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Title: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on August 25, 2006, 06:54:23 pm
Just because I needed a BIG distraction, I have started an extremely irreverent Alternate Universe! fiction about Jack and Ennis on Brokeback Mountain, which is a parody of AU fics.  "Alien!Brokeback"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/98914.html  "1.  Big Fuckin Flash a Light"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/99238.html  "2.  The Change"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/99481.html  "3.  New Aspirations"

Updates will be posted on this thread as the spirit moves me.
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: notBastet on August 25, 2006, 07:31:36 pm
I haven't read any yet, but I sure do love that first title!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: notBastet on August 25, 2006, 07:48:44 pm
Hmnnn... I am reminded of Invasion... a new series on ABC this past spring ... people/hybrids healed very quickly.  i quit watching invasion when I became obsessed with all things Brokeback.
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: tamarack on August 25, 2006, 08:40:14 pm
Louise, this is really great!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on August 26, 2006, 04:46:37 pm
New chapter, for those with a Human Interest...

http://louisev.livejournal.com/100657.html  "4.  Conjecturin"


And for those with vampire fantasies:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/101056.html  "5. Vampires"

And those with Indian boy fetishes

http://louisev.livejournal.com/101197.html  "6.  A Real Sweet Life"
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: twistedude on August 26, 2006, 07:20:28 pm
Please don't stop divertin' yoursel;f, Louise!

As Anne Rice said (whops!)..."a pale shadow of the kill."

Sho' 'nuff...
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on August 27, 2006, 09:11:48 am
As a distraction from some of my worldly woes, I took up writing a parody of AU "Alternative Universe", alternative-ending stories based on BBM.  If you ever wondered how Ennis and Jack could possibly end up doing some of the things they do in fan fiction, you might want to investigate a lighthearted review of what Ennis and Jack think about all that!

Alien!Brokeback 

Links and updates posted HERE:

 http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php?topic=4084.msg79235#msg79235
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on August 27, 2006, 03:41:32 pm
New episode in "Alien!Brokeback"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/102121.html  "7.  More Sweet Lives"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/102327.html  "8.  Another Flash a Light"
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Quiplash on August 29, 2006, 12:08:00 am
We need to pitch some movie ideas for the SEQUEL to BBM!!  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

Number Ten in a Series of Really, Really Bad Ideas for Brokeback Mountain Movie Sequels:


(http://static.flickr.com/95/227856882_3d0dbb9088.jpg) (http://www.flickr.com/photos/quiplash/227856882/)
"Hey!  I'm WALKIN' here!"

Click on the photo to be taken to Flickr for larger sizes of this "movie poster".

To see the whole series of Bad Ideas for Brokeback Mountain movie sequels, click here (http://flickr.com/photos/quiplash/sets/72057594058039003/).

Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Kazza on August 29, 2006, 07:47:18 am
Oh my God! I've just discovered this. Am sat at my desk at work trying to surpress the tears of laughter and my colleagues are wondering what on earth I've read that could be THAT funny!

I must confess that I am a fan of AU Fan Fiction, but this parody is just too funny.

Thank you for brightening up my first days back from my hols.

Karen
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on August 29, 2006, 09:42:27 am
you are welcome!  I was wondering if anyone noticed this... I did it for my own amusement.  It is awfully fun to write Ennis and Jack in a comic mode, this I can tell you.
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Helen on September 02, 2006, 01:53:21 am
I love these parodies Louise....but there seems to be something missing!!!!

A more MODERN outlook from Ennis,  ahem!  *cough* *nudge*


 ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 02, 2006, 05:13:36 pm
Hey Louise

It's Friday night here in London and I've had a couple of glasses of cava whilst reading your exellent series. I always thought that I'd hate any BBM fan fiction that didn't inclde some sort of happy resolution for Jack and Ennis, but what you've written is wwonderful, and gripping and very entertaining!

