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Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond => Brokeback Mountain Fan Fiction & Poetry => Topic started by: loreen on January 08, 2009, 02:35:37 pm

Title: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on January 08, 2009, 02:35:37 pm

Hi everyone! :)

I just registered to be able to participate in Syncronised DVD watching on January 10th.

Since I'm here, just want to give you the link to my facfic.

It starts in the evening between FNIT and SNIT, and it ends with the end of 1963. The end is hopeful!  ::)

Hope that this short story will reach your heart!

Here it is:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/

-Just pay attention to the order, cos the first part is down, and the second one is up! 

See you on 10th!

Love,
Loreen

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Monika on January 08, 2009, 02:38:09 pm

Thanks!  I will check out your story for sure

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: mariez on January 08, 2009, 02:49:54 pm

Welcome to Bettermost, Loreen -  it's nice to meet you.  Thanks for the link!  :)

Marie

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 10, 2009, 07:58:31 pm

Quote from: loreen on January 08, 2009, 02:35:37 pm

Hi everyone! :)

I just registered to be able to participate in Syncronised DVD watching on January 10th.

Since I'm here, just want to give you the link to my facfic.

It starts in the evening between FNIT and SNIT, and it ends with the end of 1963. The end is hopeful!  ::)

Hope that this short story will reach your heart!

Here it is:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/

-Just pay attention to the order, cos the first part is down, and the second one is up! 

See you on 10th!

Love,
Loreen (http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/pp186/loreent/jack.gif)

Beautiful tale, Loreen!  I love how you filled in the gaps for us here.  I haven't read the second part yet, but I surely will.  Thanks for posting, and welcome to Bettermost!  :)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Front-Ranger on January 11, 2009, 03:02:30 am

Hi, Loreen! I don't read fanfiction, but I wanted to let you know it's nice to see you here! Andd thanks for joining in the chat today!!

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on January 11, 2009, 04:20:21 am

Quote from: Littlewing on January 10, 2009, 07:58:31 pm

Beautiful tale, Loreen!  I love how you filled in the gaps for us here.  I haven't read the second part yet, but I surely will.  Thanks for posting, and welcome to Bettermost!  :)

I am so glad that you liked it!

I had to fill the gaps myself too, so i just let it roll.

Thanks for reading it and for loving it!

Loreen :)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on January 11, 2009, 04:23:56 am

Quote from: Front-Ranger on January 11, 2009, 03:02:30 am

Hi, Loreen! I don't read fanfiction, but I wanted to let you know it's nice to see you here! Andd thanks for joining in the chat today!!

Thanks! It is great to be here! :-*

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on January 14, 2009, 04:42:30 am

Today I posted another chapter.

It is about Jack's arrival to LF in 1963. and his tender relationship with his Ma. This is my vision what could have possibly happen when he arrived home.

To be honest, it was you guys here who inspired me to write it. More specific, it is the thread about the shirts who gave me an idea, and I really believe that you'd like this part. It could be read as a separate from the first two.

I'd like to hear some feedbacks.  :)

Thanks! ;D

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Brown Eyes on January 14, 2009, 04:34:34 pm

Hi Loreen!

I just discovered this thread.  And, I wanted to add my welcome!  It was fun seeing you at the viewing/chat!  What a great experience that was.

I'm looking forward to checking out your story.  I'm at work right now, but when I get home I'll take a look!
:)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Kelda on January 14, 2009, 05:09:02 pm

Nice to meetcha Loreen!

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on January 14, 2009, 05:50:32 pm

Quote from: atz75 on January 14, 2009, 04:34:34 pm

Hi Loreen!

I just discovered this thread.  And, I wanted to add my welcome!  It was fun seeing you at the viewing/chat!  What a great experience that was.

I'm looking forward to checking out your story.  I'm at work right now, but when I get home I'll take a look!
:)

Quote from: Kelda on January 14, 2009, 05:09:02 pm

Nice to meetcha Loreen!

Thanks guys! You're great!

(http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/pp186/loreent/heartglasses.gif)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on February 20, 2009, 07:27:53 pm

Just wanted to tell you that there's a new chapter posted - please try link a few times. Few Brokies told me that the link is "shaky".

Here it is:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/1844.html

or

http://loreent.livejournal.com

In short: After spending few months in LF, Jack went to Riverton to find Ennis, but he wasn't there. Jack decided to find Ennis by all means and ask if he would go to Texas with him ....

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on March 22, 2009, 05:49:56 pm

Hi there!

Hm... I see that there's not so much respond to this story here ???, but well.... for those who wants to know-  here's the link for the new chapter posted few days ago:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/2131.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/2131.html)

Ennis came back to Riverton and had to face the reality.... until one Sunday morning... :)

Any feedback is truly appreciated. ::)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Marge_Innavera on March 24, 2009, 12:40:14 pm

Hi,

This is the first time I've heard of this story, and quite like it! Just read Chapter 3, so I'll have to backtrack a bit. Thanks for posting about it here.

