at least know what the deal was with Ennis, and could decide her course based on the truth, however painful. While Lureen is kept in the dark. She's married to the nicest, most handsome guy around (not that I'm biased or anything....   ;) ), they've got a good relationship and work well together in the business (IMO) - and yet there's something crucial missing. The most crucial thing of all, to Lureen. And it's getting more and more evident, post Ennis's divorce when Jack increasingly can't be bothered to even try to pretend anymore. Last time he really makes an effort is on Thanksgiving following the post-divorce scene.

I think Lureen loves her husband till the end. If she didn't, she'd have divorced him. She's goodlooking, she's got money, she's got brains, she's not the kind of woman who'd keep a loveless marriage going for the sake of their son, her folks would be thrilled if she showed Jack the door, - she could have found a new husband easily. And if Alma could divorce Ennis, society's disapproval would hardly have deterred Lureen. Yet she and Jack stay married till the end. I see only one reason for that, - Lureen loves her husband. Another part of the nuanced tragedy that BBM presents to us. Lureen drowns herself in work and number-crunching and visits to the hairdresser, and while the bitterness grows she still hopes he'll one day love her back, hopes for a change, - that doesn't come.


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And then he dances with Lashawn as a proxy for Randall. I doubt he'd have much opportunity to order his thoughts, with Lashawn chattering away the way she does.

Lashawn's chattering is perfect if he wants to regroup and think things trough! It's the kind of one-way chattering where he doesn't have to listen and she'll keep herself entertained and be satisfied as long as he throws in a "mmm-hmmm" or a "Is that so?" or possibly an "I agree" every now and then.  ;D
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on July 27, 2006, 03:44:03 pm
I think Lureen loves her husband till the end.

I think so too. I think that, even on the phone with Ennis when she realizes who Ennis is, that she still loves Jack. There are tears in her eyes in that scene, and I think they come from mourning Jack as well as from discovering who Jack really loved.

Lureen didn't have to suggest that Ennis go up to Lightning Flat. The phone call had reached its natural end already, but she gave Ennis that push. That was an uncommonly kind thing to do, I think.

I don't think the movie plays that scene with the "cold little voice" described in the story.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on July 27, 2006, 03:46:06 pm
Me neither. I feel very sympathetic toward Lureen, too. (Less so toward Alma.) But I wonder if her "little voice as cold as snow" could be another reference to a (*cringe*) symbol: the snow/talk of snow that always comes when the relationship between Jack and Ennis comes to some kind of ending.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on July 27, 2006, 04:06:45 pm
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Lureen didn't have to suggest that Ennis go up to Lightning Flat. The phone call had reached its natural end already, but she gave Ennis that push. That was an uncommonly kind thing to do, I think.

I don't think the movie plays that scene with the "cold little voice" described in the story.

A big "ditto" to all of that!!

No, film!Lureen is not cold as snow - she's not frozen, - there would be no tears if she were. And on the basis of her love for Jack she shows a decency and compassion to Ennis that I don't  think a lot of people could have managed to show in similar circumstances. (The wife of late French president Francois Mitterand comes to mind, - inviting her husband's mistress and illegitimate daughter to his funeral....)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on July 27, 2006, 04:37:40 pm
No, film!Lureen is not cold as snow - she's not frozen, - there would be no tears if she were. And on the basis of her love for Jack she shows a decency and compassion to Ennis that I don't  think a lot of people could have managed to show in similar circumstances.

Absolutely. I think Film Lureen is another big departure from Story Lureen. She's a little brittle on the phone, but who wouldn't be. Cold? No way. She's incredibly compassionate.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 27, 2006, 07:18:36 pm
Absolutely. I think Film Lureen is another big departure from Story Lureen. She's a little brittle on the phone, but who wouldn't be. Cold? No way. She's incredibly compassionate.

I like Lureen a lot and admire her more than Alma. The reason: she makes her own way in life and doesn't need anyone. I find her to be a sympathetic character ... as I do all of the women. I do believe that she loves Jack and is devastated when she realizes that her husband loved a man. (In those days, especially, women often blamed themselves. I would guess Lureen felt the same way, but I have no proof of that).  Interestingly, I don't find story Lureen and film Lureen to be that much different. The reason is ... we see Lureen's face and know that her heart is breaking. However, she pulls it together before she speaks. To Ennis, her voice probably comes off as being cold. The film also adds one line, ".... about the ashes, I mean."  I think that is Lureen's way of saying to Ennis ... "I got your number". I don’t know. What do the rest of you think that line represents?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: coffeecat33 on July 27, 2006, 08:06:08 pm
. . . I wonder if her "little voice as cold as snow" could be another reference to a (*cringe*) symbol: the snow/talk of snow that always comes when the relationship between Jack and Ennis comes to some kind of ending.

Could be. I haven't analysed the story as much as the movie. The movie breaks my heart but the story breaks my heart and fills me with grief. Ennis dreaming about Jack is what does it. ("sometimes the pillow was wet, sometimes the sheet...")

I have a slightly different interpretation of Lureen's phone conversation with Ennis. I don't think Lureen and Jack loved each other. I think they got together because they were both high from winning at the rodeo and wanted to celebrate. Jack's decision to be with Lureen IMO was motivated by her money and his loneliness at not being with Ennis. Plus the pregancy brought them together.

I think Lureen's tears were caused from a look back at her life with Jack. Their marriage was so passionless and routine they could "do it over the phone." Lureen was more interested in money than love. She could have had a better more loving life with Jack but didn't. When she talks to Ennis she realizes the love she wanted from Jack was given to Ennis instead of her. Movie Lureen says, "Get in touch with his folks. I suppose they'd appreciate it if his wishes was carried out. About the ashes, I mean."  The paragraph from the story is, "[Jack's parents] will be [in Lightnin Flat] until they die. I never met them. They didn't come down for the funeral. You get in touch with them. I suppose they'd appreciate it if his wishes was carried out."

Ironic considering how very little John Twist "appreciates" the visit from Ennis and his offer to take the ashes to Brokeback. But I'm still not sure why Lureen says, About the ashes I mean. She's clarifying she's talking about the ashes, but what else could she be referring to?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 27, 2006, 08:52:51 pm
Could be. I haven't analysed the story as much as the movie. The movie breaks my heart but the story breaks my heart and fills me with grief. Ennis dreaming about Jack is what does it. ("sometimes the pillow was wet, sometimes the sheet...")

That line is a killer!! It makes me sad every time I read it.