I must admit it took me a while to get used to Ennis becoming so (comparatively) relaxed about his love for men. However, now that I am in the midst of book 4 the thought that entered my mind was what would Jack's reation to the new adventerous Ennis would be. I mean... dildos, bondage, butt plugs!!!!!!!!!!!! He'd be stunned. But happy for Ennis I think.

Mmmmm.. are these characters real.

Anyway - just wanted to let you know that even now people are discovering your wonderful writing. Thank you.

Ahh.... Cava..(please blame the Spanish fizz for any rambling or glaring spelling mistakes). ;D

Have a good weekend.

Karen

welcome Karen, I take it you are referring to the Laramie Saga stories.  This thread is for the Alien!Brokeback stories, so I didn't see this right away.  Feel free to join in the discussion on the Chez Tremblay forum in the "Ennis and Ellery" thread for our discussion.  And thanks for the feedback!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 02, 2006, 05:15:00 pm
I love these parodies Louise....but there seems to be something missing!!!!

A more MODERN outlook from Ennis,  ahem!  *cough* *nudge*


 ;D ;D ;D

what?  what?  you want me to parody "Modern Way"?  REALLY?
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: MaineWriter on September 02, 2006, 05:23:49 pm
welcome Karen, I take it you are referring to the Laramie Saga stories.  This thread is for the Alien!Brokeback stories, so I didn't see this right away.  Feel free to join in the discussion on the Chez Tremblay forum in the "Ennis and Ellery" thread for our discussion.  And thanks for the feedback!

Kazza, Louise ---

I moved Kazza's post to the Ennis and Ellery thread. Just so you know...

Leslie
acting like a moderator
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 02, 2006, 06:19:30 pm
Update to Alien!Brokeback

http://louisev.livejournal.com/105996.html  "9. No More a Them Lonesome Ranches"
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 02, 2006, 08:24:01 pm
what?  what?  you want me to parody "Modern Way"?  REALLY?
Oh man Louise! I would sooooo LOVE to read that!
Whoooo - yeah!!!

 :-*
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 02, 2006, 08:30:05 pm
Update to Alien!Brokeback

http://louisev.livejournal.com/105996.html  "9. No More a Them Lonesome Ranches"

Oh Louise! Thanks SO much for pointing these out to me in the chat! I've been missing out on so much fun! I really laughed my ass off and I was desperate for a good laugh today.

You truly are A-MAZING! I wonder if there actually is anything that you are NOT good at!!!  ;D

 :-*
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Helen on September 02, 2006, 08:30:53 pm
what?  what?  you want me to parody "Modern Way"?  REALLY?

Hot damn, yeah!!  You can't leave me out!  And what about Sweet Life?  Uncle Harold and Cherry Cake...
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 02, 2006, 08:45:21 pm
Hot damn, yeah!!  You can't leave me out!  And what about Sweet Life?  Uncle Harold and Cherry Cake...
Oh yeah Louise! The hilarious things you could do with the Cherry Cake in Some Sweet Life!!

 *bursts into giggles*

 ;D ;D
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 02, 2006, 08:55:57 pm

Leslie
acting like a moderator
LOL!!

 ;D
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 03, 2006, 06:03:35 am
well dang...

I need to look at the story again before I can parody it.

Helen, Helen?  Where's the dang story?
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Helen on September 03, 2006, 09:18:10 am
well dang...

I need to look at the story again before I can parody it.

Helen, Helen?  Where's the dang story?

It's at my journal
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 03, 2006, 11:32:38 am
Louise....*whine* *whine*

I'm dying for some more updates...