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on March 25, 2009, 06:20:58 pm

Quote from: Marge_Innavera on March 24, 2009, 12:40:14 pm

Hi,

This is the first time I've heard of this story, and quite like it! Just read Chapter 3, so I'll have to backtrack a bit. Thanks for posting about it here.

Thanks dear!  :)

Hm... what does it mean that you'll have to "backtrack"?  ???

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on May 03, 2009, 03:05:43 am

OK, now!

I posted the first part of the 5. chapter ("The Reunion"). Jack came to Ennis's home after 3 years and invites him to the "fishing" trip....   ::)

The second part of the chapter will be posted  next week(I hope ).

As always, I was advised by MPJ  Flower, and the text was edited by tpe  Flower. Thank you friends!

Also as always , feedback - highly appreciated!   :P

Here's the link: http://loreent.livejournal.com/5296.html

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 04, 2009, 07:28:13 pm

Quote from: loreen on May 03, 2009, 03:05:43 am

OK, now!

I posted the first part of the 5. chapter ("The Reunion"). Jack came to Ennis's home after 3 years and invites him to the "fishing" trip....   ::)

The second part of the chapter will be posted  next week(I hope ).

As always, I was advised by MPJ  Flower, and the text was edited by tpe  Flower. Thank you friends!

Also as always , feedback - highly appreciated!   :P

Here's the link: http://loreent.livejournal.com/5296.html

Thanks for the heads-up.  I'll read and comment as soon as I can.  Thanks so much for posting!  :)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on May 19, 2009, 11:08:05 am

Quote from: Littlewing on May 04, 2009, 07:28:13 pm

Thanks for the heads-up.  I'll read and comment as soon as I can.  Thanks so much for posting!  :)

Hi! Thanks Littlewing! :)

Hope that you like the story. It is a long way ahead of them, but the happy ending is waiting!

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on May 19, 2009, 11:10:57 am

I didn't post this on time, so here's the 5. chapter 2. part:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/5484.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/5484.html)

and the 6.chapter, 1. part:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/6015.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/6015.html)

The 2. part of the 6. chapter will be posted very soon... in  few days.

Well, know that people ar not fond of posting feedback, still I love them! Can't help myself! ;D

Until the next chapter - see ya!
And thanks everyone for reading it!

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on May 28, 2009, 02:32:53 pm

http://loreent.livejournal.com/6387.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/6387.html)

OK, that's the link for the 2. part of the 6. chapter.

The chapter deals with Ennis's and Jack's "normal lives"... There's a little surprise in the end...

A huge thanks goes to MyPrivateJack and Flwrchild for advising and editing, respectively. Really appreciate your help friends!

Synopsis: The story starts during SNIT as my personal wish to fulfill the blanks in the movie. After cca 10 years or angst and suffer, in the end Ennis &Jack's sweet life is even sweeter than the chocolate (LOL) !Some surprises, some romantics, some sex and a lots of emotions...

A big thanks for everyone who's still with me and this story...

 :)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: bailey1205 on June 01, 2009, 04:03:04 pm

OMG !!!!

A story !!!

Off to Loreen's journal !!

 ;D

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on June 06, 2009, 06:04:32 am

http://loreent.livejournal.com/6697.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/6697.html)

 :)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on July 22, 2009, 03:00:24 pm

I almost gave up posting the updates, but I noticed that the number of hits is increasing ... so... for you who are still interested, here's the next link:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/7419.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/7419.html)

I won't mention the feedback anymore... seems like the mission impossible!  :-X

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on August 05, 2009, 06:18:01 am

http://loreent.livejournal.com/8018.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/8018.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on September 02, 2009, 05:28:04 am

http://loreent.livejournal.com/9066.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/9066.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on September 15, 2009, 07:19:54 am

10th chapter:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/10229.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/10229.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on September 20, 2009, 09:39:39 am

11. chapter:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/10303.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/10303.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 20, 2009, 01:31:32 pm

Quote from: loreen on September 20, 2009, 09:39:39 am

11. chapter:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/10303.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/10303.html)

Thanks for posting the updates, Loreen.  I'm really enjoying the series.  I really am! Please keep writing!  :)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on September 20, 2009, 03:58:03 pm

Quote from: Littlewing on September 20, 2009, 01:31:32 pm

Thanks for posting the updates, Loreen.  I'm really enjoying the series.  I really am! Please keep writing!  :)

Oh, thank you so much! :-*

It's good to know that someone IS actually reading the story!   :P

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on September 30, 2009, 03:19:37 am

12th chapter is on:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/10774.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/10774.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on October 11, 2009, 08:01:21 am

chapter 13: Lightning Flat

http://loreent.livejournal.com/11057.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/11057.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: louisev on October 20, 2009, 01:38:39 am

sorry it took so long to do this - I have been sick!

