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Title: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 16, 2007, 04:34:36 pm: Can you think of a text message that Jack could have sent Ennis?

Or maybe you can think of a text message that Ennis could have sent Jack?

Seeing that text messages (SMS) are 160 characters per message, Jack and Ennis's text messages should be 160 characters or less...

Fire away!

;)
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 05:08:33 pm: Hey Melissa,
I didnt guess that was you.
You changed your username! ;)

Jack's text to Ennis: 8)

Babe .. I'm at the supermarket.
Got some honey and whipped cream.
Got plans for you 2nite.
Love ya.
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 05:29:02 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 16, 2007, 05:08:33 pm

Jack's text to Ennis: 8)

Babe .. I'm at the supermarket.
Got some honey and whipped cream.
Got plans for you 2nite.
Love ya.

Ennis's reply

Get some p-butter too.
Not Peter Pan.
L8R
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 05:41:55 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 05:29:02 pm

Ennis's reply

Get some p-butter too.
Not Peter Pan.
L8R

Jack's reply

Got it .. smooth it is..
C ya in 30.. or 15 ..
xo
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 05:48:10 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 16, 2007, 05:41:55 pm

Jack's reply

Got it .. smooth it is..
C ya in 30.. or 15 ..
xo

Ennis's reply

Champagne
Candles
Jacuzzi 1st
Can't W8T
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 06:02:24 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 05:48:10 pm

Ennis's reply

Champagne
Candles
Jacuzzi 1st
Can't W8T

Jack's reply ..

Gettin hot
just thinking about it..
xo
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 16, 2007, 06:10:53 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 16, 2007, 06:02:24 pm
Jack's reply ..

Gettin hot
just thinking about it..
xo

Ennis's reply:
Don't start without me.
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 06:15:52 pm: About 2 hours later ..

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Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Bigheart on February 16, 2007, 06:39:34 pm: Aww you guys, this is just great! Good one Mel! I'll have to put my thinking cap on too! ::)

Schattige username Mel! :-*
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mariez on February 16, 2007, 06:45:50 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 05:29:02 pm

Ennis's reply

Get some p-butter too.
Not Peter Pan. ...

ROFL!!! Yeah, nothing like a little salmonella to spoil the mood, eh? This was great.

Lucise, I've been meaning to tell you - sometimes I find myself staring, entranced, at your banner, unable to look away!

Another great thread!

Marie
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 06:47:49 pm: Quote from: mariez on February 16, 2007, 06:45:50 pm

ROFL!!! Yeah, nothing like a little salmonella to spoil the mood, eh? This was great.

;D That cracked me up too.
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 06:49:00 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 16, 2007, 06:47:49 pm
;D That cracked me up too.

That Ennis...keeping abreast of the news, always! LOL

L
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: karen1129 on February 16, 2007, 06:52:40 pm: we got nuf KY?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 06:52:44 pm: After all that romance, few days later ..
Ennis' text to Jack:

I'm freaking..
Alma Sr just called
Dinner, 6pm .. this Sun
She's coming ..
I'm freaking!
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on February 16, 2007, 06:54:25 pm: "NO MORE BEANS"
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 06:55:07 pm: Quote from: karen1129 on February 16, 2007, 06:52:40 pm
we got nuf KY?

3 tubes...better buy some more.
THX
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 07:01:43 pm: Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on February 16, 2007, 06:54:25 pm
"NO MORE BEANS"

But ..
Made Chili for supper 2nite.
Ur fave!
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 07:06:45 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 16, 2007, 07:01:43 pm
But ..
Made Chili for supper 2nite.
Ur fave!

K
Need beer?
Anything else?
LOVE
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 07:11:16 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 07:06:45 pm
K
Need beer?
Anything else?
LOVE

Need:
Beer
Salad dressing..
YOU!
xo
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 07:18:38 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 16, 2007, 07:11:16 pm
Need:
Beer
Salad dressing..
YOU!
xo

Me?
Hot & wet or
Hard & horny?
wink
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 16, 2007, 07:41:06 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 07:18:38 pm
Me?
Hot & wet or
Hard & horny?
wink

Hot & wet &
Hard & horny..
Forget the beer ..
Git home, now!
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Front-Ranger on February 16, 2007, 08:01:40 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 07:06:45 pm
K
Need beer?
Anything else?
LOVE

That's 1
a the 2 things
I need rite now!
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 08:08:58 pm: Quote from: Front-Ranger on February 16, 2007, 08:01:40 pm
That's 1
a the 2 things
I need rite now!

Beer #1
What's #2?
Evil wink
4 my cowboy
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: David In Indy on February 17, 2007, 12:49:11 am: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 16, 2007, 08:08:58 pm
Beer #1
What's #2?
Evil wink
4 my cowboy

Lysol. Chili beans and a pup tent ain't a good combo.
Also pack two air fresheners. And some scented candles.