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I have a slightly different interpretation of Lureen's phone conversation with Ennis. I don't think Lureen and Jack loved each other. I think they got together because they were both high from winning at the rodeo and wanted to celebrate. Jack's decision to be with Lureen IMO was motivated by her money and his loneliness at not being with Ennis. Plus the pregancy brought them together.

I don’t think I can agree with you 100%. I see your POV. However, IMO, Lureen thought she really loved Jack and she thought Jack loved her. Jack’s decision to be with Lureen was motivated by fear, societal mores and yes, IMO, her money and standing. As for her pregnancy … we can only surmise she was pregnant prior to their marriage. I, for one, believe that is what happened. However, there could be a strong argument for Lureen’s pregnancy to have occurred shortly after they were married (as what happened with Ennis and Alma).

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I think Lureen's tears were caused from a look back at her life with Jack. Their marriage was so passionless and routine they could "do it over the phone." Lureen was more interested in money than love. She could have had a better more loving life with Jack but didn't. When she talks to Ennis she realizes the love she wanted from Jack was given to Ennis instead of her. Movie Lureen says, "Get in touch with his folks. I suppose they'd appreciate it if his wishes was carried out. About the ashes, I mean."  The paragraph from the story is, "[Jack's parents] will be [in Lightnin Flat] until they die. I never met them. They didn't come down for the funeral. You get in touch with them. I suppose they'd appreciate it if his wishes was carried out."

I don’t think Lureen initially was more interested in money than in love. Very quickly, however, she realized that their marriage was one of convenience and not love. The more their life went on status quo, the more she threw herself into the business. She became more and more bitter as time went on. I think she suspected something wasn’t right for years. Whether or not she knew he was gay (before the phone call) is debatable.  I do think, however, she was devastated to realize that her husband’s lover was on the end of the phone (I am skipping a couple of lines, but you get the point

Lureen: He used to say he wanted his ashes to be scattered on Brokeback Mountain, but I wasn’t sure where that was ……
Ennis: No, ma’am, we herded sheep up on Brokeback one summer … back in ‘63”
Lureen: Well, he said it was his favorite place. I thought he meant to get drunk ….

This exchange, IMO, means two things. First, that Jack loved this man way before she met Jack. Secondly, Jack’s favorite place, where she thought he liked to go to get drunk, was really the place where he met this man … the man on the end of the line.

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But I'm still not sure why Lureen says, About the ashes I mean. She's clarifying she's talking about the ashes, but what else could she be referring to?

That line stumps me, too. (Unless she means that Jack’s wishes were really to be with this man on the end of the line … ?? I haven’t a clue).

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Mikaela on July 28, 2006, 05:52:07 pm
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That line stumps me, too. (Unless she means that Jack’s wishes were really to be with this man on the end of the line … ?

I think you're on to something in what you say last. I think Lureen feels that just saying  "They'd appreciate it if his wishes were carried out" might be interpreted as her yielding too much place, extending more open-ended acceptance than she intends to.

After all, it probably was Jack's wish to be with Ennis, at their favourite place - and if so he may have had other wide-ranging wishes relating to the relationship with this man. Lureen can't know what wishes those were, what Jack may have told his parents or Ennis.

By qualifying her statement to be sure Ennis knows it's specifically about the ashes, she's at the same time saying she's not willing to give up *her* considerable claim on Jack, her part in his life story - not willing to reduce the importance of their marriage. Whatever else Jack got up to in life - she loved him and she held on to him even when things got difficult. She's not about to accept someone usurping her place at this point in time even if that conceivably might have been Jack's wish.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 28, 2006, 07:15:14 pm
I think you're on to something in what you say last. I think Lureen feels that just saying  "They'd appreciate it if his wishes were carried out" might be interpreted as her yielding too much place, extending more open-ended acceptance than she intends to.

After all, it probably was Jack's wish to be with Ennis, at their favourite place - and if so he may have had other wide-ranging wishes relating to the relationship with this man. Lureen can't know what wishes those were, what Jack may have told his parents or Ennis.

By qualifying her statement to be sure Ennis knows it's specifically about the ashes, she's at the same time saying she's not willing to give up *her* considerable claim on Jack, her part in his life story - not willing to reduce the importance of their marriage. Whatever else Jack got up to in life - she loved him and she held on to him even when things got difficult. She's not about to accept someone usurping her place at this point in time even if that conceivably might have been Jack's wish.

Excellently stated! You have put in an additional twist (no pun intended) that I previously had not considered …. Lureen’s role and importance in Jack’s life (and vice versa).
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: stevenedel on July 29, 2006, 05:33:31 am
Yes, a covert fight, sure enough..... I don't think Lureen is (yet) aware of the homosexuality - I think that comes later, probably just before or just as she learns of Jack's death. I've got nothing really to point to as evidence for that - only that I feel certain Lureen would have divorced Jack if she'd known - and I feel equally certain that she *knows* by the time Ennis calls her.  She knows by then about Jack being gay, but who he *loved* doesn't fall into place until the conversation with Ennis.

(...)

I think Lureen loves her husband till the end. If she didn't, she'd have divorced him. She's goodlooking, she's got money, she's got brains, she's not the kind of woman who'd keep a loveless marriage going for the sake of their son, her folks would be thrilled if she showed Jack the door, - she could have found a new husband easily. And if Alma could divorce Ennis, society's disapproval would hardly have deterred Lureen. Yet she and Jack stay married till the end. I see only one reason for that, - Lureen loves her husband. Another part of the nuanced tragedy that BBM presents to us. Lureen drowns herself in work and number-crunching and visits to the hairdresser, and while the bitterness grows she still hopes he'll one day love her back, hopes for a change, - that doesn't come.

I agree with you, Mikaela, that had Lureen known Jack was gay, she would have divorced him on the spot. I strongly doubt that she ever draws that conclusion, even after he dies. It is, from her perspective, simply something that doesn't come to mind. If, during the phone conversation, she is indeed sad about Jack, and not simply sorry for herself, I think it is because she comes to realize how little she knew the man she was married to.

But I don't see their marriage as a very loving one; more like a marriage of convenience between two people who like each other well enough. I think she gives up on Jack fairly early on; just think of the tractor demo scene, and her disappointed look when the two farmers make disparaging remarks about her husband. The screenplay at this point actually describes Jack as "boyishly inane". From what she tells Ennis, we can deduce that she saw Jack as a boozer who lived in a fantasy world. In their marriage, the traditional male/female roles are completely reversed, and the one time they aren't, i.e., when Jack confronts LD during the Thanksgiving dinner, is the one time during their marriage when we see her being visibly pleased with him.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 29, 2006, 06:17:55 pm
But I don't see their marriage as a very loving one; more like a marriage of convenience between two people who like each other well enough. I think she gives up on Jack fairly early on; just think of the tractor demo scene, and her disappointed look when the two farmers make disparaging remarks about her husband. The screenplay at this point actually describes Jack as "boyishly inane". From what she tells Ennis, we can deduce that she saw Jack as a boozer who lived in a fantasy world. In their marriage, the traditional male/female roles are completely reversed, and the one time they aren't, i.e., when Jack confronts LD during the Thanksgiving dinner, is the one time during their marriage when we see her being visibly pleased with him.