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on October 20, 2009, 05:12:02 am

Quote from: louisev on October 20, 2009, 01:38:39 am

sorry it took so long to do this - I have been sick!

No problem about that! I only hope that you feel better now!  :)

Today I started to post my new story "Only when you're sure"

I won't be posting each chapter here, so this is only the information for those who want to read it and the link to the first chapter:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/11461.html  (http://loreent.livejournal.com/11461.html)

It is an easy, modern, au!au story. Ennis is a widower and Jack is an openly gay person.

I thank to bcatjr for editing   :-* and r_o_l_i_e for the manips.   :-* They've really been great!

I'll try to post weekly, so if there's any interest for the story, you have the information now. Hope you like.

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on October 24, 2009, 05:50:42 pm

The 14th chapter of "Returning to Brokeback" is posted.

http://loreent.livejournal.com/11773.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/11773.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on November 12, 2009, 03:04:07 pm

Chapter 15:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/12624.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/12624.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on November 16, 2009, 04:35:19 am

The 16th is online:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/13552.html


PS: My new story is also improving:

chapter 1 - http://loreent.livejournal.com/11461.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/11461.html)

chapter 2 - http://loreent.livejournal.com/12014.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/12014.html)

chapter 3 - http://loreent.livejournal.com/12180.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/12180.html)

chapter 4 - http://loreent.livejournal.com/12486.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/12486.html)

chapter 5 - http://loreent.livejournal.com/13167.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/13167.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on November 22, 2009, 03:45:11 am

Chapter 17 is online:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/14551.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/14551.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on November 30, 2009, 04:03:46 pm

Chapter 18:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/15341.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/15341.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on February 03, 2010, 01:57:48 am

Chapter 19:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/20438.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/20438.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on February 09, 2010, 12:02:00 pm

Chapter 20 of Returning to Brokeback 8)

http://loreent.livejournal.com/20787.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/20787.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on February 09, 2010, 12:03:52 pm

My story "Only when you're sure" is finished.

If you're interested, it is listed and tagged in BBslash.

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on February 13, 2010, 12:11:37 pm

Returning to Brokeback, chapter 21 is online:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/21139.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/21139.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on February 18, 2010, 12:44:28 pm

Returning to Brokeback, chapter 22 is online:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/22179.html

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 18, 2010, 04:17:41 pm

Excellent!  I've enjoyed everything I've read so far.  You're very talented, Loreen!

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on February 20, 2010, 01:26:47 pm

Quote from: BoobieWaffleTush on February 18, 2010, 04:17:41 pm

Excellent!  I've enjoyed everything I've read so far.  You're very talented, Loreen!

Hey, thanks so much for your lovely words and support!  :)

:-*

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 21, 2010, 04:20:00 pm

Quote from: loreen on February 20, 2010, 01:26:47 pm

Hey, thanks so much for your lovely words and support!  :)

:-*

You're very welcome, Love.  Please continue to write, and know that your efforts are noticed and appreciated!

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on February 23, 2010, 11:33:17 am

Quote from: BoobieWaffleTush on February 21, 2010, 04:20:00 pm

You're very welcome, Love.  Please continue to write, and know that your efforts are noticed and appreciated!

 ;D  :-* :-*

Here's chapter 23 - "The Acceptance"

http://loreent.livejournal.com/22344.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/22344.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on March 01, 2010, 06:54:41 pm

Returning to Brokeback, Chapter 24 - Holding Ennis

http://loreent.livejournal.com/22660.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/22660.html)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on March 08, 2010, 03:46:21 am

Here it is - chapter 25: "The Liberation" 


http://loreent.livejournal.com/23003.html (http://loreent.livejournal.com/23003.html)

The same girls were with me - MPJ and Heathyluv!

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on March 22, 2010, 11:36:34 am

I forgot to post the chapter 26, so here it is:

The pain (http://loreent.livejournal.com/23191.html)

And here's the penultimate chapter 27/28:

 The accomplishments (http://loreent.livejournal.com/23309.html#cutid1)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 23, 2010, 08:45:11 pm

Excellent!  Keep 'em comin!  :)

Title: Re: Returning to Brokeback
Post by: loreen on March 30, 2010, 01:37:41 pm

Quote from: BoobieWaffleTush on March 23, 2010, 08:45:11 pm

Excellent!  Keep 'em comin!  :)

Thanks! :-*

OK, guys! This is the final chapter!


Under the stars (http://loreent.livejournal.com/23790.html)

Thanks to MPJ and Heathyluv and all my former betas!  :)

Hope you enjoyed the ride!