L8r
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 17, 2007, 04:44:18 am: Quote from: David on February 17, 2007, 12:49:11 am
Lysol. Chili beans and a pup tent ain't a good combo.
Also pack two air fresheners. And some scented candles.

L8r

You guys are on a roll!

Jack to Ennis:

LOL will you please consider eating a sheep?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 17, 2007, 07:56:21 am: Quote from: Snuitje on February 17, 2007, 04:44:18 am
You guys are on a roll!

Jack to Ennis:

LOL will you please consider eating a sheep?

I'll go shoot us an elk.
We'll need a knife.
Hurry.
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 17, 2007, 08:45:34 am: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 17, 2007, 07:56:21 am
I'll go shoot us an elk.
We'll need a knife.
Hurry.

Can I order a side-dish? ;-)
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 17, 2007, 09:01:50 am: Quote from: Snuitje on February 17, 2007, 08:45:34 am
Can I order a side-dish? ;-)

Cole slaw?
We ain't got no mayo.
But we could use some mayo...;-)
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 17, 2007, 09:41:27 am: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 17, 2007, 09:01:50 am

Cole slaw?
We ain't got no mayo.
But we could use some mayo...;-)

Change of menu. Forget the side-dish. Str8 to the main dish: U. :-p
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 17, 2007, 09:42:59 am: Quote from: Snuitje on February 17, 2007, 09:41:27 am
Change of menu. Forget the side-dish. Str8 to the main dish: U. :-p

U want whipped cream on that?
;-)
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 17, 2007, 09:50:13 am: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 17, 2007, 09:42:59 am
U want whipped cream on that?
;-)

Shot a coyote, do u want me to measure ta size of its balls or...
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 17, 2007, 09:41:54 pm: Quote from: Snuitje on February 17, 2007, 09:50:13 am
Shot a coyote, do u want me to measure ta size of its balls or...

I reckon it ain't the coyote's balls ya oughta be worryin' about..
;-) U comin' or whut?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: el_wing on February 17, 2007, 10:19:58 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 17, 2007, 09:41:54 pm

I reckon it ain't the coyote's balls ya oughta be worryin' about..
;-) U comin' or whut?

If U R there- I'm cumin
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 18, 2007, 07:50:24 am: Ennis to Jack (1967)

Where the F*** are you? Are ya redlinin it?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: David In Indy on February 18, 2007, 02:25:41 pm: Quote from: Snuitje on February 18, 2007, 07:50:24 am
Ennis to Jack (1967)

Where the F*** are you? Are ya redlinin it?

Oh no. I have the perfect answer but I'm gonna leave it alone.

It's WAY too easy.

:laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 18, 2007, 02:35:55 pm: Quote from: David on February 18, 2007, 02:25:41 pm
Oh no. I have the perfect answer but I'm gonna leave it alone.

It's WAY too easy.

:laugh: :laugh:

Oh David, come on...join in the fun...

L
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 18, 2007, 04:02:35 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 18, 2007, 02:35:55 pm
Oh David, come on...join in the fun...

L

Yeah come on David, Ennis is waiting for Jack's reply...
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on February 19, 2007, 03:09:14 am: HOLD ON, IM CUMMIN
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 19, 2007, 05:02:37 am: Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on February 19, 2007, 03:09:14 am
HOLD ON, IM CUMMIN

Whut? Already?
Down boy!
evil grin
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 19, 2007, 04:22:08 pm: Ennis to Jack, 1967

Well hurry up. Another few beers and I won't be of any use to you anymore.
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 19, 2007, 04:33:07 pm: Quote from: Snuitje on February 19, 2007, 04:22:08 pm
Ennis to Jack, 1967

Well hurry up. Another few beers and I won't be of any use to you anymore.

That a fact? ;-)
You still go commando?
B-)
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 20, 2007, 07:46:40 am: Ennis to Jack ca. divorce...

Got divorced. Wanna come over and play?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: David In Indy on February 20, 2007, 10:06:24 pm: Quote from: Snuitje on February 20, 2007, 07:46:40 am
Ennis to Jack ca. divorce...

Got divorced. Wanna come over and play?

One step ahead of ya buddy.

Take a look out your window.

I'm sittin' in your driveway! :-)
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: mvansand76 on February 21, 2007, 06:43:35 am: Quote from: David on February 20, 2007, 10:06:24 pm
One step ahead of ya buddy.

Take a look out your window.

I'm sittin' in your driveway! :-)

Wellll, whaddaya waitin 4? Wanna come in?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 21, 2007, 07:08:28 am: Quote from: Snuitje on February 21, 2007, 06:43:35 am
Wellll, whaddaya waitin 4? Wanna come in?

Ya waitin 4 a matin call or somethin?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 21, 2007, 05:08:22 pm: October 13 1979, 11.45pm

Jack to Ennis:

Babe..
Can't get to sleep 2nite without ya ..
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 21, 2007, 05:22:04 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 21, 2007, 05:08:22 pm
October 13 1979, 11.45pm

Jack to Ennis:

Babe..
Can't get to sleep 2nite without ya ..