You must have been reading my mind! Darn if I didn't say the exact same thing in a different thread a few moments ago!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: stevenedel on July 30, 2006, 05:56:36 am
You must have been reading my mind! Darn if I didn't say the exact same thing in a different thread a few moments ago!

I've been practising my ESP, and its paying off...  ;)

Where do I find your comment, I'm curious... ?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 30, 2006, 05:40:40 pm
I've been practising my ESP, and its paying off...  ;)

Where do I find your comment, I'm curious... ?

It is in the "Trying to Make Sense of Jack" thread. This is what I said:


I agree with you up to a point. I agree that Jack became more interested in Lureen when he found out that she came from money. Where I would differ from you is that, IMO, Lureen and Jack were never partners. We can surmise that they were hardly lovers. I also doubt that they shared much of anything with each other. Lureen almost became “parent like” … “new model’s coming in this week, remember …. you’re the best combine salesman we got … the only combine salesman, in fact …”

As for Jack and Lureen’s sex life … I think you are right that she doesn’t push him, but I think it is because she has shut herself off from her emotions. She comes to the realization that their marriage was one of convenience. As time goes on, she throws herself into the business as a way to distract herself. It is not that she doesn’t want the sexual intimacy. She more than likely has racked her brain about why Jack and her don’t have sex like they did when they first were married (I am making an assumption there …. notice that her hair is free flowing up until they have been married a few years. Then it gets stiffer and blonder and her appearance becomes harsher and harsher. The more makeup she uses is a “mask” to hide her inner turmoil). 

I also think that Lureen had troubles respecting Jack. Notice her reaction when the guys in the shop said,  “Didn’t that piss-ant used to ride bulls?” … “He used to try". Jack doesn’t stand up to her or her father. When Jack finally lets L.D. Newsom have it … Lureen cracks a smile, as if saying, “It’s about time!!!”


Rather scary ... we hit a lot of the same points!  ;)

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: stevenedel on July 31, 2006, 07:17:47 am

Rather scary ... we hit a lot of the same points!  ;)


Thanks for the post. I couldn't agree more. And well... if we came to the same conclusion independent of each other, it figures that it's true, doesn't it...  :)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on July 31, 2006, 12:10:08 pm
Thanks for the post. I couldn't agree more. And well... if we came to the same conclusion independent of each other, it figures that it's true, doesn't it...  :)

ABSOLUTELY!!  ;D
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on August 02, 2006, 07:10:33 pm
I was talking with Impish recently about the meaning of the term "stemming the rose" and it got me thinking about yet another interpretation. Now I'm thinking maybe it's a euphemism like "popping the cherry" for taking someone's (Ennis's) virginity. If Annie Proulx wanted the cherry to have a different meaning in the story, she may have had to come up with a different term for this. And we could hardly expect Aguirre to use the word virginity. Does anyone else think this is logical??
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on August 02, 2006, 07:56:48 pm
Well, Aguirre says it as if he considers it to have been an ongoing activity, not a one-time thing.

I sometimes wonder if our old friend TJ may have had a good point about this (for those who came later, TJ was a guy from rural Wyoming who used to post here). He claimed that "stemming the rose" is a term meaning goofing off on the job. TJ went onto insist that therefore, it couldn't possibly mean anything else. That's where I disagree -- if there really is such a phrase, I think Annie cleverly turned it into a double meaning.

(TJ said the same thing about "wring it out" -- that it means to concentrate heavily on something. Again, if that's the case, I think Annie deliberately played on its suggestive sound.)

Of course, both "stemming the rose" and "wring it out" sound a lot more like their sexual meanings than what TJ says they mean, especially in this context. So maybe Annie just made them up?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: dly64 on August 02, 2006, 08:34:45 pm
Of course, both "stemming the rose" and "wring it out" sound a lot more like their sexual meanings than what TJ says they mean, especially in this context. So maybe Annie just made them up?

I had heard "wring it out" before ... and let's just say it had a sexual connotation. As for “stemming the rose” … I would take it in a very similar way. Goofing around? Maybe … but “goofing on each other” is more like it.  ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on August 02, 2006, 08:41:40 pm
I had heard "wring it out" before ... and let's just say it had a sexual connotation. As for “stemming the rose” … I would take it in a very similar way. Goofing around? Maybe … but “goofing on each other” is more like it.  ;)

You're right. Both phases do evoke pretty vivid images ...  ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nakymaton on August 02, 2006, 11:20:54 pm
(TJ was from Oklahoma, not Wyoming... ;D His points were interesting, but it's also possible that the meanings of slang phrases vary from one part of the West to another. I know there are words used in particular places in small parts of the northern New England states, and maybe isolation creates similar language islands in the West.)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on August 03, 2006, 12:45:05 am
(TJ was from Oklahoma, not Wyoming... ;D

Oops, you're right. Sorry TJ, if you're out there somewhere still reading this board.

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His points were interesting, but it's also possible that the meanings of slang phrases vary from one part of the West to another.

Could be. In any case, I don't think Annie Proulx used them as ordinary innocent idioms and it's only us gutter-minded BetterMost members who interpreted them in a sexual way (as TJ suggested).
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on August 03, 2006, 11:00:33 am
I didn't agree with TJ (who incidentally is from Oklahoma, but they all sound alike to U city slickers  ;) [I am just pulling yr leg, kat]) on stemming the rose, but no matter. Impish felt that Annie Proulx made up that term just to drive us all crazy! And I think he's right (said with a half Wyo/half Aussie accent)! So, now on to the next double meaning thing. The last word that Aguirre had on the subject was "Ranch stiffs ain't never no good." No comment needed on that, I think.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on November 07, 2006, 06:31:07 pm
In my last viewing of the movie (which was over a month ago, and I'm steamed about that!) I was struck by the wording in the divorce court. It starts just before that scene and goes like this:

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ALMA
As far behind as we are on the bills, it makes me
nervous not to take no precaution....
ENNIS looks her in the face.
ENNIS
(stiffens)
If you don't want no more of my kids, I'll be happy
to leave you alone.
ALMA
(under her breath)
...I'd have 'em, if you'd support 'em....
ENNIS rolls off her. ALMA rolls on her side with her back to ENNIS, and with a look of despair on her face reaches
up and turns off the bedside lamp. WE HEAR:
JUDGE
(voice over)
...Custody of the two minor children…
117. INT: WYOMING COURTHOUSE: DAY: NOVEMBER 6: 1975
ENNIS and ALMA in a bleak little courtroom: divorce court. Grim. ALMA looks sad, but determined...cries quietly.
ENNIS looks miserable.
JUDGE (CONT’D)
…Alma Del Mar Jr. and Jennifer del Mar, is awarded
to plaintiff. Defendant is ordered to pay child
support to the plaintiff in the sum of $125 per
month, for each of the minor children until they
reach the age of 18 years...
(raises gavel)
...Del Mar divorce granted, this 6th day of
November 1975.