*hint* *hint*

Damn, I'm boooored....*grin*

 :-*
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 03, 2006, 11:42:12 am
okay folks...

this one is a bit subtler... there are two parodies in this one.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/106990.html  "11:  Future Weddin Bell Blues"
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 03, 2006, 11:45:33 am
okay folks...

this one is a bit subtler... there are two parodies in this one.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/106990.html  "11:  Future Weddin Bell Blues"
Whoohooo!!!
Luv you Louise!  :-*
*rushes off to read*
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 05, 2006, 02:23:56 pm
Any chance of more updates Louise??  :-*

I keep coming back here to check...... :( :'(
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 05, 2006, 02:28:35 pm
yes yes there will be more, as the spirit moves me... maybe if I am feeling particularly frisky after I get my stitches out tomorrow...!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 05, 2006, 03:25:42 pm
yes yes there will be more, as the spirit moves me... maybe if I am feeling particularly frisky after I get my stitches out tomorrow...!
Ooooh ouch!!  >:( 
Hope all goes well!

 :)
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Helen on September 05, 2006, 04:37:38 pm
after I get my stitches out tomorrow...!

Any old excuse...




 ;)
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 05, 2006, 04:51:43 pm
and yes Helen, I will do a parody on "Modern Way"... I have to work my plot around to the "future shock" dreams and lump a few "modern" concepts in there!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 06, 2006, 03:42:55 pm
Oh Louise! Thanks SO much for pointing these out to me in the chat! I've been missing out on so much fun! I really laughed my ass off and I was desperate for a good laugh today.

You truly are A-MAZING! I wonder if there actually is anything that you are NOT good at!!!  ;D

 :-*

Oh yes!  I suck at golf, I'm not too great at parallel parking, I think that green goes with pink, and I can never get my hair to lie flat when I put it up.

And I can't tie a tie.
And I never clean my house.
Or make the bed.
Can't cook worth a damn.

You had to get me started didn't you?
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on September 06, 2006, 04:18:52 pm
Oh yes!  I suck at golf, I'm not too great at parallel parking, I think that green goes with pink, and I can never get my hair to lie flat when I put it up.

And I can't tie a tie.
And I never clean my house.
Or make the bed.
Can't cook worth a damn.

You had to get me started didn't you?
Hehehehe but Louise...these are totally unimportant things aren't they?? Okay, the hair bit can be really frustrating!
I can't cook worth a damn either! Are you pretty good with a .........can opener though?? LOL
Hate making the bed!
Hate parallel parking too! Although in The States with Helen I managed to get the car into quite a small parking spot all in one go! I was amazed at myself! Truly! lol
Don't really mind cleaning the house, as long as I have the time and don't feel rushed. Plus I do have somebody that cleans along with me  :D I'm lucky, she's a sweetheart.
Well, if these are the only things you suck at, I'm impressed!!  ;D
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 06, 2006, 04:28:12 pm
oh no... there's a whollllle lot more!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on September 17, 2006, 04:44:37 pm
Update to "Alien!Brokeback"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/115593.html  "12. Future Shock"

*I hope I didnt disappoint you Helen, this is for you*
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: one_of_one on October 09, 2006, 02:29:19 pm
At last I can thank you properly for this!  It's so good, and funny.  I loved it!  ;D ;D ;D

Now, where are some more?!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on October 09, 2006, 03:36:43 pm
so glad to see you again... where are the rest... hmmmm... waiting for inspiration.  Trying to finish the Laramie Saga.  I think I left you about 400 chapters behind, didn't I? heheh.  I always love that you were in there first with the comments, Helen, and now June and Natali and Souxi and Christie are in there beatin you to the punch.
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: one_of_one on October 09, 2006, 03:46:55 pm
Trying to finish the Laramie Saga.  I think I left you about 400 chapters behind, didn't I? heheh. 

Something like that!   ;D

I hope to see some more of the Jake/Heath drabbles when you're done with the LS. :)
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Bigheart on October 12, 2006, 10:27:44 am

Now, where are some more?!

Yeah Louise!