Ennis's reply

3 more wks cwby...Nov 3 is just around the corner...xx
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 21, 2007, 05:30:39 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 21, 2007, 05:22:04 pm
Ennis's reply

3 more wks cwby...Nov 3 is just around the corner...xx

3 wks .. dang!
Just need to get thru this nite.
U R killing me boy ..
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 21, 2007, 05:32:23 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 21, 2007, 05:30:39 pm
3 wks .. dang!
Just need to get thru this nite.
U R killing me boy ..

Pretend i'm there holdin ya
Holdin yer face in my hands the way i do
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 21, 2007, 05:42:18 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 21, 2007, 05:32:23 pm
Pretend i'm there holdin ya
Holdin yer face in my hands the way i do

I'll try cwby ..
Dream of me makin luv to ya..
Lureen is callin
:-(
Miss ya luvr..
xo
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: David In Indy on February 21, 2007, 06:17:38 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 21, 2007, 05:42:18 pm
I'll try cwby ..
Dream of me makin luv to ya..
Lureen is callin
:-(
Miss ya luvr..
xo

Lureen is callin'?

Boy, that just KILLED the dream.
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 21, 2007, 06:31:13 pm: April, 1974, 12 noon

Ennis to Jack

im at the rest stop on 287
where the hell are ya?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Cameron on February 21, 2007, 09:56:53 pm: Quote

Ennis to Jack

im at the rest stop on 287
where the hell are ya?

Jack to Ennis

im on the way, b there soon.

Whaddya wearin? Hope my new fav shirt.
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 21, 2007, 10:37:14 pm: Quote from: marlb42 on February 21, 2007, 09:56:53 pm
Jack to Ennis

im on the way, b there soon.

Whaddya wearin? Hope my new fav shirt.

Ennis to Jack:

Yup .. wearing Ur fave plaid shirt,
my ol' jeans,
no drawers ..
Whut R U wearing?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 22, 2007, 07:45:55 am: Quote from: Lucise on February 21, 2007, 10:37:14 pm
Ennis to Jack:

Yup .. wearing Ur fave plaid shirt,
my ol' jeans,
no drawers ..
Whut R U wearing?

Jack to Ennis:

hat, shirt, jeans, belt, boots...
and a big ol hard on just 4 U!
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 22, 2007, 01:01:09 pm: Quote from: MaineWriter on February 22, 2007, 07:45:55 am

Jack to Ennis:

hat, shirt, jeans, belt, boots...
and a big ol hard on just 4 U!

Ennis to Jack:

Yer gettin me riled.
Drive safe with that hard on
Need U both here in 1 piece.
;-)
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 22, 2007, 01:10:15 pm: Quote from: Lucise on February 22, 2007, 01:01:09 pm
Ennis to Jack:

Yer gettin me riled.
Drive safe with that hard on
Need U both here in 1 piece.
;-)

Jack to Ennis:

Big Jack and lil twist R on their way darlin
Don't U fret we be drivin safe n sound
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 22, 2007, 08:09:45 pm: July 1970

Jack to Ennis:

Babe ..
got a crazy idea.
Lets go to Mexico next mth.
Forget Don Wroe's cabin..
A proper trip .. U and me ..
What dya think?
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: David In Indy on February 23, 2007, 02:52:50 am: Quote from: Lucise on February 22, 2007, 08:09:45 pm
July 1970

Jack to Ennis:

Babe ..
got a crazy idea.
Lets go to Mexico next mth.
Forget Don Wroe's cabin..
A proper trip .. U and me ..
What dya think?

July 1970

Ennis to Jack:

Honey, I'll head in whatever direction your needle points to.

You just make sure that equipment of yours is all primed and ready!

Now this is getting just downright nasty and dirty you all! :D
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on February 23, 2007, 08:26:57 am: Quote from: David on February 23, 2007, 02:52:50 am

Now this is getting just downright nasty and dirty you all! :D

That's what makes it fun....
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Lumière on February 26, 2007, 03:33:06 pm: October 1982
Ennis to Jack ..

Who TF is Randall?
He just called me ..
:-{
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: twistedude on March 15, 2007, 04:13:55 am: Jack: hey--you down there--Ennis--. How about some telephone sex? No? That's O.K. don' have a phone anyway...
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on March 16, 2007, 08:21:03 pm: Since I dont have a phone, I wish I had "Wings."
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: MaineWriter on March 20, 2007, 04:47:12 am: This is the way I felt the other day...

Offline 4 28 hrs. Going nutz. Love U. Write.

L
Title: Re: If Ennis and Jack had cell phones.... creative ff writing assignment!
Post by: Artiste on November 09, 2008, 10:28:54 am: They both would have been caught sooner by their wives ?