...So Ennis ended up supporting his children, but at the will of Alma. The prevalence of the words take, have, custody, must have hit Ennis like a bear trap around his leg!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on November 08, 2006, 04:39:45 pm
This passage from the story also plays into the "take" and "leave" discussion:

...and showed it was all right by taking Thanksgiving dinner with Alma, her grocer, and the kids.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on November 27, 2006, 11:01:59 pm
More essential BBM reading...
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on January 24, 2007, 12:49:50 am
Just bumping a classic... how did this one fall so far down the page list!
 :o










Next time I post here I'll post an actual "double meaning."  I promise.  ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: squashcourt on January 25, 2007, 10:25:37 pm
Hi,

What's your opinion or take on this:

Ennis to Jack:  "You may be a sinner but I ain't had the the opportunity yet ..."

Remember thuis scene when both were 4 sheets to the wind after killing that bottle of whiksey (I think it was Old Turkey bourbon)...

Was this an invitation from Ennis to you know what? 

You know, my feeling is that it is Ennis who first fell in love with Jack. Ennis's body language from the scene when he was washing the pots and pan in the running stream and looking at Jack up on the Mountain with an anxious and apprehensive forbidding feeling about Jack.

Pierre -  ;)
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Ladyeve on January 28, 2007, 12:23:02 am
Hi,

IMO,  Ennis was a virgin,  he felt comfortable enough with Jack to admit this,  I think Alma was first and only girlfriend. His parent died, sister and brother married and left him on his on his own, what was the next step for him?  Marriage. Ennis was didn't have a roving eye for anyone at that point.

Yes I think he was always fascinated with Jack.  Jack was open, full of opions, animated, so unlike him.    I think that night started out as a couple of guys talking, drinking and getting drunk.  Jack made that first move, but something ignited in Ennis. 

I think they both were attractive to each other, when Jack was with the sheep he looked at the smoke from the camp fire, thinking of Ennis.   

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on January 28, 2007, 11:22:58 am
I think you're right Ladyeve that Ennis was admitting to Jack that he was a virgin. All during the movie, even when they had known each other for nearly 20 years, they spoke in code or body language, because that is "the cowboy way." Works great sometimes, but when they misinterpreted each other's code, those were the heartbreaking moments!

Just a clarification, when Ennis spoke those words about "you may be a sinner" they had together drunk about a half-bottle of whiskey (it could have been Wild Turkey, but I think it was not that good quality, definitely bourbon whicsky tho). Jack handed Ennis the bottle with an interested "mmmm!" sound, and then Ennis killed the bottle, which explains why he was staggering into the tent, while Jack was keeping his wits about him. The "you may be a sinner" line was very interesting because the way Ennis said "sinner" it did not have the connotations that it usually has. It was like Ennis looked up to Jack because he was a sinner, that he had "taken the opportunity."

Squashcourt, your ideas about Ennis are right-on. If you look at the story, there are several phrases that show that Ennis looked up to Jack, such as "he was grateful for the companionship, where none had been expected."

Keep the questions and ideas coming!!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on January 28, 2007, 12:06:21 pm
Just a clarification, when Ennis spoke those words about "you may be a sinner" they had together drunk about a half-bottle of whiskey (it could have been Wild Turkey, but I think it was not that good quality, definitely bourbon whicsky tho).

No way of knowing what brand it was, F-R, and you and I know why!  ;D  ;)

To explain: When Front-Ranger, EDelMar and I met in Denver last month, EDelMar informed us that when movies show underage characters drinking alcohol, they hide the brand name so as not to get in trouble with the liquor manufacturer. That's why you can't tell what kind of beer they're drinking in the bar, or what kind of whiskey they drink on Brokeback. Later, when they're old enough to drink legally, it's not a problem, which is why we can see at the end that they're drinking Old Rose.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on January 29, 2007, 10:21:02 am
Thanks for reminding me of that great day!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: brokebackjack on January 31, 2007, 04:21:24 pm
I think 'You may be a sinner...' was one of the keys to FNIT. It was a seduction. In the film Jack seems to have fallen in love with Ennis during the campfire scene[ That's more words then I spoke in a year...] From that moment Jack was in love with Ennis, and Ennis was waaay intrigued by Jack but couldn't handle it.

You may be a sinner is a key---Notice the up and down smirky glance Ennis gives Jack after Jack hands him the bottle, which symbolises the Apple in Eden. That glance says it all: Boy, I KNOW what you're at! Jack for his part has this OMG I'M IN!!!!!!! look of delight. He slows down the booze, Ennis speeds it up.  Why? because Jack wanted Ennis and stayed sober, Ennis wanted Jack so he got drunk.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 01, 2007, 11:30:49 pm
How is it possible that the last post in this thread was way back in January?
 :o

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Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: HerrKaiser on May 03, 2007, 11:45:56 am
OK...here's more!

When Ennis and Jack are parting company after their time on BBM, Ennis says at one point near the truck, "Like I said, Alma and me, we's gettin married in November...."

Clearly they had a conversationless trip down the mountain, a berating from Aguirre, and a prospect of separation; three of the most uneasy things for a person--moving, changing jobs, changing relationship. I think Ennis was reaching out for a comment from Jack; Ennis was looking for some way to begin a dialog. He was fishing for 'are you sure you want to do that?' or 'can I come up for the wedding?'...something to carry the comment to the next level. The more simple interpretation and hence the double meaning is that Ennis was drawing his line in the sand, telling Jack his life is planned and in a different direction.