A SOG one would be brilliant  :)
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: LauraGigs on October 15, 2006, 02:04:19 pm
Dude!  These kill. . .    :laugh:
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: brokebackjack on November 13, 2006, 04:17:14 am
Louise...why don't you parody a meet up with the tv characters from the series Roswell? Or maybe I should just do that one myself lol....lol....lol
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on November 13, 2006, 10:11:32 am
well now let me see....

I think from here on out I am going to get author permission for more Alien!Brokeback segments.  I try to make my parodies aimed for the amusement of audience and author alike, and it is a fine line to walk  I will consider doing some at the end of the run of the L.S.!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: Arad-3 on November 15, 2006, 06:35:29 am
Big Fuckin Flash a Light"

Really good Louise!  Now I am looking forward to reading more of your stories!!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on April 14, 2007, 09:52:51 pm
I am merging this thread and opening the stories to the public once more.

Enjoy!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: brokebackjack on April 16, 2007, 05:42:23 am
Now THIS is cheerful news indeed, I LOVED Alien!Brokeback.

Dare I hope Jack and Ennis hook up with Max and Isabel???
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on April 16, 2007, 08:25:02 pm
now that one, Max and Isabel,

I can DEFINITELY do!

Anyone here for an Alien!Brokeback chapter where Max and Isabel are called out of Roswell to meet up with some "contacts" in the Absarokas and stumble on a trail leading up to the trailhead and Aguirre's sheep operation?

muah hahahahaha.

*queue theme music*
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: brokebackjack on April 17, 2007, 01:31:46 am
roflmaooooooo!!!!!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: MaineWriter on April 19, 2007, 04:06:49 pm
Max and Isabel?

L
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: brokebackjack on April 20, 2007, 02:52:15 am
Max and Isabel Evans from the series 'Roswell'

that was a damned good series, so good it will be around 50 years from now. they dealt well with prime and primary emotions and attachments in a series built around horny teenaged aliens

lol

3 years running, an incredibly motivated audience got that series kept on the air when the ratings didn't warrant it. The serious critics were crazy about it, they loved it
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: MaineWriter on April 20, 2007, 06:50:58 am
Ah, thanks for the explanation, Jack!

L
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: brokebackjack on April 20, 2007, 06:53:05 am
your welcome!
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: MaineWriter on April 20, 2007, 07:08:13 am
and now back to our regularly scheduled big fuckin flash a light...

L
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on April 20, 2007, 07:55:44 am
oh yes I have much to do

IF anyone wants to donate to me some dvds or videotapes of Roswell's final season I missed that.
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: brokebackjack on April 20, 2007, 08:12:08 am
My kid might have taped it. I have the final season on dvd but if I sent it the wife would have a fit, she is a Roswell fanatic. On the other hand there is a big sale at the Cherry Creek Mall---let me see what I can do Louise.
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on April 20, 2007, 11:54:11 am
*yes!!!*

I will also do a search down here, but I dont know anything about the DVD systems here and if they have anything.  I would just as well buy zone 1 or 2 DVDs as once I get back to Europe (yes I am counting the MINUTES!) I can actually share it with my non technological friends who would find it appalling that I watch DVDs on a laptop.
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: ranchgal on April 22, 2007, 02:42:39 pm
Don't worry about other perceptions Louise---my geeky techno brother--sold his tv and only watches dvd on his laptop computer, for the last 2 years, say it is cheaper and easier. 
Course he just got married and inherited new tv system with 3 step children and cable, so his life is taking a dramatic turn for reality. LOL

Can you find any "all region" 0 dvds--then they should play on any player.  I know you can buy all region dvd player, and some regional players can be made into 0 region players.
Title: Re: Alien! Brokeback
Post by: louisev on January 25, 2008, 09:26:09 pm
I decided to bump this thread in case anyone needs a bit of light reading to help them get over this tragic week.

Alien!Brokeback starts here:

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,4084.0.html and is a set of parodies of well recognized AU! stories about Ennis and Jack.  Takes place in 1963...

OR DOES IT?