I think it is the former. This is classic ennis--completely inward with his inner door cracked ever so slightly, peering out, hoping that someone will kick it open. Such is what makes him totally irresistible.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: nic on May 03, 2007, 12:52:08 pm
Good points HK & I agree on the whole, speaking as an Ennis too. I actually think both suggested meanings are true, that Ennis is working both of them. The former is a given but I don't think he is very aware he is of the "disguised ask".  He might be deep down, where usually he only dares peek in, hoping Jack will respond with something that will force the issue one way or the other.  But this is dangerous, cos of course if Jack declared undying love Ennis might just react OTT with another punch or worse.  Ennis himself doesn't know how he'd react & isn't thinking "straight" at all (!)  His feelings for Jack are so intense that he can't help come out with this disguised ask of a comment, but then his feelings are also very messed up so of course he hasn't thought anything through & is winging it, just wanting the interaction to be done with despite having the inner need for Jack deep in his heart.   I can well imagine him deliberately not thinking of anything on the way down, forcing himself to think about the sheep or anything that is not Jack, related to Jack or the future. 

Then the latter, I think he is using this interpretation to bolster his own internal argument of not being queer etc .  Nothing sensible can come of having this dichotomy, it's just another communication problem & not unique to Ennis or BBM by any means. 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: HerrKaiser on May 03, 2007, 01:10:26 pm
thanks nic, enjoyed your insights. I think, in addition, the silent trek down the mountain was also time spend pondering 'what am I going to say?' (for both of them) when the imminent, final parting would be at hand.

Most people lean toward Jake as their hero and favorite on every level. But, to me, it is Ennis who captures all intriegue, mystery, desire, masculinity, deep-seated feelings that are honest and true. The "trapped" feelings he tries to express in double-meaninged ways as noted here or in unspoken communication are similar to how Hitchcock created his attractive women heroines. the 'fire under the ice' character of grace kelly and others is on par with how Ennis' character moves through the story. THAT makes him a total attractive man to me rather than viewing this as a negative or fault by many.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 03, 2007, 01:30:27 pm
One night in the chatroom, somebody asked what line everybody thought captured the themes of BBM in a nutshell. So we started naming the obvious ones, "If you can't fix it ..." "Ain't no reins ..." and so on. But then people started getting more adventuresome and out there: "No more beans ..." "This is a TIAGDBOAUS," "I think my dad was right"  "He's going to be buried in the family plot" -- and we noticed that a lot of those summed up the themes really well, too!

It's like you can almost randomly pick any line in the movie and see a double meaning to it, often one that holds much larger ideas.

Take my username. When Alma Jr. says "Mommy, I need crayons," I think she's expressing a need we all have for crayons in our lives -- that is, for color, beauty, love, happiness, joy. Ennis always denied himself crayons.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Brown Eyes on May 04, 2007, 12:04:00 am
OK...here's more!

When Ennis and Jack are parting company after their time on BBM, Ennis says at one point near the truck, "Like I said, Alma and me, we's gettin married in November...."

Clearly they had a conversationless trip down the mountain, a berating from Aguirre, and a prospect of separation; three of the most uneasy things for a person--moving, changing jobs, changing relationship. I think Ennis was reaching out for a comment from Jack; Ennis was looking for some way to begin a dialog. He was fishing for 'are you sure you want to do that?' or 'can I come up for the wedding?'...something to carry the comment to the next level. The more simple interpretation and hence the double meaning is that Ennis was drawing his line in the sand, telling Jack his life is planned and in a different direction.

I think it is the former. This is classic ennis--completely inward with his inner door cracked ever so slightly, peering out, hoping that someone will kick it open. Such is what makes him totally irresistible.


This scene is soooo complicated.  And, I do think that Ennis is fishing for some kind of support from Jack here.  He has relied on Jack to take the lead in pushing their relationship/ situation along and now I do think he's tacitly hoping that Jack might have some kind of solution to his dilemma regarding being engaged to Alma.

But, the ever-talkative Jack never responds to the topic of Alma or the wedding when Ennis brings it up.  When Ennis first tells Jack that he's engaged to Alma, Jack almost pointedly and deliberately ignores the comment and changes the subject.

I wonder if important silences throughout the film could be an interesting side-topic here.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on May 04, 2007, 09:24:49 am
I wonder if important silences throughout the film could be an interesting side-topic here.

Good idea! Or lines that don't get answered.

I agree with you all that Ennis is hoping that Jack will somehow do something about the situation, including the marriage plans. Even the way he phrases it. Jack asks whether he'll be back next year, and Ennis doesn't say "no," or even or "I don't think so" or "I doubt it." He says "maybe not ..." as if leaving open the possibility that he could. And then when he mentions the marriage and his work plans, he doesn't sound very sure about them.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Penthesilea on May 04, 2007, 09:54:26 am
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I wonder if important silences throughout the film could be an interesting side-topic here.

I agrree with you and Katherine. I think it deserves its own topic. Amanda, would you go on and open it?

Another important silence follows shortly after. For me, it's the most important silence in this scene:

"Guess I'll see you around..."

Jack nods and says a meager and defeated "Right".

But then, Ennis does not go. He lingers and waits, but neither of them says a word. A heavy and loaded silence.
Jack, who otherwise has the gift of the gab, doesn't say a goddamn word. He doesn't read Ennis' hesitation correctly (both, Ennis' hesitation and uncertainty in his words about his future and his hesitation to go).

This silence marks a very crucial moment in the movie. Who knows what might have been, had Jack said a word to keep Ennis from going.

I can think of more important silences, but I'll wait for Amanda to open a new thread.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: HerrKaiser on May 04, 2007, 10:41:20 am
a separate thread on "silences" is interesting, but it is a central theme in most of the threads/discussions about Ennis' inward, withholding personality already. Nice to reopen those thoughts, though, and retrace/add to that which has been discussed. Of course, a key "silent" moment was Ennis' silent response to "...miss you so much I can hardly stand it".

but back to the thought at hand here...Ennis' attempt to get a response from Jack was very much like the end of a date on the porch--do you ask for another date? Do you plan to talk tomorrow? The men knew their next steps were taking them out of reach and they simply did not know how to hold onto the macho thing to do--buck up and handle being 'shipped off'--but at the same time yield to their young (only 19) emotions of, at minimum, a strong puppy love.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: brokebackjack on May 18, 2007, 06:02:00 am
Penthesilea, IMO more is said through silence then with dialogue. Especially with BBM:  Witness the entire first meeting of J&E
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Lynne on October 12, 2008, 06:26:43 pm
On my drive yesterday, I listened to the short story audiobook a couple of times (and the soundtrack too).  I was struck by a few ideas, that I doubt are new, but that I came to understand in a new way...I found this thread by a cursory search of 'not the swearing kind' so I'm going to post it here.

We've noted before that Jack (and Ennis) to some extent are the swearing kind - The first word uttered is 'Sh*t' after all.  In listening to the short story, I noted that during the Siesta motel scene when Jack is talking about trying to keep his truck running during the hard year he had rodeoing where he nearly starved, he talks about being under his 'c*nt truck'.

One of my thoughts is that because this is pretty extreme swearing, I think that later when Ennis describes Jack as not 'being the swearing kind' that he is more likely talking about Jack being one to take oaths, make promises.  I don't mean to imply that if Ennis had taken Jack's offer of a 'sweet life' that Jack would not have made a commitment to Ennis.  But the point is also made during this scene that Jack has been riding more than the bulls instead of rolling his own as Ennis has.

Another thought is the idea of interpreting Jack spending time 'under the c*nt truck' as metaphorical...can it also be related to spending time creating a family with Lureen and all the baggage that comes his way as being LD's son-in-law and working for him in the farm equipment business?  I realize that Jack is directly talking about his hard year rodeoing, but I see the possibility of extending this metaphor to include his marriage to Lureen and his relationship with LD.

FWIW.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on October 12, 2008, 09:46:21 pm
I'm not sure I would agree with you about Jack's terminology, Lynne, I'm sorry to say. From the time I've spent around young men, roughnecks, rodeo people and rural people, I have to say that a certain percentage of them have nasty potty mouths. What's worse, it's like alcohol, the more you indulge in it, the more it takes to be effective. For some of these people, the F word is like saying "uh" or "you know" or "very."

Plus, young men's vehicles are thought to be female as ships are or hurricanes used to be. Jack calling his truck a c*nt is close to a term of endearment!! He probably imbued it with another layer of meaning, since he felt the oppression of what he saw as a female-dominated society, since Lureen sort of wore the pants in that household!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Katie77 on October 12, 2008, 10:35:23 pm
Was the term c*** truck, used in the movie?.....I dont recall hearing it. And I've just read the part in the book, and noticed it there for the first time.

I just think the use of c***, and fuckin this and that, is just to emphasise the word after it. Once upon a time those words were only spoken between men, and not within earshot of women, just out of courtesy. Nowadays, some women say it as much as men do.

So when two blokes get together like Jack and Ennis did, they get into their "blokey" way of talking with all the expletives.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on October 12, 2008, 10:44:42 pm
No, Sue, I'm sure I would have remembered it if Jack had said that in the movie! That was one of the things left out, along with Jack killing the eagle, K.E. beating up his brother (and vice versa) and Mr. Twist pissing on his son.

However, Jack did kick the tires of the truck at the beginning of the movie, and he was somewhat disparaging of women, saying "You and Alma, that's a life" causing Ennis to respond "Now you shut up about Alma, this ain't her fault."

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Lynne on October 12, 2008, 11:14:18 pm
The term is just in the short story, Katie, and it jumped right out at me because of the discussion in that McCain thread...got me thinking about a parallels between Jack's truck's mechanical failing and shortcomings later on in his marriage and business.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Katie77 on October 12, 2008, 11:27:16 pm
No, Sue, I'm sure I would have remembered it if Jack had said that in the movie! That was one of the things left out, along with Jack killing the eagle, K.E. beating up his brother (and vice versa) and Mr. Twist pissing on his son.

However, Jack did kick the tires of the truck at the beginning of the movie, and he was somewhat disparaging of women, saying "You and Alma, that's a life" causing Ennis to respond "Now you shut up about Alma, this ain't her fault."



Yes I see your point there about Jack and his demeanour towards women. He did make it clear that women were a pain in the arse to his life and to what his life could be with Ennis, so his use of the phrase c*** truck, could have been a tongue in cheek, female defamatory expletive.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Lynne on October 13, 2008, 01:33:34 am
A difference I noticed upon yesterday's reading concerned a difference between the SS and the film about how much Aguirre actually observed through his binoculars.

In the film, we realize we are viewing the happy tussle through Aguirre's eyes and are left with an implication that they were being watched.  This relates nicely to how they 'felt themselves' invisible.

However, in the ss, Annie tells us that Aguirre watched/waited for ten minutes, I believe, until they had zipped up before making his presence known and delivering the news about Uncle Harold.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Katie77 on October 13, 2008, 02:07:28 am
A difference I noticed upon yesterday's reading concerned a difference between the SS and the film about how much Aguirre actually observed through his binoculars.

In the film, we realize we are viewing the happy tussle through Aguirre's eyes and are left with an implication that they were being watched.  This relates nicely to how they 'felt themselves' invisible.

However, in the ss, Annie tells us that Aguirre watched/waited for ten minutes, I believe, until they had zipped up before making his presence known and delivering the news about Uncle Harold.

Thats very ineresting Lynne.

There is a thread I was in yesterday, started by Amanda, that questions whether Aguire actually spied on the boys at other times as well.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: southendmd on November 25, 2011, 09:13:23 pm
double bump!
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on November 25, 2011, 09:47:57 pm



Another thought is the idea of interpreting Jack spending time 'under the c*nt truck' as metaphorical...can it also be related to spending time creating a family with Lureen and all the baggage that comes his way as being LD's son-in-law and working for him in the farm equipment business?  I realize that Jack is directly talking about his hard year rodeoing, but I see the possibility of extending this metaphor to include his marriage to Lureen and his relationship with LD.

FWIW.
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  I agree with this point that Lynne made.  I also thought that it implied his
relationship with Ennis.  He was the bottom primarily I think.  He was under Ennis's spell, as well as truly under him.. physically.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on February 21, 2012, 12:35:09 am
I just let my eye scan the story, and here's the line it fell on:

"They could hear the river muttering and making a distant train sound a long way off."

Remember where this occurred in the story?

Here's what Kathryn had to say back in 2006 about whether Jack and Ennis might have actually fished:

You would think so. But I was thinking about how the price tag was still on the tackle after five years, and how Alma's note had never seen water in its life, and how they never brought any fish home.

In a long-ago comic thread, there was a line advising that cowboys on fishing trips should: "Always bring some fish home. Make sure it is thawed by the time you get there."
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: x-man on September 02, 2013, 05:02:13 pm
I only read the first and last several pages of this topic site, so perhaps this has already been discussed--but maybe not.  As long as we are looking at BBM this closely, to be gritty, who was the top--Jack or Ennis?  Or were they versatile?  This question is often secretly wondered about when someone (especially a gay man) meets a male/male couple.

The short story has two things to say.  In the reunion motel scene Ennis asks Jack if he had been doing it with other guys.  "'Shit no," said Jack, who had been riding more than bulls, not rolling his own," suggesting Jack as top.  A bit earlier, however, Jack compliments Ennis on his sexual performance, saying, "Christ, it got to be all that time a yours ahorseback makes it so goddamn good"--Jack as bottom.

The movie is similarly ambiguous.  In their first night together, although Jack initiates the encounter by pulling Ennis' hand over his crotch, Ennis responds most definitely as top.  The next night, however, Ennis comes into the tent and shyly offers himself to Jack who quickly rolls on top of him.  In the following scene when they are roughhousing around in front of the tent (when Aguillar sees them in binoculars) Ennis pushes Jack down and straddles him while kissing him.

Both the short story and the film leave the question up in the air, but given the character of the two men--Ennis' repression and fear of things gay versus Jack's easygoing and accommodating nature--is it not likely that Ennis was, at least usually, the top, and Jack went along with it?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: x-man on September 03, 2013, 11:58:27 pm
That's Aguirre, not Aguillar.  Sorry.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: x-man on September 10, 2013, 08:15:37 am
Regarding my posting above, I hope no one was grossed out or turned off.  I meant it as a gentle send-up of the microscopically close examinations of text and film that lead to hidden meanings absolutely everywhere.  As Freud pointed out, "Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar."  My evidence was suppositional and led to completely contrary conclusions.  Who knows which cowboy did what, and should we even care?  Again, I hope I didn't offend anyone.  I was just having a little fun.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Jeff Wrangler on September 10, 2013, 12:38:48 pm
The short story has two things to say.  In the reunion motel scene Ennis asks Jack if he had been doing it with other guys.  "'Shit no," said Jack, who had been riding more than bulls, not rolling his own," suggesting Jack as top.  A bit earlier, however, Jack compliments Ennis on his sexual performance, saying, "Christ, it got to be all that time a yours ahorseback makes it so goddamn good"--Jack as bottom.

See, I've always taken that to mean exactly the opposite, that Jack had been "riding" other men's dicks--especially in light of the "ahorseback" line. On the other hand, I know of others who take the "ahorseback" line to suggest that Ennis is a good fuck because all that time ahorseback has developed his muscles so that he can squeeze nice and tight, whereas I take it to mean he's a good fucker because all that time ahorseback has developed his thigh muscles, so he's a good thruster. I guess it's a mixing of metaphors in the "riding more than bulls, not rolling his own" that makes the line ambiguous. "Rolling his own" surely must refer to masturbation, so then what is the sentence saying, Jack has been fucking other guys, not jerking off, or getting fucked, not jerking off? Everyone has his or her own opinion.

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Both the short story and the film leave the question up in the air, but given the character of the two men--Ennis' repression and fear of things gay versus Jack's easygoing and accommodating nature--is it not likely that Ennis was, at least usually, the top, and Jack went along with it?

I've always felt that Ennis is always on top, because a guy can fuck another guy and still avoid seeing himself as gay, whereas only queers take it up the ass--as Ennis might have put it.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: x-man on September 11, 2013, 10:00:45 am
"Swear to god I didn't know we was goin a get into this again--..." but Jeff Wrangler's (#284) posting has called me back.  What I said when I originally asked who the top was (#281) stands for the point I was making there, but it does not say how I really feel about the issue.  Most/all gay men recognize that JW's analysis is definitely the correct one.  Straight people, JW is telling it the way it is; believe him.  And he is telling it in an outrageously funny way.  I crack up every time I read it.  If you missed the humour you're missing a lot.

I want to add one thing that confirms Jeff Wrangler's comment "...a guy can fuck another guy and still avoid seeing himself as gay, whereas only queers take it up the ass--as Ennis might have put it"  Yes, Ennis might well have put it that way.  Consider what he says to Jack in the final argument:  "I know what they got in Mexico for boys like you."  Boys like you??  In his anger Ennis discounts Jack's manliness, alludes to Jack's getting fucked, puts a distance between the two men, and reinforces the 20-year fiction that he is not gay while Jack is.  This is about the darkest thing that Ennis has ever said.  The closer we look the more we feel for Jack in keeping the relationship going in the face of Ennis' negativity and illusions.  Ennis was really fucked up, but Jack would still love him.  That is a message of hope for a lot of us.   
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Penthesilea on September 11, 2013, 12:35:21 pm
Over the years, the two mostly expressed viewpoints re your question if Ennis is always the top are the following:

Yes, Ennis is always top because "he ain't queer". Jeff put this train of thought very well.

The other is that maybe Ennis was more versatile than you'd think. There are some differences in characterization between Ennis in the book and Ennis in the movie. Ennis in the book is more verbally expressive (the scene in the Siesta Motel) and seems less self-hating than his movie counterpart. In a generalizing way, you could say book Ennis is more afraid of the outer world than of himself/his feelings for Jack. To put it in your words: book Ennis is a little less f*cked up than movie Ennis.
Taking this into account, plus the fact that in a time span of twenty years many boundaries/thresholds between two intimate people tend to fall, one could argue that at least book Ennis wasn't necessarily always top.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Jeff Wrangler on September 11, 2013, 04:20:39 pm
"Swear to god I didn't know we was goin a get into this again--..." but Jeff Wrangler's (#284) posting has called me back.  What I said when I originally asked who the top was (#281) stands for the point I was making there, but it does not say how I really feel about the issue.  Most/all gay men recognize that JW's analysis is definitely the correct one.  Straight people, JW is telling it the way it is; believe him.  And he is telling it in an outrageously funny way.  I crack up every time I read it.  If you missed the humour you're missing a lot.

Well, thank you kindly, x-man. I'm glad you got enjoyment out of reading my post.  :)

Your post, and writing my response to it, got me thinking about things I haven't thought about in quite some time now. I found myself thinking about the scene in the film where we see Jack walking up that alley in Juarez, before he hooks up with the hustler (and I tend to feel the Mexican is a hustler, I suppose because he addresses Jack as "Senor," rather than just saying "Hola," or "Buenos noches," or something like that--it just strikes me that this is what someone who is selling sexual services might say, rather than what someone who is looking to share sex would say).

The look on Jack's face as he heads up that alley is not the look of someone looking for someone to fuck. No, it's the look of someone with a desperate need to be fucked. I know that look. I've seen it often enough in more than 20 years spent socializing in a deliberately rather dark and seedy environment--not too different from that alley, except that it has a liquor license.

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I want to add one thing that confirms Jeff Wrangler's comment "...a guy can fuck another guy and still avoid seeing himself as gay, whereas only queers take it up the ass--as Ennis might have put it"  Yes, Ennis might well have put it that way.  Consider what he says to Jack in the final argument:  "I know what they got in Mexico for boys like you."  Boys like you??  In his anger Ennis discounts Jack's manliness, alludes to Jack's getting fucked, puts a distance between the two men, and reinforces the 20-year fiction that he is not gay while Jack is.

I agree, and I think it's really kind of sad that in his hurt and anger Ennis lashes out and demeans Jack for something Jack has been letting Ennis do for 20 years.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: x-man on September 12, 2013, 02:21:11 pm
"without saying anything about it both knew how it would go for the rest of the summer, sheep be damned."  This line sums up to me the difference between the short story and the movie.  I agree that book Ennis is not as hung up about being gay, etc., as movie Ennis, and is in general not as fucked up.  It's the movie that carries all the nuances.  (The "boys like you" line does not even appear in the story.)  If we look only at the story, Penthesilea, that in their time together whatever Ennis' fears at the beginning, "in a time span of twenty years many boundaries/thresholds between two intimate people would fall..."  But not in the movie.

In the film we have basically 3 things to look at:  Jack with Ennis, Jack with the hustler, and Jack with Randall.  Jeff Wrangler has pretty well explored movie Jack and Ennis.  Regarding the Mexico scene, the man is obviously a hustler, not only because he addresses Jack as Senor, but because he is standing waiting under a light on a gay cruising street.  The only thing missing from the street were twinks, and one would have expected them to be there.  (Google <twink gay slang> if you don't know what I mean.)  Given the sexual stereotyping in the US then (and now?) and the widespread Mexican phenomenon of romantic relationships between older men and adolescents, if Jack had been wanting someone to fuck he would have looked for a young man who appeared the (stereotypical) type to be his bottom.  But he chooses a strongly-built older man instead.  That told me what Jack was looking for more than the expression on his face.

Randall's subtle come-on to Jack was cute, and left Jack with that "Did he really say what I thought he said?" look on his face.  Randall was a tall bear, not a good prospect as a bottom in Jack's sexually unsophisticated mind.  But Jack wasn't looking for a bottom--he never was  Jack wasn't "letting Ennis do (it) for 20 years."  Jack thoroughly enjoyed it, and he was as much of a man as Ennis was, top or bottom.

JW, is "riding dick" a local expression for sucking cock?  I've never heard it before.  Here "riding" is associated with something else--like riding bareback (not a no-no in BBM days).
 
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Jeff Wrangler on September 12, 2013, 02:39:51 pm
In the film we have basically 3 things to look at:  Jack with Ennis, Jack with the hustler, and Jack with Randall.  Jeff Wrangler has pretty well explored movie Jack and Ennis.  Regarding the Mexico scene, the man is obviously a hustler, not only because he addresses Jack as Senor, but because he is standing waiting under a light on a gay cruising street.  The only thing missing from the street were twinks, and one would have expected them to be there.  (Google <twink gay slang> if you don't know what I mean.)  Given the sexual stereotyping in the US then (and now?) and the widespread Mexican phenomenon of romantic relationships between older men and adolescents, if Jack had been wanting someone to fuck he would have looked for a young man who appeared the (stereotypical) type to be his bottom.  But he chooses a strongly-built older man instead.  That told me what Jack was looking for more than the expression on his face.

This is something I didn't know, which, I guess, is why the look on Jack's face told me more than the build of his choice of partner.

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JW, is "riding dick" a local expression for sucking cock?  I've never heard it before.  Here "riding" is associated with something else--like riding bareback (not a no-no in BBM days).

Not here in Pennsylvania it isn't. I meant Jack was takin' it up the ol' Hershey Highway (which may be a Pennsylvania expression  ;D ).
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: chowhound on September 12, 2013, 03:17:47 pm
When commenting on the age and build of the hustler, it may be worth remembering that this is, in fact, the film's photographer, Rodrigo Prieto. Apparently, he stepped into the role at the at the last moment when the actor who was supposed to play the role was somehow unavailable.

Roderigo Prieto is indeed Mexican. He was born in Mexico City in 1965 so he'd be around 39 when this shot was taken.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: x-man on September 13, 2013, 07:38:25 pm
Prieto being a late replacement does not change a thing.  Ang Lee is a careful film maker.  He gave us exactly the hustler he wanted us to see.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: Front-Ranger on October 24, 2013, 12:14:53 pm

About some Double Meanings:
The over-obvious loquacious plumber butt shoveling asphalt w/Ennis: “…I’m getting’ too old to be breakin’ my back shoveling asphalt.”
...

Bumping for Throwback Thursday, following Serious Crayons' lead! Is this the topic you were trying to find, Katherine?
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on October 24, 2013, 03:35:09 pm
Bumping for Throwback Thursday, following Serious Crayons' lead! Is this the topic you were trying to find, Katherine?

That is a reference to the tar-spreading scene, but it's not an extended discussion of it. I have always loved that it seems like such a little throw-away situation-establishing scene, yet is so packed with meaning and nuance. When Casey Cornelius first pointed it out, it opened my eyes to the possibilities of other subtle double meanings and subtle symbolism running through the whole movie. Of which, of course, there are tons.

Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: x-man on October 24, 2013, 05:46:47 pm
The tar-spreading scene,.... . I have always loved that it seems like such a little throw-away situation-establishing scene, yet is so packed with meaning and nuance.

Sc, please say more.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: southendmd on October 24, 2013, 07:00:15 pm
That is a reference to the tar-spreading scene, but it's not an extended discussion of it. I have always loved that it seems like such a little throw-away situation-establishing scene, yet is so packed with meaning and nuance. When Casey Cornelius first pointed it out, it opened my eyes to the possibilities of other subtle double meanings and subtle symbolism running through the whole movie. Of which, of course, there are tons.

Katherine, I found these re Timmy:

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10408.msg203523.html#msg203523

This is from IMDb with you referencing Casey, but talking to clancypants

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,3054.msg55325.html#msg55325

This is a BM thread with you and ruthlesslyunsentimental (aka clancypants)

Couldn't find a direct Casey reference.
Title: Re: Double meanings: Lines that can be taken more than one way
Post by: serious crayons on October 25, 2013, 05:51:12 pm
Thanks, Paul! The Casey conversation occurred earlier, but that one sure was interesting, and fun to reread. I'd forgotten about the whole pavement = paranoia connection.

Plus, going down a few posts, I got to this fun comment that made me LOL:


Quote from: ruthlesslyunsentimental on July 08, 2006, 01:35:14 am
? Jack is still a potato!



Is that why Ennis sometimes calls him Spud, as in "Somethin' I've been meaning to tell ya, Spud?"